Pland Adanna wrote:The Security Council,
Recognizing Aynia Moreaux (henceforth referred to as Aynia) as a consistently brilliant cultural organizer and community builder;
Asserting that Aynia's founding of the region Caer Sidi (CS) through Caer Sidi Founder alongside Ghostfox, their consistent presence in CS leadership, their optimism, their forward drive, and their creative flair have meant that they not only created an exceptional sense of esprit de corps within the region, but were also able to spread this goodwill and have a positive impact abroad, as displayed in: This is both verbose and lacks character, try this:
Extolling Aynia's founding of Caer Sidi (CS) through their satellite state Caer Sidi Founder alongside Ghostfox, home to a vibrant and friendly community which over the years has grown to become one of the most prominent regions in the multiverse, to which Aynia then went on to significantly contribute to by:
- their service as CS’s head of state in the role of Summer Queen from the moment of its founding and their guidance of the region through a leadership transition, which led Aynia to take on the reformed role of Seasonal Queen, all the while fostering the distinctive independent streak and the spirit of creativity on which CS prides itself;
- their artistry in realizing a vision for CS’s government, culture, and geography, achieving a unique integration of politics with lore that continues to characterize the region today;
- their magnificent ability to bring communities together through events and festivals that stimulate an invaluable generosity of knowledge and expertise, establishing CS as a cultural leader in NationStates through three iterations of UCR Con, Caerchella, and annual seasonal festivals such as Crystalrime and Summer’s End
. Aynia’s; Aynia's innovation promoted constructive interregional discussion, celebrated the rich variety of culture across the world, and facilitated the development of many close relations between regions involved;Pointing toGrateful for Aynia’s assistance in the organizationand moderationof NSGE 2020 Commending someone for "moderation" in context is likely illegal given the ruling on Commend Valentine Z, a worldwide festival to exhibit all the participating regions, including their recruitment of other nations to assist in its planning and execution. The; the celebration allowed regions to learn from each other by sharing knowledge and experience, and provided a platform for nations to interact and form ties across regional borders;
Impressed by Aynia’s labor in Albion as Antovign through their two terms as Knight Interior, where they grew and enriched the region's population, resulting in a period of record-breaking regional activity and engagement, in addition to their service as Mayor of the city-state of Brightwall, the epicenter of Albion’s culture and history, where they fostered activity and interest after it had seen several irregular leadership turnovers in the previous months; "Fostered activity and interest" how?
Amazed at Aynia’s immense contributions to Equinox as Aynia in Sunglasses, which included serving multiple terms as head of government through the positions of Prime Minister and Chancellor, during which time they oversaw the executive departments, helped integrate new members, drove interest in the advancement of the region’s lore, and collaborated with the Hierarch of Equinox to draft a new constitution, and held the region together, postponing its collapse.<< Postponing implies it was already dying, so it doesn't really sound impressive. I think it's best if you just remove that part as you already have a solid case for commendation without it~ || ; Aynia also workedAynia also workedas a dedicated member of the festival planning committee, where they were crucial in bringing energy and imagination to the planning of several events, such as the Equinox Olympics;
Lauding Aynia’s efforts in Arda en Estel as Antovign, where they handled all diplomatic matters as a dedicated Consul of Foreign Affairs, establishing a fundamental network of allies in the region’s youth and securing key treaties with entities such as Coalition Against the Ideology of Nazism (CAIN), the Land of Kings and Emperors, and United Kingdom CAIN, while notable in its era, was as far as I know generally a toxic cesspit that collapsed when it turned out that Brunhilde was a sexual predator. I initially made the mistake of putting it in Commend Altmoras, and then had to get rid of it. You shouldn't. As to LKE, we're talking about the imperialist region that turned a native community of Monty Python fans into a condemned imperialist region, co-founding the United Imperial Armed Forces and has griefed vulnerable communities for many years? No thanks.. Aynia; Aynia also played a critical role in developing and implementing the region’s citizen retention methods and helped foster its vibrant cultural scene through their frequent hosting of games and as a key contributor to opportunities for citizens to engage with a variety of events, stalls, and festivals.
Recognizing Aynia’s foundational role in Hartfelden as Aynia von Funkeln, where they helped draft the first constitutions and, as Minister of Culture, painstakingly mapped out the empire, an endeavor of great navigational use to the region’s populace; and
Believing that Aynia’s achievements and service to the community through many regions deserve international recognition;
Hereby Commends Aynia Moreaux.
Co-authored by Khevo. Co-authors no longer go in proposal texts, FYI, as they are now an option in submitting.