Replace pending. I'm busy okay ;_;
The Security Council,
Acknowledging August’s numerous accomplishments including founding the Augustin Alliance (AA), an alliance composed of 4 incredibly successful regions with a combined voting power of over 400,
Believing that August, through both its accomplishments and that of its satellite states, may indeed be worthy of a commendation,
Finding, however, that the current resolution (SC#228) inadequately explains how August is commendable for the following reasons:
- SC#228 mentions Narnia as if it were on par with the other 4 regions it mentions being in the Augustin Alliance: Narnia was inactive from the beginning, with the Delegate's endorsement count peaking at 11 and steadily going downhill.
- SC#228 includes a clause on how Ridgefield achieved 200 nations when at the time the world contained 60,000; comparing region size to world size says nothing about the accomplishments of the aforementioned region. Furthermore, this would currently translate to 750 nations. 28 regions are at this level, including 19 non-feeders/non-sinkers, and 13 non-puppet regions.
- Half of SC#228 is unnecessary fluff; a quarter being an explanation of the themes of the AA, which are not commendable in the slightest, and another quarter being restatements of the fact that the five regions it mentions forms August’s Augustin Alliance (led by August).
- The “Acknowledging” clause of SC#288 is inarticulate and attempts to give credit to the nominee for the community development of the Augustin Alliance’s regions, something only achievable by community-wide efforts.
- SC#228 claims to be “moved by the aid [August] has provided other founders in region building,” which is both impossible due to the resolution’s immobile nature and incredibly vague, as it does not elaborate further on which founders it has helped and how.
- SC#228 references the Joint Task Force, the military of the AA, and its commendable destruction of Union of the Fascist Nations. It then disgraces the same clause by mentioning its commonplace “participation in the ‘defense and liberation of multiple regions,’” which cannot be solely attributed to the AA and thus does not belong in the commendation of its Founder. Moreover, it misspells a region it mentions a bullet point above.
The Security Council hereby repeals [resolution=SC#228]Commend August[/resolution].
Co-authored by Quebecshire.