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Postby Charmera » Thu Dec 28, 2017 3:39 pm

Name: Alice Takeru, "Megamorph"
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Appearance (pics if possible): https://i.pinimg.com/736x/55/82/99/5582 ... -night.jpg
Young Blood?: Yee
Bio: Alice Takeru is the daughter of two scientists, Teiko "Tom" Takeru and Jane Wilson, a robotics and a biologist respectively. Alice made her parents proud by getting into the family buisness early and taking a special interest in biochemistry. Alice was a progidy and the family was an effective team, working together on some of the most famous inventions and eventually starting an incredibly successful company. Alice's involvement was limited by her age and experience, but she learned quick enough to eventually discover a method of shrinking and growing humans. Her father created nanobots which could administer the chemicals.

However, they soon encountered shadowy people who wanted the research of the Tekeru family. One night, Alice watched as her parents were kidnapped. Desperate to hide from the men coming after her, she drank the nanobots and shrank to escape from them. Now Alice seeks to root out her parents kidnappers and also stop as much crime as possible in her new persona "Megamorph".
Powers:
  • [Growing]: Alice can increase her size using the nanobots in her body at will.
  • [Shrinking]: Alice can decrease her size using the nanobots in her body at will.
  • [Grow/Shrink Bombs]: Alice has several bombs which either shrink or grow objects or people.
  • [Intelect]: Alice is a natural chemist and highly skilled in biochemistry.

Limitations:
  • [Growing]: Alice can increase her size up to 32 feet, though her capabilities have room for improvement.
  • [Shrinking]: Alice can decrease her size to, at minimum, the size of a mouse.
  • [Grow/Shrink Bombs]: Alice's growing and shrinking bombs are limited in amount.

Weaknesses:
  • [Limitations of Size]: Alice's size can limit her. If she's too big she can trip over things and if she's small she can be crushed.
  • [Electicity]: Alice can be shocked stuck into a size for anywhere from a minute to several hours if she is given enough electricity in her system.
[*][Temporary Growth]: Alice's bombs only work for a temporary amount of time, wearing off after about thirty seconds.

Likes: Science!, Learning,
Dislikes: Fools

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Postby Tomia » Thu Dec 28, 2017 3:49 pm

Charmera wrote:Name: Alice Takeru, "Megamorph"

I think the temporary part is a limit not a weaknesses, but that's not too big of a deal. Accepted
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Postby Yekrenia » Thu Dec 28, 2017 11:13 pm

Name:
- (Native Tyrussian): Tолжьерь Гидърцав ("Tolzher Gyd'rtsav"; the Tyrussian soft marker 'Ь/ь' softens the pronunciation of consonants; 'Ж/ж' is subsequently pronounced as a soft 'Z/z', and 'P/p' is pronounced as a soft 'er' sound)
- (Russian Variant): Монжера Гидиртсавич ("Monzhera Gidirtsavich")
- (English Variant): Timothy Gregerov
- (Military Codename / Alias): Benci ("Вълеци" / "V'letsi"; Tyrussian, "Bull")
- (Informal Nicknames): Invincible Ivan / Tsarist Master Chief / Tsar Fist / Lion of Dasan
Age: 29 Human/Kletterian Years
Gender: Male
Race: Kletterian
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Young Blood: No
Bio: Timothy Gregerov (aka, Benci) was called many things by his Kletterian and Human peers alike; evil was never truly one of them. Born in the small southern Tyrussian fishing town of Sov'ljask ("Совъляск"; lit. "Lone Star"), the soon-to-become blonde tsarist brute actually started out as a young troublemaker. The only son out of four daughters among his mother and father, Gregerov was originally seen as a promising yet humble child destined to become the ideal businessman; however, Gregerov metaphorically flipped all such promise upside its head.

While a bright student in school, Gregerov initially turned out to be a shrewd and aggressive kid by the age of 6-years-old (Kletterian), often getting involved into fights with other students and sometimes his teachers. Words never defined or explained Gregerov, rather his actions done all the dirty work, especially since he would emerge with fresh bruises and cuts after every fight, even the ones with his teachers. Constantly on the verge of being permanently expelled from school, Gregerov's parents - being ever so faithful that their son would eventually calm down and become the dreamed businessman - decided to put him in a Junior League boxing organization.

Unfortunately, Gregerov proved that embracing his fighting capabilities only made matters worse, since the Junior League only seemed to toughen him as well as making him increasingly aggressive. On the bright side, Gregerov at least had a place where he can contain his savagery and brutality, especially since his school began to see a decrease in violence and misbehavior; however, that was only so whenever Gregerov was around. Bullies, teachers, and innocent students alike were afraid of Gregerov, so much that the very same bullies that Gregerov pummeled in those years eventually began to get gang members involved to rid of the young Gregerov; however, that usually ended in Gregerov savagely murdering both bullies and the gangs alike in the span of several years, all of which were when he was 13-years-old - when he was in the 10th grade.

Consequently, while Gregerov inadvertently created a safer neighborhood, the town, the school, and the family eventually became too afraid to have the young Gregerov around anymore. So it was only reasonable that Gregerov's family would wave him goodbye and kick him out of the household once he graduated from school at the age 15-years-old; however, this action only resulted in Gregerov savagely beating and murdering his entire family (except his grandparents; whom were living elsewhere) on the night that he graduated from school...out of fear. Unsurprisingly, as an adult (standard coming of age among the Kletterian species is 15-years-old), Gregerov was arrested and found guilty for multiple accounts of first-degree murder and was sentenced on death row for the next few years awaiting the death penalty.

As the youngest Kletterian male to be convicted on death row under Imperial Tyrussia Jurisdiction, Gregerov was considered as one of the most feared and evil Kletterian males to ever walk the earth - not even the energy shielding and steel solitary doors could even shield his presence from the world. While in prison, Gregerov only became stronger both physically and mentally, hoping to eventually build enough strength to one day kill his executioners and escape prison; however, fate had other ideas for his future. One day, relatively a few months after his 18th birthday, Gregerov was greeted by a lawyer that brought him another ticket out of prison.

The Imperial Tyrussian Supreme Court reconsidered in giving Gregerov a retrial, this time charging him with life sentence without any chance of parole; however, the court also agreed to give Gregerov a plea bargain that would otherwise allow him to leave prison...though with one exception. Unbeknownst to Gregerov, this plea bargain was arranged by the Tyrussian military in secrecy, which was arranged so that he would fall under their ownership for their military experimentation programs. Stuck between a rock and a hard place, Gregerov subsequently requested that he need some time to think over the lawyer and the court's decisions.

Another year would pass before Gregerov eventually made his decision; however, the following decision he made was not only out of desperation, but also shame as well. Despite Gregerov's savagery and brutality, his fearsome strength and ferocity grew out of helplessness and desperation when he was a kid in school - his occasional returns from school with fresh bruises and cuts were actually self-defensive. Very few people realized that Gregerov was actually innocent and kind, which was only destroyed by the fact that Gregerov was harassed and humiliated by the school bullies and peers alike; so it only made sense from a philosophical standpoint that Gregerov would choose to join the military out of guilt and sorrow for inflecting so much harm and fear upon others.

Under the military's ownership and care, Gregerov was originally prepped to become an ordinary test subject for the Tyrussian military; however, Gregerov wasn't entirely oblivious to what was going on in his first few months in the military. Once again, Gregerov resorted to his own strength and ferocity to escape the military, hoping not to become a guinea pig for twisted super-soldier programs and testing. He was almost successful in escaping the military base he was kept captive in until he was finally worn down by the military itself; however, much to Gregerov's luck, two special visitors came to see him shortly after he was apprehended again.

Tsarina Georgia КВ (full name, "Tsarina Georgia the Unbreakable and the 22nd Tsarina of Tyrussia") and Fleet Admiral Tlatiya Kosbodil Ilja (Тлатия Косбодил Илья) had been secretly hearing about Gregerov's reputation and existence for a long time, ever since he was still a little boy in school. Now, finally seeing the very same boy grown up as a man who became a convict and prepped to become a test subject for Tyrussian military experiments. In Gregerov's eyes, he never thought that the Tsarina herself would meet him in person, since he expected for the Tsarina to look down upon with disgust for his actions; however, what he did not expect from the Tsarina and the Fleet Admiral was forgiveness and an opening to a new path in his life.

In a matter of months, Gregerov found himself attending a military officer academy, which eventually lead him to become a lieutenant among the Imperial Marines. Through months and eventually years of hard work and dedication to redeem himself and clear his name, the military and the supreme court were slow to forgive him for his crimes; however, it was in the year 6161 (2010 on Earth) that Gregerov and his species made history. The discovery of planet Earth and the human race provided Gregerov a new challenge in his quest for forgiveness, one that also put him back in the public spotlight.

While Gregerov was feared and frowned upon by the public on his native homeworld (Dasan), Gregerov's prestige and reputation was a different story on Earth - he was seen by his human counterparts as one of the many vanguards defending peace and cooperation between humanity and kletterian-kind. To the Russians, he was an inspiration to conscripts and recruits who have received training under his command; and to his fellow officers, he was seen as the pinnacle of how strong and big that a Kletterian can become. His criminal and violent upbringing may have defined who he became as a person, but his true intentions were never evil in the first place - rather he was the wrong person in the wrong place but at the right time...
Powers:
  • [Juggernaut Momentum]: User becomes/is a Juggernaut, described as a massive inexorable force, campaign, movement, or object that crushes whatever is in its path. By having this power they are an unstoppable force that crushes anyone or anything they face. In Benci's case, what Benci lacks in speed compared to his human counterpart, Benci's natural agility and maneuverability (not to be confused with flexibility as found in Kletterian females) evens the score. During his time in prison, Benci had been put to work in hard labor for only a year, where he was kept busy cutting and transporting timber during the hot summer and subzero winter of that same year. During the winter of that same year, he had to help freight trains get out of the dreaded Tyrussian ice and snow, which meant he had to literally push or pull said trains with his bare hands - his most successful feat in strength that would've required the strength of several or few more locomotives (not available at the time) or thousands of workers (not enough inmates; some were sick, some tried to escape, some had been killed accidentally or during failed escapes, and some were too busy in other hard labor jobs in that same winter). Through this feat in strength, Benci often exercised in the winter by pulling trains along, which gained him enough strength to eventually allow him to smash through walls; however, that is only as long as he can keep moving without turning.
  • [Enhanced Strength]: User has strength beyond that of a normal member of their species. As the tallest non-augmented Kletterian among his own species, and a pure-blooded boxer, Benci is a walking metaphorical mountain of muscle in the eyes of his species - a well-groomed and well-mannered monster to be exact. He often earns the nickname of 'Tsar Fist' among his fellow Kletterian peers for his muscle and size in the name of protecting and serving the Tsar. Otherwise, Benci is also known among the human species by many nicknames, some even poking fun; however, the lighthearted nature to some of Benci's nicknames are not meant to be taken lightly, since Benci has been known to easily best the toughest and meanest brutes that both humans and Kletterians have to offer. While Benci is not exactly imposing to all beings, and nor is he grotesquely muscular for an extraterrestrial man his size, Benci's superstrength have allowed him to accomplish amazing feats; such as, wrestling a pack of bears and wolves without breaking a sweat in the snow, punched his way through brick walls and bending steel beams with his bare hands, smashing tree to bits with nothing more than a single push kick, tear 304mm (1ft) thick armor plating with his bare hands, and his best feat being able to push/pull multi-hundred ton freight trains.
  • [Pain Suppression]: Users can block pain at will, are incapable of feeling pain or are highly resistant to physical pain of any kind, allowing them to think clearly and continue to move despite grievous injury. Users can think clearly, continue to move, ignore torture and generally function in situations where pain would disable a normal person. Benci has gained so much muscle from years of exercising and fights, that he had gained dense muscle mass. His muscle mass is so dense that blades and pistol bullets (alongside buckshot) hardly inflect any damage; even blunt weapons like maces and hammers struggle to smash his muscles and bones. Plus, as a native to the harsh Tyrussian winters, Benci is able to suppress the pain from changes in heat, which has allowed him to trek the harsh snow and ice like if he was walking through a beautiful flower field.

Limitations:
  • [Non-Augmented Powers]: For a Kletterian his size and age, he appears ordinary to humans; however, to his native Kletterians, Benci is a giant by comparison. His superstrength is the result of years of Junior League boxing, school and street fights, and as well as hardcore exercising (especially from being in prison). Otherwise, Benci is only but an ordinary Kletterian male with gifted natural strength.
  • [Difficult to build Momentum]: Unlike his human counterparts, Benci is a balance of strength and agility; however, because of his native Kletterian physiology and anatomy, Benci can't build any lateral momentum as quickly as his human counterparts. His natural maneuverability and agility as a Kletterian male may allow him to scale and traverse obstacles with ease, but that doesn't mean he can build enough momentum to smash his way through everything. Benci's 'Juggernaut Momentum' capabilities are highly sensitive to kinetic energy itself, which allows Benci's strength to become variable, and which is why Benci has to literally charge straight into his enemies in order to retain as much kinetic energy as possible. As long as Benci doesn't make any turns in any forward charges, Benci is unstoppable only for a short period of time before slowing down; however, any turn during any charge would subsequently stop him in his tracks, causing him to either smash his face into a wall or trip face first onto the ground. Otherwise, Benci would have to use his own superstrength in his strikes to smash through obstacles if he's too slow or stationary - which can be either inefficient or tiring after a while.
  • [Kinetic Energy vs Energy-based Entities]: There are very few things that can stop Benci his tracks; energy-based objects/entities are one of them. Energy shielding has been used commonplace in Kletterian prisons (for obvious reasons) and solar sails (to shield them from radiation, energy weapons, and space debris). In Benci's case, energy shielding had been used with success to contain Benci while he was both in prison and in the military's possession. Benci cannot smash his through energy shielding or particles, rather it will stop him dead in his tracks or knock him backwards. Energy weapons may not be able to kill him easily, but it can stop Benci and knock him out of the way.

Weaknesses:
  • [Inferior Speed]: (see species app for more info)
  • [No Smell]: (see species app for more info)
  • [Color Blind]: (see species app for more info)
  • [Gentle Giant]: Because of Benci's wrongful accusations of his actions, Benci has since been working hard to redeem himself and free him from his misunderstood upbringing. Since being forgiven by the Tsarina herself and Fleet Admiral Ilya, Benci had since been undergone rehabilitation and counseling to help him contain his own strength and emotions. Subsequently, when he eventually obtain the rank as lieutenant, Benci has become a gentle and caring individual, despite his intimidating display of physical strength - preferring to use his own physical strength only as a last resort. Plus, he would rather ask questions first and shoot later, which only cements his reputation as a gentle giant even further.
  • [Sentimental Psyche]: While a strongman and capable commander, Benci has since been mentally reminded by his past even after his redemption. While emotionally strong yet cold, Benci's judgement has often been clouded by the haunting day that he accidentally killed his family. Also, Benci is also haunted by how many people he had wrongfully killed only for him to wrongful accused as a murderer, which only reminds Benci to refrain from killing as many people as possible - even if it means to selfless preserve the safety and well-being to friend and foe alike.
  • [Stubborn as a Bull]: As a captain of the Tyrussian Marines, Benci's strength and heartiness had been capitalized by the military to mold him into a very capable commander. If his past isn't always clouding his judgement, Benci can be a very stubborn and blunt individual, often times being brutally direct and metaphorically sticking to his guns and guts even if it means going against military protocol. His military alias - Benci - has its blessings and curses; this stubbornness in mind is the curse. To an enemy commander's luck, Benci's stubbornness can provide he enemy time to make their move. For example, if Benci's own troops are more than ready to lead a charge against a fortified enemy position, Benci is going to deny permission, even if his troops have high morale and are willing to make the fateful sacrifice - a sacrifice that Benci can't accept.

Likes: Forests, Fishing, Snow, Towns, Horseback Riding, and Weight Lifting
Dislikes: Prisons, Extreme Heat, Thieves and Thugs, Terrorists, and Cities

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Birthday:
- (Earth Gregorian Calendar): August 1st 1988
- (Dasan Standard Calendar): 04/09/6494 (7 Months - or 8 to 9 months during leap years - with 48 to 52 Days Per Month)
Theme Song: Slavic Lion at Peace / Slavic Lion at War
Favorite Food: Borscht
Greatest Fear: Being Misunderstood and Labelled a Murderer
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Fri Dec 29, 2017 4:04 pm

Casimir just learned of her alien nature? The various nonhuman features didn't give it away? :P
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Postby Absolon-7 » Fri Dec 29, 2017 4:37 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Casimir just learned of her alien nature? The various nonhuman features didn't give it away? :P


He is not a bright man. :( Casimir just guessed she was a human born that way.

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Fri Dec 29, 2017 4:38 pm

Absolon-7 wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Casimir just learned of her alien nature? The various nonhuman features didn't give it away? :P


He is not a bright man. :( Casimir just guessed she was a human born that way.


Fair, I guess that's not unthinkable given the setting :P
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Postby Tomia » Fri Dec 29, 2017 8:43 pm

Yekrenia wrote:Name: Timothy Gregerov

There are a few things with this app.
First, I'm honestly kind of confused with his powers. Where did they come from exactly? It seems like he was born with them but then you say "he is the Kletterian's successful attempt at recreating the Juggernaut" so I'm not really sure. On top of this, it seems that he has super strength, but then you say "For a Kletterian his size and age, he appears ordinary to humans; however, to his native Kletterians, Benci is a giant by comparison" so does he actually have super strength compared to humans? Or is he just strong? The way you describe his strength I don't think it actually justifies him being a juggernaut in the way you define it.

Second, I would like some unique weaknesses, based on his powers, not just ones based the weaknesses of the race.

Third, I'd prefer you remove all references to Juggernaut, and Bane as well. Mostly in the nicknames but also just the constant references throughout the app not only make him seem like more of a copy than he is, but also just kind of push against the original nature of the universe. This last one is smaller than the first two but I'd still like it to be rectified.

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Postby Yekrenia » Sat Dec 30, 2017 1:52 am

Tomia wrote:
Yekrenia wrote:Name: Timothy Gregerov

There are a few things with this app.
First, I'm honestly kind of confused with his powers. Where did they come from exactly? It seems like he was born with them but then you say "he is the Kletterian's successful attempt at recreating the Juggernaut" so I'm not really sure. On top of this, it seems that he has super strength, but then you say "For a Kletterian his size and age, he appears ordinary to humans; however, to his native Kletterians, Benci is a giant by comparison" so does he actually have super strength compared to humans? Or is he just strong? The way you describe his strength I don't think it actually justifies him being a juggernaut in the way you define it.

Second, I would like some unique weaknesses, based on his powers, not just ones based the weaknesses of the race.

Third, I'd prefer you remove all references to Juggernaut, and Bane as well. Mostly in the nicknames but also just the constant references throughout the app not only make him seem like more of a copy than he is, but also just kind of push against the original nature of the universe. This last one is smaller than the first two but I'd still like it to be rectified.


(EDITED)

I'll admit, this app had been in the drafting stage for a few weeks, and I kind of gotten lost myself creating the app. I was split apart whether or not I should make Benci a super-soldier or just a misunderstood person with the power of strength in his hands. Ultimately, I chose to make Benci a character that would make him a misunderstood innocent person; however, as you can tell, I executed that plan with a big mess all around it.

"He is the Kletterian's successful attempt at recreating the Juggernaut,..." - REMOVED. I made up my mind that Benci would be born with super-strength, not be created as a super-soldier.

"For a Kletterian his size and age, he appears ordinary to humans; however, to his native Kletterians, Benci is a giant by comparison." - The average human stands at 5'10ft whereas the average kletterian stands at 5'2ft. To us (humans), Benci is nothing unique in terms of height and weight, hell there are other humans skinnier than him that tower over him. The only reason why no one dares to poke fun at his height is because of his super strength and muscle mass (which is so dense that it actually gives Benci the ability of pain suppression).

For a human male to be 6ft tall and 230lbs like Benci, they would be critically overweight, unless they were 6'5ft or greater. Much of Benci's body is made up of muscle and a mixture of fat, which is why Benci appears to have 'skinny' arms in his visual reference - he actually has a bearmode body type, which is rare amongst the Kletterian species (Kletterians are not known for being muscular powerhouses unlike humans). This is why Benci is seen as a giant to his native Kletterian people.

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Postby Tomia » Sat Dec 30, 2017 10:20 am

Yekrenia wrote:(EDITED)

I'll admit, this app had been in the drafting stage for a few weeks, and I kind of gotten lost myself creating the app. I was split apart whether or not I should make Benci a super-soldier or just a misunderstood person with the power of strength in his hands. Ultimately, I chose to make Benci a character that would make him a misunderstood innocent person; however, as you can tell, I executed that plan with a big mess all around it.

"He is the Kletterian's successful attempt at recreating the Juggernaut,..." - REMOVED. I made up my mind that Benci would be born with super-strength, not be created as a super-soldier.

"For a Kletterian his size and age, he appears ordinary to humans; however, to his native Kletterians, Benci is a giant by comparison." - The average human stands at 5'10ft whereas the average kletterian stands at 5'2ft. To us (humans), Benci is nothing unique in terms of height and weight, hell there are other humans skinnier than him that tower over him. The only reason why no one dares to poke fun at his height is because of his super strength and muscle mass (which is so dense that it actually gives Benci the ability of pain suppression).

For a human male to be 6ft tall and 230lbs like Benci, they would be critically overweight, unless they were 6'5ft or greater. Much of Benci's body is made up of muscle and a mixture of fat, which is why Benci appears to have 'skinny' arms in his visual reference - he actually has a bearmode body type, which is rare amongst the Kletterian species (Kletterians are not known for being muscular powerhouses unlike humans). This is why Benci is seen as a giant to his native Kletterian people.

Okay, I appreciate the removal and clarification. But I feel like the first part about how he has Juggernaut powers still isn't addressed. Based on how you're describing it, Benci for a human would just be an abnormally sized man with enhanced strength. I don't think that justifies your description of the power. Like it could make sense that he can pull a train. But I'm not sure why he could say, ram through a bank vault, or survive a direct hit of a missile fired from a tank. I think you're better off limiting this power to super strength and agility, and move away from the durability and momentum building style powers you're trying to use in the juggernaut section.
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Postby Tomia » Sun Dec 31, 2017 4:36 pm

Welp fight is over, better luck next time man bat. Great job on the first fight scene everyone!

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Sun Dec 31, 2017 5:45 pm

Tomia wrote:Welp fight is over, better luck next time man bat. Great job on the first fight scene everyone!


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Postby The Knockout Gun Gals » Sun Dec 31, 2017 10:31 pm

What kind of characters that is currently needed? Heroes or villains?
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So Covenant declare a crusade and then wage jihad? :p

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Postby Tomia » Sun Dec 31, 2017 10:53 pm

The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:What kind of characters that is currently needed? Heroes or villains?

I mean heroes are generally more likely to have interaction in this RP. So I'd probably say heroes.

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Postby The Knockout Gun Gals » Mon Jan 01, 2018 8:54 am

Name: Park In-hyun
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Appearance (pics if possible):

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Young Blood?: N/A, but aspiring to be one.
Bio:

Born in South Korea, but she was raised in United States. Her father was an ambassador of South Korea for United States, while her mother divorced him when she was mere 3 years old. However, it did good for her since her father raised her with compassion and love while also put her in the best educations he could afford. But even when she was young, she has a passion of rebellious nature and physical altercations with those she deemed as bullies/bad kids. Noticed that, her father put her in the training of martial arts, most of all to trained herself in self-defense instructions. All he ever wanted was a normal girl in the world of superpowers and maybe someone who contributed to the benefits of humanity, especially to the ones without powers.

Because he is not a human.

Her father was a vampire, immortal, though he developed the well-known quirk of scheduled meetings inside embassy/places and sometimes also on nights or when sun is no longer on the sky. He was a former warrior and mercenary, served with many kingdoms, factions, lords, even warlords and criminals. But the toll of never settled in, not having the love of his life, and unable to put himself in a suicide put him to the path of destructions and depressions. Finally, he joined Qing Dynasty and put his work on the path of compassions, putting his life in the dangers of humanity to save the humanity. Her mother was a vampire hunter, and they both met on the brutal and dangerous occasion. The two fell in love and able to married. They had a child, and she was the child. However, her mother's anti-vampire association came and knocked on the door, forcing her on the run, helped by her father and his connections. She, is a dhampir.

But the path of dangerous would never strayed much. She has the occasional thirst for blood, and her father trained her to keep her lust on check and told her everything. Promising that as soon as she is able to defend herself and shows that she is well-trained and able to put safety above all, she would be helpful for the happiness of her family and her parents. Thus, she was put in an even more brutal regiment of trainings. Now ready to take challenges and prove her worthiness, she is ready to face the world. But whether or not she can be accepted, that's another question.

One way or another.
Powers:
  • [Dhampir Physiology]: She is a dhampir, and thus has the physiology of dhampir, giving her enhanced strength, speed, agility, healing power, durability, senses, stamina. Also the ability of daywalking.
  • [Jump Ability]: Dhampir has no chance of developing flight ability like the vampires, but they are gifted with the power to jump. Jump really high and for a long jump too.
  • [Expert in Combat]: Marksmanship, combat training, you got it all on her.

Limitations (Reasons why your char can’t end the universe):
  • She is rather weak on resisting of her thirst on blood and while she is able to hold it out for 2 days, more than 2 days and she will fall to a blood frenzy.
  • Despite her training, she has yet to face a real enemy and while she has the skills to face the lesser-trained ones, she may not able to compete with those with experiences in combat trainings.

Weaknesses (Reasons why someone could kick their ass):
  • Her combat and marksmanship are not quite on the high level, so she is defenseless or rather outperformed when facing against better-trained enemies.
  • She has her own limits on the temptations of blood from humans out on the streets, she could be baited by blood. She has less weaknesses than normal vampire due to her not entirely a vampire.

Likes: Blood, coffee, reading, chess.
Dislikes: Vampire hunters, bad vampires and dhampirs.

Additional Information (Optional; remove if unused)-
Birthday: February 14th.
Theme song: Thousand Eyes
Favorite food: Blood. Sandwiches.
Greatest fear: Death.
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So Covenant declare a crusade and then wage jihad? :p

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Tue Jan 02, 2018 4:20 pm

The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:Name: Park In-hyun
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Appearance (pics if possible):




Young Blood?: N/A, but aspiring to be one.
Bio:

Born in South Korea, but she was raised in United States. Her father was an ambassador of South Korea for United States, while her mother divorced him when she was mere 3 years old. However, it did good for her since her father raised her with compassion and love while also put her in the best educations he could afford. But even when she was young, she has a passion of rebellious nature and physical altercations with those she deemed as bullies/bad kids. Noticed that, her father put her in the training of martial arts, most of all to trained herself in self-defense instructions. All he ever wanted was a normal girl in the world of superpowers and maybe someone who contributed to the benefits of humanity, especially to the ones without powers.

Because he is not a human.

Her father was a vampire, immortal, though he developed some resistances against sunlight and thus developed schedules of meeting on nights. He was a former warrior and mercenary, served with many kingdoms, factions, lords, even warlords and criminals. But the toll of never settled in, not having the love of his life, and unable to put himself in a suicide put him to the path of destructions and depressions. Finally, he joined Qing Dynasty and put his work on the path of compassions, putting his life in the dangers of humanity to save the humanity. Her mother was a vampire hunter, and they both met on the brutal and dangerous occasion. The two fell in love and able to married. They had a child, and she was the child. However, her mother's anti-vampire association came and knocked on the door, forcing her on the run, helped by her father and his connections. She, is a dhampir.

But the path of dangerous would never strayed much. She has the occasional thirst for blood, and her father trained her to keep her lust on check and told her everything. Promising that as soon as she is able to defend herself and shows that she is well-trained and able to put safety above all, she would be helpful for the happiness of her family and her parents. Thus, she was put in an even more brutal regiment of trainings. Now ready to take challenges and prove her worthiness, she is ready to face the world. Young Blood is a path of heroism she could take on, as she aspired to be a hero. But whether or not she can be accepted, that's another question.

One way or another.
Powers:
  • [Dhampir Physiology]: She is a dhampir, and thus has the physiology of dhampir, giving her enhanced strength, speed, agility, healing power, durability, senses, stamina. Also the ability of daywalking.
  • [Expert in Combat]: Marksmanship, combat training, you got it all on her.

Limitations (Reasons why your char can’t end the universe):
  • She is rather weak on resisting of her thirst on blood and while she is able to hold it out for 2 days, more than 2 days and she will fall to a blood frenzy.
  • Despite her training, she has yet to face a real enemy and while she has the skills to face the lesser-trained ones, she may not able to compete with those with experiences in combat trainings.

Weaknesses (Reasons why someone could kick their ass):
Same as above[/list]

Likes: Blood, coffee, reading, chess.
Dislikes: Vampire hunters, bad vampires and dhampirs.

Additional Information (Optional; remove if unused)-
Birthday: February 14th.
Theme song: Thousand Eyes
Favorite food: Blood. Sandwiches.
Greatest fear: Death.


The powers and limitations in this app seem fine, but I'd like some unique weaknesses as well to finish rounding out the character. I should also note that the Young Bloods haven't formed yet (a two-week timeskip is coming after which they will have officially formed, but even then they'll be practically unheard of everywhere), and that vampires can't develop resistance to sunlight.

Spare the above details, the app looks fine.
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Postby Segral » Tue Jan 02, 2018 4:57 pm

TKGG has arrived!
yea bro idk

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Tue Jan 02, 2018 7:21 pm

ANxieTy CAFE wrote:Nathan sighed, but still hoped people remembered what he said and he wouldn't have to repeat it.


With the amount of redundancy in the current scene I wouldn't count on it :P
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Postby The Knockout Gun Gals » Wed Jan 03, 2018 5:33 am

The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:Name: Park In-hyun
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Appearance (pics if possible):




Young Blood?: N/A, but aspiring to be one.
Bio:

Born in South Korea, but she was raised in United States. Her father was an ambassador of South Korea for United States, while her mother divorced him when she was mere 3 years old. However, it did good for her since her father raised her with compassion and love while also put her in the best educations he could afford. But even when she was young, she has a passion of rebellious nature and physical altercations with those she deemed as bullies/bad kids. Noticed that, her father put her in the training of martial arts, most of all to trained herself in self-defense instructions. All he ever wanted was a normal girl in the world of superpowers and maybe someone who contributed to the benefits of humanity, especially to the ones without powers.

Because he is not a human.

Her father was a vampire, immortal, though he developed the well-known quirk of scheduled meetings inside embassy/places and sometimes also on nights or when sun is no longer on the sky. He was a former warrior and mercenary, served with many kingdoms, factions, lords, even warlords and criminals. But the toll of never settled in, not having the love of his life, and unable to put himself in a suicide put him to the path of destructions and depressions. Finally, he joined Qing Dynasty and put his work on the path of compassions, putting his life in the dangers of humanity to save the humanity. Her mother was a vampire hunter, and they both met on the brutal and dangerous occasion. The two fell in love and able to married. They had a child, and she was the child. However, her mother's anti-vampire association came and knocked on the door, forcing her on the run, helped by her father and his connections. She, is a dhampir.

But the path of dangerous would never strayed much. She has the occasional thirst for blood, and her father trained her to keep her lust on check and told her everything. Promising that as soon as she is able to defend herself and shows that she is well-trained and able to put safety above all, she would be helpful for the happiness of her family and her parents. Thus, she was put in an even more brutal regiment of trainings. Now ready to take challenges and prove her worthiness, she is ready to face the world. But whether or not she can be accepted, that's another question.

One way or another.
Powers:
  • [Dhampir Physiology]: She is a dhampir, and thus has the physiology of dhampir, giving her enhanced strength, speed, agility, healing power, durability, senses, stamina. Also the ability of daywalking.
  • [Expert in Combat]: Marksmanship, combat training, you got it all on her.

Limitations (Reasons why your char can’t end the universe):
  • She is rather weak on resisting of her thirst on blood and while she is able to hold it out for 2 days, more than 2 days and she will fall to a blood frenzy.
  • Despite her training, she has yet to face a real enemy and while she has the skills to face the lesser-trained ones, she may not able to compete with those with experiences in combat trainings.

Weaknesses (Reasons why someone could kick their ass):
  • Her combat and marksmanship are not quite on the high level, so she is defenseless or rather outperformed when facing against better-trained enemies.
  • She has her own limits on the temptations of blood from humans out on the streets, she could be baited by blood.

Likes: Blood, coffee, reading, chess.
Dislikes: Vampire hunters, bad vampires and dhampirs.

Additional Information (Optional; remove if unused)-
Birthday: February 14th.
Theme song: Thousand Eyes
Favorite food: Blood. Sandwiches.
Greatest fear: Death.


Finished.
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TriStates wrote:Covenant declare a crusade, and wage jihad against the UNSC and Insurrectionists for 30 years.

So Covenant declare a crusade and then wage jihad? :p

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Postby New Finnish Republic » Wed Jan 03, 2018 11:42 am

So I'm guessing now we're officially starting the team then? I'm hoping to have a set-up similar to how I remember the Teen Titans show back in the day.
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Wed Jan 03, 2018 2:33 pm

New Finnish Republic wrote:So I'm guessing now we're officially starting the team then? I'm hoping to have a set-up similar to how I remember the Teen Titans show back in the day.


I remember the show, but how exactly do you mean the setup should be similar? We have an island with a tower in it if that's what you were concerned about :P
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Postby New Finnish Republic » Wed Jan 03, 2018 3:18 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
New Finnish Republic wrote:So I'm guessing now we're officially starting the team then? I'm hoping to have a set-up similar to how I remember the Teen Titans show back in the day.


I remember the show, but how exactly do you mean the setup should be similar? We have an island with a tower in it if that's what you were concerned about :P


Individual rooms for all the members, training areas, group areas, etc.
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Wed Jan 03, 2018 5:02 pm

New Finnish Republic wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
I remember the show, but how exactly do you mean the setup should be similar? We have an island with a tower in it if that's what you were concerned about :P


Individual rooms for all the members, training areas, group areas, etc.


Yeah I think that should be covered.
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Postby The Greater Dutch Imperium » Wed Jan 03, 2018 5:25 pm

1: Are you guys still accepting people?
2: Is Magic a thing and can I have it?
Never mind
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Wed Jan 03, 2018 5:27 pm

The Greater Dutch Imperium wrote:1: Are you guys still accepting people?
2: Is Magic a thing and can I have it?


Yes, and yes, that's detailed in the OP, make sure to read it before applying.
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Postby The Greater Dutch Imperium » Wed Jan 03, 2018 5:29 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
The Greater Dutch Imperium wrote:1: Are you guys still accepting people?
2: Is Magic a thing and can I have it?


Yes, and yes, that's detailed in the OP, make sure to read it before applying.

Well I've done this RP before. A long time ago. Under a different account. I THINK I was a good witch that used black magic. Or maybe I'm thinking of the wrong RP.
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