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by Nova Vandalia » Thu Jul 08, 2021 5:08 am
by Sanctaria » Thu Jul 08, 2021 5:36 am
Nova Vandalia wrote: see a lot of people discussing Mark's "non compliance" which doesn't make particular sense to me. C&C's were designed to give light to an individual nation's contribution to a region or regions or to the game as a whole, to deny all other contributions for a single GA resolution a nation disagrees with to me cheapens the purpose of C&C's. Now I get that the GA folx play the game their way, but so do the NSGP folx, the R/D folx, the Card folx, and the hardcore RP folx and this "non-compliance stance" to me shows a lack of respect for the contributions some one can make inside those other communities. It's a very shut off insular perspective from the rest of the game, when you're judging a person outside of your community by niche rule they never agreed to adhere too. This line of thinking demeans honest contributions, and is saddening to see especially when targeted towards someone who has done a lot for the Foreign Affairs community, for many regions, and for many individuals.
by Team Lennox » Thu Jul 08, 2021 8:15 am
by Praeceps » Thu Jul 08, 2021 7:34 pm
Astrobolt wrote:Big Bad Badger wrote:
Thank you.
So my question for Alger or anyone who knows is where and when was Halo GA non-compliant? Honestly this non-compliance thing looks like make believe.
Well, they signed this dispatch written by United Massachusetts. This dispatch stated that those who signed will not comply with all resolutions protecting the right to choose. This dispatch is nothing but a slap in the face to the GA community. Moreover, the WA should not commend a nation who refuses to follow its laws.
That being said, I'll retract my firm opposition if Halo comes out and denounces the dispatch.
by Tinhampton » Thu Jul 08, 2021 8:36 pm
by Giovanniland » Sat Jul 10, 2021 3:41 pm
by Giovanniland » Sun Jul 18, 2021 12:44 pm
by WayNeacTia » Sun Jul 18, 2021 3:50 pm
Badger wrote:Astrobolt wrote:
Well, they signed this dispatch written by United Massachusetts. This dispatch stated that those who signed will not comply with all resolutions protecting the right to choose. This dispatch is nothing but a slap in the face to the GA community. Moreover, the WA should not commend a nation who refuses to follow its laws.
That being said, I'll retract my firm opposition if Halo comes out and denounces the dispatch.
Thank you for pointing this out. I believe that this dispatch is pure make believe. It has no bearing on game mechanics and in my opinion is moot. Empty words.
RiderSyl wrote:You'd really think that defenders would communicate with each other about this. I know they're not a hivemind, but at least some level of PR skill would keep Quebecshire and Quebecshire from publically contradicting eac
wait
by HumanSanity » Sun Jul 18, 2021 5:16 pm
Giovanniland wrote:playing a critical role in establishing a platform for TWP nations' representatives to report on national happenings, publish information about their lore, and handle situations of international importance, later successfully promoting it for residents to join;
Giovanniland wrote:authoring multiple articles and editing early editions of The West Pacifican, the regional newspaper later renamed into The Western Post that publishes monthly issues with stellar reputation;
Giovanniland wrote:Admiring Saint Mark's efforts to preserve and improve the foreign relations of TWP by:
Giovanniland wrote:spearheading the détente with The South Pacific to reduce years-long tensions and promote a friendlier relation;
Giovanniland wrote:rejuvenating the Ministry of Foreign Affairs by boosting diplomat numbers, improving the monthly reports used to keep the region aware of public foreign happenings, and authoring guides for ambassadors on how to conduct themselves and interact with their assigned regions;
Giovanniland wrote:working behind the scenes to seek an end to the conflict between Lazarus, Osiris, and The Pacific, during which the latter two were treatied allies of TWP, by contacting their leaders and promoting peaceful diplomacy;
Giovanniland wrote:their still-ongoing term as Chancellor of the University, in which they encourage new nations to enroll, welcome them, and help the classes happen smoothly, in order to fulfill the University's goal of creating new generations of regional leaders;
Giovanniland wrote:recruiting many nations to the region and encouraging them to complete the Path of Enlightenment, in which a nation must conclude a task known as "bodhi" and be approved by the Sages to participate in The Sangha, Karma’s legislative body;
Sandaoguo wrote:HS is worth 100 times more than the insubstantial (to borderline non-existent) benefits the TNP-TSP “alliance” has created over the last several years.
by Refuge Isle » Sun Jul 18, 2021 6:17 pm
by Giovanniland » Wed Jul 21, 2021 8:54 pm
HumanSanity wrote:Giovanniland wrote:playing a critical role in establishing a platform for TWP nations' representatives to report on national happenings, publish information about their lore, and handle situations of international importance, later successfully promoting it for residents to join;
I think that you could incorporate the "later successfully promoting it for residents to join" component into an earlier part of the clause if you want to save space. Try:
"playing a critical role in establishing and promoting a platform for TWP nations' representatives to report on national happenings, publish information about their lore, and handle situations of international importance;"
HumanSanity wrote:Giovanniland wrote:authoring multiple articles and editing early editions of The West Pacifican, the regional newspaper later renamed into The Western Post that publishes monthly issues with stellar reputation;
"Stellar reputation" is a bit of a meaningless phrase - although, I agree The Western Post is one of the better publications in the game lately. Anything specific Saint Mark did to set the standard on The West Pacifican/The Western Post writing/publication standards?
HumanSanity wrote:Giovanniland wrote:Admiring Saint Mark's efforts to preserve and improve the foreign relations of TWP by:
Is there a theme to how Saint Mark improved TWP's FA? This sort of makes it read like "Saint Mark did normal FA-boss stuff but he did it well" which... may be the case... but you could better create a narrative about the nominee if there was a way to characterize Saint Mark's approach to diplomacy was connected to his other work. If region-building is the theme of the resolution, maybe include something in here about cultural work done in building/sustaining these FA connections (and maybe move the Osi/TWP Prom and Balder event clause here?)Giovanniland wrote:spearheading the détente with The South Pacific to reduce years-long tensions and promote a friendlier relation;
What did this accomplish/where did it go/why was it good?Giovanniland wrote:rejuvenating the Ministry of Foreign Affairs by boosting diplomat numbers, improving the monthly reports used to keep the region aware of public foreign happenings, and authoring guides for ambassadors on how to conduct themselves and interact with their assigned regions;
This is an area we could perhaps milk it for more region-building language/focusGiovanniland wrote:working behind the scenes to seek an end to the conflict between Lazarus, Osiris, and The Pacific, during which the latter two were treatied allies of TWP, by contacting their leaders and promoting peaceful diplomacy;
If you're not going to be able to go through and explain what happened in these talks (which is understandable) then maybe slim down the clause a bit -- details like how many of the parties were TWP allies at the time or that it was done "by contacting their leaders" are not particularly helpful.
HumanSanity wrote:Giovanniland wrote:their still-ongoing term as Chancellor of the University, in which they encourage new nations to enroll, welcome them, and help the classes happen smoothly, in order to fulfill the University's goal of creating new generations of regional leaders;
Are there examples of how they've created new generations of regional leaders? Universities in NS, in my experience, are a bit eh. So I want to be sold that TWP's actually works and that it works because of Saint Mark.
HumanSanity wrote:
I think you can shave down characters here.Giovanniland wrote:recruiting many nations to the region and encouraging them to complete the Path of Enlightenment, in which a nation must conclude a task known as "bodhi" and be approved by the Sages to participate in The Sangha, Karma’s legislative body;
Could this clause be combined with the one about Karma lore?
by Giovanniland » Mon Jul 26, 2021 8:24 am
by The Python » Mon Jul 26, 2021 2:32 pm
by Team Lennox » Tue Jul 27, 2021 4:38 am
such as writing of the Etiquette of the Hall
by Giovanniland » Tue Jul 27, 2021 11:59 am
by Bhang Bhang Duc » Wed Jul 28, 2021 2:04 am
Giovanniland wrote:The Security Council,
Recognizing The Holy Principality of Saint Mark (Saint Mark) as a nation that has gone above and beyond in terms of region- and community-building;
Giovanniland wrote:Celebrating Saint Mark's actions that strengthened the government of the West Pacific (TWP), such as writing the Etiquette of the Hall of Nations that established the functions and procedures of the Hall of Nations as the body composed of all TWP citizens, and instituting weekly meetings for the regional Cabinet to discuss recent happenings and check the progress of plans as a way to ensure accountability;
Giovanniland wrote:Identifying new nation integration to be an important aspect of region-building, and lauding Saint Mark's contributions to TWP in this area, for example their creation of The West Pacific Master Dispatch as the modern hub for guides, foreign updates, and other resources to be published with a layout allowing important information to be easily found; and their still-ongoing term as Chancellor of the University, in which they encourage new nations to enroll and help the classes happen smoothly, actions that have fulfilled so far the goal of creating new generations of regional leaders, such as Teralyon and United Adaikes;
Giovanniland wrote:Praising Saint Mark's cultural and community-focused approach to foreign relations, in which they not only aided TWP's community by rejuvenating the Ministry of Foreign Affairs through the boost of diplomat numbers, improvement of monthly reports used to keep the region aware of public foreign happenings, and authorship of guides for ambassadors on how to conduct themselves and develop relations within the community of their assigned regions; but also improved relationships between TWP and:
- Osiris and Balder, via the creation of activities to celebrate the treaties with said regions, respectively the West Osi High School Prom and Dragons of the Frozen Sea events;
- Lazarus, via the negotiation of the Treaty of Fùhuó, that replaced the Chol Covenant after a large period of Lazarene instability and demonstrated the interest of both regions to maintain an active cultural bond;
- The South Pacific, via the spearheading of a détente with the laudable intent of reducing years-long tensions between the two large Feeders, that has since resulted in a friendlier relation despite notorious governmental differences;
- The Pacific (TP), via the work behind the scenes to promote peaceful diplomacy between them, Lazarus, and Osiris to end their interregional conflict, paving the way for a treaty between TWP and TP to be re-established after Saint Mark's delegacy;
Giovanniland wrote:Applauding Saint Mark's additions to TWP culture, such as their authorship of articles and edition of publications for The West Pacifican from 2017 to 2019, laying the foundations for the eventual revamp and renaming of the regional newspaper into The Western Post during 2020; their creation of the yearly Festival of the Perfections event for the showcase of art, poetry, and writing from nations across the multiverse; and their role in establishing and promoting a platform for TWP nations' representatives to handle situations of international importance, report on national happenings and publish information about their lore;
Giovanniland wrote:Noticing that Saint Mark's region-building contributions extend to other regions like Edlhus, which they founded via Marcarius Halohin as an unique region focused on lineage relationships between nations and built it by writing the governing documents known as The Edicts of Edlhus and The Code of Comport; and The Sasquatch Republic, where they helped run traditions such as Thankful Thursday and Best Week Ever to spur activity in the regional message board via Bukwas;
Respecting that Saint Mark's satellite state of Pyo Karma helped shape a thriving community with around 150 World Assembly nations in Karma, by developing the regional lore together with Rigels Light to make Karma stand out from other regions in order to attract more nations, and encouraging residents to complete the Path of Enlightenment, in which a nation must conclude a task known as "bodhi" and be approved by the Sages to participate in Karma’s legislative body called the Sangha;
Further respecting that Saint Mark's approach to foreign relations is also present in Karma, where as the first Guru of Diplomacy they started Karma's foreign relations, guided diplomats to represent it abroad, and negotiated the friendship treaty with Caer Sidi;
Concluding that Saint Mark's contributions have created a kind and caring environment in several regions, making them a better place for their residents;
Hereby commends The Holy Principality of Saint Mark.
Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.
RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.
Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..
by Giovanniland » Wed Jul 28, 2021 8:07 pm
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Late to this I'm sorry, but I do have some points to raise.Giovanniland wrote:The Security Council,
Recognizing The Holy Principality of Saint Mark (Saint Mark) as a nation that has gone above and beyond in terms of region- and community-building;
Unnecessary hyphen after "region".
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Giovanniland wrote:Celebrating Saint Mark's actions that strengthened the government of the West Pacific (TWP), such as writing the Etiquette of the Hall of Nations that established the functions and procedures of the Hall of Nations as the body composed of all TWP citizens, and instituting weekly meetings for the regional Cabinet to discuss recent happenings and check the progress of plans as a way to ensure accountability;
Why does this stand out as being commendable? To me it's just management of the Government, something numerous other nations have done.
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Giovanniland wrote:Identifying new nation integration to be an important aspect of region-building, and lauding Saint Mark's contributions to TWP in this area, for example their creation of The West Pacific Master Dispatch as the modern hub for guides, foreign updates, and other resources to be published with a layout allowing important information to be easily found; and their still-ongoing term as Chancellor of the University, in which they encourage new nations to enroll and help the classes happen smoothly, actions that have fulfilled so far the goal of creating new generations of regional leaders, such as Teralyon and United Adaikes;
This is better, this is something meatier. However, the writing's not quite right - maybe start "Lauding St Mark's identification of new nation integration as an important aspect....." and take it from there.
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Giovanniland wrote:Noticing that Saint Mark's region-building contributions extend to other regions like Edlhus, which they founded via Marcarius Halohin as an unique region focused on lineage relationships between nations and built it by writing the governing documents known as The Edicts of Edlhus and The Code of Comport; and The Sasquatch Republic, where they helped run traditions such as Thankful Thursday and Best Week Ever to spur activity in the regional message board via Bukwas;
Respecting that Saint Mark's satellite state of Pyo Karma helped shape a thriving community with around 150 World Assembly nations in Karma, by developing the regional lore together with Rigels Light to make Karma stand out from other regions in order to attract more nations, and encouraging residents to complete the Path of Enlightenment, in which a nation must conclude a task known as "bodhi" and be approved by the Sages to participate in Karma’s legislative body called the Sangha;
Further respecting that Saint Mark's approach to foreign relations is also present in Karma, where as the first Guru of Diplomacy they started Karma's foreign relations, guided diplomats to represent it abroad, and negotiated the friendship treaty with Caer Sidi;
Concluding that Saint Mark's contributions have created a kind and caring environment in several regions, making them a better place for their residents;
Hereby commends The Holy Principality of Saint Mark.
A well put together description of their work outside of TWP.
I have some concerns that the second clause is a little weak, but the rest looks good.
by Bhang Bhang Duc » Thu Jul 29, 2021 12:06 am
Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.
RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.
Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..
by Giovanniland » Thu Jul 29, 2021 5:55 am
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Latest draft looks good Gio. Obviously full support.
by Team Lennox » Thu Jul 29, 2021 6:31 am
by The Unified Missourtama States » Thu Jul 29, 2021 6:38 am
Recognizing The Holy Principality of Saint Mark (Saint Mark) as a nation that has gone above and beyond in terms of region and community-building;
Lauding Saint Mark's prioritizing of new nation integration as an important aspect of region-building in TWP, via the creation of The West Pacific Master Dispatch as the modern hub for guides, foreign updates, and other resources to be published with a layout allowing important information to be easily found;
and their still-ongoing term as Chancellor of the University,
Praising Saint Mark's cultural and community-focused approach to foreign relations, in which they not only aided TWP's community by rejuvenating the Ministry of Foreign Affairs through the boost of diplomat numbers, improvement of monthly reports used to keep the region aware of public foreign happenings, and authorship of guides for ambassadors on how to conduct themselves and develop relations within the community of their assigned regions; but also improved relationships between TWP and:
and helping to maintain the activity of the "bodhis", tasks that compose Karma's Path of Enlightenment, in which a resident nation must conclude a bodhi and be approved by the Sages to participate in Karma’s legislative body called the Sangha;
by HumanSanity » Thu Jul 29, 2021 11:17 am
Giovanniland wrote:The Security Council,
Recognizing The Holy Principality of Saint Mark (Saint Mark) as a nation that has gone above and beyond in terms of region and community-building;
Giovanniland wrote:Lauding Saint Mark's prioritizing of new nation integration as an important aspect of region-building in TWP, via the creation of The West Pacific Master Dispatch as the modern hub for guides, foreign updates, and other resources to be published with a layout allowing important information to be easily found;
Giovanniland wrote:and their still-ongoing term as Chancellor of the University, in which they encourage new nations to enroll and help the classes happen smoothly, actions that have fulfilled so far the goal of creating new generations of regional leaders, such as Teralyon and United Adaikes;
Giovanniland wrote:The Pacific (TP), via the work behind the scenes to promote peaceful diplomacy between them, Lazarus, and Osiris to end their interregional conflict, paving the way for a treaty between TWP and TP to be re-established after Saint Mark's delegacy;[/list]
Giovanniland wrote:Noticing that Saint Mark's region-building contributions extend to other regions like Edlhus, which they founded via Marcarius Halohin as an unique region focused on lineage relationships between nations and built it by writing the governing documents known as The Edicts of Edlhus and The Code of Comport; and The Sasquatch Republic, where they helped run traditions such as Thankful Thursday and Best Week Ever to spur activity in the regional message board via Bukwas;
Sandaoguo wrote:HS is worth 100 times more than the insubstantial (to borderline non-existent) benefits the TNP-TSP “alliance” has created over the last several years.
by Giovanniland » Thu Jul 29, 2021 7:06 pm
The Unified Missourtama States wrote:Firstly, I'd like to see the POP accord talked about, people have a hard time saying no if you bring up "the children" or something.
The Unified Missourtama States wrote:Recognizing The Holy Principality of Saint Mark (Saint Mark) as a nation that has gone above and beyond in terms of region and community-building;
"Gone above and beyond" reminds me of a report card for a kindergartner, I recommend using something else, perhaps "been exemplary" (but hopefully something better than that, too).
HumanSanity wrote:Another round of writing feedback before you submit:Giovanniland wrote:The Security Council,
Recognizing The Holy Principality of Saint Mark (Saint Mark) as a nation that has gone above and beyond in terms of region and community-building;
I both agree with TUMS' comment about "above and beyond" and think "region and community-building" could be changed to "the building of regional communities". The way you have it phrased currently, region- and community-building can be (although are not always) two different things, but my impression of the testimony of Saint Mark's region-mates is that they believe his contributions serve to unite the two.
The Unified Missourtama States wrote:Lauding Saint Mark's prioritizing of new nation integration as an important aspect of region-building in TWP, via the creation of The West Pacific Master Dispatch as the modern hub for guides, foreign updates, and other resources to be published with a layout allowing important information to be easily found;
Creating a nation is not commendable, nor is the idea of a regional nation innovative in this context as The West Pacific Master Dispatch was certainly not the first regional nation, checking in my region I see that South Pacific has a regional nation about six months older that does all the same things. Unless you can come up with more concrete and unique effects of the region's dispatch hub, I would like to see this clause removed.
HumanSanity wrote:Giovanniland wrote:Lauding Saint Mark's prioritizing of new nation integration as an important aspect of region-building in TWP, via the creation of The West Pacific Master Dispatch as the modern hub for guides, foreign updates, and other resources to be published with a layout allowing important information to be easily found;
I agree with TUMS that this needs some help, but I do think it can and should be included. TWP's Dispatches are some of the best organized that I see, although aren't as good as plenty of other regions in graphics quality. That level of organization, especially if it originated in Halo's custodianship, is noteworthy.
The Unified Missourtama States wrote:and their still-ongoing term as Chancellor of the University,
When a compound modifier comes after a noun, they should not be hyphenated.Praising Saint Mark's cultural and community-focused approach to foreign relations, in which they not only aided TWP's community by rejuvenating the Ministry of Foreign Affairs through the boost of diplomat numbers, improvement of monthly reports used to keep the region aware of public foreign happenings, and authorship of guides for ambassadors on how to conduct themselves and develop relations within the community of their assigned regions; but also improved relationships between TWP and:
The idea in this part is great and conveys a good idea for the commendation, you have just used way too many words, cut out the filler here.
The Unified Missourtama States wrote:and helping to maintain the activity of the "bodhis", tasks that compose Karma's Path of Enlightenment, in which a resident nation must conclude a bodhi and be approved by the Sages to participate in Karma’s legislative body called the Sangha;
I'm still not quite sure what a bodhis is.
HumanSanity wrote:Giovanniland wrote:and their still-ongoing term as Chancellor of the University, in which they encourage new nations to enroll and help the classes happen smoothly, actions that have fulfilled so far the goal of creating new generations of regional leaders, such as Teralyon and United Adaikes;
I guess, and I realize how this part of the clause evolved based on my previous comment (so me revising my feedback now is likely a little irritating, which I'm entirely willing to admit), that to me it is less important who was trained by the University (in fact, I somewhat agree with the criticism of listing specific mentor-mentee relationships that's been expressed about previous drafts) but rather how. What content and classes does the University host to train regional leaders?
HumanSanity wrote:
I may be wrong, but I feel like given the context of Lazarene instability prior to this treaty, something more significant could be said about it beyond "demonstrated interest in a cultural bond".
HumanSanity wrote:Giovanniland wrote:The Pacific (TP), via the work behind the scenes to promote peaceful diplomacy between them, Lazarus, and Osiris to end their interregional conflict, paving the way for a treaty between TWP and TP to be re-established after Saint Mark's delegacy;[/list]
To my knowledge, Lazarus and the NPO are still in a state of war, and this clause implies the conflict has ended, so some rephrasing may be in order.
HumanSanity wrote:Giovanniland wrote:Noticing that Saint Mark's region-building contributions extend to other regions like Edlhus, which they founded via Marcarius Halohin as an unique region focused on lineage relationships between nations and built it by writing the governing documents known as The Edicts of Edlhus and The Code of Comport; and The Sasquatch Republic, where they helped run traditions such as Thankful Thursday and Best Week Ever to spur activity in the regional message board via Bukwas;
I reiterate my idea that this clause doesn't do a whole lot, although this version is better. Either, more space should be given to each of these regions or you should consolidate to one, because right now I'm left with questions for both regions. For Edlhus, what made it unique (beyond its emphasis on families)? For TSR, what makes these traditions different from any other cultural event/why are they lasting traditions? For both, why are these regions actually important?
by The Unified Missourtama States » Thu Jul 29, 2021 7:45 pm
Giovanniland wrote:While I agree that the POP Accord is something laudable, due to the fact player protection is of utmost importance in online communities. especially when dealing with minors, the intent of the treaty makes it nearly impossible to talk about it in an IC way and still convey the same meaning. We can't mention the full name because talking about nations as "players" is illegal, and if I added something about the protection of children, then it'd sound like Halo wanted to protect minors within WA member-states, which is clearly not the case here. Unfortunately, I think the best way forward for the proposal is to not mention the POP Accord, given that any mention wouldn't really help the case for commendation and would instead possibly confuse the readers when it comes to vote.
Giovanniland wrote:Of course creating a nation is not commendable, nor did I say that Halo's idea of The West Pacific Master Dispatch was innovative, but HS does make a good point here about organization. The foundations of the dispatch hub and its important dispatches (new player introductions, government information, etc) have been there since the project's launch by Halo and others during Halo's delegacy, with later additions (cultural events, puns, cards, etc) easily adapted into the existing models and added to the main dispatch that conveniently displays important links.
Giovanniland wrote:Well, the bodhi is the IC name for this special task a nation must complete, I believe it was created with this name so as to fit with the rest of Karma's lore. You raise a good point though: perhaps I should simply refer to it as a task so that voters don't get confused by the name when it comes to vote.
by Giovanniland » Fri Jul 30, 2021 5:52 am
The Unified Missourtama States wrote:Giovanniland wrote:While I agree that the POP Accord is something laudable, due to the fact player protection is of utmost importance in online communities. especially when dealing with minors, the intent of the treaty makes it nearly impossible to talk about it in an IC way and still convey the same meaning. We can't mention the full name because talking about nations as "players" is illegal, and if I added something about the protection of children, then it'd sound like Halo wanted to protect minors within WA member-states, which is clearly not the case here. Unfortunately, I think the best way forward for the proposal is to not mention the POP Accord, given that any mention wouldn't really help the case for commendation and would instead possibly confuse the readers when it comes to vote.
You say that as though the rest of the proposal is in character, when it really isn't; these days most proposals are forced to be "in-character" for legal reasons (I don't think this is necessarily a problem, but do look at the cards commendations, you know well we're not roleplaying as art collectors in the community). The readers should (will) understand the context, we were able to fit POP in the original resolution.
The Unified Missourtama States wrote:Giovanniland wrote:Of course creating a nation is not commendable, nor did I say that Halo's idea of The West Pacific Master Dispatch was innovative, but HS does make a good point here about organization. The foundations of the dispatch hub and its important dispatches (new player introductions, government information, etc) have been there since the project's launch by Halo and others during Halo's delegacy, with later additions (cultural events, puns, cards, etc) easily adapted into the existing models and added to the main dispatch that conveniently displays important links.
But that's not something readers can know without having read the dispatches, as examples can't be linked in the proposal it will sound like puffery.
The Unified Missourtama States wrote:Giovanniland wrote:Well, the bodhi is the IC name for this special task a nation must complete, I believe it was created with this name so as to fit with the rest of Karma's lore. You raise a good point though: perhaps I should simply refer to it as a task so that voters don't get confused by the name when it comes to vote.
I fail to see the importance of "a task." Now I'm thinking that section should be removed.
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