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Fereni
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Postby Fereni » Fri Jan 08, 2021 11:49 pm

Dragos Bee wrote:I like it, Fereni!
Elysian Kentarchy wrote:Very good Charli.
thank you! ^-^ i worked really hard on them.
i'm keeping the flag until i find something better

Saleon wrote:oh, gosh, you guys are insane.
Spindle wrote:I swear, you two are pretty much the font of all evil in this world...
Spindle wrote:Aaaaaand, the font of all sass.
Spindle wrote:We love you and all, but I'm fairly certain you are also the literal devil.
Kingdom of Irhk wrote:Even with another name, you having fun is still worrisome.

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Remnants of Exilvania
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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Sat Jan 09, 2021 3:52 am

Fereni wrote:
Dragos Bee wrote:
Yes.
:D awesome

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I can recognise them. All of them.

God damn it.
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Postby Fereni » Sat Jan 09, 2021 12:08 pm

Remnants of Exilvania wrote:
Fereni wrote::D awesome

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I can recognise them. All of them.

God damn it.
why god damn it. that was the POINT
i'm keeping the flag until i find something better

Saleon wrote:oh, gosh, you guys are insane.
Spindle wrote:I swear, you two are pretty much the font of all evil in this world...
Spindle wrote:Aaaaaand, the font of all sass.
Spindle wrote:We love you and all, but I'm fairly certain you are also the literal devil.
Kingdom of Irhk wrote:Even with another name, you having fun is still worrisome.

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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Sat Jan 09, 2021 12:49 pm

Fereni wrote:
Remnants of Exilvania wrote:I can recognise them. All of them.

God damn it.
why god damn it. that was the POINT

I just...shouldn't be knowing these characters' aesthetic attributes so well.
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Postby Fereni » Sat Jan 09, 2021 1:05 pm

Remnants of Exilvania wrote:
Fereni wrote:why god damn it. that was the POINT

I just...shouldn't be knowing these characters aesthetic attributes so well.
Yeah i still don't see the problem i think that means they are memorable and that is good :)
i'm keeping the flag until i find something better

Saleon wrote:oh, gosh, you guys are insane.
Spindle wrote:I swear, you two are pretty much the font of all evil in this world...
Spindle wrote:Aaaaaand, the font of all sass.
Spindle wrote:We love you and all, but I'm fairly certain you are also the literal devil.
Kingdom of Irhk wrote:Even with another name, you having fun is still worrisome.

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Postby Ceystile » Sat Jan 09, 2021 10:54 pm

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Name: Gryffin Archangel
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Sexual Orientation: Pansexual
Race: Half-siren
Appearance: (blue hair, brown eyes, 5’1, 100 lbs. Has patches of blue scales in random places on her skin, and slight webbing between her fingers.) https://www.inprnt.com/gallery/cy-lindric/theorbo/


Position/Status/Affiliation: Royal Bard of Arghyo, Adventurer
Skills/Powers//Magic:
White Magic: The Sound of Music
She casts spells through playing her instruments instead of incantations, each chord can produce a spell-like effect. More often this is used to animate and control inanimate objects such as golems or produce elemental effects.

Siren’s Song: Her voice has an enchanting effect when she sings, although she can turn this on and off. Inherited from her mermaid mother. It’s hypnotic in a sense, although she can’t do mind control or anything like that, it DOES make the listener more open to suggestion...there’s about a seventy percent chance that they’ll listen to her suggestions.

Dancing Master: She’s learned swordplay from her father, and can use a rapier fairly well.

Vicious Mockery: (what’s a bard WITHOUT vicious mockery?!): You insult somebody so hard that they get psychic damage, pretty much.

Hydrokinesis: Can manipulate water.
Equipment: She carries an enchanted theorbo (a kind of big lute thing) that can turn into any musical instrument she desires, so long as that instrument is small enough to be carried. She also carries her rapier and a backpack full of assorted items (sheet music, ink, journal, jewelry, food, water, random shit she thought looked cool, stuff like that).


Personality: She’s the big sister friend that encourages you to do shit that you really shouldn’t be doing and will help you clean up the mess afterwards, friendly and mischievous in nature. However, she is short-tempered and does have a bit of an aggression problem due to emotional abuse she endured during her childhood. She also has a HUGE tendency to be almost comedically dramatic, she’s fun to be around that’s for sure.

Moral Alignment: Chaotic Good
Biography: Gryffin Telephassa Archangel was born to human adventurer and minor noble Wolfgang Archangel (the family was originally from Anselm, and their surname was D’Arkhangelsk. They translated it when they settled in Arghyo) and Ligeia, a mermaid. Now the Mer aren’t the type to marry and fall madly in love with humans, usually they attempt to drown them. But as Wolfgang and his party were camping out by Anselm’s shores while tracking quarry, Ligeia came to him and thought he was quite the handsome specimen. So she thought, why not have a little fun with him first before eating him, and that’s exactly what happened. Except Wolfgang had managed to escape before being eaten, because by the grace of the gods he was pulled away by one of his companions after his screams were heard (they sent in the deaf one while the rest fell back). They went on to complete the job, and things continued as normal until Wolfgang found a child on his manor’s doorstep one night. He was confused, until he recalled his encounter with the mermaid...and besides, the baby did have his eyes. Apparently even the Mamuna couldn’t bring herself to eat her own child, and so she was raised by her father.

Gryffin didn’t have the typical childhood for a noble girl, her father liked moving around a lot when he wasn’t serving the Princesses or overseeing his estate, and so she often went with him. Being half-siren she was born with a naturally beautiful voice, but she discovered a real talent and passion for music quite early on. Her childhood was a pretty happy one, except for one problem...Wolfgang’s father, Titus Archangel. He was a cruel man and a human supremacist who despised anything different, and so often mistreated his young granddaughter when out of sight of her father. It was never anything physical, but verbal abuse often take a psychological toll especially at that age. Wolfgang noticed his daughter becoming more withdrawn and depressed, and when questioned she finally told him why. Furious, Wolfgang got into a confrontation with Titus who threatened to disown him, until Wolfgang pointed out that he was his only heir. So after that, father and daughter spent as much time away from the estate as possible and more time at the palace, where Gryffin’s musical skills caught the attention of the nobles and royals. At nineteen she was made the court’s royal bard, and that’s where she’s been ever since (when not traveling and performing elsewhere)


Theme Song: https://youtu.be/hV0-PCI0Zv4


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Did you read the Rules?: Yeah
Miscellaneous:(If there is anything else you would want to add..)
#KBE7TY2IEV (Do not remove, this is for keeping track of the apps)
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Fereni
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Postby Fereni » Sun Jan 10, 2021 12:47 am

Ceystile wrote:Name: Gryffin Archangel
So while this is an interesting character concept, there's definitely some issues, largely with regards to her background and position, as they are kind of... impossible. Please go back and reread the lore surrounding Achysia, and then re-approach this from a different angle.
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i'm keeping the flag until i find something better

Saleon wrote:oh, gosh, you guys are insane.
Spindle wrote:I swear, you two are pretty much the font of all evil in this world...
Spindle wrote:Aaaaaand, the font of all sass.
Spindle wrote:We love you and all, but I'm fairly certain you are also the literal devil.
Kingdom of Irhk wrote:Even with another name, you having fun is still worrisome.

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Ceystile
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Postby Ceystile » Sun Jan 10, 2021 1:08 am

Ok, I understand...but what does Achisia have to do with it? She’s not from Achisia. Is it the part about her being a half-siren, I can totally fix that if you like

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Postby Ceystile » Sun Jan 10, 2021 1:09 am

Oh, i meant to type in Arghyo! I see the issue. So she’s Arghyan, not Achisian.
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Fereni
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Postby Fereni » Sun Jan 10, 2021 1:16 am

Ceystile wrote:Oh, i meant to type in Arghyo! I see the issue.
AHHH, well, that's much better, LOL. In that case, I'll let Thrace take over from here. :)
i'm keeping the flag until i find something better

Saleon wrote:oh, gosh, you guys are insane.
Spindle wrote:I swear, you two are pretty much the font of all evil in this world...
Spindle wrote:Aaaaaand, the font of all sass.
Spindle wrote:We love you and all, but I'm fairly certain you are also the literal devil.
Kingdom of Irhk wrote:Even with another name, you having fun is still worrisome.

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Dragos Bee
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Postby Dragos Bee » Sun Jan 10, 2021 1:20 am

Fereni wrote:
Ceystile wrote:Oh, i meant to type in Arghyo! I see the issue.
AHHH, well, that's much better, LOL. In that case, I'll let Thrace take over from here. :)


Want a loan from my Arghyonian character if you're from Arghyo?
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Ceystile
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Postby Ceystile » Sun Jan 10, 2021 1:29 am

That’d be an interesting interaction, who’s your character?

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Dragos Bee
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Postby Dragos Bee » Sun Jan 10, 2021 1:52 am

Ceystile wrote:That’d be an interesting interaction, who’s your character?


Kyle Perrin-Palaiologos, a merchant and banker.

viewtopic.php?p=37982416#p37982416
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Ceystile
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Postby Ceystile » Sun Jan 10, 2021 1:59 am

Dragos Bee wrote:
Ceystile wrote:That’d be an interesting interaction, who’s your character?


Kyle Perrin-Palaiologos, a merchant and banker.

viewtopic.php?p=37982416#p37982416

I like him, seems like a cool dude. Sounds like him and Gryff would get along famously.

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Ceystile
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Postby Ceystile » Sun Jan 10, 2021 2:08 am

K: “I want to use the power of gold to end slavery.”
G: “I can write some ballads for the cause, spread the word.”

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Postby Dragos Bee » Sun Jan 10, 2021 2:31 am

Ceystile wrote:K: “I want to use the power of gold to end slavery.”
G: “I can write some ballads for the cause, spread the word.”


Thanks, that works!
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Postby Kingdom of Irhk » Sun Jan 10, 2021 6:23 am

Fereni wrote:oh this is so wonderfully exciting. i just have to finish redoing my apps and then i'm going to have so much fun


You are like Darth Sidious/Palpatine, Charli.

Even with another name, you having fun is still worrisome.
Nothing to see here, move along.

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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Sun Jan 10, 2021 7:12 am

Kingdom of Irhk wrote:
Fereni wrote:oh this is so wonderfully exciting. i just have to finish redoing my apps and then i'm going to have so much fun


You are like Darth Sidious/Palpatine, Charli.

Even with another name, you having fun is still worrisome.

Want me to have fun?
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Postby Fereni » Sun Jan 10, 2021 11:46 am

Kingdom of Irhk wrote:
Fereni wrote:oh this is so wonderfully exciting. i just have to finish redoing my apps and then i'm going to have so much fun


You are like Darth Sidious/Palpatine, Charli.

Even with another name, you having fun is still worrisome.
damn right. can't stop won't stop [goes into a dissociative state and commits atrocities]
i'm keeping the flag until i find something better

Saleon wrote:oh, gosh, you guys are insane.
Spindle wrote:I swear, you two are pretty much the font of all evil in this world...
Spindle wrote:Aaaaaand, the font of all sass.
Spindle wrote:We love you and all, but I'm fairly certain you are also the literal devil.
Kingdom of Irhk wrote:Even with another name, you having fun is still worrisome.

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Postby Elysian Kentarchy » Sun Jan 10, 2021 4:39 pm

Kingdom of Irhk wrote:
Fereni wrote:oh this is so wonderfully exciting. i just have to finish redoing my apps and then i'm going to have so much fun


You are like Darth Sidious/Palpatine, Charli.

Even with another name, you having fun is still worrisome.


Yup.


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Ceystile
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Postby Ceystile » Mon Jan 11, 2021 1:58 pm

I have an idea for a third and final character...a plague doctor.

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Postby Tracian Empire » Mon Jan 11, 2021 4:11 pm

Whew, that was a big post.

I'll review your second character tomorrow Ceystile , it's 1 am here, but I haven't seen any big issues after a quick read so it should be alright.

As for a plague doctor, it could be interesting!

Just keep in mind that a plague doctor would have to be very careful to portray themselves as a plague doctor, since Achysian necromancers borrowed their masks during the war, and you do not want someone to think that you're a necromancer xD
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Fereni
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Postby Fereni » Mon Jan 11, 2021 4:21 pm

oh im having a lovely time now. thrace, you spoil me, you really do
i'm keeping the flag until i find something better

Saleon wrote:oh, gosh, you guys are insane.
Spindle wrote:I swear, you two are pretty much the font of all evil in this world...
Spindle wrote:Aaaaaand, the font of all sass.
Spindle wrote:We love you and all, but I'm fairly certain you are also the literal devil.
Kingdom of Irhk wrote:Even with another name, you having fun is still worrisome.

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Postby Arengin Union » Mon Jan 11, 2021 11:56 pm

Its kindof crazy just how much lore and such there is in this world, kind of hard to know what character to do tbh.
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Dragos Bee
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Postby Dragos Bee » Tue Jan 12, 2021 12:04 am

Arengin Union wrote:Its kindof crazy just how much lore and such there is in this world, kind of hard to know what character to do tbh.


Work with my character, Kyle Perrin-Palaiologos?

viewtopic.php?p=37982416#p37982416
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