The Realm of Hyrule wrote:You know what?
I want to ask a question, relating to the Archon's and their relationships with each other, since it might need to be noted for something that I may have going on for this in the future. If you'd allow me to indulge myself:
- So, you mentioned that Ilkans was uneasy about Mirat's adoption and development of technology, yet let him pursue it, if a little reluctantly... Is that opinion also common with the other Archons on Mirat? If not, why?
- More importantly, if you could, perhaps shed some light (This will be kept OOC unless I find a reason for it to be known IC in the RP itself, which might happen depending, I don't know) on Archon Lolvu, Algol and Aken's relationship with the Archon of East, South-East, South and North Asia, that'd be great.
Perhaps Algol has personal interest in the East - West Asian war being fought, and may eventually have to declare his opinions on the matter?
Would Aken see Mirat's abuse of technology as a "Weakness", perhaps? Assuming that his Northern Archon neighbor is augmenting himself because he is not powerful enough naturally?
But those are just random questions, me brainstorming and whatever. If you could detail this, absolutely perfect.
Thanks for any response.
First, more or less. Some care more than others. Like Aken cares about it less than say Elvih who cares a lot more.
Algol, prefers to stay out of the conflict between Zan and Mirat. Aken wishes he had something that to occupy his time and help with his boredom. But, chooses to not get involved as it is far from his power base. Lolvu sees the conflict as a waste of time and that Zan should be happy with what Ilkans gave him.
Aken sees Mirat augmenting himself with cybernetics as unnecessary and a waste of time. As they the Archons do not need technology or cybernetics to be powerful. Lolvu shares the same opinion, only that fact that Mirat has augmented himself. She sees that as a weakness that perhaps Mirat is relying too much on human technology now. Algol as the weakest of the Archons has thought about augmenting himself but, has so far declined the idea. As what the other Archons might think of him as even weaker than he is already.
Hope this satisfies you.
Novaya Equestria wrote:
I put the word fee on bold because it was supposed to be free. Mind if you correct that?
Okay, done but, are you interested in the rp or planning on making an app?
Charoskania wrote:Theyra wrote:
Okay, better but, still not up to par. Try adding maybe a new paragraph and a better reason to go to and learn of New Jericho. Because learning it from a random friend in Mexico is not cutting it since New Jericho would not be the only free settlement with free mages.
How bout now.
Better but, where would your char do research on New Jericho? It is a free settlement off the grid and I should have noticed this sooner. But, your app has several grammar errors. Like words that should not be capitalized. Can you fix those and you can just have him stumble upon the settlement and learn from there they have mages. You do not have to research that.