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[DRAFT] Condemn Dalimbar

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[DRAFT] Condemn Dalimbar

Postby Ghostfox » Thu Apr 04, 2019 10:06 pm

Hi there. This is my first WA proposal, a project that I actually began a year ago. I didn't have very much knowledge on the SC when I started, and because of that I sort've floundered around for a while. Recently I sought the help of a few people, mostly Lord Dominator, to give me a bit of insight into what I needed to work on. But it quickly became apparent that writing in (mostly) a vacuum wasn't doing much for the proposal. So I'm bringing it to the SC forum to seek advice and guidance in how to chisel it out into a prospective resolution. Thanks for any advice or tips, and thanks for reading. <3

The Security Council,

Believing regional sovereignty to be among the core virtues of this esteemed body,

Recognizing the Security Council’s history of viewing the disruption of legal and sovereign governments as negative and destructive especially in the case of rogue delegacies,

Appalled at Dalimbar’s coups d’etats of The North Pacific as Chodean Kal in 2007 preceded by the use of outside help to influence delegate elections, which resulted in the destruction of the regional government and the merciless banning of native inhabitants,

Further dismayed at Dalimbar’s actions as senior member “Lady Anastasia” of The Empire, a group of rogue nations which overthrew the legal government of The East Pacific in 2008, installed an illegitimate regime for a period of 5 months for no better reason than to see what they could achieve, and subsequently declared war on the largest and most populated regions in the world.

Enraged at the actions taken by Dalimbar to destabilize and manipulate the Kemetic Republic of Osiris for the pursuit of egotistical drive and control over the region, including a 24 hour coup d’etat against the legitimate Pharaoh, and an incident in which member nations flew the flag of The Empire at the behest of Dalimbar as a threat to the sovereignty of Osiris,

Cognizant of Dalimbar’s support of several additional rogue delegacies over a wide range of the most populous regions in the world, including active roles in
-Emperor Matthuis’ coup d’etat of the North Pacific in October of 2007,
-Lewis and Clark’s Crimson Order coup d’etat of the North Pacific in 2008,
-Wickedly Evil People’s coup d’etat of the West Pacific in 2009,
and acting as an advisor in
-Sedgistan’s coup d’etat of the South Pacific in 2011, and
-Lone Wolves United’s coup d’etat of Lazarus in 2017,

Disappointed in Dalimbar’s continued dialogue of opposition to sovereignty including threats to regional governments, the advocacy of espionage and subterfuge, and the encouragement to other nations in disrupting and/or overthrowing communities.

Realizing the skill and dedication it takes to maintain such a vicious opposition to sovereignty and horrified at Dalimbar’s willingness to use said skill and dedication in pursuit of maligning regional stability,

Shocked that Dalimbar has been allowed to perpetrate recurring violence against stability and sovereignty of communities for over 14 years without any widespread consequence,

Hereby condemns Dalimbar.
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Postby Armaros » Thu Apr 04, 2019 10:37 pm

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Postby Praeceps » Thu Apr 04, 2019 10:41 pm

Ghostfox wrote:Cognizant of Dalimbar’s support of several additional rogue delegacies over a wide range of the most populous regions in the world, including active roles in
-Emperor Matthuis’ coup d’etat of the North Pacific in October of 2007,
-Lewis and Clark’s Crimson Order coup d’etat of the North Pacific in 2008,
-Wickedly Evil People’s coup d’etat of the West Pacific in 2009,
and acting as an advisor in
-Sedgistan’s coup d’etat of the South Pacific in 2011, and
-Lone Wolves United’s coup d’etat of Lazarus in 2017,

Might I suggest elaborating on Dalimbar's roles in the coups of the aforementioned regions? You have the room to go into more depth and flesh out the atrocities.
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Postby Ghostfox » Thu Apr 04, 2019 11:19 pm

Praeceps wrote:
Ghostfox wrote:Might I suggest elaborating on Dalimbar's roles in the coups of the aforementioned regions? You have the room to go into more depth and flesh out the atrocities.


Yeah definitely. I was worried about the bullet list a bit, but I wasn't sure if I had the space to talk about all of it. But I think I will make expanding this the next goal in refining the proposal.
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Postby Xoriet » Fri Apr 05, 2019 7:15 am

Well-deserved. That fiend, couping all those innocent regions! >:(

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Postby Aclion » Fri Apr 05, 2019 8:06 am

the destruction of the former regional government
That the government doesn't exist anymore is implied by the fact that it was destroyed. Calling it the former government makes it sound like they destroyed a government that was already defunct.
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Postby Ghostfox » Fri Apr 05, 2019 9:58 am

Aclion wrote:
the destruction of the former regional government
That the government doesn't exist anymore is implied by the fact that it was destroyed. Calling it the former government makes it sound like they destroyed a government that was already defunct.


Ooh, good call. Thanks. :3
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Postby The Red Kings » Sun Apr 07, 2019 2:56 am

Realizing the skill and dedication it takes to maintain such a vicious opposition to sovereignty and horrified at Dalimbar’s willingness to use said skill and dedication in pursuit of maligning regional stability,


I believe that this line is rather superfluous and perhaps gives more credit to the individual you are trying to condemn that was intended? The useful content is already included in the line below and therefore this line should be deleted

Shocked that Dalimbar has been allowed to perpetrate recurring violence against stability and sovereignty of stable and sovereign communities for over 14 years without any widespread consequence


The condemnation appears to be against the individuals actions against specific communities rather than stability and sovereignty generally, so this amendment seems appropriate
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Postby Killer Kitty » Sun Apr 07, 2019 10:01 pm

Ghostfox wrote:
-Lone Wolves United’s coup d’etat of Lazarus in 2017


There was no LWU coup of Lazarus in 2017 when the Civil War started and the Khanate didn't occur until 2018.

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Postby Aclion » Sun Apr 07, 2019 11:50 pm

Killer Kitty wrote:
Ghostfox wrote:
-Lone Wolves United’s coup d’etat of Lazarus in 2017


There was no LWU coup of Lazarus in 2017 when the Civil War started and the Khanate didn't occur until 2018.

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Postby Ghostfox » Tue Apr 09, 2019 1:16 pm

Killer Kitty wrote:
Ghostfox wrote:
-Lone Wolves United’s coup d’etat of Lazarus in 2017


There was no LWU coup of Lazarus in 2017 when the Civil War started and the Khanate didn't occur until 2018.


I'll see if I can address this particular line in a way that better suits an all around view of the event. If not, I may leave it out. I don't think that Dali is lacking for participation in coups. :P
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Postby Barfleur » Mon Apr 22, 2019 3:29 pm

I'm a big fan of coups, I think they keep things new and exciting! :D

On a more serious note, I support this bill. We at the SC do have a job, after all.
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Postby Pretty Girls » Fri Jul 12, 2019 2:25 pm

This is something that's still happening, I just got particularly sidetracked. Sorry for the delay. D:
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Postby Mallorea and Riva » Fri Jul 12, 2019 6:07 pm

Dali is a saint, opposed.
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Postby Padfootia » Wed Jul 17, 2019 6:12 am

Mallorea and Riva wrote:Dali is a saint, opposed.

You sure? Well I support this.


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Postby Fecaw » Mon Jul 29, 2019 10:45 am

Support.

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Postby Bormiar » Mon Nov 18, 2019 3:36 pm

I've asked and have been given permission to continue this draft as either author or co-author. Here's a second draft written by me. I'm hoping to get comments on it as I'm not sure what direction to take here [EDIT: one direction could potentially be commendation, so I'm really not sure here]. Without further ado, here's draft 2.

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Nation / region tags will be added later.
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Postby Aenglaland » Mon Nov 18, 2019 3:49 pm

Mallorea and Riva wrote:Dali is a saint, opposed.
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Postby Numero Capitan » Tue Nov 19, 2019 1:20 am

I’m not sure the worst thing about the Lewis and Clark rogue delegacy was that it “crippled relations between Gatesville and the Founderless Regions Alliance” - that’s not even accurate. I’d say it had no impact on relations between Gatesville and the FRA but it doesn’t seem a relevant part of Dali’s back catalogue. I’d keep that line just about the constitution being dissolved with outside support and the ejection of long-term natives.
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Postby Odin » Mon Apr 06, 2020 4:29 pm

EDIT: this is confusing. I was logged-in as Bormiar but it posted as Odin. Huh.

Here is a better / good version of this proposal. The second parenthesis in the disgusted clause about Chodean Kal was referring to Dalimbar's claim that his nation got hacked when Dalimbar ejected updaters coming in to take him out. I doubt anyone believes that his nation was hacked and all the hacked did was eject Dali's enemies :P.

Nation tags come later.

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Postby Fauxia » Mon Apr 06, 2020 4:39 pm

Imposes in the present? My impression has been that Empire is gone, replaced by Rahl...

Aenglaland wrote:
Mallorea and Riva wrote:Dali is a saint, opposed.

That sounds like all the more reason to support :twisted:

Edit: I don’t think the list of three coups near the end is forceful enough. "Led by important members of the NPO" is not incriminating. I get that you called it a coup, but it’s more mild-mannered than it needs to be.

Also, can we have some hyperlinks?
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Postby Bormiar » Mon Apr 06, 2020 4:55 pm

Fauxia wrote:Imposes in the present? My impression has been that Empire is gone, replaced by Rahl...

I could call it a typo (d is right next to s on the keyboard), but when I wrote that I thought it would be more fun to call Dali currently scary. Seeing how that could be interpreted to suggest that the Empire is still a thing, I'll change it.

Fauxia wrote:
Aenglaland wrote:

That sounds like all the more reason to support :twisted:

That quote is going to be sent through this thread 'till it gets archived.

Fauxia wrote:Edit: I don’t think the list of three coups near the end is forceful enough. "Led by important members of the NPO" is not incriminating. I get that you called it a coup, but it’s more mild-mannered than it needs to be.

Yeah, now that I think about it, that doesn't sound condemn-y enough.

Fauxia wrote:Also, can we have some hyperlinks?

Hyperlinks? Like nation/region tags, or sources?
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Postby Fauxia » Mon Apr 06, 2020 7:27 pm

Like nation/region tags. Usually there’s at least one to the target nation at least, but I like to have a hyperlink to basically every region (although since you have a list there’s decent reason not to)
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