Mondrova wrote:I made the edits and included a sample.
Though I would like to say the reason I made his power have some range is that Johnny isn't a fighter; the range was intended to allow him some avenues for escape and avoidance of direct combat. I worry if he needs to be in contact with someone to use his power he will end up dead quickly. Unless combat and necessary fights aren't going to be as common as I'm imaging, in which case I'm fine with the change. Or if you think such a character would be viable even with the change.
If that's what you are worried about, I'd suggest going with a different ability, as the really dangerous things on the surface of Pandemonium wouldn't really be effected by any memory effecting power...
Maybe give him a power to support everyone else since he isn't a fighter.