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by Vacif » Fri Apr 19, 2019 4:08 pm
by Deutschess Kaiserreich » Fri Apr 19, 2019 7:35 pm
Nation-states Name: The Deutschess Kaiserreich
Character Name: Charles Johann Akerström
Character Age: 20
Physical Description:Standing at an average height at 179.87, Charles is still slightly thin and scrawny even from the days in the city guard. He has dirty unkept brown hair. He rarely smiles but when he does it always mean that victory is on the horizon or there is just beer nearby. He wears the signature cape that trails behind him in his off duty Danish Valkyrie uniform. His posture is always straight and at attention. Another trait he gained during his three years in the guard.
Character Nationality: Swedish-Danish
Character Short Bio:Born on 2028 January 18, one year before the disaster, to a single mother, Agneta Akerström, in Stockholm. During the disaster, his mother would grab her revolver and her child backpack carrier, given to her by her late husband, and flee the city. Agneta found a boat and a terrified captain and a group of refugees hiding within it. They quickly boarded, Einar offering the captain a gold watch and a revolver for space, and landed in the city of Copenhagen. There she would go to her grandfather in search of a life in Kiel
Charles' would go to school but face some initial trouble due to the fact that his Swedish would only give him the ability to understand basic Danish words but he would soon pick up the language. In 2033 Agneta would find a job a city guard but was far too busy to take care of Charles so he found himself in his grandfather's antique shop. His grandfather's shop was like a treasure trove of items from the past. From World war two posters to the Prussian swords of old. His grandfather often joked that he had the saber of Charles XII himself. Charles would there take a strong interest in the past before the disaster. So much had been changed that things and ideas from only five years seemed completely alien. This slowly turned into an obsession with Charles often robbing to get the money in order to buy a cigarette card from the 1950s. In 2039 he robbed the wrong pocket and landed himself in jail. Only now did his mother, now a captain of the guard, find out about the methods in which he gained the posters in his room. She was enraged, spending the entire night chewing him out. She was a captain of the guard and her son a thief? Had she not fought through hordes of beasts and raiders to bring Charles to the safety of the Netherlands?
On his way back from school the next day (trying his hardest not to pick any pockets) he passed by a poster encouraging youths to join the city guard (Recently renamed as the Volkssturm) as auxiliary forces. How could he make it up to his mother? Prove to her that he was more than a common beggar thief? Why the answer was right in front of him. The next day he enlisted lying about his age claiming he was 13 and was given the role of an ammo carrier and if the worst was to come to a reserve trooper.
The worst would come in 2039 December 25 when a massive attack was launched by a terrorist group in an attempt to take Coppenhagen and use it as a base to take the Nordic nations. One by one the communist breached every defensive line and were now about to enter the city proper. Now the city guard was mobilized as the hordes came closer and closer. Suddenly before the devils reached their lines and range a massive rain of steel suddenly engulfed the city. The downtown area was reduced to rubble and Charles' mother wounded. All seemed lost when angels arrived.
GAMA had come. They routed the communist hordes, caught off guard from such sudden reinforcement...
GAMA would set up a major base in Copenhagen and her agents would search the city for possible recruits from the second generation and they found Charles. He would be quickly recruited despite much protests from his mother but Charles' still went anyway, determined to prove himself to his mother.
During the training, he is bunked with another boy named Konstantin. They both shared a fascination with the past and were determined to prove themselves to someone. To Konstantin, it was the fatherland that he had only heard tales of and dreamed of making those tales true once more.
Then in 2046 Charles' and Konstantin went on their first mission. They were ordered to be part of an operation to retake the Kiel canal and reopen it. But they were ambushed by a group of the Soldiers of the Cross members who had attempted to destroy the Kiel canal to disrupt the reunification of Europe. Konstantin's MACE was destroyed and his broken body ripped out by a Charles forced to eject. He died there in Charles' arms while bullets whizzed around them...
RP Sample (a link to one of your posts in another RP): 1, 2, 3, 4 and 5.
Theme Song (entirely optional): Glory to the fatherland! and protect our borders!
MACE Picture/Description:
MACE Model Name: Gehender Panzer-2
MACE Nickname/Reporting name: "Erika" Gehender Panzer-2-122
Height (Cannot exceed 6m/20ft): 2.8m
Speed: 70km at full sprint
Weight(approx.): three tons
Equipment:Weaponry:
- Lebenssucher Head-mounted lifeform scanner (Effective for up to 50m and can penetrate 1.31 meters of concrete)
- Zielgerät "Vampir" nightvision.
- 2X Winkel Licht Shoulder mounted flood lights
- 2x self-repair drones: Small little orbs no bigger than a softball with all the trinkets and scanners needed to repair all the Panzers in the Wehrmacht. They levitate around the injured Panzer repairing all damage on the surface but serious, entire limbs ripped off, etc, and internal damage they cannot repair.
- 1x Medical kit
- Long range communication array (Effective 200km).
- 1x Survival kit.
- X1 30mm Morningstar assault rifle GL addition (handheld): Light, next to no kickback, reliable and rapid fire for days. These are the four traits that define the rifle. At only 1.8 meters in length, the morningstar is extremely effective at close range with the option to detach the barrel making CQB much easier and overheats less rare but, of course, reducing the accuracy and range of the rifle. This edition comes with an under-barrel 50mm grenade launcher with the following ammunition available. This model has been uniquely designed with an attachment for a 50 cm bayonet capable of penetrating steel and slicing a man in half with one stab and a swing.
- 50mm "Knock-Knock" concrete buster: Built to bust holes in urban environments the CB can penetrate two meters of concrete with a diameter of four meters. It does this with the round penetrating the calculated distance and exploding in the wall. A subdivision of this ammo type, Shock CB, penetrates the wall but the tip continues to penetrate and once it enters the other side detonates either a flashbang or a fragmentation blast with an effective radius of two meters.
- 50mm "Starlight" White Phosphorus: Built to create smoke screen it is certainly not used as an incendiary round.
- 50mm "Blaster" High Explosive: Effective up to 300m with kill range of 12m.
- 50mm "Splinters" Fragmentation: Effective up to 200m with kill range of 20m and wounding of 50m.
- 50mm "Dragon killer" Armor Piercing: Can penetrate 60m of armor at 300m. Not recommended against dedicated main battle tanks.
- 1.2-meter long vibrosaber "Barbarossa's saber": A 1.2-meter long saber that vibrates as fast as a hummingbird and made out of near unbreakable German steel. The weapon's hilt or handle contains a compact ultrasonic vibration generator, causing the saber to vibrate at an incredible speed, making even the slightest glancing blow become a gaping wound. The saber is dangerous to use against electrical weapons, as they conduct electricity.
- x1 20mm wrist mounted dual autocannons: Mounted on the right wrist of the mech the weapon is designed so that one can dual wield the saber without while at the same time having ranged firepower.
- 2x 15mm Luger II class machine pistols: The sidearm of the mech it is designed with close-range firepower in mind. It has a clip of over 30 rounds and an amazing fire rate. It could be dragged through mud and blood and still function the same as when it rolled off the production line. A fine example of German technology.
- x1 Tiger beißen class Shoulder-mounted 60mm rocket launcher.: The shoulder mounted launcher is mainly designed for long-range firepower. it is mainly designed to be used against armored targets at a long range being able to penetrate over 200m of armor with AP at 1km and 180mm with HEAT at any range.
Defensive measures:
- Blinder model 45 EW
- Compostie light armor 20m (Rated 500mm of steel).
- Ejection seat
- 6x Betrüger Hip mounted smoke launchers: Ejects electrically charged smoke to confuse electronics. However this also blocks the Panzer's own electronics.
Other features: The Gehender Panzer-2 is built for extremely close urban battles and as a scouting vehicle. It moves extremely fast with its two legs and can leap to hights of about a meter and a half.
Socialist Minecraft Server wrote:Im thinking about what im thinking about what im thinking
Ethnic Female German living in [REDACTED] (Not comfortable with revealing my identity).
by Castelia » Fri Apr 19, 2019 8:47 pm
by Deutschess Kaiserreich » Fri Apr 19, 2019 9:15 pm
Castelia wrote:Err, DK, I'm not OP nor one of his co-OPs, but let me share my opinion regarding your new character application. Feel free to criticize or correct me if I get anything wrong, everyone.
Let me just state first, though, that I admire the effort you're putting in trying to get in on this RP, but to be blunt, I think you just rewrote the same application with a new twist.
First off, I think OP mentioned somewhere that candidates were selected in their pre-teens and undergo augmentation at their teenage years, yet your character had joined GAMA at 15 years old. Surely that already made him too old to even be accepted, much less undergo augmentation and training with the same generation of characters in this RP? Maybe if he had been found and underwent training at an earlier age he could be accepted. (There's a character here with exactly that backstory. Forgot who, though.)
Second, uhh... how do I say this nicely? Lone-wolf type, obsessed with gaining his father's approval, tragic backstory, recklessness in battle... Your character is... edgy? Not that anything's wrong with that, though. However, I think that'll be a detriment to him as a character especially as we're all supposed to work together as a unit, following orders and all that. Your character seems prone to acting on his own, and will probably disobey direct orders if it meant "being a hero of Germany" or something. So, yeah, like I said, that'll probably be a problem.
Third, his "obsession" with reclaiming Germany. Would that not be a problem in future storylines, especially if a faction came along aiming to restore Germany that runs counter to GAMA's goals? I think that'll be a problem, too.
As for the mech, well, considering my limited experience on that area, I'll let someone else analyse it.
Socialist Minecraft Server wrote:Im thinking about what im thinking about what im thinking
Ethnic Female German living in [REDACTED] (Not comfortable with revealing my identity).
by Wolfenium » Fri Apr 19, 2019 9:48 pm
Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:Castelia wrote:Err, DK, I'm not OP nor one of his co-OPs, but let me share my opinion regarding your new character application. Feel free to criticize or correct me if I get anything wrong, everyone.
Let me just state first, though, that I admire the effort you're putting in trying to get in on this RP, but to be blunt, I think you just rewrote the same application with a new twist.
First off, I think OP mentioned somewhere that candidates were selected in their pre-teens and undergo augmentation at their teenage years, yet your character had joined GAMA at 15 years old. Surely that already made him too old to even be accepted, much less undergo augmentation and training with the same generation of characters in this RP? Maybe if he had been found and underwent training at an earlier age he could be accepted. (There's a character here with exactly that backstory. Forgot who, though.)
Second, uhh... how do I say this nicely? Lone-wolf type, obsessed with gaining his father's approval, tragic backstory, recklessness in battle... Your character is... edgy? Not that anything's wrong with that, though. However, I think that'll be a detriment to him as a character especially as we're all supposed to work together as a unit, following orders and all that. Your character seems prone to acting on his own, and will probably disobey direct orders if it meant "being a hero of Germany" or something. So, yeah, like I said, that'll probably be a problem.
Third, his "obsession" with reclaiming Germany. Would that not be a problem in future storylines, especially if a faction came along aiming to restore Germany that runs counter to GAMA's goals? I think that'll be a problem, too.
As for the mech, well, considering my limited experience on that area, I'll let someone else analyse it.
I see the problem and will fix it as soon a possible when I get home. I’m basing the character on my self so I’ll write a diff one. Thanks for your time also sorry for any spelling mistake on Android.
by Deutschess Kaiserreich » Fri Apr 19, 2019 9:58 pm
Socialist Minecraft Server wrote:Im thinking about what im thinking about what im thinking
Ethnic Female German living in [REDACTED] (Not comfortable with revealing my identity).
by Monfrox » Fri Apr 19, 2019 10:03 pm
Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:That’s actually a good idea. Between two great powers for a thousand years. I’ll scrap the German guy.
Xing wrote:Yeah but you also are the best at roleplay. (yay Space Core references) I'm pretty sure a four man tank crew is no problem for someone that had 27 different RP characters going at one time.
The Grey Wolf wrote:Froxy knows how to use a whip, I speak from experience.
by Forest State » Fri Apr 19, 2019 10:06 pm
Monfrox wrote:Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:That’s actually a good idea. Between two great powers for a thousand years. I’ll scrap the German guy.
Edit your app on this page instead of posting a new one, please. I've got to look through so many other pages of things and I still haven't put all the apps in the OP yet.
FOREST! I have to talk to you. New York City was one of the cities hit really badly in the initial attacks. Basically, all the major cities like Chicago, Washington D.C., Boston, and the like are fucked.
PARCIA! Scrap the power armor. I'm not accepting that.
by Monfrox » Fri Apr 19, 2019 10:15 pm
Forest State wrote:Monfrox wrote:Edit your app on this page instead of posting a new one, please. I've got to look through so many other pages of things and I still haven't put all the apps in the OP yet.
FOREST! I have to talk to you. New York City was one of the cities hit really badly in the initial attacks. Basically, all the major cities like Chicago, Washington D.C., Boston, and the like are fucked.
PARCIA! Scrap the power armor. I'm not accepting that.
Actually sounds like that fits what I have pretty well. New York being fucked explains why Alyx's brother would send her off to join GAMA instead of staying with family.
Xing wrote:Yeah but you also are the best at roleplay. (yay Space Core references) I'm pretty sure a four man tank crew is no problem for someone that had 27 different RP characters going at one time.
The Grey Wolf wrote:Froxy knows how to use a whip, I speak from experience.
by Castelia » Fri Apr 19, 2019 10:25 pm
Monfrox wrote:[
No, I don't think you understand. It's fucked, Jim. Major city centers and urban sprawls belong to the infected, especially those on the Eastern seaboard.
by Forest State » Fri Apr 19, 2019 10:27 pm
Monfrox wrote:Forest State wrote:Actually sounds like that fits what I have pretty well. New York being fucked explains why Alyx's brother would send her off to join GAMA instead of staying with family.
No, I don't think you understand. It's fucked, Jim. Major city centers and urban sprawls belong to the infected, especially those on the Eastern seaboard.
by Monfrox » Fri Apr 19, 2019 10:39 pm
Forest State wrote:Monfrox wrote:No, I don't think you understand. It's fucked, Jim. Major city centers and urban sprawls belong to the infected, especially those on the Eastern seaboard.
Ah, alright. I'll make an edit. Would PA or perhaps the south be better locations for someone fleeing from the west?
Xing wrote:Yeah but you also are the best at roleplay. (yay Space Core references) I'm pretty sure a four man tank crew is no problem for someone that had 27 different RP characters going at one time.
The Grey Wolf wrote:Froxy knows how to use a whip, I speak from experience.
by Deutschess Kaiserreich » Sat Apr 20, 2019 3:33 am
Socialist Minecraft Server wrote:Im thinking about what im thinking about what im thinking
Ethnic Female German living in [REDACTED] (Not comfortable with revealing my identity).
by Xing » Sat Apr 20, 2019 11:13 am
by Vacif » Sun Apr 21, 2019 12:03 am
by Forest State » Sun Apr 21, 2019 1:32 am
by Deutschess Kaiserreich » Sun Apr 21, 2019 3:17 am
Socialist Minecraft Server wrote:Im thinking about what im thinking about what im thinking
Ethnic Female German living in [REDACTED] (Not comfortable with revealing my identity).
by Sraelyn » Sun Apr 21, 2019 8:05 am
Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:Made edits and hopefully, this is the final version.
by Towers » Sun Apr 21, 2019 10:51 am
by Monfrox » Sun Apr 21, 2019 12:46 pm
Xing wrote:Yeah but you also are the best at roleplay. (yay Space Core references) I'm pretty sure a four man tank crew is no problem for someone that had 27 different RP characters going at one time.
The Grey Wolf wrote:Froxy knows how to use a whip, I speak from experience.
by Kassaran » Sun Apr 21, 2019 1:36 pm
Towers wrote:Hello, hello, hello.
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Tristan noticed footsteps behind him and looked there, only to see Eric approaching and then pointing his sword at the girl. He just blinked a few times at this before speaking.
"Put that down, Mr. Eric." He said. "She's obviously not a chicken."
by Towers » Sun Apr 21, 2019 1:54 pm
by Kassaran » Sun Apr 21, 2019 2:30 pm
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Tristan noticed footsteps behind him and looked there, only to see Eric approaching and then pointing his sword at the girl. He just blinked a few times at this before speaking.
"Put that down, Mr. Eric." He said. "She's obviously not a chicken."
by Xing » Sun Apr 21, 2019 7:37 pm
by Parcia » Sun Apr 21, 2019 7:44 pm
Xing wrote:Towers I see what you did there with that birthdate. Cheeky, as always. Alright, since we've changed the thread to semi-closed I want to ask now. Is there anyone with apps that still need to be fully accepted, there have been a lot of posts and I don't want to end up missing anyone. I see Towers, Vacif, Deutschess, Forest, and Parcia. Before I start going through all of them, if there is anyone that we've missed please speak up so that I can look things over.
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