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Postby The Templar High Council » Fri Apr 20, 2018 8:06 am

Placing a reservation on 4 Tails for a jonin. ;)
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Name: Ryoichi "Ryo" Imada
Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Jonin
Clan: Imada Clan
Appearance: Ryoichi Imada
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Chakra Natures: Earth and Fire Release
Jinchuriki: Son Goku, AKA Four-Tails
Kekkei Genkai:
  • Lava Release
  • Seeing Earth Technique
Known Techniques:Strengths: Taijutsu, and ninjutsu that facilitate close-range combat. Also the assistance of Son Goku and his massive chakra pool.
Weaknesses: Long-range combat, genjutsu (excluding Son's influence), Lightning Release (strong against Earth Release, his main chakra nature).

Bio: As the first son of one of Iwa's great ninja clans, Ryo was born and raised to become a ninja, though the circumstances surrounding his birth were more unusual than most. The former jinchuriki of the Four-Tailed beast had recently passed away, and the Imada clan (as friends of the Tsuchikage) had offered a new host for the Yonbi in the form of one Ryoichi. And so the deal was struck, Ryo was raised under the watchful eye of the village, training him to control his inner demons and to be loyal to Iwa.

Due to the attention he received, Ryo developed into an amazing ninja. He passed his chunin exam with only one or two hiccups and was on his way to jonin status when he finally began to understand the creature living inside him. Son Goku's ideals mostly aligned with Ryo's; being the best they could be, fighting for fun, and enjoying one's self. With these commonalities, Ryo made his connection with Son, sharing his power and companionship with the Monkey King. Eventually, Ryo attained the rank of jonin, the village trusting him enough on his own to allow him some freedom. Various missions went by, nothing too noteworthy, Ryo proving himself worthy of the rank and power he was given time and time again. Eventually he rose to prominence in the village, a powerful and respected ninja that people looked up to in times of need. This year, he was sent to the chunin exams in Konoha by the Tsuchikage, to monitor the event and go where the Kage's envoys could not. Mostly on a hunch, but better to be safe than sorry, and Ryo (however reckless he might be) will get the job done.


Clan Name: Imada
Clan's Home Village: Iwagakure
Clan Crest: Imada Clan
Notable Members:
  • Ryuunosuke Imada: the clan's founder, a shinobi from the 3rd Great Ninja War.
  • Teijo Imada: current head of the family, and Ryoichi's father.
  • Ryoichi Imada: an exceptional jonin of Iwagakure.
Clan Techniques or Kekkei Genkai
  • Traditionally, taijutsu practicioners
  • Lava Release, a combination of Earth and Fire Realeases
  • Seeing Earth Technique, allowing the Imada clan to see things through solid earth
Clan History: The Imada clan was formed after the 3rd Great Ninja War in Iwagakure. Other than that, they are not that noteworthy. Imada children do not do much else besides fighting, leading most if not all to become shinobi. And their parents usually prefer it that way. The Imada have known fighting since before they were founded, and it's what they know best. They've fought in every war Iwagakure got involved in, and even some they didn't. Overall, they're a family of hot-headed fighting enthusiasts.
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Postby Atlannia » Fri Apr 20, 2018 9:48 am

hmmm what sort of character to make? seems like genjutsu isn't getting enough love, maybe I'll go that route?

Edit: Also is there a particular village you want filled out with another genin?
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Postby Atreidya » Fri Apr 20, 2018 9:50 am

This looks really interesting. tag

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Postby United Human Planets » Fri Apr 20, 2018 10:35 am

Atlannia wrote:hmmm what sort of character to make? seems like genjutsu isn't getting enough love, maybe I'll go that route?

Edit: Also is there a particular village you want filled out with another genin?


Well, we have two Jonin with only partially filled out teams in Konoha, so if your looking to do a Genin character, thats the place to go.

My Jonin character also specializes in Genjutsu, so if your looking for a Sensai who knows Genjutsu, he's the guy.

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Postby Ralnis » Fri Apr 20, 2018 11:16 am

The Rebel Alliances wrote:

We will need to see how many Genin we get and if any of them are from the Hidden Grass Village.

For now it may be easiest to have him as a envoy to the Hidden Leaf.

That's fine, at least I'm in the epicenter of the story, maybe be able to do something.
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Postby Atlannia » Fri Apr 20, 2018 11:39 am

United Human Planets wrote:Well, we have two Jonin with only partially filled out teams in Konoha, so if your looking to do a Genin character, thats the place to go.

My Jonin character also specializes in Genjutsu, so if your looking for a Sensai who knows Genjutsu, he's the guy.


Yeah that seems fitting. Well assuming there's no issues with my app you get the weird rat girl on your team, congrats!



Clan Name: Mizune Clan
Clan's Home Village: Konohagakure
Clan Crest: Image
Notable Members:

Hishuji Mizune: The Clan's founder, Mizune clan legend describes him as a homeless beggar who learned to speak to rats and used them to rob the wealthy to feed the orphan children he took in, these children grew up to become the first Mizune clan shinobi.

Kandate Mizune: Clan head, a respected but not popular jonin who is considered eccentric, likes to gamble.

Shizuka Mizune: A genin and currently heiress of the clan, talented but rather shy and nervous about the prospect of succeeding her Father.

Clan Techniques or Kekkei Genkai Communing with thieves technique This hiden technique is an unusual genjutsu that takes control of rats, allowing the user to command them and view their thoughts. These naturally stealthy creatures are excellent for stealth and reconnaissance but the Mizune clan also use them in combat by distracting and weakening their opponents, in particular many Mizune clan members can infuse their rats with yin chakra that, when the rat bites someone, places the victim under a genjutsu.

Clan History: The Mizune clan are actually relatively recent arrivals to the Leaf. Previously the clan were independent operators, they took unglamorous jobs for lower class clients who couldn't afford more famous shinobi. Often offering their services for next to nothing or even completely free out of compassion for the poor, the Mizune clan often supplemented their income by stealing from the wealthy which eventually resulted in Konoha being hired to hunt them down.

The Konoha ninja tracked down the clan and fought with them but the fight ended in a stalemate. Impressed by the unconventional tactics of the clan the Konoha ninja arranged an underhanded solution wherein they would return the Mizune's ill gotten gains to their original owners and claim that they Mizune escaped. In reality the clan simply gave up their thieving ways and joined Konohagakure as true shinobi, the Konoha kunoichi who arranged all this would later marry into the clan, becoming the wife of the current clan head.





Name: Shizuka Mizune
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Clan: Mizune
Appearance:
Image
Gender: female
Age: 13
Chakra Natures: Yin
Known Techniques:

Communing with thieves technique: This is a unique genjutsu used to control rats and the central technique of the Mizune clan. The rats of the Mizune clan are specially bred and trained to be receptive to this process, so practitioners can easily control large swarms of the creatures and even investigate their mind to retrieve information such as things they have heard, seen or smelled.

Communing with thieves: vermin bite: The user infuses a rodent with yin chakra, when that rodent bites someone the victim falls under a genjutsu that blurs their vision and makes their hands and legs shaky, undermining their combat performance. Due to the nature of delivery most opponents assume they are afflicted by disease or poison and never think to perform a genjutsu release, however the duration is quite short as the bite can only deliver a limited amount of chakra, repeated bites are necessary to sustain the effects.

Communing with thieves: mouse clone technique The user forms a clone, using many rats as a medium that is comparable to a water clone in terms of strength and capabilities, it can cast jutsu and fight hand to hand for example but is still easily destroyed. Because the rats can carry chakra the clone can be formed at considerable distance to the user, allowing for ambush tactics and if the clone is destroyed the rats inside can attack or distract the assailant.

Hiding in plain sight technique: This is a genjutsu that causes the target to overlook the caster. The target can technically still perceive the caster, the genjutsu simply causes them to dismiss any sensory data related to the caster as unimportant, much the same way as one might look at an open field and see, but not notice a particular blade of grass. This technique can only target one person at a time however and if the caster draws attention to themselves, by launching an attack or moving around too quickly for example, the effect will be broken.

Crossbow proficiency: The traditional weapon of the Mizune clan is the crossbow and Shizuka is fairly competent, though not exceptional with hers. The crossbow is slow to reload and worthless in most close range combat but it is quite powerful and excellent for ambushes.

Summoning technique: The Mizune clan use a variation of the summoning technique to bring additional rats to their side when needed.

Body flicker technique:

basic academy techiques:

Strengths: Shizuka's best areas are stealth and genjutsu, making her adept at avoiding and confusing enemies rather than facing them head on, she is also reasonably skilled with basic ninja tools and her crossbow
Weaknesses: Shizuka is vulnerable in close range, though she has basic training in it she has a small, relatively weak frame and conceals her rats on her person, making taijutsu a poor choice for her. Shizuka's rats aren't especially weak to anything in particular, but wide ranging area of effect attacks can strike and kill many of them at once.
Bio: Shizuka grew up in Konohagakure not too long after her clan first arrived in the village. A naturally quiet and shy girl, she was also teased and bullied relentlessly due to her clans association with rats and the lack of trust the other clans had for them which did little to improve the girl's confidence. Fortunately the bullying didn't seem to impede her studies, with little in the way of social opportunities to distract her, she threw herself into both the standard academy curriculum and learning the traditional techniques of her clan, often she seemed to get along better with her rats and other animals then people.

Shizuka's hard work culminated in her acing the final academy exams, but she has yet to overcome her shyness and as the next in line to head her clan she knows she has to become more comfortable in the spotlight, as a newly minted genin she's determined to overcome her fears and live up to her clan's expectations.


Theme Song: Follow your Arrow
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Postby The Valyria Empire » Fri Apr 20, 2018 12:04 pm

Name: Hyuga Koji
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Jonin/Former Anbu
Clan: Hyūga
Clan Symbol:
Image

Appearance:
Image

Gender: Male
Age: 24
Chakra Natures:
  • Fire Release
  • Water Release
  • Yang Release (dormant)
Kekkei Genkai: Byakugan: The Byakugan gives the user a near 360º diameter field of vision, with one blind spot at the back of the neck above the first thoracic vertebra. The Byakugan is able to see chakra to a higher degree than the Sharingan, such as identifying where a person's chakra signature originates from. It can discern certain types of clones from the real person. Its ability to see chakra is acute enough to see the chakra pathway system and the 361 tenketsu that run along it.
Known Techniques:
  • Gentle Fist: is a form of hand-to-hand combat used by members of the Hyūga clan. It inflicts internal damage through attacking the body's Chakra Pathway System, subsequently injuring organs which are closely intertwined with the area of the network which has been struck.
  • Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms: With the Byakugan's near 360° field of vision, the user envisions an Eight Trigrams circle. Then the enemy within this circle is hit with a series of violent blows. By striking sixty-four of the tenketsu throughout the opponent's Chakra Pathway System, their chakra flow is stopped, making them unable to even stand.
  • Eight Trigrams Palms Revolving Heaven (Rotation): This technique utilises the chakra control gained through Gentle Fist training to release a huge amount of chakra from all the chakra points on the user's body. After releasing chakra from every tenketsu in their body, the user then spins rapidly to parry the attack, both creating a rotating shield of chakra around themselves and tossing away any nearby attackers.
  • Water Needle: Using the chakra control granted by the Gentle Fist, Koji concentrates his chakra until water vortexes are created around him. Those vortexes shoot water blasts which turn to needle-like water. By using Byakugan, this technique can be used with great precision to hit very small targets such as bees.
  • Rasengan (currently training, on step 2): Currently is unable to use this technique. Requires more training.
  • Eight Trigrams Three-Hundred-Sixty-One Style (Most powerful technique, has not mastered it yet): This technique allows the user to strike all 361 chakra points of the opponent, paralyzing them with each blow and instantly killing them upon the final hit. However this technique is very costly and can result in the lost of eye sight if used wrongly.

Strengths:
    • A master of taijustsu, preferring to fight up close and personal.
    • Good with ninjustsu. Knowing only a few basic combat ninjustsu, Koji can rely on them if he ever needs to gain space. Mostly his Rotation
    • Due to his Byakugan, Koji is able to control his chakra flow better than most and use it to seal off his opponents.
Weaknesses:
  • Has little to no affinity with using genjustsu
  • Isn't the best with ninja weapons
Bio: Koji was born to the head of the Hyuga family, thus making him a part of the main branch. From the moment he could begin training he was put through hell and back. Koji had to participate in Senbon Sparring, which involves the trainee sparing one thousand times in succession. It was through this training that he began to master the Byakugan. Koji's father noticed Koji's genius at learning but the lack of motivation, thus Koji was forced to learn the Hyuga secret techniques such as the Eight Trigrams Sixty-four palms. By the time Koji graduated from the Academy he had already learned the Sixty-Four Palms and Rotation.

By the age of 12 he had graduated the Academy with flying colors. However, he would have issues with his first Chunin exam. Due to his laziness, Koji ended up forfeiting his match after being backed against the wall. His father, of course was furious. He threatened to make Koji's younger sister the heir to the clan if he does begin to step up and pass the next Chunin exams. Koji's father began to put him through another Senbon Sparring before the exams to prepare him. After passing the first two tests once more, Koji decided to seek out guidance from the Kage. Due to his father being close to the Kage, the Kage sent him to train with a disciple that he had trained. This disciple had learned the Rasengan from the Kage, and after much prodding decided to teach Koji as well. Koji would only get to part two of the training before the final part of the exams began. Koji would try to use this new technique he learned but it failed, however he was able to block off several chakra points on his opponent resulting in a forced surrender.

Koji would become a Chunin at fifteen, and shortly afterwards would be recruited into the ANBU Black Ops after his father pulled some strings as he wanted his son out of the picture. While not officially disinheriting Koji, he began to groom Hana to be the next heir. While Koji had been lazy during his Genin years, he surprisingly took his job as Anbu very seriously. He would attend to hundreds of missions, most notably hunting missing-nin. His time in the Anbu began to dampen his upbeat mood considerably. While his Byakugan was very resourceful to his ANBU Squad, he had started to change on the inside. Koji finally recongized this when Hana was trying to get attention and he smacked her. This was a wake up call for Koji, he had never wanted to hurt his sister and realized he needed to leave the Anbu.

After retiring from the Anbu he was promoted to Jonin at the age of twenty after several recommendations from his Anbu and villagers. Now he serves as leader of Team 16, however his laziness as come back since departing from the Anbu much to the dismay of his father. He plans to get back to training the Rasengan but with his new duties it's hard to find the time.
Theme Song: Battle Theme

While I was writing I noticed the Revised Tailed Beast rule. Is it possible to have both a Kekkei Genkai and a tailed beast or is that too OP?

Also how many Tailed Beasts will we have per village?
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Postby The Rebel Alliances » Fri Apr 20, 2018 12:05 pm

Atlannia wrote:
United Human Planets wrote:Well, we have two Jonin with only partially filled out teams in Konoha, so if your looking to do a Genin character, thats the place to go.

My Jonin character also specializes in Genjutsu, so if your looking for a Sensai who knows Genjutsu, he's the guy.


Yeah that seems fitting. Well assuming there's no issues with my app you get the weird rat girl on your team, congrats!



Clan Name: Mizune Clan
Clan's Home Village: Konohagakure
Clan Crest: W-i-P
Notable Members:

Hishuji Mizune: The Clan's founder, Mizune clan legend describes him as a homeless beggar who learned to speak to rats and used them to rob the wealthy to feed the orphan children he took in, these children grew up to become the first Mizune clan shinobi.

Kandate Mizune: Clan head, a respected but not popular jonin who is considered eccentric, likes to gamble.

Shizuka Mizune: A genin and currently heiress of the clan, talented but rather shy and nervous about the prospect of succeeding her Father.

Clan Techniques or Kekkei Genkai Communing with thieves technique This hiden technique is an unusual genjutsu that takes control of rats, allowing the user to command them and view their thoughts. These naturally stealthy creatures are excellent for stealth and reconnaissance but the Mizune clan also use them in combat by distracting and weakening their opponents, in particular many Mizune clan members can infuse their rats with yin chakra that, when the rat bites someone, places the victim under a genjutsu.

Clan History: The Mizune clan are actually relatively recent arrivals to the Leaf. Previously the clan were independent operators, they took unglamorous jobs for lower class clients who couldn't afford more famous shinobi. Often offering their services for next to nothing or even completely free out of compassion for the poor, the Mizune clan often supplemented their income by stealing from the wealthy which eventually resulted in Konoha being hired to hunt them down.

The Konoha ninja tracked down the clan and fought with them but the fight ended in a stalemate. Impressed by the unconventional tactics of the clan the Konoha ninja arranged an underhanded solution wherein they would return the Mizune's ill gotten gains to their original owners and claim that they Mizune escaped. In reality the clan simply gave up their thieving ways and joined Konohagakure as true shinobi, the Konoha kunoichi who arranged all this would later marry into the clan, becoming the wife of the current clan head.





Name: Shizuka Mizune
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Clan: Mizune
Appearance: WiP
Gender: female
Age: 13
Chakra Natures: Yin
Known Techniques:

Communing with thieves technique: This is a unique genjutsu used to control rats and the central technique of the Mizune clan. The rats of the Mizune clan are specially bred and trained to be receptive to this process, so practitioners can easily control large swarms of the creatures and even investigate their mind to retrieve information such as things they have heard, seen or smelled.

Communing with thieves: vermin bite: The user infuses a rodent with yin chakra, when that rodent bites someone the victim falls under a genjutsu that blurs their vision and makes their hands and legs shaky, undermining their combat performance. Due to the nature of delivery most opponents assume they are afflicted by disease or poison and never think to perform a genjutsu release, however the duration is quite short as the bite can only deliver a limited amount of chakra, repeated bites are necessary to sustain the effects.

Communing with thieves: mouse clone technique The user forms a clown, using many rats as a medium that is comparable to a water clone in terms of strength and capabilities, it can cast jutsu and fight hand to hand for example but is still easily destroyed. Because the rats can carry chakra the clone can be formed at considerable distance to the user, allowing for ambush tactics and if the clone is destroyed the rats inside can attack or distract the assailant.

Hiding in plain sight technique: This is a genjutsu that causes the target to overlook the caster. The target can technically still perceive the caster, the genjutsu simply causes them to dismiss any sensory data related to the caster as unimportant, much the same way as one might look at an open field and see, but not notice a particular blade of grass. This technique can only target one person at a time however and if the caster draws attention to themselves, by launching an attack or moving around too quickly for example, the effect will be broken.

Crossbow proficiency: The traditional weapon of the Mizune clan is the crossbow and Shizuka is fairly competent, though not exceptional with hers. The crossbow is slow to reload and worthless in most close range combat but it is quite powerful and excellent for ambushes.

Summoning technique: The Mizune clan use a variation of the summoning technique to bring additional rats to their side when needed.

Body flicker technique:

basic academy techiques:

Strengths: Shizuka's best areas are stealth and genjutsu, making her adept at avoiding and confusing enemies rather than facing them head on, she is also reasonably skilled with basic ninja tools and her crossbow
Weaknesses: Shizuka is vulnerable in close range, though she has basic training in it she has a small, relatively weak frame and conceals her rats on her person, making taijutsu a poor choice for her. Shizuka's rats aren't especially weak to anything in particular, but wide ranging area of effect attacks can strike and kill many of them at once.
Bio: Shizuka grew up in Konohagakure not too long after her clan first arrived in the village. A naturally quiet and shy girl, she was also teased and bullied relentlessly due to her clans association with rats and the lack of trust the other clans had for them which did little to improve the girl's confidence. Fortunately the bullying didn't seem to impede her studies, with little in the way of social opportunities to distract her, she threw herself into both the standard academy curriculum and learning the traditional techniques of her clan, often she seemed to get along better with her rats and other animals then people.

Shizuka's hard work culminated in her acing the final academy exams, but she has yet to overcome her shyness and as the next in line to head her clan she knows she has to become more comfortable in the spotlight, as a newly minted genin she's determined to overcome her fears and live up to her clan's expectations.


Theme Song: Follow your Arrow



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Postby Atlannia » Fri Apr 20, 2018 12:07 pm

aww haha, I'm sure that will be very appreciated!
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The Valyria Empire wrote:
Name: Hyuga Koji
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Jonin/Former Anbu
Clan: Hyūga
Clan Symbol:
Appearance:
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Chakra Natures:
  • Fire Release
  • Water Release
  • Yang Release (dormant)
Kekkei Genkai: Byakugan: The Byakugan gives the user a near 360º diameter field of vision, with one blind spot at the back of the neck above the first thoracic vertebra. The Byakugan is able to see chakra to a higher degree than the Sharingan, such as identifying where a person's chakra signature originates from. It can discern certain types of clones from the real person. Its ability to see chakra is acute enough to see the chakra pathway system and the 361 tenketsu that run along it.
Known Techniques:
  • Gentle Fist: is a form of hand-to-hand combat used by members of the Hyūga clan. It inflicts internal damage through attacking the body's Chakra Pathway System, subsequently injuring organs which are closely intertwined with the area of the network which has been struck.
  • Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms: With the Byakugan's near 360° field of vision, the user envisions an Eight Trigrams circle. Then the enemy within this circle is hit with a series of violent blows. By striking sixty-four of the tenketsu throughout the opponent's Chakra Pathway System, their chakra flow is stopped, making them unable to even stand.
  • Eight Trigrams Palms Revolving Heaven (Rotation): This technique utilises the chakra control gained through Gentle Fist training to release a huge amount of chakra from all the chakra points on the user's body. After releasing chakra from every tenketsu in their body, the user then spins rapidly to parry the attack, both creating a rotating shield of chakra around themselves and tossing away any nearby attackers.
  • Water Needle: Using the chakra control granted by the Gentle Fist, Koji concentrates his chakra until water vortexes are created around him. Those vortexes shoot water blasts which turn to needle-like water. By using Byakugan, this technique can be used with great precision to hit very small targets such as bees.
  • Rasengan (currently training, on step 2): Currently is unable to use this technique. Requires more training.
  • Eight Trigrams Three-Hundred-Sixty-One Style (Most powerful technique, has not mastered it yet): This technique allows the user to strike all 361 chakra points of the opponent, paralyzing them with each blow and instantly killing them upon the final hit. However this technique is very costly and can result in the lost of eye sight if used wrongly.

Strengths:
    • A master of taijustsu, preferring to fight up close and personal.
    • Good with ninjustsu. Knowing only a few basic combat ninjustsu, Koji can rely on them if he ever needs to gain space. Mostly his Rotation
    • Due to his Byakugan, Koji is able to control his chakra flow better than most and use it to seal off his opponents.
Weaknesses:
  • Has little to no affinity with using genjustsu
  • Isn't the best with ninja weapons
Bio: Koji was born to the head of the Hyuga family, thus making him a part of the main branch. From the moment he could begin training he was put through hell and back. Koji had to participate in Senbon Sparring, which involves the trainee sparing one thousand times in succession. It was through this training that he began to master the Byakugan. Koji's father noticed Koji's genius at learning but the lack of motivation, thus Koji was forced to learn the Hyuga secret techniques such as the Eight Trigrams Sixty-four palms. By the time Koji graduated from the Academy he had already learned the Sixty-Four Palms and Rotation.

By the age of 12 he had graduated the Academy with flying colors. However, he would have issues with his first Chunin exam. Due to his laziness, Koji ended up forfeiting his match after being backed against the wall. His father, of course was furious. He threatened to make Koji's younger sister the heir to the clan if he does begin to step up and pass the next Chunin exams. Koji's father began to put him through another Senbon Sparring before the exams to prepare him. After passing the first two tests once more, Koji decided to seek out guidance from the Kage. Due to his father being close to the Kage, the Kage sent him to train with a disciple that he had trained. This disciple had learned the Rasengan from the Kage, and after much prodding decided to teach Koji as well. Koji would only get to part two of the training before the final part of the exams began. Koji would try to use this new technique he learned but it failed, however he was able to block off several chakra points on his opponent resulting in a forced surrender.

Koji would become a Chunin at fifteen, and shortly afterwards would be recruited into the ANBU Black Ops after his father pulled some strings as he wanted his son out of the picture. While not officially disinheriting Koji, he began to groom Hana to be the next heir. While Koji had been lazy during his Genin years, he surprisingly took his job as Anbu very seriously. He would attend to hundreds of missions, most notably hunting missing-nin. His time in the Anbu began to dampen his upbeat mood considerably. While his Byakugan was very resourceful to his ANBU Squad, he had started to change on the inside. Koji finally recongized this when Hana was trying to get attention and he smacked her. This was a wake up call for Koji, he had never wanted to hurt his sister and realized he needed to leave the Anbu.

After retiring from the Anbu he was promoted to Jonin at the age of twenty after several recommendations from his Anbu and villagers. Now he serves as leader of Team 16, however his laziness as come back since departing from the Anbu much to the dismay of his father.
Theme Song: Battle Theme

While I was writing I noticed the Revised Tailed Beast rule. Is it possible to have both a Kekkei Genkai and a tailed beast or is that too OP?

Also how many Tailed Beasts will we have per village?



Excellent Questions, While it would be possible I suppose, it is pretty OP honestly. I will not say no, as I would like to hear the idea first. But I would prefer if the Tailed Beasts were held by characters with no kekkei genkai. Also, have not really considered the per village limit. I would say 1 but most of the characters are from Konoha and it may be better to allow more than one ect. Its kinda wait and see at the moment truth be told. As far as I know, Konoha does not have one yet.

Also, I am reviewing you app now.
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Postby United Human Planets » Fri Apr 20, 2018 12:08 pm

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Yeah that seems fitting. Well assuming there's no issues with my app you get the weird rat girl on your team, congrats!



Clan Name: Mizune Clan
Clan's Home Village: Konohagakure
Clan Crest: W-i-P
Notable Members:

Hishuji Mizune: The Clan's founder, Mizune clan legend describes him as a homeless beggar who learned to speak to rats and used them to rob the wealthy to feed the orphan children he took in, these children grew up to become the first Mizune clan shinobi.

Kandate Mizune: Clan head, a respected but not popular jonin who is considered eccentric, likes to gamble.

Shizuka Mizune: A genin and currently heiress of the clan, talented but rather shy and nervous about the prospect of succeeding her Father.

Clan Techniques or Kekkei Genkai Communing with thieves technique This hiden technique is an unusual genjutsu that takes control of rats, allowing the user to command them and view their thoughts. These naturally stealthy creatures are excellent for stealth and reconnaissance but the Mizune clan also use them in combat by distracting and weakening their opponents, in particular many Mizune clan members can infuse their rats with yin chakra that, when the rat bites someone, places the victim under a genjutsu.

Clan History: The Mizune clan are actually relatively recent arrivals to the Leaf. Previously the clan were independent operators, they took unglamorous jobs for lower class clients who couldn't afford more famous shinobi. Often offering their services for next to nothing or even completely free out of compassion for the poor, the Mizune clan often supplemented their income by stealing from the wealthy which eventually resulted in Konoha being hired to hunt them down.

The Konoha ninja tracked down the clan and fought with them but the fight ended in a stalemate. Impressed by the unconventional tactics of the clan the Konoha ninja arranged an underhanded solution wherein they would return the Mizune's ill gotten gains to their original owners and claim that they Mizune escaped. In reality the clan simply gave up their thieving ways and joined Konohagakure as true shinobi, the Konoha kunoichi who arranged all this would later marry into the clan, becoming the wife of the current clan head.





Name: Shizuka Mizune
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Clan: Mizune
Appearance: WiP
Gender: female
Age: 13
Chakra Natures: Yin
Known Techniques:

Communing with thieves technique: This is a unique genjutsu used to control rats and the central technique of the Mizune clan. The rats of the Mizune clan are specially bred and trained to be receptive to this process, so practitioners can easily control large swarms of the creatures and even investigate their mind to retrieve information such as things they have heard, seen or smelled.

Communing with thieves: vermin bite: The user infuses a rodent with yin chakra, when that rodent bites someone the victim falls under a genjutsu that blurs their vision and makes their hands and legs shaky, undermining their combat performance. Due to the nature of delivery most opponents assume they are afflicted by disease or poison and never think to perform a genjutsu release, however the duration is quite short as the bite can only deliver a limited amount of chakra, repeated bites are necessary to sustain the effects.

Communing with thieves: mouse clone technique The user forms a clown, using many rats as a medium that is comparable to a water clone in terms of strength and capabilities, it can cast jutsu and fight hand to hand for example but is still easily destroyed. Because the rats can carry chakra the clone can be formed at considerable distance to the user, allowing for ambush tactics and if the clone is destroyed the rats inside can attack or distract the assailant.

Hiding in plain sight technique: This is a genjutsu that causes the target to overlook the caster. The target can technically still perceive the caster, the genjutsu simply causes them to dismiss any sensory data related to the caster as unimportant, much the same way as one might look at an open field and see, but not notice a particular blade of grass. This technique can only target one person at a time however and if the caster draws attention to themselves, by launching an attack or moving around too quickly for example, the effect will be broken.

Crossbow proficiency: The traditional weapon of the Mizune clan is the crossbow and Shizuka is fairly competent, though not exceptional with hers. The crossbow is slow to reload and worthless in most close range combat but it is quite powerful and excellent for ambushes.

Summoning technique: The Mizune clan use a variation of the summoning technique to bring additional rats to their side when needed.

Body flicker technique:

basic academy techiques:

Strengths: Shizuka's best areas are stealth and genjutsu, making her adept at avoiding and confusing enemies rather than facing them head on, she is also reasonably skilled with basic ninja tools and her crossbow
Weaknesses: Shizuka is vulnerable in close range, though she has basic training in it she has a small, relatively weak frame and conceals her rats on her person, making taijutsu a poor choice for her. Shizuka's rats aren't especially weak to anything in particular, but wide ranging area of effect attacks can strike and kill many of them at once.
Bio: Shizuka grew up in Konohagakure not too long after her clan first arrived in the village. A naturally quiet and shy girl, she was also teased and bullied relentlessly due to her clans association with rats and the lack of trust the other clans had for them which did little to improve the girl's confidence. Fortunately the bullying didn't seem to impede her studies, with little in the way of social opportunities to distract her, she threw herself into both the standard academy curriculum and learning the traditional techniques of her clan, often she seemed to get along better with her rats and other animals then people.

Shizuka's hard work culminated in her acing the final academy exams, but she has yet to overcome her shyness and as the next in line to head her clan she knows she has to become more comfortable in the spotlight, as a newly minted genin she's determined to overcome her fears and live up to her clan's expectations.


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Clan and Character ACCEPTED. I love it. Also, my Uzumaki shall not tolerate any bullying of her teammate. :roll:


Neither would Hakaku, the dudes got a soft spot for the poor and or those who help the poor.

After all, he's poor himself.

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While I was writing I noticed the Revised Tailed Beast rule. Is it possible to have both a Kekkei Genkai and a tailed beast or is that too OP?

Also how many Tailed Beasts will we have per village?



Excellent Questions, While it would be possible I suppose, it is pretty OP honestly. I will not say no, as I would like to hear the idea first. But I would prefer if the Tailed Beasts were held by characters with no kekkei genkai.

Also, I am reviewing you app now.

Yeah, I considered making my secondary character one but realized how OP it would be to have a Tailed beast and a Byakugan. Figured it would be a good idea to get that addressed before some one tried to make a character like that.

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Postby The Rebel Alliances » Fri Apr 20, 2018 12:12 pm

Yeah, Byakugan is nothing to play with by itself. Adding a Tailed Beast on top of that would make a monster. As I said, no specific rule against at least not right now but I would prefer an either/or approach when considering Kekkei Genkai and Jinchuriki. No real reason to stack those if you do not have some special reason to.
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Postby The Rebel Alliances » Fri Apr 20, 2018 12:22 pm

The Valyria Empire wrote:[box]Name: Hyuga Koji


ACCEPTED.

But man that baby face for a 24 yr old. :p

Also, I am thinking that perhaps he and Kimiko have worked together or even sparred in the ANBU.
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Postby Atlannia » Fri Apr 20, 2018 12:22 pm

United Human Planets wrote:Neither would Hakaku, the dudes got a soft spot for the poor and or those who help the poor.

After all, he's poor himself.


yusss protecc the squishy one.
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Postby The Valyria Empire » Fri Apr 20, 2018 12:38 pm

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The Valyria Empire wrote:[box]Name: Hyuga Koji


ACCEPTED.

But man that baby face for a 24 yr old. :p

Also, I am thinking that perhaps he and Kimiko have worked together or even sparred in the ANBU.

I was say so, yeah.

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Postby Ralnis » Fri Apr 20, 2018 12:41 pm

Can have a second character?

I don't know what to be actually.
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Ralnis wrote:Can have a second character?

I don't know what to be actually.


You may have multiple characters, I am working on my third and final.

Also, the IC will be up today. I feel like we have enough to get things running.

Also, if you are confused as to what you may want to make. We REALLY need Genin.

We have two Teams with Jonin and no Genin to lead.

Currently, we have four teams, two of which have two Genin squad members. And two are empty. So we need eight more Genin for four full teams.

I will accept more Jonin characters, but no more Team leaders, at least for Konoha.
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Postby Ralnis » Fri Apr 20, 2018 12:46 pm

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Ralnis wrote:Can have a second character?

I don't know what to be actually.


You may have multiple characters, I am working on my third and final.

Also, the IC will be up today. I feel like we have enough to get things running.

Also, if you are confused as to what you may want to make. We REALLY need Genin.

We have two Teams with Jonin and no Genin to lead.

Currently, we have four teams, two of which have two Genin squad members. And two are empty. So we need eight more Genin for four full teams.

I will accept more Jonin characters, but no more Team leaders, at least for Konoha.

Genin with samurai skills or genjustu?
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Postby The Rebel Alliances » Fri Apr 20, 2018 12:50 pm

Ralnis wrote:
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You may have multiple characters, I am working on my third and final.

Also, the IC will be up today. I feel like we have enough to get things running.

Also, if you are confused as to what you may want to make. We REALLY need Genin.

We have two Teams with Jonin and no Genin to lead.

Currently, we have four teams, two of which have two Genin squad members. And two are empty. So we need eight more Genin for four full teams.

I will accept more Jonin characters, but no more Team leaders, at least for Konoha.

Genin with samurai skills or genjustu?


Just Genin, your pick on other details.

I am even considering allowing two Tailed Beasts exclusively for Konoha Genin characters to sweeten the deal. And I have even thought of scrapping my own Samurai character WIP and making a new Genin myself.
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Postby United Human Planets » Fri Apr 20, 2018 1:01 pm

Atlannia wrote:
United Human Planets wrote:Neither would Hakaku, the dudes got a soft spot for the poor and or those who help the poor.

After all, he's poor himself.


yusss protecc the squishy one.


Always protect the squishy one.

And then once he's dont protecting the squishy one, he's gonna make the other one get off her ass and do something.

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Postby The Rebel Alliances » Fri Apr 20, 2018 1:10 pm

I am gonna start creating a Genin Concept just in case I end up needing it to round out someone's team.

The character will be a Yamanaka Genin.

The Character Pre-Timeskip.
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Character Post-Time-Skip
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Postby The Rebel Alliances » Fri Apr 20, 2018 1:33 pm

Name: Momoko Senju
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: 4th Hokage
Clan: Senju
Appearance:
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Gender: Female
Age: 30
Chakra Natures: Fire
Jinchuriki: No
Kekkei Genkai: N/A
Known Techniques:
  • Flame Fist
    • An attack that causes an intense explosion by transferring all heat from the user’s hand into the object it makes contact with. From the outside, it looks like the flame enveloping the user’s hand is also enveloping the object in question and it is the force of the punch that causes the explosion. If this were the case, this technique would clearly be much more taijutsu-oriented than ninjutsu. But it’s not so simple, really. There are obvious drawbacks to this transfer of chakra-gone-flame, such as being so close to explosion itself. Although the technique is easily able to destroy massive boulders and cliff sides upon contact, the danger presents itself in the rubble and shock to the arm from such devastation. Because of this, the technique can only be used twice a day for even the most gifted jounin. If used any more, the bones of the user’s arm will shatter from internal pressures caused by the technique
  • Fire Release: True Hydra Technique
    • An extremely powerful technique, used only by the most powerful of Leaf-nins, it has been known to destroy entire landscapes in one fell swoop. By somewhat summoning a large, fiery monstrosity in front of them: a Fire Dragon with three heads, the user is able to fire three Katons equal in strength to the Karyuu Endan at three different targets, or all at one.
  • Fire Release: Fire Dragon Blast
    • A jutsu that sends a stream of fire towards the opponent in the shape of a large dragon from the users mouth. The intensity of the flame is enough to completely melt stone and the end result of this techniques rampage is an explosion enough to send an entire mountain aquiver.
  • Fire Release: Raging Storm of the Dragon
    • An extremely powerful technique that tests the physical limits of the user, it is the mark of a true Katon Master. Using all methods of heat creation and transferal, the user channels chakra all over their body and dramatically bends forward, their back hunched and aimed upward. Then, slamming their crossed arms onto the ground in from of them, firmly planting both palms on the ground, the user erupts in a blazing column of impenetrable flame. What the result is what can only be described as a funnel of pure fire. Designed to be used defensively over all else, the fire as well takes different form as floods of chakra meant to reinforce the technique discolor it. Purple, blue and red all at once, this funnel surrounds the user completely and has obvious effects: anything that makes contact with the user during this technique becomes instantly enflamed, and such force by the chakra launches it back.
  • Fire Release: Pandemonium
    • Very few people have seen this technique in action and even less have ever spoken of it. And yet as cliché as that sounds, it is most definitely a truth that cannot be denied. During the course of a battle, the user carefully sets different parts of the battlefield on fire and then sets this very special technique to use. Drawing upon the heat energy from all the surrounding flames, the user transforms them into spheres of purely charged heat through the use of very particular seals. Then, as the seals are completed, the balls begin to surround the opponent. Finally, they close in on the enemy at incredible speeds and the heat is completely absorbed into their bodies… causing them to explode from all the internal pressures and other biological processes which have failed due to the intense rise in temperature. The user can, also, delay this process by mentally dragging each sphere through the air and disabling an opponent’s appendages one by one before finishing them off.
  • Fire Sealing Method
Strengths:
  • Incredibly empathetic
  • Willing to go into harms way for her village and anyone in it - strongly believes in the Will of Fire.
  • Fire Style is her cornerstone ninjutsu
  • Seals and Summons come naturally
Weaknesses:
  • Dislikes combat - Fights only when absolutely needed.
  • Despite her looks, she's single, and hilariously not by choice. Momo has bad luck dating.
  • Moderate chakra reserves - nothing vast or large, but precise enough to form powerful jutsu without waste.
  • Relatively little political experience
  • Sufficiently powerful Water Release jutsu can smother her Fire Release jutsu.
Bio: Daughter of the 2nd Hokage, Momo was dotted on most of her life, but not only that, she was taught the value of life over the value of shinobi and their ways by her grandfather, which had a profound effect on her. Despite that, she excelled at ninjutsu, specifically in Fire Style, and learned to create complex seals and preform incredible summoning jutsu at an early age, giving her a strong lead over her competitors and even her teammates. While her personality didn't reflect true shinobi ideals, her power did, and so she was on the fast track to becoming a leader in her village.

Her grandfather passed away when she was fifteen, leaving one of his students to take up the mantle of 3rd Hokage. Momoki, in the meantime, distanced herself from the village and made a name across the globe as a caretaker and motherly-like figure as she dealt with the passing of her grandpa in her own way, which was helping others. She would defend weak villages from bandits and heal the sick as a medical-nin, becoming an almost legendary figure as Momo traveled. Her power would grow exponentially in this time as well, and when she returned to the Hidden Leaf Village at age twenty-three, after eight years of traveling, she was hailed as a hero, and secured her place as the next Hokage.

Two years after her return, the 3rd Hokage, Nori Arakawa, deferred his position to Momoki, leaving her the position as that shinobi felt that his sensei, Momo's grandfather, would want her to have it after the deeds she had done across the Great Shinobi Countries. Nori left Konoha to pursue a similar ideal of helping others as he was inspired by Momo and her actions. She has ruled Konoha for five years since, and has overseen a great deal of growth for the village, but a sense of worry and fear is surfacing as war mongers fan the flames of conflict throughout the land.
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Postby Paploagro » Fri Apr 20, 2018 2:32 pm

Clan Name: Vapul
Clan's Home Village: Wädensstuhl
Clan Crest:
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Notable Members: Wolfhard Vapul, Franziska Vapul, Karsten Vapul
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