Kaschovia wrote:Araraukar wrote:OOC: Those are two separate categories. Pick one. Evaluating the language of the proposal is difficult without knowing what category it's been written for.
OOC: I would say that it aims to advance the industry more than regulate, so I'll change it to just advancement. If you see more of a reason for it be regulation, let me know why and I'll change it.
OOC: I disagree. Although it depends on your views on what "advancement of industry" is. Seeing as the legislation states:
Urges member states to, even if in opposition to the advancement of the space industry, become more aware of and familiar with the regular space activities of other nations, to avoid public panic, misidentification of flying objects by foreign militaries, or fear-driven action against sanctioned space activity.
I would change the category to regulation, instead.