Heroes of Tomorrow Redux [DONE]

[The Verdantderm Lands]

So, does the VR apparatus channel the neural pathways away from the use of powers in the 'real world' or with the 'real world' be trashed? Inquiring minds want to know, in the IC.

[Forest State]

So, does the VR apparatus channel the neural pathways away from the use of powers in the 'real world' or with the 'real world' be trashed? Inquiring minds want to know, in the IC.

It's basically an extremely advanced video game, nobody is actually doing anything in the real world. It'll be explained IC next time I post.

[Forest State]

Powers such as this that facilitate hacking wouldn't be allowed under normal circumstances, but this isn't exactly a normal character and is a rather important plot relevant one that will play a role in a couple of main arcs as a semi-instructor... So, here goes another app. The program members will meet her pretty soon.

BELLAMY LYS

Name: Bellamy Lys
Nickname/Alias: Rook
Appearance:

Gender: Female
Age: ???
Build: 5'2", 127 lbs
Faction: Guardians
Power Classification: ???

Description of Powers:

• Artificial Intelligence: Bellamy is able to tap into the power of the Providence artificial intelligence system. That means that Bellamy can access all of the devices that are linked to the system's network such as cameras, microphones, computers, and anything else. This allows her to do her job as mission controller by monitoring all of the teams in the field using their equipment, which is connected to the network. In addition, Bellamy can use the processing power of the AI network remotely to do things such as run simulations, predictions, or break down large amounts of data or attempt to break into other systems.
• Physical Edge: Bellamy seems to have a physical edge over most competition with lightning quick reflexes and durability to match, the latter far surpassing that of a typical human. Her strength, additionally, is about strong enough to lift a car.

Weaknesses: Bellamy's power deals with the indirect. Her plans revolve around indirect action through the use of her network, not directly jumping into battles and affecting the outcomes. Throw her into the middle of something, and she's not really significantly more useful than most people would be in any given situation. Additionally, Bellamy tends to lean heavily on calculations, making erratic and unpredictable moves something that can easily throw her for a loop.

Equipment: If a weapon is needed, Bellamy tends to use a P320 pistol which she fires with deadly aim.

Alignment: N/A
Nationality: Unknown.
Hometown: Unknown.
Sexuality: Undefined.

Personality: Bellamy is typically calm and collected but isn't quite like most people, acting rather off-color most times and seeming to miss typical social norms while maintaining a personality that is more mischievous than most would prefer, while also being extremely inquisitive.

Motivation: To ensure the well-being of the Young Guardians and the ṣ̷m͇̗̝͙o̜̗̣̝̖͕o͈̝ț̘̤̟͓͍h̛̲͇͖͉ ͈r͎͎͟u̧̠̮̲͈̺͖͖n͈̖͇n͏i̠̫̼͕n̺̣̣͙̝̲͕͜g̠ o̡̥̝͢f̨̤͙͕͎ ͙͢t̞̞̻̰̖̩̲̤́́h̰͕̙͎̟͚̟̬̀͞e̼̼̙̲̯̲̦̜ P̈́ͣͬͦ̂͋̾̇͊͌ͦ̓̏҉͚͙̝̹̼̬͍̭͔̦͍̩͘͟͞r̵̢͈̭͉̭̤̳̪͖̱͕̲̳̦͂̾͌̍̋̉͌̀͜o̦̣̣͉̲̮̥̭̤̘͕̮͖͕̻ͫͤ̈̀ͫͤͣ͛̊̉ͩ̌͡͠g̸͚͙̗̦̯͎̍͋̏̽̏̋̃̓̍͒̅ͯ̌ͪ͟͠ͅṟ̸̡̥̥̘̥̭͙̱̱̗͍͚̽͐̓ͫ̋̈́̒̂̑̈́͗̋̈͊ͦ̓͝a̧̟̝̪̳̻͉̤̝̳͍̖̜̣͚͉ͩ̒̊ͮ͋͒̎ͩ̕m̢̭̭͉̘̲̪̳̞̟̼͓̻̱̈́̈́͊͂͗̋͌̈́̈̐̿ͪ̇̄͢

Biography: The name Rook is a meaningful one. It references the chess piece, which itself references the medieval castle towers which can watch over a battlefield. Just like someone at the top of a high tower can see everything going on around them and issue commands on the fly, the one known as Rook is responsible for watching over the members of the Young Guardians program, and some of the other teams run by the Guardians. There's plenty of red tape surrounding just who Bellamy Lys is and what she really does, but what is known is that she can tap into the power of the Providence AI system for her own ends, using it to act as mission control and to watch every feed connected to the network when teams are in the field. That's to say that whenever something happens in the field, Bellamy can see it, and respond just as quickly as an actual leader in the field would be able to.

But the origin story of the person behind the network, that's unknown. Bellamy takes on the role of an administrator and a mission controller, but not much else is known. Some believe that Bellamy is the result of an experiment about mixing humanity with technology and seeing what the result is. Some say that Bellamy herself is more machine than human and that the Guardians are starting small with their experiment by placing her in the Young Guardians Program rather than with a full team. Others say that there's no humanity there at all and that Bellamy is simply a vessel for the Providence AI that grants her power. None of these theories have been proven correct but none of them have been disproven either. Nobody quite knows just who Bellamy Lys is. But everyone does know that Bellamy is the watchful eye looking out for all of the Young Guardians that are in action.

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[The Knockout Gun Gals]

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PARK IN-HYUN

Name: Park In-hyun
Nickname/Alias: Speed, similar with her mother's alias.
Appearance:

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Gender: Female
Age: 22
Build: 165 cm, 55 kg
Faction: Young Guardians
Power Classification: Genetic

Description of Powers: : Super Speed and Reflexes. Generally speaking, Park utilizes super speed and reflexes as her main genetic powers. She able to moves at a fast speed, and she has great reflexes which is useful when she has to avoids bullets and melee attacks, Matrix-style.

Weaknesses: Her main flaw is the fact that she is unable to traverse buildings using her speed. Obstacles are pretty much able to be bypassed, but she is unable (yet) to traverse the buildings as a means to travel, forcing her to go through the buildings. Also, despite her great reflexes, she still only able to avoids bullets from pistols and shotguns, not SMGs and assault rifles and machine guns. Still developing the powers, as a matter of fact. Her firearms training are pretty basic, held her weapons barely well. At least it’s better than no trainings, right?

Equipment: Daewoo K5, AR-57

Alignment: Neutral Good
Nationality: South Korean
Hometown: Seoul
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Personality: Strong moral point on the good side, law-abiding person. Though she has this good personality that serves her well, she is passively good. Not that she is bad at being good, it’s just like she aims for a routine life after doing the good, not actively doing good things just because she can, but passively doing good things because it is an obligation. Ambitious-driven, as well. Not there if you looked at her the first time, but you will know more once you get closer.
Motivation: To prove to her father that she can do good as hero.

Biography:

Born in Seoul, Park’s father was at first looked like a normal police officer, if slightly odd considering his erratic schedule in spite of his high-ranking. Park’s mother, on the other hand, was formerly a superheroine known as “Speedster”, worked alongside South Korean government as a state-sponsored superheroine. As a result, Park was expected to follow either her father or her mother. She also has two elder brothers, the eldest worked outside Korea, while her second brother served in the Navy.

However, things took turn for the worse when she was 10. Her parents divorced in a messy situation, and a shocking event was revealed. As it turned out, her mother is still actively working with the South Korean government, while her father is part of DRMA, acting as the high-ranked agent in South Korea, despite not being part of NATO. It seemed that DRMA kept temporary bases in the allies of USA. Her father found out, and thought things didn’t escalate, it was a turn for the worst for the family. He took her in the custody and left for United States, where he lived with her, whereas her brothers sided with her mother. It was at this point that her genetic powers thrived. Her father pondered whether she would be part of DRMA, if given the right education, but put it off until she was older. At least he gave her firearms training when she was 17 years old, though not regularly. Seems like her father is wary that she would be like her mother, aspiring to be superheroine. It seemed that there is a different of policy between DRMA in NATO countries and in USA’s allies that is not part of NATO.

Her father’s worst fear came to the light, as she did heroic works in USA, though as vigilantes. Her father able to kept her out of the attentions from DRMA due to their hate against illegal vigilantes. Conflicts came with both of them, shouting and arguments. She is only interested in doing normal life, but she is more or less is willing to do good things and heroic works if there are injustices around her, while her father insisted that DRMA is the best thing for the humanity, and superheroes are doing stupid things. Eventually she escaped from her father, and with the help of her brothers and mother, took a temporary refuge in Liberia. There, her mother offered her a chance to prove to her father that superheroes are not stupid, with a program of Young Guardians.

She accepted the offer.


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App is done, pending review.

[The Verdantderm Lands]

So, does the VR apparatus channel the neural pathways away from the use of powers in the 'real world' or with the 'real world' be trashed? Inquiring minds want to know, in the IC.

It's basically an extremely advanced video game, nobody is actually doing anything in the real world. It'll be explained IC next time I post.

Cool.

[Forest State]

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Couple of things to note.

First, the power is fine but you'll have to note the speed for the super speed, because higher than 60 mph isn't allowed.

Second, the DRMA doesn't maintain bases in South Korea, it's a NATO organization and it doesn't really reach into other countries since it would be viewed as an overreach.

[Gudmund]

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"...she has great reflexes which is useful when she has to avoids bullets and melee attacks, Matrix-style."

"...despite her great reflexes, she still only able to avoids bullets from pistols and shotguns, not SMGs and assault rifles and machine guns."

Dodging bullets Matrix style would be impossible with the speed limitations on abilites. Keep in mind that most bullets travel much faster than 250m/s (900kmh or 560mph). Whereas a 5.56 round from an M16 exceeds 1000m/s (3600kmh or 2200mph). So, even at the speed limit of 60mph (96kmh or 26m/s) for speedster types, it technically isn't possible to dodge any bullets at all unless you can predict exactly where the enemy will fire. With a speed limit of 60mph, you could at best dodge a single bullet from 200 metres away, with 0.7 seconds to move, if you had spotted them before they fired.

Dishing out a super quick 10-25 hit combo in close-combat, performing above world class acrobatics, and sprinting twice as fast as Usain Bolt (the fastest man alive). Is honestly the best the 60mph limit allows.

[Forest State]

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"...she has great reflexes which is useful when she has to avoids bullets and melee attacks, Matrix-style."

"...despite her great reflexes, she still only able to avoids bullets from pistols and shotguns, not SMGs and assault rifles and machine guns."

Dodging bullets Matrix style would be impossible with the speed limitations on abilites. Keep in mind that most bullets travel much faster than 250m/s (900kmh or 560mph). Whereas a 5.56 round from an M16 exceeds 1000m/s (3600kmh or 2200mph). So, even at the speed limit of 60mph (96kmh or 26m/s) for speedster types, it technically isn't possible to dodge any bullets at all unless you can predict exactly where the enemy will fire. With a speed limit of 60mph, you could at best dodge a single bullet from 200 metres away, with 0.7 seconds to move, if you had spotted them before they fired.

Dishing out a super quick 10-25 hit combo in close-combat, performing above world class acrobatics, and sprinting twice as fast as Usain Bolt (the fastest man alive). Is honestly the best the 60mph limit allows.

Reflexes aren't exactly counted against the speed limit, it's for straight line speed not speed during reactions.

[Endem]

MATEJ KOVAC

Name: Matej Kovac
Nickname/Alias: Serpeant Speaker
Appearance: Blue eyes, slim, blonde hair, eastern Slavic type face, wears black trousers and gray hoodie
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Build: 1.70 meters, 56 kg
Faction: Young Guardians
Power Classification: Genetic/External

Description of Powers:

--Reptile Control--
Matej can gain full control of a reptile maximally 15 meters from him and partial control of a reptile maximally 100 meters away from him through telepathic connection and brain override, full control means Matej controls every move of the reptile in question, partial means that Matej controls just defense/attack reactions and basic motor function while the reptile is more susceptible to breaking the telepathic link, when Matej uses his powers he can't control himself

--Venom Immunity--
Matej injected himself with small doses of various reptile venom's because of this Matej's body is immune to most of the venom's but it is not special in any way as everybody can achieve it just no one tries to

Weaknesses:
When he uses his power he can not control his own body and becomes still in the last position he took unable to defend or even speak rendering him easy to take out while in this state and his STILL potent to normal attacks except investment with any reptile venom

Equipment: He often carries around his neck his pet viper snake "Raphael" and his pet gecko lizard "Typho" often sits on his back while traveling or going on long trips for purely the reason that he might need their brain to control

Alignment: Chaotic Good/Neutral/Evil
Nationality:Slovak
Hometown: Koszyce
Sexuality: Bisexual

Personality: he can't feel real emotions because of his diagnosed Psychopathy
Motivation: He just guessed it would be better than just rotting in jail for crimes he would commit

Biography:
Born in Koszyce, Slovakia he was diagnosed with Psychopathy at an early age and his parents sent him to many social training programs which lead to him learning how to project a phantom of real emotions but he did not like the programs and even though of his early age he was thinking of killing his parents but did not after coming to the conclusion that he would have none to feed and provide for him, at age of 14 he discovered his powers when a viper attacked him when he was on trip in Poland, he said telepathically to the snake to stop and the snake stop AND then the snake became the pet snake he carries now, after this incident he became obsessed with reptile's which lead to him injecting the venom's into himself in secret, this was also the time he got Typho, he committed some petty crimes and not once he got caught, he had his first taste of something of what can be called heroism at age of 18 when a robber tried to break into their house... let's just say the robber did not like snakes

After the reveal of his powers to his parents, they were obviously disturbed a little but managed to contact Young Guardians, when Young Guardians recruiter had a talk with Matej he was seemingly uninterested but through deception and manipulation he got a pretty nice deal out of the whole thing, (at first his pet reptile wasn't allowed for instance and because of the psychopathy he was meant to be separated from others but he managed to change the recruiters mind) but there was still one problem Section C was already up and running for three days but still Matej managed to talk his way into Section C and arrived 5 days ago and did not show up really for most of the time ( don't tell anybody but he was injecting himself with venom), and to put it quite bluntly he was just waiting for a mission because of the opportunity to release Raphael on someone, or something.

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[The Knockout Gun Gals]

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Couple of things to note.

First, the power is fine but you'll have to note the speed for the super speed, because higher than 60 mph isn't allowed.

Second, the DRMA doesn't maintain bases in South Korea, it's a NATO organization and it doesn't really reach into other countries since it would be viewed as an overreach.

Okay, I edited her origins. She is Korean-American, from Honolulu.

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[Forest State]

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The top speed for the super speed needs to be clarified.

[Theyra]

I talked to Forest about this

Sirvan Yazdani

Name: Sirvan Yazdani
Nickname/Alias: Suren
Appearance:

Gender: Male
Age: 44
Build: Average, 6'2, 175lbs
Faction: NightOwls

Power Classification: N/A
Description of Powers: N/A

Equipment: N/A

Personality: Sirvan can be described as a solitary person even before he formed the NightOwls. He does not talk much about his past or some personal details about myself. A quiet and reserved individual, Though it does not stop him from being able to socialize with others. To his friends, he is trusting and loyal to the end. He cares about his contacts and agents and at times his desire to keep them safe conflcits with getting the mission done.

Biography: Sirvan was born to two Iranian immigrants in Amman, Jordan. His early life was uneventful barring on incident that would change his life. An incident involving a now-defunct company caused an explosion that destroyed a rival company office building, where his parents worked. Both of his parents were killed in the explosion and left Sirvan an orphan at twelve. Life at the orphanage was hard for him with bullies picking on him. During one thing when bullies started a fight with one of Sirvan's friends was getting beat up badly, his powers awaken and he used his super speed to defeat the bullies. Once the people running the orphanage discovered this, they sent out a request for a hero to help train him. One hero arrived, a middle man that was also speedster and adopted Sirvan and trained him on how to use his powers.

Years later at eighteen, under his adopted father training, Sirvan was a good hero and joined the Guardians. For years he fought various villains and eventually part of the team that shut down the company that killed his parents. Things were looking up for him, then on that fateful mission. It was supposed to be a routine recon mission turned into a fight for his team's lives. They were ambushed and while he and his team got out alive, Sirvan was badly wounded and was paralyzed from the waist down. He knew then that he was done being a hero and retired. However, he still wished to help out his fellow heroes in some way.

After talking with an old friend, he got the idea to form his own intelligence network using what contacts he made as a hero in order to help out heroes. Sirvan contacted some old contacts of his and after convincing them of his plan, they agreed to his idea and the NightOwls were born. Since forming the group, he would help to bring down several plots with the NightOwls and would later become one of the trusted sources of intel for the Guardians

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NightOwls

Name: NightOwls
Approximate Member Count: 10,000
Areas of Operation: The world but, that is an increased presence in Europe and the Middle East

Goals: To gather intelligence on medium to high-level threats to the world and report them to heroes.
Leadership: Sirvan Yazdani
Zinon Halkias
Isnin bin Malim
Zacarías Espiga
Ariane Ravololoniaina
Makei Hamutana
Sinchi Canchon Condori

Biography: The Nightowls were formed 2009 by former hero Sirvan Yazdani after his injuries left him unable to continue field work. Still wanting to help out heroes, he decided on forming an independent spy network with the contacts he made as a hero. Recruiting both meta and non-meta humans in their ranks. The Nightowls are privately funded and the public has little knowledge of them. The leaders of the NightOwls are the seven founding members with Sirvan in charge of the group. Each founding member is in charge of a different area of operations in the world. Since being in operation, the Nightowls had become one of the intelligence sources for the Guardians and other Hero organizations.

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[Endem]

TADEUSZ RYBINSKI

Name: Tadeusz Rybinski
Nickname/Alias: Zwierz
Appearance:

Gender: Male
Age: 20
Build: 1.70 meters, 56 kg
Faction: Young Guardians
Power Classification: Genetic

Description of Powers:

--Body Transfiguration--
Tadeusz has the ability to transform to any living being that has more than 10 cells in its body and he knows about it ( and that includes extinct animals ), the transformation of the body is full and Tadeusz cannot speak in any form but the brain is not changed although the senses can hyphen or dampen themselves, the bigger the form the less time he can spend in a form so 40 minutes as megafauna, 2 hours as medium sizes animals, 24 hours as small animals

Weaknesses:
The transformation is a painful one leaving him stunned for about two minutes which is more than enough that if he transforms himself in the wrong place he will be taken out, strong emotions can cause an unintended transformation also he is still a goddamn human so a bullet will kill him
Equipment: No actually none

Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Nationality: Polish
Hometown: Warsaw
Sexuality: Bisexual

Personality: Sanguine
Motivation: Taking revenge on the person that murdered his little brother

Biography:
Tadeusz was born in Warsaw, and for most of his life, he thought he was totally normal attending public high school having friends and all that stuff to put it simply he was another brick in the wall not standing out of the crowd that pleasure was going to his smaller brother. Until the day of his 16th birthday when on his way home from his high school he was attacked by a dog. For reason still unknown to him his metagene activated he began to grown, his nails became claws, he was all covered in thick brown fur he transformed into a Grizzly bear. With one swing of a claw, the dog was no more.

Tadeusz began to freak out he wanted to go back to be a human and the moment he thought about wanting to be human again his body transformed yet again into himself. Over the course of the year, he discovered the full potential of his capabilities i.e for how long he could be what animals, what animals he can be, the discovery he could transform into plants and with that knowledge he did not want to become a hero but on the feral night of 21st of June when he and his little brother were walking down the street he got distracted and his brother went missing. His body was found the next day, mutilated, Tadeusz was the one to find it he did not know who or why did it but the sheer emotions caused him to transform into a Tyrannosaurs he transformed back to his normal self fast, media picked up on it very fast and everybody suddenly knew there was a meta in the town as everybody that was there and seen films saw as the meta transformed back and forth. Tadeusz swore he will find the man that did it.

This was the moment that Guardians came in. They contacted him and gave him the chance to become a proper hero. After he passed the necessary evaluation tests, he was enrolled into Young Guardians. He was flown to Angel Village exactly when everybody else was flown away, or been in the simulation.

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[Durmatagno]

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I don't even know where to begin. The motivation is alone not enough, the backstory makes very little sense (why would the Guardians take him, how did his parents contact them, why would they listen to them about them, and so on). It's, frankly, a mess. The run on sentences, and the lack of logic behind some of the phrases is just.....we can't accept this. We have told you several times that 'just cause' isn't enough reason on it's own, and you must give the Guardians a reason to want your character. Be it high potential (which doesn't include raw power, it includes ability to use that power in creative ways, team work, and a dozen other small factors needed to be a hero), already useful skills and reputation, or at the very least enough basic competency they'd risk him in life and death situations.

[Endem]

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I don't even know where to begin. The motivation is alone not enough, the backstory makes very little sense (why would the Guardians take him, how did his parents contact them, why would they listen to them about them, and so on). It's, frankly, a mess. The run on sentences, and the lack of logic behind some of the phrases is just.....we can't accept this. We have told you several times that 'just cause' isn't enough reason on it's own, and you must give the Guardians a reason to want your character. Be it high potential (which doesn't include raw power, it includes ability to use that power in creative ways, team work, and a dozen other small factors needed to be a hero), already useful skills and reputation, or at the very least enough basic competency they'd risk him in life and death situations.

Sorry I will fix what I can, it was written late at night and my brain wasn't working properly ( what is funny it's even later for me now )

[Forest State]

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Accepted.

[Lessoni]

Brock James

Name: Brock James
Nickname/Alias: Micro
Appearance: Tall, white male with brown hair and blue eyes.
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Build: 6’2, 175 lbs
Faction: Young Guardians
Power Classification: Genetic

Description of Powers: Micro sight: Brock can see the micromovements in a creature’s muscles, which coupled with his detailed knowledge of human and animal anatomy allows him to predict movements roughly a second before they happen
Enhanced reflexes: Brock’s reflexes are good enough to allow him to dodge a bullet, provided he knows it’s coming, and allow his micro sight to work properly

Weaknesses: Brock can be hit with surprise attacks, and is severely crippled when blinded.

Equipment: Kevlar/ceramic full body armor
Dual M1911A’s
Combat knife
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Nationality: American
Hometown: Chicago
Sexuality: Hetero

Personality: Brock is a cold, calculating man who’s often described as cold and aloof. In reality, he just has incredible control over his emotions and never lets anything slip he doesn’t mean to.
Motivation: Brock’s motives are mostly altruistic, though he does desire to rise above his father in fame.

Biography: Brock was born to a wealthy family, wealthy enough that he never wanted for anything. He grew up isolated from other kids due to his undying sense of superiority. He’d even sometimes stroll through poorer neighborhoods and amuse himself at the sight of beggars and poor. That changed when he stumbled across a brawl between 2 metas. Jack Dredd and a fire manipulator. Jack was obviously being overwhelmed when Brock stepped in. To this day he doesn’t quite know why he did.

He was nearly cooked until he started seeing patterns in the movement of his opponent. Then he realized he wasn’t seeing patterns, he was seeing his opponent's muscles tiny twitches, the tensing and shaking that signaled movement. And Brock pushed his new ability to the limit. He kept the fire meta distracted and infuriated until Jack got back up and soundly knocked him in the back of the head. A quick introduction and an outstretched hand later, and Brock made his first real friend. They began testing the limits of their powers together, fighting crime where ever they found it, but it wasn’t to last. After a month, Brock’s father found out. And he was enraged. He wanted his son mixing with the highest of heroes, not some common street vigilante. Brock’s father forbade them interact, but Brock found a loophole. Everywhere Jack went, Brock followed, unseen. For years they went on like this, Brock pulling Jack out of the fire more times then he ever knew, while Brock studied every anatomy book he could get his hands on, memorizing human anatomy and moving on to animals, just for fun. And after 2 years as Jack’s shadow, Brock moved into the vigilante scene, donning a trench coat and fedora reminiscent of a hard boiled detective. For 2 years, he fought crime and saved lives. Then, the same criminal who snitched on Jack snitched on him, and he was given the same offer as Jack by the Guardians. With no choice but to accept, he went with the Guardians against his father’s wishes. And now, he’s ready to be a hero in the big leagues.
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[Durmatagno]

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Okay, overall much better, but the fight is still a glaring problem. While the power might need to be tinkered with for more balance, overall everything is looking better. If you just get rid of the fight, or have him already having joined the Young Guardians when it breaks out, that'll probably be good.

[Endem]

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Okay, overall much better, but the fight is still a glaring problem. While the power might need to be tinkered with for more balance, overall everything is looking better. If you just get rid of the fight, or have him already having joined the Young Guardians when it breaks out, that'll probably be good.

Will absolutely do ( but bear in mind he did not participate in it ) and what tinkering is needed for the power?

[The Knockout Gun Gals]

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The top speed for the super speed needs to be clarified.

It's 65 mph, Forest.

[Forest State]

The top speed for the super speed needs to be clarified.

It's 65 mph, Forest.

The top allowable speed in the rules is 60 mph.

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Most of it looks fine but my main question here is why the Guardians want someone that's commonly mistaken for a psychopath, generally psychopaths that are heroes are the ones that are good at hiding it.

[Lessoni]

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Most of it looks fine but my main question here is why the Guardians want someone that's commonly mistaken for a psychopath, generally psychopaths that are heroes are the ones that are good at hiding it.

I was going for an emotionally distant character, but it really isn't that important. I'll just rephrase it real quick.

[Forest State]

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Accepted.

[Fedel]

Tag.

[Theyra]

So I got an idea for a side arc, would anyone be interested in doing a side arc dealing with a misguided scientist trying to make the parasites a force for good but, is making him into abominations?