Haedros 92712 wrote:Ormata wrote:Flutter, I'd like to pause you right there please.
I want to know more of what "Black Magic" entails because honestly the description is vague as all hell. Also, what the heck is "Speed Theft". Furthermore, there is literally no RP sample whatsoever and the backstory is...minuscule. The application is not finished.
Speed theft is the ability to take away somebody else’s speed from them. I needed to look that up. Black magic, judging from all the hard fantasy RPs I’ve been in entails purely offensive magic ranging from elemental based attacks to necromancy and magic of that nature. The RP sample definitely needs to be added, though you’re are being kinda picky with the backstory part. It certainly leaves some things to be desired, but it does meet the bare minimum quota of two paragraphs. But please Ormata, ima just speak in flutters place here, stop doing the OPs job. You’re not a Co-OP, and therefore it’s not your job to be judging apps. There is nothing wrong with giving suggestions, but you are outright telling flutter how to do his/her job.
When applications aren't finished and get accepted anyways, permit me to obverse that that isn't really that good.
In my first post, I mentioned that a security guard was the only staff at the library along with Babs. Was leaving it open for Ed. If ya still want Ed to get in on the action, you can say your first post was earlier in the day because the scene in the library is early evening.
