Azadeshia wrote:It's not complete, but I need some suggestions :- viewtopic.php?f=6&t=443826
Looks like a cool idea! There is not much in terms of products to judge here yet, but I'm sure you'll do great with the proper amount of research on it.
Here are some of my suggestions from a design/layout standpoint.
- With the picture of the lunar eclipse/your storefront title, make them both center aligned and put the picture of the moon one line above.
- Maybe go for a typographic logo incorporating the OSXO (nothing fancy, just download a good font like Helvetica or Futura
- On your navigation bar, go with one color for all the text (I'd recommend the green; the yellow is hard to read). Maybe separate them with hyphens (-) or a vertical bar (|). And change the 2nd, 3rd and 4th page titles to whatever is in that link (e.g. "Current Projects" instead of "2nd page")
- Maybe copy the nav bar and put it on the top of each post so customers may easily navigate around. Maybe grey out the title of the page you're on like I do on my storefront.
- You could easily condense some of the posts just so your storefront is more streamlined. I'd recommend putting the "Our Main Mission," "Partners," and "Application" posts in your OP and reserving subsequent posts for your products and other services.
- It's not actually a part of your storefront, but the highlighted text in your signature kind of makes everything look very busy. I'd recommending going a little more minimalist on it.
- Maybe replace the "yellow" highlight you have on your section headers with the "#FFBF00" color you use on your main title. Or just drop. Alternatively you could do something like this:
Spacecraft and Aircraft
Hope this helped!