Declaration of war against JohnathanAtopia

by **The Orson Empire** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 9:41 pm

Gaelic Celtia wrote:He isnt insulting him, not at all. He is trying to help him RP better. There is no need to take critical advise personally...

fine

by **Gaelic Celtia** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 9:44 pm

Also, a great way to add depth to an RP is to create a character and put him in a situation in the RP. This is PERFECT for war Rp's. It makes it easier to add details and to create a good story that is interesting to read to others.

by **The Orson Empire** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:47 pm

Gaelic Celtia wrote:Also, a great way to add depth to an RP is to create a character and put him in a situation in the RP. This is PERFECT for war Rp's. It makes it easier to add details and to create a good story that is interesting to read to others.

Umm yeah we know that. Take a look at my other threads

by **Gaelic Celtia** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:48 pm

need links for that

by **The Orson Empire** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:50 pm

Gaelic Celtia wrote:need links for that

Here is a link to our most current thread: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=183354

by **Gaelic Celtia** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:54 pm

not quite. I suppose that is fine within your group of friends but to most others they would expect more as they are still just one line quotes and not very detailed.

by **The Orson Empire** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:57 pm

Gaelic Celtia wrote:not quite. I suppose that is fine within your group of friends but to most others they would expect more as they are still just one line quotes and not very detailed.

One line quotes? its not possible to draw out everything! there has to be some dialogue, I only do drawn out posts on certain threads. and not everything is a one-liner on there

by **Gaelic Celtia** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 11:00 pm

no but long sequences of one liners is not considered adequate for most. Look at UCF's posts on this thread, they arent all that long but they get good detailed events across. They're not HUGE paragraphs but they're also not painfully short

by **Viritica** » Tue Jun 05, 2012 4:48 pm

Take a look at a fairly decent RP to see how it's done.

viewtopic.php?f=5&t=134621

by **The Orson Empire** » Tue Jun 05, 2012 4:49 pm

Viritica wrote:Take a look at a fairly decent RP to see how it's done.

viewtopic.php?f=5&t=134621

Thats pretty good!

by **Viritica** » Tue Jun 05, 2012 5:35 pm

The Orson Empire wrote:
Viritica wrote:Take a look at a fairly decent RP to see how it's done.

viewtopic.php?f=5&t=134621

Thats pretty good!

Indeed it is.

by **Socialist Republic of Andrew** » Tue Jun 05, 2012 5:50 pm

Yeah its pretty good i actually learned from it

by **The Orson Empire** » Tue Jun 05, 2012 6:17 pm

Socialist republic of Andrew wrote:Yeah its pretty good i actually learned from it

Me too

by **Sassinia** » Tue Jun 05, 2012 6:27 pm

This should've been locked by now.

by **Socialist Republic of Andrew** » Tue Jun 05, 2012 6:37 pm

Well its not. Should it be?

by **Viritica** » Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:06 pm

Also, read this.

viewtopic.php?f=5&t=69551

by **Heirosoloa** » Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:51 pm

Sassinia wrote:This should've been locked by now.

Why? No rules have been broken, and to be honest the last two pages have actually been somewhat constructive. No reason for the mods to intervene.
They'll just let this die.

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