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Postby Endem » Wed Feb 06, 2019 5:37 am

Forest State wrote:
Endem wrote:Nooo, no why would I, I'll think of something
But now I need to ask you something, do Bengal Conglomerate is a big threat to Guardians, and do they send spies to them?

They're not really a threat but they also aren't pushovers either. They have a middle of the road status, they wouldn't be able to take down the Guardians anytime soon but the Guardians haven't been able to take them down either.

Spying on the Guardians is extremely hard and the Bengal Conglomerate wouldn't do so in the first place, as their primary goal is to make profits and not to fight the Guardians. They only fight with them or interact with them at all when they have no options around it.

Hmmmmmmm..... So maybe I'll do a little overhaul and change Bengal to either Hawks or New Order ( but I do not have an idea of how my character would get to New Order ranks )
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Postby Forest State » Wed Feb 06, 2019 5:40 am

Endem wrote:
Forest State wrote:They're not really a threat but they also aren't pushovers either. They have a middle of the road status, they wouldn't be able to take down the Guardians anytime soon but the Guardians haven't been able to take them down either.

Spying on the Guardians is extremely hard and the Bengal Conglomerate wouldn't do so in the first place, as their primary goal is to make profits and not to fight the Guardians. They only fight with them or interact with them at all when they have no options around it.

Hmmmmmmm..... So maybe I'll do a little overhaul and change Bengal to either Hawks or New Order ( but I do not have an idea of how my character would get to New Order ranks )

You know that Hawk involves becoming a brainwashed slave, right? With very little independence or agency?

With both factions you would also run into the problem of having nothing to do because right now we're at the very beginning of the RP and the storyline hasn't branched to involve other groups yet.
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Postby Endem » Wed Feb 06, 2019 5:42 am

Wait a moment ( I can wait ) I just saw that Bengal Consortium has a little base in New York ( I'm not making it up it really is in the first post )
Edit: and I've found even the exact part

...While the Consortium’s home territory is India, they have settled into the poorer neighborhoods of large cities such as New York, Chicago, Shanghai, Sao Paulo, Rio de Janeiro, and Paris...
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Postby Forest State » Wed Feb 06, 2019 5:46 am

Endem wrote:Wait a moment ( I can wait ) I just saw that Bengal Consortium has a little base in New York ( I'm not making it up it really is in the first post )

There's no plans for the Bengal Consortium to be involved in the first arc or for the storyline to branch in their direction at all until later on. They aren't relevant right now.

They do operate in New York and other locales but as far as interacting with the Guardians or other major factions, they aren't doing anything right now. They're the least goal driven and most profit driven of the factions. They don't have some kind of profound agenda that's going to lead to action right now, the main things they're doing in New York are selling and smuggling contraband and running rackets and the like.

Other factions are more threatening and the heroes aren't focusing on the Bengal Consortium, which the NYPD is mostly handling by itself, and the Consortium isn't looking to pick a fight with the heroes, who are stronger.
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Postby Lunas Legion » Wed Feb 06, 2019 5:48 am

Endem wrote:Wait a moment ( I can wait ) I just saw that Bengal Consortium has a little base in New York ( I'm not making it up it really is in the first post )


Emphasis on 'little'. You'd spend most of your time running around doing very low-level stuff since anything more spectacular would bring the full power of the Guardians crashing down on you.

The rule when operating in the home city as a big superhero team is either a) you leave or die, b) you're small enough to go under the radar or c) you have enough raw power to be a deterrent. Given the size, the last isn't the case, which means you wouldn't be able to really do anything despite being in the same locale.
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Postby Endem » Wed Feb 06, 2019 6:12 am

Forest State wrote:
Endem wrote:Wait a moment ( I can wait ) I just saw that Bengal Consortium has a little base in New York ( I'm not making it up it really is in the first post )

There's no plans for the Bengal Consortium to be involved in the first arc or for the storyline to branch in their direction at all until later on. They aren't relevant right now.

They do operate in New York and other locales but as far as interacting with the Guardians or other major factions, they aren't doing anything right now. They're the least goal driven and most profit driven of the factions. They don't have some kind of profound agenda that's going to lead to action right now, the main things they're doing in New York are selling and smuggling contraband and running rackets and the like.

Other factions are more threatening and the heroes aren't focusing on the Bengal Consortium, which the NYPD is mostly handling by itself, and the Consortium isn't looking to pick a fight with the heroes, who are stronger.

Then, my character needs another little overhaul, so I ask is it possible to buy your way into New Order?
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Postby Forest State » Wed Feb 06, 2019 6:24 am

Endem wrote:
Forest State wrote:There's no plans for the Bengal Consortium to be involved in the first arc or for the storyline to branch in their direction at all until later on. They aren't relevant right now.

They do operate in New York and other locales but as far as interacting with the Guardians or other major factions, they aren't doing anything right now. They're the least goal driven and most profit driven of the factions. They don't have some kind of profound agenda that's going to lead to action right now, the main things they're doing in New York are selling and smuggling contraband and running rackets and the like.

Other factions are more threatening and the heroes aren't focusing on the Bengal Consortium, which the NYPD is mostly handling by itself, and the Consortium isn't looking to pick a fight with the heroes, who are stronger.

Then, my character needs another little overhaul, so I ask is it possible to buy your way into New Order?

They already have a wealthy sponsor and are generally very selective about the kind of person they would recruit in the first place, your character's track record would eliminate him immediately from the running.
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Postby Endem » Wed Feb 06, 2019 6:26 am

Forest State wrote:
Endem wrote:Then, my character needs another little overhaul, so I ask is it possible to buy your way into New Order?

They already have a wealthy sponsor and are generally very selective about the kind of person they would recruit in the first place, your character's track record would eliminate him immediately from the running.

Oh well, is there any thing that would be okay for him, not considering a complete overhaul
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Postby Forest State » Wed Feb 06, 2019 6:30 am

Endem wrote:
Forest State wrote:They already have a wealthy sponsor and are generally very selective about the kind of person they would recruit in the first place, your character's track record would eliminate him immediately from the running.

Oh well, is there any thing that would be okay for him, not considering a complete overhaul

Probably not on the villain side right now considering we've just started the thread and like I said, openings haven't showed up yet.

If you see things that are outside of the main story, it's because they were planned between players ahead of time, which I don't think you've done.
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Postby Endem » Wed Feb 06, 2019 6:32 am

Forest State wrote:
Endem wrote:Oh well, is there any thing that would be okay for him, not considering a complete overhaul

Probably not on the villain side right now considering we've just started the thread and like I said, openings haven't showed up yet.

If you see things that are outside of the main story, it's because they were planned between players ahead of time, which I don't think you've done.

I guess I'll need to wait
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Postby Forest State » Wed Feb 06, 2019 6:36 am

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SHAHIN ATTAR


Name: Shahin Attar
Nickname/Alias: Dogcatcher
Appearance:
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Gender: Male
Age: 25
Build: 6'3. 235 lbs
Faction: Hawk Institute

Power Classification: Artificial / External
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Equipment: Shahin uses a prototype version of the Hawk produced Hercules power armor, which is designed with strength in mind and is capable of lifting about 65 short tonnes at its max extent. The depleted uranium armor offers great protection against most weapons and attacks and is generally very hard to penetrate without heavy weaponry or powers that are capable of dealing heavy damage and penetrating. The back of the armor is equipped with a pair of large jump jets which are capable of generating enough lift to allow the armor to stay in the air for short periods of time. The right arm of the armor is also equipped with a built in 10mm autocannon.

Personality: Pysch evaluations reveal Shahin to be stable and a loyal member of the Hawk Institute family.

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AQUA SCHONE


Name: Aqua Schone
Nickname/Alias: N/A
Appearance:
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Gender: Female
Age: 20
Build: 6'0, 192 lbs
Faction: N/A

Power Classification: Artificial / Magic
Description of Powers: Aqua has greatly enhanced strength, far beyond that of a regular person. This also comes with a boost to acceleration and agility, and is the result of the dark spirit that was fused with her body. Aqua can use dark energy attacks but these are weaker than the physical side of her abilities and she doesn't train this side of her abilities, making them far less effective in combat.

Equipment: N/A much of the time. But Aqua tends to use heavier weapons such as sledgehammers and war axes if she does use them.

Personality: Aqua is slightly insane. But not completely. Deep down, she's chaotic good, but you might not know that from talking to her for the first time.

Biography: Aqua Schone was kidnapped as a child and inducted into the Hawk Institute and was never the same since, after being brought into their experimental wing. In an attempt to find an alternate method of inducing powers, and increasing her capabilities, Aqua had her body merged with that of a dark spirit. It did induce magical ability in her, while greatly enhancing her physical traits, but the experiment had something of a mind breaking effect on her and caused her to experience what could be described as insanity. Even after recovering... Aqua was never truly normal. Still, she "recovered" enough to be used in the field. After her teammate Kodiak Marsden escaped, Aqua saw Kodiak's face listed as one of the recruits joining the Young Guardians Program. This led to Aqua, who had been under Kodiak's command much of the time as an agent, to escape assignment in South Africa and fly to Brazil before traveling illegally through Central America and breaking into Florida by boat, where she would hitchhike to Angel's Village. Unfortunately for her, it turned out Kodiak wasn't there yet and Aqua was detained, and unable to leave the enclave without being arrested by United States authorities.

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Postby Gudmund » Wed Feb 06, 2019 6:47 am

I've modified it so the abilities are essentially the same, but it's more lore friendly and he's nice. I've tried to make it very detailed.

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CHARLIE BURKHALL


Name: Charlie Burkhall
Nickname/Alias: Shifty
Appearance: Varies (default: blue eyes, brown shaggy hair, pale)
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Gender: Male
Age: 20
Build: Varies (default: lean, fit, 177cm, 66kg)
Faction: Young Guardians
Power Classification: Genetic

Description of Powers:

Shapeshifting -
  • Identical copies or custom forms.
  • Increased pain tolerance due to nerve control.
  • Height limited between 120cm to 215cm.
  • Cannot shapeshift to look like wearing clothes, actual clothes must be used.
  • Limited to humanoid forms, cannot change species, but can have functional non-human traits (e.g. cat ears, scaly skin, dog nose, wolf teeth, claws).
  • Forms can be above peak human physique, not attainable by normal means (e.g. thicker bones, better muscles, non-human traits).
  • Shifting into a smaller form whilst missing body parts can/will regain the missing part at expense of becoming smaller.
  • As long as Charlie has sufficient mass, healing practically any injury is possible (being cut in half, poison, blunt trauma, bites).
  • 121cm tall male/female child, very agile/flexible, easy to hide, ridiculously high stamina.
  • 215cm (7 foot) impossibly buff tall man above peak human physique, upper limit deadlifts 2-5 tonnes (sometimes with tough scaly skin, canine teeth, and retractable claws).
  • 170cm tall male/female gymnast, extreme acrobatic skills, very fast.


Enhanced Metabolism -
  • Quick digestive system (160% above avg. human)
  • Growing/larger forms requires more mass, gained by eating.
  • Shrinking sheds off mass via steamy mistifier affect (iron aftertaste).
  • Mass stockpile can store more, without visible affect, by making self denser.

Enhanced regeneration -
  • 5-15 seconds for sealing small wounds (7.62 bullet hole, knife stabs, blunt trauma)
  • High food intake can provide enough mass to regrow limbs and internals over 24 hours.

Weaknesses:
  • A birthmark on his stomach remains visible on most forms (could be covered with hair or scales).
  • Strong electrical attacks cause uncontrollable shifting and spasms (e.g. taser, loose wire).
  • Still needs to breathe.
  • Burnt or frozen flesh cannot shift and must be removed or healed.
  • Too many non-human bodyparts may cause sensory overload, stunning or knocking out Charlie.
  • Removing enough mass (i.e. dismembering him) will reduce Charlie's size, lowering his strength, speed, weight etc. Making him easier to defeat/capture.
  • By controlling his food intake you can limit/keep him in weaker, smaller, more manageable forms.

Equipment: A backpack containing various clothing of all sizes, 5x fake IDs, 1x hatchet/hammer, 1x CZ P09 Pistol (silenced), 3x disposable phones, 3x C4, 3x smoke bombs.

Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Nationality: Australia
Hometown: Sydney
Sexuality: Bisexual

Personality: Charlie is a bit of a prankster, constantly fooling people with his powers and acting skill. Although his personality varies depending on his chosen form, he usually keeps some similarities. Charlie treats his friends with respect, despite teasing them, and will help those in trouble if he can. While reluctant to kill innocent people, he will not hesitate to maim or kill those who are intent on harming him. Charlie has a fondness for sweet foods, reading fantasy books, and is secretly a closet weeb that imitates anime characters (a secret he would take to the grave).

Motivation: Charlie wishes to become a master of espionage, blending in, and infiltration. Improving his shapeshifting skill and graduating is Charlie's current long term goal, one that he is fully intent on achieving. Helping people along the way just so happens to be another plus.

Biography: Charlie was an orphan for most his life, bouncing between a dozen or so foster homes due to his odd behaviour. He ate far more than any child, healed wounds in mere moments; nobody wanted to take care of the super kid. At the age of 15, Charlie awakened to his shapeshifting abilities. Of course, having the ability to look like anyone (fictional or otherwise), did not help his journey through puberty at all. His life was a mess, every waking moment was another identity crisis, another new face, and he often questioned whether he even had a true form at all. By 19 Charlie had pushed his frustration onto fighting small crime, taking on the form of an absurdly buff man and beating up crooks left and right. He'd even considered streaming NSFW content abusing his ability when low on cash. Eventually, the Young Guardians program discovered him. They reigned in his out of control shifting, kindly requesting that he come with them. Looking back on his life, Charlie immediately chose to follow them. He is now comfortable in his own skin, accepting his ability as just another part of himself.

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Setting: FT (2060+), the ruling nation of a non-human, low population, galactic Empire spanning just beyond its solar system. Primarily using advanced, mass-produced droids to handle most menial tasks and to fill the ranks of its military alongside living soldiers.

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Postby Forest State » Wed Feb 06, 2019 7:10 am

Gudmund wrote:snip

Accepted.
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Postby Gudmund » Wed Feb 06, 2019 7:41 am

Forest State wrote:Shahin Attar

If he can lift 65 tonnes then he can flip over an M1A1 Abrams tank (61.3 tonnes). Pretty much everyone else lifts below 5 tonnes. Does this mean he's important to the plot or something?
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An 8.625 civilization - according to this index
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Leader: Albani Gudmund
Setting: FT (2060+), the ruling nation of a non-human, low population, galactic Empire spanning just beyond its solar system. Primarily using advanced, mass-produced droids to handle most menial tasks and to fill the ranks of its military alongside living soldiers.

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Postby Lunas Legion » Wed Feb 06, 2019 7:49 am

Gudmund wrote:
Forest State wrote:Shahin Attar

If he can lift 65 tonnes then he can flip over an M1A1 Abrams tank (61.3 tonnes). Pretty much everyone else lifts below 5 tonnes. Does this mean he's important to the plot or something?


If in doubt assume yes.
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Postby Forest State » Wed Feb 06, 2019 7:51 am

Gudmund wrote:
Forest State wrote:Shahin Attar

If he can lift 65 tonnes then he can flip over an M1A1 Abrams tank (61.3 tonnes). Pretty much everyone else lifts below 5 tonnes. Does this mean he's important to the plot or something?

His armor's made of the same thing as that Abrams too.

So yeah, you could say that.
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Postby Endem » Wed Feb 06, 2019 10:26 am

Just for funsies, I made a second version of my character, this time a good guy, the first spoiler is my first app second modified, which one you like more ( You probably doesn't care about it and I totally accept it )
Changes have been made only to bio and motivation
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ELEK MOHAVE


Name: Elek Mohave
Nickname/Alias: Blade-Maker
Appearance: ( thank God I can just write it ) Elek is a tall man with brownish hear and a face you could say is of Middle Eastern descent, he usually wears a whit T-shirt and Jeans.
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Build: 1.80 meter tall, 61 kg
Faction: Bengal Conglomerate
Power Classification: Genetic
Description of Powers:

Blade FormingWhenever Elek thinks he needs something to fight with causing his fingers to eject liquid metal that instantly forms into some kind of blade ranging from knives to broadswords and everything in between ( or just any blade ) the metal ejected needs to be previously absorbed

Metal Absorbtion His fingers heat up the metal to melting point and then absorbs the liquid metal with the fingers( he obviously has the easiest time with mercury but it's hard to make weapons out of it), the metal can only be stored in his arms making it not the biggest storage space but good enough to make things with it, the metal is used to make himself weapons

Weaknesses: When he does not have a blade he is pretty much defenseless and in order for him to not be able to make blades is to just remove any metal he can absorb
Equipment: Any blade that was ever crafted in the palm of his hand ( figuratively and literally )
Alignment: Chaotic neutral
Nationality: American/Egyptian
Hometown: Detroit  
Sexuality: Asexual
Personality: Basically a Trickster he likes to have a little fun with other people, but ( ah the trope ) he is a frequent flaker he will not have himself killed just because things get too hot
Motivation: Trying not to get killed by well pretty much every criminal you can imagine ( looking over it now I ripped of John Wick )
Biography: (My old enemy we meet again, I'm much better at IC's)

Elek was born in Detroit suburbs to a family living in poverty and despising superhumans, unfortunately for Elek, his powers showed themselves early in the age of 13 when he had an argument with her mother and a knife appeared in his hand, his mother saw that her son had superpowers and abandoned him in one of the crumbling, abandoned buildings, a group of beggars took pity on him and allowed him to their group, by doing so probably saving his life, he begged along with them until the age of 16 when he left them and started using his powers for committing crimes, he was caught numerous times but never served a full sentence because he just absorbs metal bars and makes himself a weapon to force his way out.

After two years of committing a relatively small crime, he decided it's time to go big and enrolled in a crime organization, except when it came the time to kill people his flaker nature took control and he never showed up again to HQ which seriously pissed of his bosses and send people to kill him, Elek seeing what happened got into another organization to avoid being killed but oh well oh well the story repeated itself and he found himself on the run again, repeat a couple times and you get yourself the most hunted man in the USA with a jail sentence due to serving, and that was the time Bengal Conglomerate approached him offering to give him protection from his numerous enemies if, IF he swore too not leave the Conglomerate, he swore.               
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ELEK MOHAVE


Name: Elek Mohave
Nickname/Alias: Blade-Maker
Appearance: ( thank God I can just write it ) Elek is a tall man with brownish hear and a face you could say is of Middle Eastern descent, he usually wears a whit T-shirt and Jeans.
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Build: 1.80 meter tall, 61 kg
Faction: Bengal Conglomerate
Power Classification: Genetic
Description of Powers:

Blade FormingWhenever Elek thinks he needs something to fight with causing his fingers to eject liquid metal that instantly forms into some kind of blade ranging from knives to broadswords and everything in between ( or just any blade ) the metal ejected needs to be previously absorbed

Metal Absorbtion His fingers heat up the metal to melting point and then absorbs the liquid metal with the fingers( he obviously has the easiest time with mercury but it's hard to make weapons out of it), the metal can only be stored in his arms making it not the biggest storage space but good enough to make things with it, the metal is used to make himself weapons

Weaknesses: When he does not have a blade he is pretty much defenseless and in order for him to not be able to make blades is to just remove any metal he can absorb
Equipment: Any blade that was ever crafted in the palm of his hand ( figuratively and literally )
Alignment: Chaotic neutral
Nationality: American/Egyptian
Hometown: Detroit  
Sexuality: Asexual
Personality: Basically a Trickster he likes to have a little fun with other people, but ( ah the trope ) he is a frequent flaker he will not have himself killed just because things get too hot
Motivation: To redeem himself ( at least for him )
Biography: (My old enemy we meet again, I'm much better at IC's)

Elek was born in Detroit suburbs to a family living in poverty and despising superhumans, unfortunately for Elek, his powers showed themselves early in the age of 13 when he had an argument with her mother and a knife appeared in his hand, his mother saw that her son had superpowers and abandoned him in one of the crumbling, abandoned buildings, a group of beggars took pity on him and allowed him to their group, by doing so probably saving his life, he begged along with them until the age of 16 when he left them, he planned to start committing crime but refrained from it

After about a year of self-thought and questioning his morals Elek decided too start helping people but maybe because of his power or of police overreaction he got to jail, that was the time Guardians contacted him and asked if he would like to join Young Guardians program, he eagerly accepted the offer believing it would help him to help others and in doing so redeem himself of what he wanted to do.              
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CORENTINA-ELOUANA KOADUUIUEG


Name: Corentina-Elouana Koaduuiueg
Nickname/Alias: Elouana/Douariezh
Appearance:
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Gender: F
Age: 20
Build: 5’10”/178cm and 139lbs/63kg
Faction: Young Guardians
Power Classification: Genetic

Description of Powers:
One with Nature: If Mother Nature had a daughter, Elouana would be it. The great forces of nature are at her disposal, quite simply, be it storm, landslide, or a tree ripping up from the earth, although Elouana is most in her element in forests. With a strong gust of wind in a forest, she can seemingly blow away in a swarm of leaves, and appear nearby, as if she were a phantom within it. With enough concentration, she can form a great storm, grow a small forest in a fraction of the time, or even form a true chasm in the earth, although the last causes her terrible pain. She is further able to communicate with most animals as if they were people, although she may only speak with them in Breton.

Weaknesses: Although Elouana’s power is great in the wild, has its limits—very strict ones at that. Within city limits, where the environment is manufactured by man, she can summon nothing, and control little, save for weather if the air quality is decent. The only natural weapons that can affect a city are those she can bring from outside, and even those grow weak. If the environment is made by man, and not by Mother Nature, she wields no power over it. Her deep connections to nature are further emphasised by her reacting to pollution much more acutely than almost any other person, to the point where she can feel veritable physical pain from it, perhaps more extreme than even asthmatics. By her own theorisation, the air within a coal mine could do serious damage to her, and Beijing would be pure torture. Likewise, over ground depleted by poor farming, Elouana can identify a distinct weak sensation within herself. Anywhere where the environment is abused enough, Elouana can physically feel it in one way or another.

Equipment: Elouana often keeps a surgical mask with her in cases of higher levels of pollution, as it helps filter out larger particles and thus make her reactions to pollution less extreme.

Alignment: Neutral Good, sometimes bordering on Chaotic
Nationality: French
Hometown: Huelgoat
Sexuality: Bisexual

Personality: Elouana, much like the Huelgoat forest in which she spent many of her childhood days, can seem almost mystic and fantastical, often seeming to be spiritually off on a jaunt elsewhere. This statement would not be untrue, as her mind is always buzzing in thought, much as nature always buzzes with life. Although on the outside she may seem slow, or simply not paying attention, the latter of which is sometimes the case, Elouana often simply stares off into the distance, rather than looking someone in their eyes when speaking with them. Contrary to her cool exterior, however, inside Elouana, true storms can brew, the only indicator of which is usually a small breeze that picks up around her when her patience is tested. If someone has truly upset her, she goes silent, which, especially outdoors, can be truly terrifying if she’s been upset enough, as wind picks up, and for the duration of her fury, it feels as if a hurricane is approaching, although one never will unless she truly intends for one to form.
Motivation: Elouana desires to foster harmony between man and nature, particularly with regards to climate change and pollution.

Biography: Corentina-Elouana was born on the outskirts of the town of Huelgoat to a pair of Breton parents proud of their Celtic heritage, every day from a young age encouraging their daughter to learn about the world around her. Attending a bilingual school, Elouana became fluent both in French and Breton, moving on to learn English as she grew older, dabbling a bit in Inuktitut on a vacation to Canada at age 10, as well as falling in love with the Newfoundlandic dialect of English, which she committed to learning for her English. During her visit to Nunavut, she was amazed by the vastness of the Canadian wilderness, and spent plenty of time out in the tundra near the hotel where she stayed. It was here where she truly discovered her affinity for all things natural, finding herself able to influence the growth of trees, the flow of streams, and, then to a rather limited degree, the weather. Amazed by this newfound talent, Elouana would attempt every day from that day forward to spend time with nature.

With each visit to nature, her connection grew more powerful, becoming so great that the summer before entering Seconde, or sophomore year, as it is known in the United States, her appearance itself began to change. Her skin, which had always been relatively pale, became a pristine white enough to make old european royalty weep, and her face developed freckles. Then came the more noticeable changes. Her eyes became a piercing bright green, as if life itself came to inhabit her soul, her hair began to turn blue as the sea, growing to be a sky-blue as it moved further from her scalp, and her body took a form which most could describe fitting that of an anime goddess, particularly one with domains relating to life. Perhaps the most telling thing about her body that indicated her powers, however, was the growth of two new eyes beneath her main pair.

One day, on the way to school, she heard a voice that she had never before heard as she stepped near a lizard, cursing at her. She looked around, before noticing these curses came from the small reptile, and bent down to look more closely. The lizard repeated its angry exclamation, and so Elouana discovered she was able to comprehend animals. The next day, while sitting in class, she focused in on an obnoxiously buzzing fly, and, sure enough, she could understand what it was saying too, although the average insect proved hardly intelligent enough to even consider having a conversation with. Upon swatting the fly down, however, Elouana felt a twinge of pain in her hand from killing it herself, although this would not phase her in the future when dealing with insects, particularly mosquitos, as the sensation was barely enough to register had she not been paying attention.

One way or another, these traits did not go unnoticed, and Young Guardians soon contacted her, and brought her into the fold of their organisation.

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Postby Forest State » Wed Feb 06, 2019 11:48 am

Khasinkonia wrote:snip

Accepted.
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Postby The Verdantderm Lands » Wed Feb 06, 2019 12:35 pm

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Klara Jönsson


Name: Klara Jönsson.
Nickname/Alias: Hammare (Hammer).
Appearance: Pretty. Fair Skinned. Blonde Haired. Blue Eyed.
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Gender: Female.
Age: 18.
Build: Slender and Tall (61 kg mass and 178 cm height)
Faction: Young Guardians
Power Classification: Genetic.

Description of Powers:
Force Blast, a transparent yellow colored 15 cm diameter beam of adjustable force, traveling at up to 34000 cm/second (barely subsonic) with up to a force of 68000 N (Newtons, or 15,287 pounds of force) at under 5 meters, 34000/7642 between 5.1 m and 10 m, 17000/3821 between 10.1 m and 15 m, and 8500/1910 between 15.1 m and 20 m.

Force Shield, a transparent yellow 1 meter diameter disk capable of blocking beams and projectiles with a force of 68000 Newtons (15,287 pounds, or let's imagine the durability of 2 to 3 meters of ballistic steel, maybe).

Force Anchor, a transparent yellow glow about her body to resist forced movement up to 68000 Newtons and provide immunity to the recoil of her Force Blast.

Native Linguistic Level Fluency in Swedish, Danish, English and Norwegian.

World Class level Gymnast.

Weaknesses: Attacks that “flow” around a shield might still have some (possibly diminished) effect versus the Force Shield.
Basically only a World Class human athlete when powers are not active.

Equipment: Backpack capable of carrying 10 kg of items.

Alignment: (Mostly) Lawful Good
Nationality: Swedish.
Hometown: Malmö
Sexuality: Bisexual (but no risk of pregnancy with girls), serial monogamous.

Personality: Nurturing and Protective, Fun and Feminine.
Motivation: Hates Bullies and Pro-Humanity.

Biography:
Klara Jönsson was born and raised in the suburbs of Malmö, in Sweden. Klara had a normal childhood, until shortly after her thirteenth birthday, when, in moment of stress, she blasted a hole in the wall of the family home.

The family knew about the Young Guardians program and contacted them. The Guardians then contacted a retired hero, Bulwark, who temporarily relocated to Sweden, to act as a mentor for Klara. Bulwark and Klara got along together very well and the hero become something like an uncle to her, as well as a role model. Bulwark encouraged the girl not to rely solely on her powers, but to become the best athlete she possibly could.

In the course of a year, the pair explored and refined Klara’s genetic power. After that, Bulwark was assigned to mentor another person with manifesting powers. The two remained in contact through letters (as they didn’t want to discuss superpowers online).

Now, at age eighteen, Klara, officially joined the Young Guardian program and has taken the alias of, “Hammare”.

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Postby The Verdantderm Lands » Wed Feb 06, 2019 12:40 pm

LOL, running two male heroes in AWH, so I thought I'd do a female for this one.... LOTS OF GIRLS HERE! :lol:
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Postby Forest State » Wed Feb 06, 2019 1:44 pm

The Verdantderm Lands wrote:snip

There's one important thing to change, if you're listing specific numbers for how strong something is it should either be listed in pounds or tonnes rather than Newtons.
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Postby Faal Lot Himdah » Wed Feb 06, 2019 1:57 pm

Forest State wrote:
The Verdantderm Lands wrote:snip

There's one important thing to change, if you're listing specific numbers for how strong something is it should either be listed in pounds or tonnes rather than Newtons.


That max is about 15287 pounds-force... which is about 7 tonnes-force.

Not to mention that 34000 cm/s is 340 m/s which while subsonic is very close to 343 m/s (speed of sound).
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Postby The Verdantderm Lands » Wed Feb 06, 2019 2:06 pm

Forest State wrote:
The Verdantderm Lands wrote:snip

There's one important thing to change, if you're listing specific numbers for how strong something is it should either be listed in pounds or tonnes rather than Newtons.

Got it. Will edit later. Amount of force was based on near super-sonic speed of 200kg.

Shield size was very specific. Would not cover attack from side or rear.

Shouldn't a force beam have bullet like speed?

Will determine durability in inches of steel, later.
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Postby Forest State » Wed Feb 06, 2019 2:18 pm

The Verdantderm Lands wrote:
Forest State wrote:There's one important thing to change, if you're listing specific numbers for how strong something is it should either be listed in pounds or tonnes rather than Newtons.

Got it. Will edit later. Amount of force was based on near super-sonic speed of 200kg.

Shield size was very specific. Would not cover attack from side or rear.

Shouldn't a force beam have bullet like speed?

Will determine durability in inches of steel, later.

It's mainly because using weight makes it a bit easier to tell how it would have an impact in a practical situation. I.E. determining if something can penetrate heavy armor, etc.

The shield will have to be smaller if it's that strong, or it could just be weaker.
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