[PASSED] Commend Minoa (Charlotte Ryberg)

[Sargon Reman]

Commend Minoa

This Security Council,

RECOGNIZING the nation of Minoa's major contributions to the World Assembly and the international community,

NOTING that as the nation of Charlotte Ryberg; Minoa passed numerous General Assembly resolutions, some of which include,

-"Humanitarian Aid Coordination" which creates the International Humanitarian Aid Coordination Committee (IHACC) and mandates that disaster plans be in place among other things,

- Repeal: "Disaster Preparedness Act" which unfairly penalized members for deploying their own disaster response efforts and for lack of a funding program for member states,

-"Reducing Problem Gambling" which promoted responsible gambling and helped individuals with the negative effects of gambling,

-"International Postal Union" which sought to transform the effectiveness of international postal delivery by creating the International Postal Union and guarantee uniform handling and delivery of postal items among member states,

ACKNOWLEDGING that as the nation of Charlotte Ryberg, Minoa maintained a list of passed Security Council resolutions from about 2009 to 2015, thus making access to passed resolutions more expeditious for fellow nations; and which remains maintained by others to this day,

IMPRESSED that the government of Minoa created and maintained for the last five years an international database of information they dubbed as NSIndex, which strives to provide objective and factual information to nations across the international community;

FURTHER NOTING that Minoa faithfully maintains one of several well-known databases used for tracking the political issues and their effects; and that Minoa directly took on the issue of Microchipping technology and how it could be dealt with in member states.

BELIEVING that Minoa deserves to be acknowledged for their hard work and dedication to the world community and that Minoa's legacy will be a positive testament to future generations,

HEREBY commends Minoa.

[Cosmopolitan borovan]

Looks ok I guess

[Kuriko]

Its a really good start, and has tons of information. However, I'm seeing quite a few grammatical mistakes and possible rules violations I will address in a later post if no-one else gets to them before me.

[Cosmopolitan borovan]

NSIndex violates rules it's a known website

Databases also violate because its physical entity

[Jar Wattinree]

NSIndex violates rules it's a known website

Databases also violate because its physical entity

It does not.

[Sargon Reman]

NSIndex violates rules it's a known website

Databases also violate because its physical entity

I considered this as well, but SC resolution #10 states:

RECOGNIZING Goobergunchia for the creation of the first Nation States' wiki, NSwiki, a highly informative and detailed account of in-game incidents, resolutions, national profiles, region profiles, history, events, and terminology.

That's what I was going by. Did the rules change since then?

[Cosmopolitan borovan]

Can I get an opinion from a moderator

[Tinhampton]

NSIndex violates rules it's a known website

Databases also violate because its physical entity

I considered this as well, but SC resolution #10 states:

RECOGNIZING Goobergunchia for the creation of the first Nation States' wiki, NSwiki, a highly informative and detailed account of in-game incidents, resolutions, national profiles, region profiles, history, events, and terminology.

That's what I was going by. Did the rules change since then?

That was passed before Rule 4 was a thing. I'd wait if I were you - drafting and ruling purposes alike...

[Sargon Reman]

I considered this as well, but SC resolution #10 states:


That's what I was going by. Did the rules change since then?

That was passed before Rule 4 was a thing. I'd wait if I were you - drafting and ruling purposes alike...

I have no intention of rushing it through drafting.

[Kuriko]

Alright, I think I've nitpicked enough.

This Security Council,

RECOGNIZING the nation of Minoa's major contributions to the World Assembly and the international community,

NOTING that as the nation of Charlotte Ryberg Minoa passed numerous General Assembly resolutions, some of these which include:

• "Humanitarian Aid Coordination" which creates the International Humanitarian Aid Coordination Committee (IHACC) and mandates that disaster plans be in place among other things,
• Repeal: "Disaster Preparedness Act" which unfairly penalized members for deploying their own disaster response efforts and for lack of a funding program for member states,
• "Reducing Problem Gambling" which promoted responsible gambling and helped individuals with the negative effects of gambling,
• "On Abortion" , which was known as being one of the most controversial and difficult resolutions to pass in the General Assembly's history, it mandated mandating that abortions be carried out in health risk scenarios and established the consent and non-coercion of patients.

ACKNOWLEDGING that as the nation of Charlotte Ryberg, Minoa maintained a list of passed Security Council resolutions from about 2009 to 2015, thus making access to passed resolutions more expeditious for fellow nations; the listand which remains maintained by others to this day;

IMPRESSED that for the last five years Minoa has administered the NSIndex for the benefit of all nation's; it strives to provide objective and factual information to nation's across the international community, statistics include:
-Nearly 500 registered nations, not counting countless others that view the site without registering,
-Members have contributed about 7440 pages in total which is roughly 2850 articles of information,the government of Minoa created and maintained for the last five years an international database of information they dubbed as NSIndex, which strives to provide objective and factual information to nations across the international community;

OBSERVING that nation's worldwide grapple with a wide range of political issues on a daily basis,

FURTHER NOTING that Minoa faithfully maintains one of several well-known databases used for tracking the political issues and their effects; and that Minoa directly took on the issue of Microchipping technology and how it could be dealt with in member states; including creating a badge for member nation's who help in the endeavor of grappling with these issues,

BELIEVING that Minoa deserves to be acknowledged for their hard work and dedication to the world community and that Minoa's legacy will be a positive testament to future generations,

HEREBY commends Minoa.

I crossed out OBSERVING because it seems really out of place. I'm pretty sure we can link WA proposals in legislation, but best to get a mods opinion on that.

[Lord Dominator]

I suspect the Observing line is one where the author forgot to list issues written

[Sargon Reman]

Alright, I think I've nitpicked enough.

This Security Council,

RECOGNIZING the nation of Minoa's major contributions to the World Assembly and the international community,

NOTING that as the nation of Charlotte Ryberg Minoa passed numerous General Assembly resolutions, some of these which include:

• "Humanitarian Aid Coordination" which creates the International Humanitarian Aid Coordination Committee (IHACC) and mandates that disaster plans be in place among other things,
• Repeal: "Disaster Preparedness Act" which unfairly penalized members for deploying their own disaster response efforts and for lack of a funding program for member states,
• "Reducing Problem Gambling" which promoted responsible gambling and helped individuals with the negative effects of gambling,
• "On Abortion" , which was known as being one of the most controversial and difficult resolutions to pass in the General Assembly's history, it mandated mandating that abortions be carried out in health risk scenarios and established the consent and non-coercion of patients.

ACKNOWLEDGING that as the nation of Charlotte Ryberg, Minoa maintained a list of passed Security Council resolutions from about 2009 to 2015, thus making access to passed resolutions more expeditious for fellow nations; the listand which remains maintained by others to this day;

IMPRESSED that for the last five years Minoa has administered the NSIndex for the benefit of all nation's; it strives to provide objective and factual information to nation's across the international community, statistics include:
-Nearly 500 registered nations, not counting countless others that view the site without registering,
-Members have contributed about 7440 pages in total which is roughly 2850 articles of information,the government of Minoa created and maintained for the last five years an international database of information they dubbed as NSIndex, which strives to provide objective and factual information to nations across the international community;

OBSERVING that nation's worldwide grapple with a wide range of political issues on a daily basis,

FURTHER NOTING that Minoa faithfully maintains one of several well-known databases used for tracking the political issues and their effects; and that Minoa directly took on the issue of Microchipping technology and how it could be dealt with in member states; including creating a badge for member nation's who help in the endeavor of grappling with these issues,

BELIEVING that Minoa deserves to be acknowledged for their hard work and dedication to the world community and that Minoa's legacy will be a positive testament to future generations,

HEREBY commends Minoa.

I crossed out OBSERVING because it seems really out of place. I'm pretty sure we can link WA proposals in legislation, but best to get a mods opinion on that.

I have added your suggestions.

[Jar Wattinree]

I'm pretty sure we can link WA proposals in legislation, but best to get a mods opinion on that.

Linking past resolutions is permitted.

[Sargon Reman]

Is there any more suggestions that someone would like to add?

[Cosmopolitan borovan]

I can see how on abortion is controversial the last clause issists that abortion be legal in member states

[Cosmopolitan borovan]

On abortion however was a practical resolution working on on what was acceptable with moderates but it led to reproductive freedoms something opposed by most pro life nations

[Aclion]

Commend Minoa

This Security Council,

RECOGNIZING the nation of Minoa's major contributions to the World Assembly and the international community,

NOTING that as the nation of Charlotte Ryberg; Minoa passed numerous General Assembly resolutions, some of which include:

-"Humanitarian Aid Coordination"which creates the International Humanitarian Aid Coordination Committee (IHACC) and mandates that disaster plans be in place among other things,

- Repeal: "Disaster Preparedness Act" which unfairly penalized members for deploying their own disaster response efforts and for lack of a funding program for member states,

-"Reducing Problem Gambling" which promoted responsible gambling and helped individuals with the negative effects of gambling,

-"On Abortion" which was known as being one of the most controversial and difficult resolutions to pass in the General Assembly's history, mandating that abortions be carried out in health risk scenarios and establishing the consent and non-coercion of patients.

ACKNOWLEDGING that as the nation of Charlotte Ryberg, Minoa maintained a list of passed Security Council resolutions from about 2009 to 2015, thus making access to passed resolutions more expeditious for fellow nations; and which remains maintained by others to this day;

IMPRESSED that the government of Minoa created and maintained for the last five years an international database of information they dubbed as NSIndex, which strives to provide objective and factual information to nations across the international community;

FURTHER NOTING that Minoa faithfully maintains one of several well-known databases used for tracking the political issues and their effects; and that Minoa directly took on the issue of Microchipping technology and how it could be dealt with in member states; including creating a badge for member nation's who help in the endeavor of grappling with these issues,

BELIEVING that Minoa deserves to be acknowledged for their hard work and dedication to the world community and that Minoa's legacy will be a positive testament to future generations,

HEREBY commends Minoa.

Grammer stuff

[Sargon Reman]

Commend Minoa

This Security Council,

RECOGNIZING the nation of Minoa's major contributions to the World Assembly and the international community,

NOTING that as the nation of Charlotte Ryberg; Minoa passed numerous General Assembly resolutions, some of which include:

-"Humanitarian Aid Coordination"which creates the International Humanitarian Aid Coordination Committee (IHACC) and mandates that disaster plans be in place among other things,

- Repeal: "Disaster Preparedness Act" which unfairly penalized members for deploying their own disaster response efforts and for lack of a funding program for member states,

-"Reducing Problem Gambling" which promoted responsible gambling and helped individuals with the negative effects of gambling,

-"On Abortion" which was known as being one of the most controversial and difficult resolutions to pass in the General Assembly's history, mandating that abortions be carried out in health risk scenarios and establishing the consent and non-coercion of patients.

ACKNOWLEDGING that as the nation of Charlotte Ryberg, Minoa maintained a list of passed Security Council resolutions from about 2009 to 2015, thus making access to passed resolutions more expeditious for fellow nations; and which remains maintained by others to this day;

IMPRESSED that the government of Minoa created and maintained for the last five years an international database of information they dubbed as NSIndex, which strives to provide objective and factual information to nations across the international community;

FURTHER NOTING that Minoa faithfully maintains one of several well-known databases used for tracking the political issues and their effects; and that Minoa directly took on the issue of Microchipping technology and how it could be dealt with in member states; including creating a badge for member nation's who help in the endeavor of grappling with these issues,

BELIEVING that Minoa deserves to be acknowledged for their hard work and dedication to the world community and that Minoa's legacy will be a positive testament to future generations,

HEREBY commends Minoa.

Grammer stuff

Thank you. I knew there were a couple but I didn't notice some of the others you mentioned. I have revised the draft for these.

[Fauxia]

Using On Abortion is a smart way to lose votes. Mention something else

[United Massachusetts]

Using On Abortion is a smart way to lose votes. Mention something else

Just about to say this. I will oppose if "On Abortion" stays in there.

[Sargon Reman]

But that is one of this nominees accomplishments.
That whole portion will have to be reworked.

[United Massachusetts]

But that is one of this nominees accomplishments.
That whole portion will have to be reworked.

Just remove it and put in another resolution they wrote in its place. We need not recognize an unfortunate resolution here.

[Sargon Reman]

I shall convene with the nominee first before any edit regarding On Abortion. This is someone's legacy we are talking about. I know of a suitable replacement but I still want to speak with them first.

[Isvataan]

Support, we need something positive in the face of this toxic neo liberations

[Omigodtheykilledkenny]

including creating a badge for member nation's who help in the endeavor of grappling with these issues,

What exactly is this referring to?