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[IC Writing competition] Someone write with me [Closed]

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[IC Writing competition] Someone write with me [Closed]

Postby Yohannes » Wed Jan 30, 2019 4:47 am

[ Thread closed until we have moved on to the third match ]

I have two personalities - the good and the dark. Increasingly since 2017, the dark side -- he has slowly overwhelmed my good side. I, the NationStates account of Yohannes, have slowly turned into an arrogant person. My dark side told me that I should only respect those who I know are better writers and worldbuilders than I am. My good side -- she told me that this is wrong.

In the end, they've come to a compromise: I want to write with anyone who can prove to me that they are better in-character NationStates writers and worldbuilders than I am. I want to be humiliated. I want my dark side - I want someone, anyone, to prove him wrong: that I'm not even that good a writer/storyteller and worldbuilder.

So someone, anyone; whether you're an old player from the Jolt days who are here using your new anonymous accounts or not; or maybe if you are a new NationStates writer; or if you're someone who have been here since pre-Jolt who have kept your account -- I want to write with you and prove to me that you are a better writer/storyteller than I am. I want you to humiliate me. Let's do a character RP - if you think you are a better writer than I am, and you can prove that, my dark side will be humiliated and my good side will prevail once and for all!

Let's start an International Incidents writing competition

I will fight you (i.e. write with you) one-on-one. If you defeat me (by being the better writer), my good side will win and my bad side will be defeated! And you can humiliate me in the process, which is always a plus!

I accept the challenge of all tech nations. If you are Future Tech, we will create a portal from where your character can interact with my character. If you are a Past Tech or Fantasy Tech RPer, we can do the same thing. If you are a Pony RPer, then I will make sure that my human character will respect your existence and try not to offend you.

Someone please accept my challenge! Write with me and prove to me that you are a better writer/storyteller than I am! Conquer my dark side before he overcome my good side - she is crying for help!

One-on-one writing competition:

1. First opponent: Nazi Philippine Empire. In-character thread: The Archbishop and His Mission [ Click me ]
2. Second opponent: Astoriya or Deamonopolis
3. Third opponent: Fecaw
4. Fourth opponent: Vanquaria [Conditional/may opt out]
5. Fifth opponent: Greater Hudian Republic [Conditional/may opt out]
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[ Thread closed until we have moved on to the third match ]
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Postby Nazi Philippine Empire » Wed Jan 30, 2019 5:01 am

well i can defeat you 1 v 1 with only 0.01% effort spent
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Postby Astoriya » Wed Jan 30, 2019 5:05 am

Well, I'm sold

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Postby Nazi Philippine Empire » Wed Jan 30, 2019 5:08 am

Astoriya wrote:Well, I'm sold

i dont need help
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Re: Nazi Philippine Empire

Postby Yohannes » Wed Jan 30, 2019 5:09 am

Nazi Philippine Empire wrote:well i can defeat you 1 v 1 with only 0.01% effort spent


I accept your writing competition challenge!

Shall we start the one-on-one writing competition now, my man?

Once you've defeated me, my dark side will be vanguished once and for all - and you will save me from arrogance and Kafkaesque narcissism!

If I defeat you, however, my dark side will be stronger - and I will move on to the next competitor!
The Pink Diary | Financial Diary | Embassy Exchange | Main Characters
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Currency | HASF Materials | Bank of Yohannes | SC Resolution # 237 | #teamnana | Posts | Views
Retired II RP Mentor | Yohannes’ [ National Flag ] | Commended WA Nation
♚ Moving to a new nation not because I "wish to move on from past events," but because I'm bored writing about a fictional large nation on NS. Can online personalities with too much time on their hands stop spreading unfounded rumours about this online boy?? XOXO ♚

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Postby Astoriya » Wed Jan 30, 2019 5:10 am

Nazi Philippine Empire wrote:
Astoriya wrote:Well, I'm sold

i dont need help

I mean by myself, thank you very much :p

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Postby Nazi Philippine Empire » Wed Jan 30, 2019 5:11 am

Yohannes wrote:
Nazi Philippine Empire wrote:well i can defeat you 1 v 1 with only 0.01% effort spent


I accept your writing competition challenge!

Shall we start the one-on-one writing competition now, my man?

Once you've defeated me, my dark side will be vanguished once and for all - and you will save me from arrogance and Kafkaesque narcissism!

If I defeat you, however, my dark side will be stronger - and I will move on to the next competitor!

ok
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Re: Astoriya

Postby Yohannes » Wed Jan 30, 2019 5:11 am

Astoriya wrote:Well, I'm sold


Okay my man, you will be the second one. If I defeat Nazi Philippine Empire, you will be my next one-on-one writing challenger!
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Retired II RP Mentor | Yohannes’ [ National Flag ] | Commended WA Nation
♚ Moving to a new nation not because I "wish to move on from past events," but because I'm bored writing about a fictional large nation on NS. Can online personalities with too much time on their hands stop spreading unfounded rumours about this online boy?? XOXO ♚

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Postby Astoriya » Wed Jan 30, 2019 5:13 am

Yohannes wrote:
Astoriya wrote:Well, I'm sold


Okay my man, you will be the second one. If I defeat Nazi Philippine Empire, you will be my next one-on-one writing challenger!

:)

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Postby Yohannes » Wed Jan 30, 2019 5:51 am

Nazi Philippine Empire, this is the terms/conditions of this one-on-one competition:

1. The competition will end after five posts - after we have reached five posts each (ten posts total), the competition will end.

2. We can write as many words as we want to per post (up to the NationStates character/word limit per forum post). Our post will be judged by grammatical mistakes, spelling mistakes, incorrect use of English language, and so on

3. The characters we will use are those from our contemporary NationStates nations (your characters will be from your in-character Nazi Philippine Empire nation, and my characters will be from my in-character Yohannes nation)

4. We will draw from/use the canon of our respective nations

5. At least one post must be storytelling/book style in-character storytelling writing and at least one post must be in-character newspaper style writing. There must be at least one communique/letter style writing in one of our posts (mixed together in one of our book style writing or newspaper style writing posts)

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Will you agree to the above terms, my man?
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Currency | HASF Materials | Bank of Yohannes | SC Resolution # 237 | #teamnana | Posts | Views
Retired II RP Mentor | Yohannes’ [ National Flag ] | Commended WA Nation
♚ Moving to a new nation not because I "wish to move on from past events," but because I'm bored writing about a fictional large nation on NS. Can online personalities with too much time on their hands stop spreading unfounded rumours about this online boy?? XOXO ♚

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Re: [OOC planning] Someone write with me please

Postby Yohannes » Wed Jan 30, 2019 6:01 am

Examples:

Book style storytelling: viewtopic.php?p=35188875#p35188875 (must be at least one post)

Newspaper style: viewtopic.php?p=34913378#p34913378 (must be at least one post)

communique style: viewtopic.php?p=35233610#p35233610 or viewtopic.php?p=35245125#p35245125 (must be there in at least one post)

Total 5 posts per player (total 10 posts - writing competition will end)

You can negotiate the terms/conditions, feel free!
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♚ Moving to a new nation not because I "wish to move on from past events," but because I'm bored writing about a fictional large nation on NS. Can online personalities with too much time on their hands stop spreading unfounded rumours about this online boy?? XOXO ♚

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Postby Nazi Philippine Empire » Wed Jan 30, 2019 6:27 am

ok
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Re: [OOC planning] Someone write with me please

Postby Yohannes » Wed Jan 30, 2019 6:32 am

Nazi Philippine Empire wrote:ok


Yes! Would you be okay with me being the opening poster? If I'm the opening poster, you will have the right to write the next 2 posts after me - so it's going to be like this:

Yohannes (opening post)
Nazi Philippine Empire
Nazi Philippine Empire
Yohannes
Nazi Philippine Empire
Yohannes
Yohannes
Nazi Philippine Empire
Yohannes
Nazi Philippine Empire (you will have the ending post)

If you want to be the opening poster, that's fine! Then it'll be the same (just replace "Yohannes" with "Nazi Philippine Empire")

So who's going to be the opening poster, my man (you choose)?
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Retired II RP Mentor | Yohannes’ [ National Flag ] | Commended WA Nation
♚ Moving to a new nation not because I "wish to move on from past events," but because I'm bored writing about a fictional large nation on NS. Can online personalities with too much time on their hands stop spreading unfounded rumours about this online boy?? XOXO ♚

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Postby Nazi Philippine Empire » Wed Jan 30, 2019 6:40 am

you do it
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Postby Fecaw » Wed Jan 30, 2019 8:16 am

I will give this a go. Who judges the competition?
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Postby Yohannes » Wed Jan 30, 2019 8:33 am

Fecaw wrote:I will give this a go. Who judges the competition?


Hi Fecaw!

Grammatical and spelling mistakes are easy to identify. As for the rest: people who are reading this thread will easily see who is the better writer. I can see there are already quite a few of them watching even as we speak. (And more since I've created this thread!)

Nazi Philippine Empire wrote:you do it


You are a brave one, and I admire you for that, my man! (I still remember your alternate accounts/puppet accounts from your old in-character slavery threads; thanks for the entertainment!)

From here onwards, there will be no out-of-character post from us. My next post will be my first in-character post for this thread

May the best NationStates writer win! Image
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♚ Moving to a new nation not because I "wish to move on from past events," but because I'm bored writing about a fictional large nation on NS. Can online personalities with too much time on their hands stop spreading unfounded rumours about this online boy?? XOXO ♚

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Postby Fecaw » Wed Jan 30, 2019 9:34 am

Yohannes wrote:
Fecaw wrote:I will give this a go. Who judges the competition?


Hi Fecaw!

Grammatical and spelling mistakes are easy to identify. As for the rest: people who are reading this thread will easily see who is the better writer. I can see there are already quite a few of them watching even as we speak. (And more since I've created this thread!)
Seems like a good plan. Maybe set up a poll on the forum thread.

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Postby Yohannes » Thu Jan 31, 2019 12:57 pm

Fecaw wrote:Seems like a good plan. Maybe set up a poll on the forum thread.


Hi Fecaw!

Sadly no, in my experience (and seeing what had happened to Laeral's beautiful December 2018 election thread and other players' in-character threads) polls are easily corrupted because of their anonymity

Nazi Philippine Empire wrote:you do it


I have posted: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=459009

Apologies for the low quality (I'm not happy myself), I primise I'll try harder with my next post Image
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♚ Moving to a new nation not because I "wish to move on from past events," but because I'm bored writing about a fictional large nation on NS. Can online personalities with too much time on their hands stop spreading unfounded rumours about this online boy?? XOXO ♚

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Postby Vanquaria » Thu Jan 31, 2019 1:01 pm

Oh damn boy pretending he is big and strong over here

Smack him around Neo haha. I tag this thread with great interest.
Vanq commands a quiet respect that carries its own authority. He is the Hitler of NS.


"I took away Vanq's YB for deliberatly ignoring me"
"I know Vanq is a very good writer and this is how he treats someone of lesser skill?"
"I would love to have a writer of your caliber along for the ride"
"neo and vanq do a dbz fusion to form 1 big shitposter then get erased from NS by kyrusia"
"Which is the level of memeing I expect from Vanq"
"brigadier general comes on, pulls a vanq and calls us all autistic"

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Re: Someone write with me [Closed]

Postby Yohannes » Thu Jan 31, 2019 1:06 pm

Vanquaria wrote:Oh damn boy pretending he is big and strong over here

Smack him around Neo haha. I tag this thread with great interest.


Yes! That's my man. As you can see, the title of this thread says: "[Closed]". But I'm willing to make an exception for u because I like your style (reminds me of myself back in 2010 :p ). Would you be kind enough to become my fourth opponent?
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♚ Moving to a new nation not because I "wish to move on from past events," but because I'm bored writing about a fictional large nation on NS. Can online personalities with too much time on their hands stop spreading unfounded rumours about this online boy?? XOXO ♚

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Postby Vanquaria » Thu Jan 31, 2019 1:34 pm

Yohannes wrote:
Vanquaria wrote:Oh damn boy pretending he is big and strong over here

Smack him around Neo haha. I tag this thread with great interest.


Yes! That's my man. As you can see, the title of this thread says: "[Closed]". But I'm willing to make an exception for u because I like your style (reminds me of myself back in 2010 :p ). Would you be kind enough to become my fourth opponent?


Every thread belongs to me old man Yohan. The tag is so I don't forget this audacious competition exists. I'll gladly compete against you but I reserve the right to pull out if your "dark side" loses to th3 first 3. Good luck mate!
Vanq commands a quiet respect that carries its own authority. He is the Hitler of NS.


"I took away Vanq's YB for deliberatly ignoring me"
"I know Vanq is a very good writer and this is how he treats someone of lesser skill?"
"I would love to have a writer of your caliber along for the ride"
"neo and vanq do a dbz fusion to form 1 big shitposter then get erased from NS by kyrusia"
"Which is the level of memeing I expect from Vanq"
"brigadier general comes on, pulls a vanq and calls us all autistic"

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Postby Yohannes » Thu Jan 31, 2019 1:37 pm

Vanquaria wrote:Every thread belongs to me old man Yohan. The tag is so I don't forget this audacious competition exists. I'll gladly compete against you but I reserve the right to pull out if your "dark side" loses to th3 first 3. Good luck mate!


My man Vanquaria!

P.S. Good luck with ur lovely Mutation thread Image
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♚ Moving to a new nation not because I "wish to move on from past events," but because I'm bored writing about a fictional large nation on NS. Can online personalities with too much time on their hands stop spreading unfounded rumours about this online boy?? XOXO ♚

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Re: Nazi Philippine Empire

Postby Yohannes » Fri Feb 01, 2019 4:15 pm

Yohannes wrote:
Nazi Philippine Empire wrote:you do it


I have posted: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=459009

Apologies for the low quality (I'm not happy myself), I primise I'll try harder with my next post Image


Addendum: I have telegram'd you and so far I have not received a reply back. Just a warning for you my man! Due to your extensive history of "having fun" with the one-liner slavery threads (and admitting to doing so) and borderline trolling posts (and disappearing for months randomly) in the past, my dark side -- he can't accept your participation in good faith

However, my good side -- she likes to treat everyone equally! You're therefore given a seven-day posting elimination time frame

Starting today, if you haven't posted anything by the end of the seventh day (midnight), you will be automatically disqualified (and then, I will create my own alternate account to represent a fictional Nazi Asian nation, and I will simply use my two accounts to post back and forth until the "The Archbishop and His Mission" thread has reached ten in-character posts)

After that, I will move on to my second opponent - Astoriya

Thank u!

Edit: In the meantime, I need to write a post for Fecaw for our other thread (Before Fecaw will tell me off for this....)
Last edited by Yohannes on Fri Feb 01, 2019 4:17 pm, edited 2 times in total.
The Pink Diary | Financial Diary | Embassy Exchange | Main Characters
The Archbishop and His Mission | Adrian Goldwert’s Yohannesian Peace | ISEC | Retired Storytelling Account
Currency | HASF Materials | Bank of Yohannes | SC Resolution # 237 | #teamnana | Posts | Views
Retired II RP Mentor | Yohannes’ [ National Flag ] | Commended WA Nation
♚ Moving to a new nation not because I "wish to move on from past events," but because I'm bored writing about a fictional large nation on NS. Can online personalities with too much time on their hands stop spreading unfounded rumours about this online boy?? XOXO ♚

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Re: Nazi Philippine Empire

Postby Yohannes » Mon Feb 04, 2019 8:46 pm

Nazi Philippine Empire, only four days left! Time is ticking away, my man!

Let's see if you've got what it takes to defeat me!
The Pink Diary | Financial Diary | Embassy Exchange | Main Characters
The Archbishop and His Mission | Adrian Goldwert’s Yohannesian Peace | ISEC | Retired Storytelling Account
Currency | HASF Materials | Bank of Yohannes | SC Resolution # 237 | #teamnana | Posts | Views
Retired II RP Mentor | Yohannes’ [ National Flag ] | Commended WA Nation
♚ Moving to a new nation not because I "wish to move on from past events," but because I'm bored writing about a fictional large nation on NS. Can online personalities with too much time on their hands stop spreading unfounded rumours about this online boy?? XOXO ♚

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Postby Greater Hudian Republic » Tue Feb 05, 2019 1:02 pm

i know this is closed but i'd just like to tag
THE GREATER HUDIAN REPUBLIC

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