[Draft] Commend Sierra Lyricalia

[Marxist Germany]

Commend Sierra Lyricalia

Category: Commendation | Nominee: Sierra Lyricalia | Proposed by: Marxist Germany

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The Security Council,

Believing that it's the Security Council's duty to commend nations such as Sierra Lyricalia for their outstanding behaviour;

Lauding Sierra Lyricalia's previous role as World Assembly delegate of Anarchy on multiple occasions, and its current role as Principal-Agent;

Recognising Sierra Lyricalia's brilliant General Assembly resolution GA#354 "AI Coexistence Protocol" which gave sentient AI the same rights as other sapient beings in member states;

Further recognising the work of Sierra Lyricalia to help new World Assembly ambassadors write up proposals by helping set up an ideas for world assembly resolutions room in the GA Wing of the WAHQ;

Noting the excellent efforts made by Sierra Lyricalia's ambassadors Leo Pavonis, and former Stephenie Zakalwe's who is also an astronaut and a soldier, in debating and improving many important resolutions such as GA#307 "Anti-Counterfeiting Pact" which prohibited counterfeiting in almost all cases;

Acknowledging the issues brought to the international community by Sierra Lyricalia such as "Voters Place Your Bets" which highlighted the issue of betting on election results and "A Proselyte to Burn" which concerned the issue of how much free speech should be given to citizens;

Applauding Sierra Lyricalia's role of Squadron Admiral in The Red Fleet, an organisation that has been commended by this assembly previously, which fights regions of fascist ideologies to stop the spread of fascism;

Awed at the achievements mentioned above;

Hereby, Commends Sierra Lyricalia.

Second attempt at an SC proposal, feedback is welcomed.

[East Meranopirus]

Ok, no mention of GenSec work? Is that not allowed in SC resolutions?

[Marxist Germany]

Ok, no mention of GenSec work? Is that not allowed in SC resolutions?

OOC:That's a violation of Rule 1,which states that any mod admin etc. Can't be commended for that role.

[The Marsupial Illuminati]

Acknowledging the issues brought to the international community by Sierra Lyricalia such as [...] "Your Stuff is Forfeit" which brought up the debate over government and private land ownership

Issue 724: Your Stuff Is Forfeit was submitted after Logophilia Lyricalia became an issues editor, so it cannot be mentioned in the commendation.

After some discussion, moderation has decided to allow commendations and condemnations to mention issues written, submitted and published by Issue Editors prior to their appointment as IEs. Since their work as an IE includes writing issues, any issues written once they become IEs cannot be mentioned.

[Marxist Germany]

Acknowledging the issues brought to the international community by Sierra Lyricalia such as [...] "Your Stuff is Forfeit" which brought up the debate over government and private land ownership

Issue 724: Your Stuff Is Forfeit was submitted after Logophilia Lyricalia became an issues editor, so it cannot be mentioned in the commendation.

After some discussion, moderation has decided to allow commendations and condemnations to mention issues written, submitted and published by Issue Editors prior to their appointment as IEs. Since their work as an IE includes writing issues, any issues written once they become IEs cannot be mentioned.

OOC:Yeah, I was wondering which issues did he submit as an editor, thanks.

[Tinhampton]

Issue 724: Your Stuff Is Forfeit was submitted after Logophilia Lyricalia became an issues editor, so it cannot be mentioned in the commendation.

After some discussion, moderation has decided to allow commendations and condemnations to mention issues written, submitted and published by Issue Editors prior to their appointment as IEs. Since their work as an IE includes writing issues, any issues written once they become IEs cannot be mentioned.

#724 appears to have been first published in 2017, after LL's resignation as an Issues Editor. Should this be taken as an assumption that all work done by Issues Editors after taking post - even if they do so after leaving post - is taboo material for C&Cs; that #724 was originally submitted during LL's tenure as an Editor; or is this a situational issue only applicable to resolutions targetted at SL and their puppers?

[Lenlyvit]

I think it's pretty well written, if a bit on the brief side. Its worth noting that I believe SL is in The Red Fleet, which you could mention activities against fascist/nazi forces. I could be wrong on that, but I don't think I am.

[The Marsupial Illuminati]

that #724 was originally submitted during LL's tenure as an Editor

This is the case.

[Marxist Germany]

I think it's pretty well written, if a bit on the brief side. Its worth noting that I believe SL is in The Red Fleet, which you could mention activities against fascist/nazi forces. I could be wrong on that, but I don't think I am.

OOC:I'll do some more research on that.

[Herby]

Amazed by the bravery of ambassador Zakalwe's successful rescue of Separatist Peoples' ambassador Bell Benjamin who was ruthlessly kidnapped without any help and using only her rocket pistol;

Wait wait wait wait WHAT???? Whadaya mean “without any help”? I mean ehhhhh I love my sweet soul sistah but DAAAAAMN learn some history, will ya?

[Marxist Germany]

Amazed by the bravery of ambassador Zakalwe's successful rescue of Separatist Peoples' ambassador Bell Benjamin who was ruthlessly kidnapped without any help and using only her rocket pistol;

Wait wait wait wait WHAT???? Whadaya mean “without any help”? I mean ehhhhh I love my sweet soul sistah but DAAAAAMN learn some history, will ya?

"We apologise for omitting your name and will remove that part"

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

I’ll be honest I think it’s a bit lightweight for a Commend. You’ve already had to remove or not use material because of R1 and what’s left isn’t much.

Yes it’s tidily written, but in terms of commendable actions there’s not really a lot there.

[Marxist Germany]

I’ll be honest I think it’s a bit lightweight for a Commend. You’ve already had to remove or not use material because of R1 and what’s left isn’t much.

Yes it’s tidily written, but in terms of commendable actions there’s not really a lot there.

OOC:I'll see what other SC regulars have to say.

[Borovan entered the region as he]

Ooc: looking at the other GA ppl who r commended I think there's need to be more on this draft or strengthen the material

[Marxist Germany]

Ooc: looking at the other GA ppl who r commended I think there's need to be more on this draft or strengthen the material

OOC:Yeah I'll try to add more tomorrow.

[PPKF]

They said no already

[Praeceps]

If you are continuing with this I would suggest expanding on their involvement in debates—what resolutions were they impactful on? Why?

I think a case can be made for SL; you aren't making it strong enough (yet).

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Amazed by the bravery of ambassador Zakalwe's successful rescue of Separatist Peoples' ambassador Bell Benjamin who was ruthlessly kidnapped using only her rocket pistol;

While this may have significance to the GA regulars, it means absolutely nothing to the vast majority of GP.

[Wrapper]

Amazed by the bravery of ambassador Zakalwe's successful rescue of Separatist Peoples' ambassador Bell Benjamin who was ruthlessly kidnapped using only her rocket pistol;

While this may have significance to the GA regulars, it means absolutely nothing to the vast majority of GP.

It's from the same RP that was mentioned in Separatist Peoples' commendation and my condemnation. The fact that it "means absolutely nothing to the vast majority of GP" is irrelevant. That said, (1) as Herby pointed out, the statement is not just an exaggeration, it's factually incorrect (as well as a grammatical mess), and (2) as much as SL played a crucial role in the RP, his character, while integral to the plot, was merely a supporting character, a role that not only could have been played by anyone else, it was played by... I want to say, five or six other characters as well.

SL has done so much for the GA community, and is worthy of a commendation, but including his supporting role in this one RP diminishes his accomplishments.

[Marxist Germany]

Amazed by the bravery of ambassador Zakalwe's successful rescue of Separatist Peoples' ambassador Bell Benjamin who was ruthlessly kidnapped using only her rocket pistol;

While this may have significance to the GA regulars, it means absolutely nothing to the vast majority of GP.

It's from the same RP that was mentioned in Separatist Peoples' commendation and my condemnation. The fact that it "means absolutely nothing to the vast majority of GP" is irrelevant. That said, (1) as Herby pointed out, the statement is not just an exaggeration, it's factually incorrect (as well as a grammatical mess), and (2) as much as SL played a crucial role in the RP, his character, while integral to the plot, was merely a supporting character, a role that not only could have been played by anyone else, it was played by... I want to say, five or six other characters as well.

SL has done so much for the GA community, and is worthy of a commendation, but including his supporting role in this one RP diminishes his accomplishments.

OOC:Do you suggest replacing it with something else?

[Ransium]

I would love to see SL commended, but I do agree this is really light weight. You might try including some stuff about his regional contributions to Anarachy. I don’t know much about them, but you could ask his region mates. They were also discussed during SL’s last commendation attempt so reading through that thread might be helpful. Here’s the link to that:

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=420194&start=0

[Marxist Germany]

I would love to see SL commended, but I do agree this is really light weight. You might try including some stuff about his regional contributions to Anarachy. I don’t know much about them, but you could ask his region mates. They were also discussed during SL’s last commendation attempt so reading through that thread might be helpful. Here’s the link to that:

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=420194&start=0

Alright thanks