Shadowwell wrote:Darksworth wrote:.
Edited;
(Hopefully) Fixed the military pop. count and added more details in the "History" section.
So, though the app is nice, I like seeing races that do not confirm to the norm, but, the major prolem is your numbers. The Enslaved races would still count towards your total population, which cannot exceed 1 Trillion.
Likewise your Military, is limited to 3% of your total population, which would be a few tens of billions, not over a trillion as you currently have it. Additionally, though your the main species does not take a major role in combat, you should still probably detail their troops a bit. Also, perhaps, specify what of your Space ships equate to which class/role/type of ship.
I think what was wanted, for your history, was just more details. Originally it read a bit like a flavor-texty summary, rather than the history that was wanted, it is certainly better now.
I am not the OP, or a Co-OP, but what i said, should be ok to take into account.
Yeah, I got you fam
Fixed the military pop. count
As for detailing the ground troops, the Vor'Saktenus only infantry unit/division composing of themselves is the common Vorus Soldier equipped with only either of the two standard infantry weapons listed in the app. Very rarely deployed and are only used as a direct-assessment type of deal for the Grand Conscious to analyze the battle. The thing is very simple and I didn't feel like I need to clog up the App more with that kind of non-intricate infantry. I do have plans to add in alien tanks and armored divisions piloted directly by the Vor-Saktenus if I have the time and imagination.
Now, for the ship-class specifications jumble. I made this spacecrafts to not be standard-base military weapons of enormous sizes but instead are just research, experimentation-purposed and deep-space exploration mega-structures that moves. They do have some heavy-grade weapons that slightly defines them but not anything worth mentioning. Classifying them using the Human/Terran standards of ship-specifications is like, trying to fit the apple in the Animal kingdom.
Sorry for such the flavour-texty and short history, I plan to expand on it by having people RP on trying to actually know them. Also, because I wasn't in the mood to form an alien-esque historically-complex civilization from scratch during the time. I'll see if I can expand on it in my free time.