The Security Council,
NOTING that since the re-founding of the The Incorporated States of Blackhelm Confederacy the nation has attacked over fifty-two peaceful and sovereign nations for natural resources,
RECOGNIZING the threat that the Blackhelm Confederacy poses towards international safety and goodwill by its intention to take over peaceful nations holding natural resources like oil,
SHOCKED in the above mentioned conflicts unarmed civilians were often intentionally shot, raped, and tortured as a means of striking fear into the opposing nation,
APPALLED that the Blackhelm Confederacy uses slave labor to produce oil for a price severely below the market,
FURTHER NOTING the recent suppression of minorities in the Blackhelm Confederacy, where innocent people, including young children, were assaulted, raped, executed , locked in "salvation camps" or sold to work as slaves in other nations because of their religious background,
SUMMARIZING that the Blackhelm Confederacy's violations of human rights and excessive violence against sovereign nations and civilians as described above is absolutely terrifying, and should be deemed unacceptable by the World Assembly,
Hereby condemns Blackhelm Confederacy.
Authored By: The United people of Andorianus
EDIT: Re-submitted, sixth draft.
My first draft ever. I sure hope I'm doing it right. If not, please say so, I really am desperate.
I need a bit of help here. You see, I have the facts, including links, but I am not sure if I got the format right. Plus I think there are a few biased opinions in it and a bit of other non-factual information as well. Plus, spelling and grammar.
This is my first proposal, and I sure do hope it passes. If there is anyone out there who truly deserves a condemnation, it is Blackhelm. But for this proposal to pass it does need to be flawless, otherwise it might be seen as "unprofessional" or "biased" and won't pass.
I'll just post it below:
Draft 1:
EDIT 1: Fixed a few spelling and grammar errors, removed or changed a few unnecesary clauses, removed link, added comma's. Also added a minor part about the Confederacy's colonies and added a part about attacks against civillians.
EDIT 2: Fixed some more spelling and grammar errors, ephasized parts about attacks on civillians and why that is a bad thing, added a part about rape and plunder, added a part about human trafficing. 'Trafficing'. I know I spelled that word wrong. Also, I altered the introduction to sound more "official".
EDIT 3: Rewrote the last few clauses entirely, thanks to suggestions from Mostly Armless. I also emphasized that genocide and human tarrificking are violations of human rights. Removed "other nations" and replaced it with "allied nations", to emphasize the Confederacy's ideas of friendly nations. Also fixed a spelling error. From now on I do not intent to change much to the description; otherwise you guys will have to check my grammar and spelling time and time again.
EDIT 4: Just found out something about suicide attacks in Christantle, peformed by a group that lies under Confederacy protection. Added 4 lines about this attack and the Confederacy protection. Also fixed grammar again, fixed a typo, and re-ordered the clauses.
EDIT 5: Completely redrafting the proposal.
Draft 2:
Description: Condemn Blackhelm Confederacy
Catagory: Condemnation
Nominee: Blackhelm Confederacy
Description: The Security Council:
Description: The Security Council:
RECOGNIZING the threat that the Blackhelm Confederacy poses towards international safety and goodwill by its intention to take over peaceful nations holding natural resources like oil,
NOTING that since the re-founding of the Blackhelm Confederacy the nation has attacked over 52 peaceful and sovereign nations for natural resources,
SHOCKED that in the above mentioned conflicts unarmed civillians were often intentionally shot, raped, and tortured as a means of striking fear into the opposing nation,
APPALLED that the Blackhelm Confederacy uses slave labour to produce oil for a price severely below the market,
FURTHER NOTING the recent suppression of minorities in the Blackhelm Confederacy, where innocent people, including young children, were hurt, raped, executed , locked in so called "salvation camps" or sold to work as slaves in other nations because of their religious background,
SUMMARIZING that the Blackhelm Confederacy's violations of human rights and excessive violence against other nations and civillians as described above is absolutely terrfying, and should be deemed unacceptable by the World Assembly,
Hereby condemns Blackhelm Confederacy.
Sources:
---Helvanthur Royal Oil was threatened and then got attacked (resolved by ignore cannon):
---Ruskarland Oil was bribed and threatened: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=90950&p=4455207#p4455207
---Emir Oil also got attacked. viewtopic.php?f=6&t=73970
---Khlyj got attacked too. Residential buildings were intentionally tagreted by Confederacy planes. viewtopic.php?f=5&t=74105&p=3444970&
---An entire region, the Pacific, got attacked. Again it was about oil. viewtopic.php?f=5&t=12269
---This is the thread where the war on Emir Oil got commenced. For some reason there are a lot of nations sided with Griffincrest on this one: the flaming probably has something to do with it. It ended pretty badly, with another nation who needed to stand up against Blackhelm. viewtopic.php?f=5&t=74105
---Just a small mention of Blackhelm's imperialism here, most likely not worth it since it has a moral background and because the thread died before anything really happened. viewtopic.php?f=5&t=69887&p=3210902#p3210902
---There are many more GE&T threads out there that fell under Griffincrest's imperialism, but I can't find them yet.
---The Griffincrest Corporation storefront. Contains little facts, but still it might be worth noting, as the Griffincrest Corp is a vital part of this proposal. viewtopic.php?f=6&t=98949&p=5021135#p5021135
---A megathread here, confirming all the facts I placed about genocide and slave trade: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=91417
---A roleplay that also died, about Castigonia's defeat against Blackhelm Confederacy. The roleplay should be attached, I couldn't find it manually: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=71603
---Suicide terrorist attacks on civillian targets peformed by the Blackhelm Confederacy. I didn't include that either, maybe I should? viewtopic.php?f=5&t=100394&p=4994485#p4994485
---Finally some information about the corporate alliance: I personally thought it didn't contain enough facts to be placed in here, but nevertheless: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=91417
---EDIT: Just found out information on this terror attack, also peformed in the name of the Confederacy. viewtopic.php?f=5&t=101283&p=5037116#p5037116
---EDIT: And another one, simmilar to that, here: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=100394&p=5005636&hilit
---EDIT: Another war for oil found. Civillians have been raped and looted by Confederacy soldiers. viewtopic.php?f=5&t=58230&p
---EDIT: Proof of torture. viewtopic.php?f=5&t=17164&p=624923&
---EDIT: Allright, one more then. An attack ad on Zastavia oil, followed by a war after Zastavia oil denied he used child labour. viewtopic.php?f=6&t=28486&p=1125708&hilit=Army#p1125708
---EDIT: Proof of forced labour: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=7496
In addition I also have met someone who had these threats on his own forum too, but called in the mods after it got particulary OOC and violent. I guess words are not a reliable source, unless Blackhelm Confederacy himself confirms that.
Finally, there are some concerns about using puppets to influence roleplays and spreading false information... But I won't include those, as it is OOC.
So, comments?