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Name: Crown Prince of Atlantis Rayokal Theoko/The Atlantai
Age: 18 (7,878 counting cryo time)
Gender: Male
Race: Atlantean human
Appearance:
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Young Blood?: Possibly, I have yet to decide where I want to take him.
Bio: Born in the year 7,896 B.C to Emperor Talnus and Empress Alicia Theoko of the Royal Family of Atlantis, Rayokal had a very happy childhood living in the Kingdom of Atlantis. His parents loved him, he was admired by his people, he was happy. The Atlanteans had existed far before the ancient peoples of Mesopotamia made the first cities along the Euphrates, possessing advanced technology they built up their civilization on their island however it was not to last. They had created their own Tower of Babel in the form of Dalarium Crystals. The crystals were volatile and controlling them without accident was a challenge. Many thought that Dalarium was the key to a limitless supply of energy, but it was not to be. A scientist by the name of Sondura Magyar attempted to convert the cities power generators to Dalarium but it backfired, there was a massive explosion that engulfed the generator complex that started a chain reaction that ended with the destruction of their artificial island. However as the island sunk the Theoko’s attempted to save their child by knocking him out, shoving him in a pod, and launching him into low orbit. However his pod was hit by space debris and was damaged sending him crashing down into the Canadian wilderness where he lay until now when his pod finally wakes him from his 7,000 year slumber.
Powers:
  • Royal Atlantean Combat Skin: The Royal Atlantean Combat Skin is a more advanced version of the normal Atlantean combat skin. The royal version has the following capabilities:
    Built in hard light rifle
    Built in hard light shield
    Built in hard light sword(s)
    Self levitation & limited flight
    Sealed for space and deep underwater travel
    Very durable, can withstand conventional weaponry, high kinetic impacts, etc
    Can play music
  • Atlantean Survival Training: As heir to the Atlantean throne Rayokal underwent intensive training in combat, survival, and medical fields for roles he’d play as king of Atlantis. He is adept with hand to hand combat and prefers to use staff or trident opposed to guns.

Limitations:
  • Outside of combat skin he is just a normal human
  • Combat skin does not make him invincible, it is susceptible to high electric charges

Weaknesses:
  • Adaptability: Rayokal has been asleep for 7,000 years and wakes up in a strange place, speaking a language that literally nobody speaks, and then discovered that Atlantis never made a comeback. He’s understandably traumatized and doesn’t really know how to adapt to this new world. He has little knowledge of the world around him and tends to be a bit naive and confused.
  • Overload: His suit can take a massive amount of damage but if too much damage is taken at once it can break. For example a tank shell can be taken no problem, but let's say you fire a tank shell and then hit him with a ton of electric energy the suit could fail.

Likes: History, fighting, music, exploring, Atlanta Georgia, the ocean
Dislikes: Deserts, tight pants, assholes/evil doers etc

Additional Information-
Birthday: May 12th, 4,9864 BC
Theme songs https://youtu.be/PGkxPVlqrgw
Favorite food: Macaroni and Cheese/Donuts
Greatest fear: Humanity finding Dalarium and destroying themselves like his people did.


Country App:
Name: The Kingdom of Atlantis
Type (City/Country): City State
Location: In the Atlantic Ocean in between Morocco & the United States, (Lat: 30.9411, Lon: -38.2978)
Population: 2, formally 1 million
Notable features: Under hundreds of miles of water, in ruins, has a lot of cool tech.
Year founded: 20,000 BC
Year destroyed: 4,982 BC
Active heroes/villains of note: Rayokal Theoko/The Atlantai

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Postby New Finnish Republic » Mon Feb 12, 2018 3:22 pm

Should have the first little short story up tonight! Might make another one as well, I'll have to see how busy I am.
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Postby Indo-pasif archipelago » Mon Feb 12, 2018 4:46 pm

New Finnish Republic wrote:Small, random, and possibly weird idea that came into my head this morning:

For shits and giggles, I'm thinking of writing a variety of short stories featuring the Young Bloods when they're "Off Duty". Most of these would be lighthearted stories, with nothing really serious happening in them. Of course, I'd get explicit permission from the players who controlled these characters, and nothing I'd write would be officially canon unless the players want it to be.

Thoughts?

Totally love it. As it's non-canon, feel free to use my chars. I might take into canon the good ideas you have though :p.
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Postby Tomia » Mon Feb 12, 2018 6:15 pm

New Finnish Republic wrote:Should have the first little short story up tonight! Might make another one as well, I'll have to see how busy I am.

Am really looking forward to it!

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Postby The Knockout Gun Gals » Mon Feb 12, 2018 7:45 pm

New Finnish Republic wrote:Small, random, and possibly weird idea that came into my head this morning:

For shits and giggles, I'm thinking of writing a variety of short stories featuring the Young Bloods when they're "Off Duty". Most of these would be lighthearted stories, with nothing really serious happening in them. Of course, I'd get explicit permission from the players who controlled these characters, and nothing I'd write would be officially canon unless the players want it to be.

Thoughts?


Awesome one, Fin!
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So Covenant declare a crusade and then wage jihad? :p

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Postby Tomia » Mon Feb 12, 2018 7:50 pm

Shastara wrote:Name: Crown Prince of Atlantis Rayokal Theoko/The Atlantai

The main thing is I think you need to describe alantian skin, since you describe the combat skin as an improvement on it. The other thing is I think you should develop his backstory right now, he kind of just reads like aquaman + Captain America, I'd like him to have a bit more depth. Though that second one is more of suggestion than a barrier to acceptance.

Scotatrova wrote:[spoiler=App Inbound]Name: Diego Belcourt

Bio looks good, a few comments for the powers though.
First, you need to define what kind of magical reality warping he can do, that term is very vague so what can he actually do?
Second, most of his weaknesses feel like limitations. He needs something that is directly related to his powers that be exploited. Maybe something that negates his electricity or magic?

Finally I think you should get rid of energy blasts, there are chars that already have that ability and I think electricity already gives him sufficient offensive and projectile capabilities.

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Postby The Knockout Gun Gals » Mon Feb 12, 2018 9:12 pm

Name: Jonathan Jackson

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Race: Human
Appearance (pics if possible):
Image


Image



Young Blood?: No
Bio:

Jonathan was a homeless man, a failure, some said. Jonathan was born as an orphan and transferred to many foster homes. Wasn't a drug addict, but let just say he had a hard life. His parents died in car accident, while his relatives weren't care much about him. He had a meager life, average grades in school, up until senior high. He sold drugs to afford for his own living condition. So yeah, basically a bad life in general. He was about to be graduated from high school when he was approached by MA’AT Project from Delta Pharmaceuticals who, in exchange for financial aid for him, would gave him a power and be experimented to achieved a perfect superhuman. Desperate for a purpose of life, he accepted the offer.

But the experiment was harsh, and it wasn't just him. At first, he though he was the perfect one, the perfect candidate. But later on, as he watched more experimental subjects he came to the conclusion that he was merely just another experimental subjects. The MA’AT Project gained control of an unknown extra-terrestrial symbiotic cells in their possession and eager to experimented on it. Jonathan was the lucky one user, though. Somehow the symbiote attached to him in one of these experiments and the symbiote greedily protected him from harms, as well as attempted a break-out from the experiment. In the ensuing conflict, a large explosive destruction happened and both Jonathan and the symbiote was presumed to be dead.

But it wasn't true.

Soon Jonathan resurfaced, having learned the limits of his symbiotic powers, and struggled to keep the control of his powers while he traveled in San Diego, again, without the purpose of life...
Powers:
  • Symbiote Costume: Jonathan's body has been attached with an extra-terrestrial symbiote, capable of bonding with his body and turned into a symbiotic power suit. The suit grants him additional strength, durability, the ability to climb buildings, and long jump.
  • Regenerative Healing Factor: The symbiote grants him the healing factor power, both the slow and passive mode as well as fast but aggressive and active mode. The passive mode will heal him, but slowly. While the active mode enabled him to absorb any living humans/creatures to absorb their life and transfer it to the user.

Limitations (Reasons why your char can’t end the universe):
  • The symbiote only grants power to Jonathan as long as it is attached to Jonathan. Without the symbiote, Jonathan is just a normal civilian.
  • The symbiote is a parasitic one, in order to survive the symbiote, Jonathan has to periodically absorb the life of living creatures to ease off the pain.
  • He can't absorb anyone randomly. For starter, he cannot absorbs anyone with superhuman powers that is naturally attached to them. (ex: he cannot absorbs Iron Man but he can absorbs Captain America). He can absorbs anyone, except for those who have superhuman powers that attached to them naturally.

Weaknesses (Reasons why someone could kick their ass):
  • Enhanced Conditioning, but no Skill: Despite the enhanced physical conditioning, Jonathan is just a normal civilian with no backgrounds in martial arts, military, or have any knowledges of combat except for moves that he watches in TV/Movies. Thus, his capability is undermined by his lack of combat training.
  • The Symbiotic Nature: Again, the symbiote is a parasitic one, so while he can afford to use a significantly higher portion of power, his own life will be in danger.
  • Electricity And Absorption Problem: Electricity is a main weakness of the symbiote, and thus electricity is a useful weapon against the symbiote. The absorption of targets can be interrupted with the use of electricity.

Likes: Food, finding the purpose of life.
Dislikes: Killing people (but he has to, or his life will be in danger).
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The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:
TriStates wrote:Covenant declare a crusade, and wage jihad against the UNSC and Insurrectionists for 30 years.

So Covenant declare a crusade and then wage jihad? :p

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Postby Scotatrova » Mon Feb 12, 2018 9:27 pm

Tomia wrote:First, you need to define what kind of magical reality warping he can do, that term is very vague so what can he actually do?
Second, most of his weaknesses feel like limitations. He needs something that is directly related to his powers that be exploited. Maybe something that negates his electricity or magic?

Finally I think you should get rid of energy blasts, there are chars that already have that ability and I think electricity already gives him sufficient offensive and projectile capabilities.


Scotatrova wrote:
Name: Diego Belcourt
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Appearance (pics if possible): Here
Young Blood?: No
Bio: Born in Los Angeles to the great Belcourt Family, Diego was raised by a distant mother who placed a lot of expectations on her child, and he grew up with a strong desire to prove himself worthy, to make his parents proud and bring honor to his family, and to follow rules and orders. An experience from when he was ten years old stuck with him. He trained with another magic user, but kept losing at training despite his perfect form. His mother pointed out that in his attempts to perfect his techniques, he became predictable, and thus needed to step outside of the rules and break form to surprise his opponent. Diego listened and broke the other child's nose. When chided by the boy's mother, he simply took it, knowing it would make his mother proud to see him accept consequences for his actions. When he was around eleven years old, Theo Hale was taken in by his parents after the death of the boy's father. The two almost immediately hit it off. Shortly after taking the boy in, Diego realized that he had developed romantic feelings for Theo and because a romantic relationship would be frowned upon, he spent the next few years of his life in denial about his feelings.

On his 16th birthday, Diego found out he was accepted into the art program that he had applied for and went back home to tell his family. Upon returning home, he found something that would forever change him. His home had been attacked, and his parents were killed in the process. However, he noticed that Theo was nowhere to be found. Overcome in his grief, Diego let out an immense blast of magical energy that radiated for miles. His emotional blast had soon put him on the radar of his parent's murderers. Diego was now part of a bounty, for the Belcourt Family were known for being renowned and powerful magic users, and being the last of his family's legacy, he was now worth more than he had ever made in his life. Now he spends most days unlike many other people his age. While most are out spending time with friends or go to school, Diego is now running for his life while also trying to juggle the mastering of his abilities.
Powers:
  • [Spell Casting]: Diego has the ability that allows him to magically alter reality to varying extents. It is often a series of words that take effect when spoken. Initially, he cast his magic through a unique form of self-taught spell casting involving stating repeatedly an effect or action he wants to happen ("Water to ice, water to ice"), and has managed to precede from this method ever since. At varying times he is able to cast spells merely by thinking, though they are limited most notably only to levitation, thought-casting, and illusion casting. Certain actions can also be done with gestures, such as flinging someone out of the way with the wave of his hand. Finally, his magic may be enhanced with magical objects, such as the amulet he wears around his neck which provides him with the ability to channel his magic.
  • [Electrokinesis]: Can manipulate, generate and discharge energy projections as either lightning or electricity from his hands or other parts of his body. Which gives him control over electric fields, electric charges, electric currents, electronics, and electromagnetism. This seems to not require the verbal components like his other spells. He is capable of combining or performing his electokinetic powers in unison with spells.
  • [Solid Energy Constructs]: Can generate and manipulate energy to create solid constructs such as disks, orbs, bursts, shields, platforms, force fields, and other projectiles or constructions.
  • [Flight]: Can engage in self-propelled flight.


Limitations:
  • [Inexperience]: Even though he is well versed in many simple areas of magic, he is still unable to enact more powerful spells as they require more magical power and training and can easily misuse a spell creating unpredictable results.
  • [Physical Condition]: His spells have a degree of unreliability, which is further affected by his physical condition: when well rested, in good health, and mentally and emotionally alert, he could cast numerous spells in rapid succession and attain desirable results for almost an hour.
  • [Overexertion]: Despite this enhanced precision, his spells are not necessarily guaranteed to work, particularly if he has been straining himself or using his powers excessively. If overextended, his spells could backfire, causing probability to work against his wishes or to undo previous spells.
  • [Mental Health]: Although he appears to be currently sane, his mental stability is questionable. He has undergone mental breakdowns, episodes of mental illness, and severe depression relating to his powers and personal traumas.


Weaknesses:
  • [Asafoetida]: Unique only to his family, Diego, along with the rest of the Belcourt family have an odd reaction when in contact with the herb Asafoetida. Within a few minutes after exposure through either inhalation or consumption, an uncontrollable shaking of the hands begins. It is possible to use magic to cleanse his system of the herb if done soon enough, but prolonged exposure leads to weakness, pain, anxiety and inability to concentrate, which further intereferes with his ability to cast the proper spell to rid his body of the substance. If not taken care of soon, the herb will slowly poison him.
  • [Amulet]: Even though the amulet he wears provides him with a conduit for his mystical energy, it also comes with a price. If deprived from his amulet for a sufficient period of time, he slowly becomes unable to cast spells properly and they will cease until the amulet is restored, leaving him powerless. If the amulet is destroyed, then he no longer has a conduit, which could lead him to being overwhelmed by his own mystical energies with unknown consequences.
  • [Water]: Due to the lack of experience, he is extremely sensitive to anything that may "short circuit" him, such as water, which could cause him to burn out.

Likes: Reading, Geography and The Sound of Music
Dislikes: The term "Warlock", Alcohol and Crowds

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Birthday: August 17, 2000
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Postby Tomia » Mon Feb 12, 2018 9:33 pm

Scotatrova wrote:
Tomia wrote:First, you need to define what kind of magical reality warping he can do, that term is very vague so what can he actually do?
Second, most of his weaknesses feel like limitations. He needs something that is directly related to his powers that be exploited. Maybe something that negates his electricity or magic?

Finally I think you should get rid of energy blasts, there are chars that already have that ability and I think electricity already gives him sufficient offensive and projectile capabilities.


Scotatrova wrote:
Name: Diego Belcourt
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Appearance (pics if possible): Here
Young Blood?: No
Bio: Born in Los Angeles to the great Belcourt Family, Diego was raised by a distant mother who placed a lot of expectations on her child, and he grew up with a strong desire to prove himself worthy, to make his parents proud and bring honor to his family, and to follow rules and orders. An experience from when he was ten years old stuck with him. He trained with another magic user, but kept losing at training despite his perfect form. His mother pointed out that in his attempts to perfect his techniques, he became predictable, and thus needed to step outside of the rules and break form to surprise his opponent. Diego listened and broke the other child's nose. When chided by the boy's mother, he simply took it, knowing it would make his mother proud to see him accept consequences for his actions. When he was around eleven years old, Theo Hale was taken in by his parents after the death of the boy's father. The two almost immediately hit it off. Shortly after taking the boy in, Diego realized that he had developed romantic feelings for Theo and because a romantic relationship would be frowned upon, he spent the next few years of his life in denial about his feelings.

On his 16th birthday, Diego found out he was accepted into the art program that he had applied for and went back home to tell his family. Upon returning home, he found something that would forever change him. His home had been attacked, and his parents were killed in the process. However, he noticed that Theo was nowhere to be found. Overcome in his grief, Diego let out an immense blast of magical energy that radiated for miles. His emotional blast had soon put him on the radar of his parent's murderers. Diego was now part of a bounty, for the Belcourt Family were known for being renowned and powerful magic users, and being the last of his family's legacy, he was now worth more than he had ever made in his life. Now he spends most days unlike many other people his age. While most are out spending time with friends or go to school, Diego is now running for his life while also trying to juggle the mastering of his abilities.
Powers:
  • [Spell Casting]: Diego has the ability that allows him to magically alter reality to varying extents. It is often a series of words that take effect when spoken. Initially, he cast his magic through a unique form of self-taught spell casting involving stating repeatedly an effect or action he wants to happen ("Water to ice, water to ice"), and has managed to precede from this method ever since. At varying times he is able to cast spells merely by thinking, though they are limited most notably only to levitation, thought-casting, and illusion casting. Certain actions can also be done with gestures, such as flinging someone out of the way with the wave of his hand. Finally, his magic may be enhanced with magical objects, such as the amulet he wears around his neck which provides him with the ability to channel his magic.
  • [Electrokinesis]: Can manipulate, generate and discharge energy projections as either lightning or electricity from his hands or other parts of his body. Which gives him control over electric fields, electric charges, electric currents, electronics, and electromagnetism. This seems to not require the verbal components like his other spells. He is capable of combining or performing his electokinetic powers in unison with spells.
  • [Solid Energy Constructs]: Can generate and manipulate energy to create solid constructs such as disks, orbs, bursts, shields, platforms, force fields, and other projectiles or constructions.
  • [Flight]: Can engage in self-propelled flight.


Limitations:
  • [Inexperience]: Even though he is well versed in many simple areas of magic, he is still unable to enact more powerful spells as they require more magical power and training and can easily misuse a spell creating unpredictable results.
  • [Physical Condition]: His spells have a degree of unreliability, which is further affected by his physical condition: when well rested, in good health, and mentally and emotionally alert, he could cast numerous spells in rapid succession and attain desirable results for almost an hour.
  • [Overexertion]: Despite this enhanced precision, his spells are not necessarily guaranteed to work, particularly if he has been straining himself or using his powers excessively. If overextended, his spells could backfire, causing probability to work against his wishes or to undo previous spells.
  • [Mental Health]: Although he appears to be currently sane, his mental stability is questionable. He has undergone mental breakdowns, episodes of mental illness, and severe depression relating to his powers and personal traumas.


Weaknesses:
  • [Asafoetida]: Unique only to his family, Diego, along with the rest of the Belcourt family have an odd reaction when in contact with the herb Asafoetida. Within a few minutes after exposure through either inhalation or consumption, an uncontrollable shaking of the hands begins. It is possible to use magic to cleanse his system of the herb if done soon enough, but prolonged exposure leads to weakness, pain, anxiety and inability to concentrate, which further intereferes with his ability to cast the proper spell to rid his body of the substance. If not taken care of soon, the herb will slowly poison him.
  • [Amulet]: Even though the amulet he wears provides him with a conduit for his mystical energy, it also comes with a price. If deprived from his amulet for a sufficient period of time, he slowly becomes unable to cast spells properly and they will cease until the amulet is restored, leaving him powerless. If the amulet is destroyed, then he no longer has a conduit, which could lead him to being overwhelmed by his own mystical energies with unknown consequences.
  • [Water]: Due to the lack of experience, he is extremely sensitive to anything that may "short circuit" him, such as water, which could cause him to burn out.

Likes: Reading, Geography and The Sound of Music
Dislikes: The term "Warlock", Alcohol and Crowds

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Birthday: August 17, 2000

Nice job with the fixes, much better now, accepted

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Postby Scotatrova » Mon Feb 12, 2018 9:38 pm

Tomia wrote:Nice job with the fixes, much better now, accepted

Great!
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Postby Shastara » Mon Feb 12, 2018 9:47 pm

Tomia wrote:
Shastara wrote:Name: Crown Prince of Atlantis Rayokal Theoko/The Atlantai

The main thing is I think you need to describe alantian skin, since you describe the combat skin as an improvement on it. The other thing is I think you should develop his backstory right now, he kind of just reads like aquaman + Captain America, I'd like him to have a bit more depth. Though that second one is more of suggestion than a barrier to acceptance.


Well I was planning on flushing him out more in the RP, like have him wake up and go from there, should I just go ahead and proceed as if he's gotten his suit already or let that play our in RP? And I probably should have been more clear about the combat skin, theres the normal Atlantean combat skin/suit that the soldiers would use which is basically the same but without levitation. I'll add a picture of it and more specific details in an updated app

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Postby Tomia » Mon Feb 12, 2018 9:50 pm

Shastara wrote:
Tomia wrote:The main thing is I think you need to describe alantian skin, since you describe the combat skin as an improvement on it. The other thing is I think you should develop his backstory right now, he kind of just reads like aquaman + Captain America, I'd like him to have a bit more depth. Though that second one is more of suggestion than a barrier to acceptance.


Well I was planning on flushing him out more in the RP, like have him wake up and go from there, should I just go ahead and proceed as if he's gotten his suit already or let that play our in RP? And I probably should have been more clear about the combat skin, theres the normal Atlantean combat skin/suit that the soldiers would use which is basically the same but without levitation. I'll add a picture of it and more specific details in an updated app

More want his backstory fleshed out but ya I suppose you could do that in the IC. And cool, will look out for updated app

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Postby The Knockout Gun Gals » Mon Feb 12, 2018 9:54 pm

The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:Name: Jonathan Jackson

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Race: Human
Appearance (pics if possible):





Young Blood?: No
Bio:

Jonathan was a homeless man, a failure, some said. Jonathan was born as an orphan and transferred to many foster homes. Wasn't a drug addict, but let just say he had a hard life. His parents died in car accident, while his relatives weren't care much about him. He had a meager life, average grades in school, up until senior high. He sold drugs to afford for his own living condition. So yeah, basically a bad life in general. He was about to be graduated from high school when he was approached by MA’AT Project from Delta Pharmaceuticals who, in exchange for financial aid for him, would gave him a power and be experimented to achieved a perfect superhuman. Desperate for a purpose of life, he accepted the offer.

But the experiment was harsh, and it wasn't just him. At first, he though he was the perfect one, the perfect candidate. But later on, as he watched more experimental subjects he came to the conclusion that he was merely just another experimental subjects. The MA’AT Project gained control of an unknown extra-terrestrial symbiotic cells in their possession and eager to experimented on it. Jonathan was the lucky one user, though. Somehow the symbiote attached to him in one of these experiments and the symbiote greedily protected him from harms, as well as attempted a break-out from the experiment. In the ensuing conflict, a large explosive destruction happened and both Jonathan and the symbiote was presumed to be dead.

But it wasn't true.

Soon Jonathan resurfaced, having learned the limits of his symbiotic powers, and struggled to keep the control of his powers while he traveled in San Diego, again, without the purpose of life...
Powers:
  • Symbiote Costume: Jonathan's body has been attached with an extra-terrestrial symbiote, capable of bonding with his body and turned into a symbiotic power suit. The suit grants him additional strength, durability, the ability to climb buildings, and long jump.
  • Regenerative Healing Factor: The symbiote grants him the healing factor power, both the slow and passive mode as well as fast but aggressive and active mode. The passive mode will heal him, but slowly. While the active mode enabled him to absorb any living humans/creatures to absorb their life and transfer it to the user.

Limitations (Reasons why your char can’t end the universe):
  • The symbiote only grants power to Jonathan as long as it is attached to Jonathan. Without the symbiote, Jonathan is just a normal civilian.
  • The symbiote is a parasitic one, in order to survive the symbiote, Jonathan has to periodically absorb the life of living creatures to ease off the pain.

Weaknesses (Reasons why someone could kick their ass):
  • Enhanced Conditioning, but no Skill: Despite the enhanced physical conditioning, Jonathan is just a normal civilian with no backgrounds in martial arts, military, or have any knowledges of combat except for moves that he watches in TV/Movies. Thus, his capability is undermined by his lack of combat training.
  • The Symbiotic Nature: Again, the symbiote is a parasitic one, so while he can afford to use a significantly higher portion of power, his own life will be in danger.

Likes: Food, finding the purpose of life.
Dislikes: Killing people (but he has to, or his life will be in danger).
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TriStates wrote:Covenant declare a crusade, and wage jihad against the UNSC and Insurrectionists for 30 years.

So Covenant declare a crusade and then wage jihad? :p

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Postby Shastara » Mon Feb 12, 2018 9:58 pm

Tomia wrote:
Shastara wrote:
Well I was planning on flushing him out more in the RP, like have him wake up and go from there, should I just go ahead and proceed as if he's gotten his suit already or let that play our in RP? And I probably should have been more clear about the combat skin, theres the normal Atlantean combat skin/suit that the soldiers would use which is basically the same but without levitation. I'll add a picture of it and more specific details in an updated app

More want his backstory fleshed out but ya I suppose you could do that in the IC. And cool, will look out for updated app


Cool I'll touch more on his Atlantis life and then re submit if that'd work

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Postby Tomia » Mon Feb 12, 2018 10:03 pm

Shastara wrote:
Tomia wrote:More want his backstory fleshed out but ya I suppose you could do that in the IC. And cool, will look out for updated app


Cool I'll touch more on his Atlantis life and then re submit if that'd work

Yup works for me

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Postby New Finnish Republic » Mon Feb 12, 2018 10:43 pm

Link to the main page of One Shots is located here!

I'll continue to update this with new little one shots that come to my mind. I have a few ideas, but it's getting late and I need to go to bed. If anyone else wants to write little one shots as well, feel free to TG me you drafts or send them via email to yboneshots@gmail.com!
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Postby New Finnish Republic » Mon Feb 12, 2018 10:56 pm

Mission Title: The Smoking Gun
What heroes would be involved, if any?: Red
What Villains are involved, if any?: Marionette
Location(s): San Diego
What is the heroes’ objective, if any?: Prove Red's innocence of the allegations
What is the villains’ objective, if any?: Frame Red for a string of murders for reasons to be revealed later
Quick Summary(paragraph please): Marionette frames Red for a series of murders, causing the Young Blood to be kicked out of the group and sent to prison where he'll stay for the rest of his days until he's proven to be innocent...Or, if someone finds another way of getting him out of his chains.
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Mon Feb 12, 2018 11:55 pm

New Finnish Republic wrote:Mission Title: The Smoking Gun
What heroes would be involved, if any?: Red
What Villains are involved, if any?: Marionette
Location(s): San Diego
What is the heroes’ objective, if any?: Prove Red's innocence of the allegations
What is the villains’ objective, if any?: Frame Red for a string of murders for reasons to be revealed later
Quick Summary(paragraph please): Marionette frames Red for a series of murders, causing the Young Blood to be kicked out of the group and sent to prison where he'll stay for the rest of his days until he's proven to be innocent...Or, if someone finds another way of getting him out of his chains.


Seems like a pretty personal arc :P Scarce info too, but I get that, since I assume you want there to be twists in the story.

I dunno, maybe some more insight into what roles the others might play in either scorning Red or proving him innocent wouldn't be amiss. But I'll accept it as it is now. I'll throw it onto the archive later.
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Postby Auropa » Tue Feb 13, 2018 10:32 am

Heya all, I'm moving around for a bit and might end up being inactive for the next few days. Shouldn't really change much but figured I should give a quick heads up in case :3

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Tue Feb 13, 2018 11:59 am

Archive has been updated.

Auropa wrote:Heya all, I'm moving around for a bit and might end up being inactive for the next few days. Shouldn't really change much but figured I should give a quick heads up in case :3


Thanks for the heads-up!
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Postby The Knockout Gun Gals » Tue Feb 13, 2018 7:22 pm

I updated my newest character's app on its limitation. Generally he cannot absorbs anyone with superhuman powers that is naturally attached to them (so he cannot absorbs Captain America, but he can absorbs Ant-Man).
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TriStates wrote:Covenant declare a crusade, and wage jihad against the UNSC and Insurrectionists for 30 years.

So Covenant declare a crusade and then wage jihad? :p

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Tue Feb 13, 2018 9:03 pm

The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:I updated my newest character's app on its limitation. Generally he cannot absorbs anyone with superhuman powers that is naturally attached to them (so he cannot absorbs Captain America, but he can absorbs Ant-Man).


While I think that's a good limitation, when I suggested that you put some limits on his ability to absorb people I meant more in terms of it taking a long time to complete, or some way to interrupt it, or something along those lines. Basically I'm concerned about him being able to absorb people indiscriminately on a large scale.
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Postby The Knockout Gun Gals » Wed Feb 14, 2018 2:49 am

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:I updated my newest character's app on its limitation. Generally he cannot absorbs anyone with superhuman powers that is naturally attached to them (so he cannot absorbs Captain America, but he can absorbs Ant-Man).


While I think that's a good limitation, when I suggested that you put some limits on his ability to absorb people I meant more in terms of it taking a long time to complete, or some way to interrupt it, or something along those lines. Basically I'm concerned about him being able to absorb people indiscriminately on a large scale.


Okay, edited the app. Now I added the weakness of electricity, both as the main weakness and as something that can disrupt any absorption process.
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TriStates wrote:Covenant declare a crusade, and wage jihad against the UNSC and Insurrectionists for 30 years.

So Covenant declare a crusade and then wage jihad? :p

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Wed Feb 14, 2018 7:57 am

The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
While I think that's a good limitation, when I suggested that you put some limits on his ability to absorb people I meant more in terms of it taking a long time to complete, or some way to interrupt it, or something along those lines. Basically I'm concerned about him being able to absorb people indiscriminately on a large scale.


Okay, edited the app. Now I added the weakness of electricity, both as the main weakness and as something that can disrupt any absorption process.


'kay, that should be good enough, accepted.
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Postby Segral » Fri Feb 16, 2018 5:26 pm

Name: Li Yang Zhang
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Appearance (pics if possible):
Image

Young Blood?: Nada

Bio(Please treat this as a replacement for a writing sample. No more than a few paragraphs is necessary but it should be well written):

Powers:
  • Zodiac Power: Basically, depending on the current solar longitude or term, otherwise known as zodiac time, Li gets one of 12 powers and physiologies, based on the Chinese Zodiac.

    Rat: In this form, Li drastically shrinks in size, to three and a half feet. She grows larger, clawed feet, a large tail that can be used for whipping and snagging, and poison tipped fangs. Her speed is upped to a very fast 100 MPH, and she gets a modest agility boost.

    Ox: Contrary to the rat form, Li grows to a huge seven and a half feet, with much more muscular strength and a much broader frame. She also grows long, sharp horns. In this stage, she gains super strength, and can, with enough damage/adrenaline, go into a berserk mode, with super speed up to 50 MPH, strength, and durability.

    Tiger: Li grows about half a foot taller, and grows sharp claws on her hands and feet, as well as sharper teeth and more powerful jaws. She also gets a slight muscular boost in her legs, allowing for enhanced leaping ability. She has a few, assorted powers. The first is stealth and lightfootedness, meaning she doesn't make noise when she moves. The second is predator instincts, which give her heightened senses and tracking ability.

    Rabbit: Li shrinks down to four feet, but gains a lot of muscular strength in her legs, much more than the average human. Other than that, the only physiological changes are longer incisors, that are actually quite sharp, and longer ears, which giver her slightly enhanced hearing. In terms of powers, she has enhanced leaping ability, as well as super strength based solely in her legs, giving her extreme kangaroo-like kicking ability. She feels this one's kind of useless.

    Dragon: Now this is one of Li's favorites. She grows to 8 feet, with huge claws, fangs, a long spiked tail, and wings with a ten foot wingspan. She also becomes very scaly, and her eyes begin to shine, with bigger pupils. In terms of powers, she can fly short distances, use pyrokinesis, generated from her throat, and create sonic roars, similar to the Hadrian's abilities. All in all, pretty cool.

    Snake: Another favorite of Li's. She gets even more scales than before, and gets dilated pupils, with a long, sticky forked tongue. In terms of pure height, this one tops it at nine feet, as well as being decently muscular in her limbs. She gets extreme flexibility, as well as sticky skin, allowing her to stick to many surfaces, even glass for short periods. Her fangs are tipped with extremely deadly boomslang poison, and she can hurl this as a projectile whenever she wishes. However, her favorite tactic is choking, where she wraps around a dazed criminal and puts them in a chokehold.

    Horse: In horse, she grows to six and a half feet, but other than that, not much changes. Her fingers are flattened on the end to mini-hooves, and she grows a small, bushy tail, but that's about it. In terms of powers, she gets boosted stamina, endurance, and durability. She can take several bullets to normally fatal places before blacking out, and that might not even kill her. She can also run for up to an hour straight, and fight for long periods of time in drawn out combat.

    Goat: In goat, she grows a set of horns, longer than the ox as well as slightly curved. The same hoove-hands are created as the horse, and pupils are dilated. Despite this, her eyesight is enhanced slightly, as well as her sense of smell. In this form, she can go into unstoppable charge modes, where she runs forward at breakneck speed with the purpose of ramming someone into dust. This is very difficult to stop or slow, but it can be done.

    Monkey: This is probably Li's favorite form. She gets longer nails, as well as a tail that is able to support her entire weight, letting her swing and dead hang from anything she can get it around. In terms of powers, her palms and soles are stickier and able to grip better, as well as getting enhanced grip strength, balance, and gymnastics abilities. Basically, she becomes a human monkey, and it becomes good for aggroing enemies.

    Rooster: This is one of Lin's least favorite ones. She grows a long beak that can be used for pecking at close rage, as well as growing clawed talons that also help with climbing. She also grows wings, but ones that are smaller than the dragon ones. This one is a bit of interesting power. She can fly and do sonic voice at a toned down level compared to the dragon, but her sonic voice also has energizing properties. It can energize and wake up fallen or weary allies, and helps her act as a support ole, something she's not too fond of.

    Dog: The dog is another curious one. It acts like a muted tiger, with slightly duller and less forceful tooth and jaw, as well as less leaping ability, being a bit slower, and having the same sharpness of claw. But what makes the dog special is it's mental powers. Not only is it omnilingual and telepathic, it also has increased empathy and understanding, and can break down social cues easier. It also shares enhanced senses with the tiger, but at a lower level.

    Pig: In pig form, Li becomes much shorter and stockier, like a wrestler. She grows a small tail which doesn't have much use aside from tripping foes, and a snout that allows a heightened sense of smell. Other than that, there's not much else to be said. In terms of powers, however, it's interesting. She gets minor boosts in durability and speed, but what makes it special is her geomancy, allowing her to create, control, and sling mud in different forms at enemies, from balls to waves. She has mixed feelings on this one.

Limitations (Reasons why your char can’t end the universe):
  • (Insert Limitation)
  • (Insert Limitation)
    (Note, you do not have a maximum or minimum of 2 limitations. If you don’t need all those, delete them. If you need more, copy and paste.)

Weaknesses:
  • Plot Armor Magic: Li, in almost any form, cannot resist magic too well, as most of her forms rely on physical, non-magical attacks. Dragon and pig can combat magic, but other than that, she can be a sitting duck.
  • Mental Attacks: Li isn't resistant against telepathic attacks, and doesn't have any yet. These can be a flaw.
  • Size Matters: Some of Li's forms are small and physically weak, and can be overpowered by large, physically powerful foes.
  • Protectiveness: LI is extremely protective of her daughter, and come sometimes abandon reason or fly into battle just to help or save her.


Likes: Asian fusion, crime fighting, fortune telling, astrology, her daughter
Dislikes: Criminals, the Night Circus, American food, cats

Additional Information-
Birthday: May 23, 1992
Theme song: Battle theme
Favorite food: Sweet and Sour Pork, Traditional Cantonese Dish
Greatest fear: Becoming egotistical and straying to the wrong side
Last edited by Segral on Sun Feb 18, 2018 8:28 am, edited 5 times in total.
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