The one thing I personally noticed was a possible minor edit for the very end -
Believing that Atlae, through their contributions to The East Pacific and the assistance they've provided to foreign nations and regions, is an exemplary nation that personifies hard work and resilience.
Seeing as you take great care throughout to make sure to refer to Atlae as a nation rather than as a person/player, it seems a bit odd to break from that and use the verb "personifies" here - perhaps you could use "embodies" instead, or something similar, as it's used sometimes with subjects that aren't people?
Anyway, best of luck!!!