The Cross and Davids Star wrote:snip
Accepted.
Endem wrote:snip
There's some things wrong here.
You should probably go in a bit more detail about the power. I'm not quite sure how it works. Is he forming a blade with his fingers or is he turning his fingers into blades? How does the metal absorption work? Can he just absorb it or does he have to physically consume metal to use it? Is there a limit on how much he can absorb?
Also, the bio doesn't work. Not only does it not even explain the reasons why he abandoned various groups, but you can't just convince the Hawk Institute not to brainwash you. That's not how they operate, they aren't making an exception for one person. It's also very difficult to leave them and there's not even an explanation for how that is done.
It's also not clear what kind of role he would play since he's currently completely independent and not associated with any group or storyline.