Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Hey folks, Co-OP filling in for the OP to provide some feedback while he's busy.The Grand Western Empire wrote:-snip-
I like the idea of Octavian's artifact but artificers are described as people who have mastered a certain skill after years of practice in a specific field, and the effects of his hammer don't seem to have anything to do with his business (construction). I'd advise you to change that. Some more detail on the bio wouldn't be amiss either. I like the character concept in general though.
Guess I misunderstood Artificers. I'll get to revising it.