New Civilizations [OOC | Open]

[Holy Tedalonia]

Posted part 1 please tell problems

Oh great now it's going to be the re-rise of the Tzars

I'm going to make Slavonia a parliamentary monarchy, much like the IRL UK.

Slavonia

[G-Tech Corporation]

+1. Looks good- no problems that I could see.

Ooh, Tsar of Tsars. That would be a good addition to the Emperor's titles. I'll have to remember that for the future.

Hey before you became the Imperium what was your kingdom name?

There was none- Viktor went from prominent merchant-warrior in Mara, to protector of Mara and several nearby areas, to "Emperor", which at the time was just accounted as a title for a chief of chiefs. There were no kingdoms, no lords, no political systems prior to Viktor's arrival.

[Revlona]

Posted part 1 please tell problems

Oh great now it's going to be the re-rise of the Tzars

+1. Looks good- no problems that I could see.

Ooh, Tsar of Tsars. That would be a good addition to the Emperor's titles. I'll have to remember that for the future.

Would you mind if I skipped ahead to when the Engineers,artists etc etc start to arrive in Brittany?

[Leninist South Africa]

Not sure how I should feel about Scythia.

I want to form something as close to an ideal Russia as possible, but I don't want to piss anyone off at the moment lol.

Yes. I doubt they will bother you, with Cristo being lazy and not posting, but it is worth noting.

Also, I should, as OP, technically question your character's progress in a single day. Knapping a stone is a mostly lost art, and without a good stone for his tools your Author will struggle to fell a single tree in a day, let alone multiple. Additionally, I'm not aware of any vines in Russia, and doubt your character would be able to catch a fish with no tools.

On a random sidenote, should I make a Discord for all of us?

Personally I would prefer not- OOCs that turn to Discord tend not to attract new posters, and usually lead to dead RPs.

Russia does actually have vines.
Fallopia baldschanica

Also, it is viable for me to chop down a tree with a stone axe, called an adze.

[G-Tech Corporation]

+1. Looks good- no problems that I could see.

Ooh, Tsar of Tsars. That would be a good addition to the Emperor's titles. I'll have to remember that for the future.

Would you mind if I skipped ahead to when the Engineers,artists etc etc start to arrive in Brittany?

Honestly, I would prefer if you spent some time RPing your character's reaction to the events, pacifying the remaining rebel sentiment, and whatnot. You're already quite far ahead of most posters in the RP in terms of timescale.

Though, it won't take more than a week or two for the first ships to begin arriving. They'll likely start work on constructing ports/forts in northern Brittany to help with passage between Brittany and the rest of the Imperium.

[G-Tech Corporation]

Russia does actually have vines.
Fallopia baldschanica

Also, it is viable for me to chop down a tree with a stone axe, called an adze.

It is- if that adze is sharp. Do you know how to sharpen a stone tool? How to identify flint rocks for a proper cutting edge?

[Revlona]

Would you mind if I skipped ahead to when the Engineers,artists etc etc start to arrive in Brittany?

Honestly, I would prefer if you spent some time RPing your character's reaction to the events, pacifying the remaining rebel sentiment, and whatnot. You're already quite far ahead of most posters in the RP in terms of timescale.

Though, it won't take more than a week or two for the first ships to begin arriving. They'll likely start work on constructing ports/forts in northern Brittany to help with passage between Brittany and the rest of the Imperium.

Alright seems good.


And until the Trust between Brittany and the Imperium is high enough manning these forts with my own men

[G-Tech Corporation]

Honestly, I would prefer if you spent some time RPing your character's reaction to the events, pacifying the remaining rebel sentiment, and whatnot. You're already quite far ahead of most posters in the RP in terms of timescale.

Though, it won't take more than a week or two for the first ships to begin arriving. They'll likely start work on constructing ports/forts in northern Brittany to help with passage between Brittany and the rest of the Imperium.

Alright seems good.


And until the Trust between Brittany and the Imperium is high enough manning these forts with my own men

Hmm, well, by law those forts will be manned by Stalwarts, professional soldiers drawn from the local population.

Though to be fair, anything more sophisticated than a palisade will take time build. You have to place mines, get quarries running, drag stone all the way to your build sites, and whatnot.

[Revlona]

Alright seems good.


And until the Trust between Brittany and the Imperium is high enough manning these forts with my own men

Hmm, well, by law those forts will be manned by Stalwarts, professional soldiers drawn from the local population.

Though to be fair, anything more sophisticated than a palisade will take time build. You have to place mines, get quarries running, drag stone all the way to your build sites, and whatnot.

True

[Leninist South Africa]

Russia does actually have vines.
Fallopia baldschanica

Also, it is viable for me to chop down a tree with a stone axe, called an adze.

It is- if that adze is sharp. Do you know how to sharpen a stone tool? How to identify flint rocks for a proper cutting edge?

NVM then, it seems I'm stuck up shitcreek without a paddle.

[Skarten]

Full Name:Yaroshima Morikazu
Age:30
Appearance:-Will Add Later-
Height and Weight:1.90 Meters,70 KG
Religion:Christian
Field of Expertise:History
Skills and Strengths:Yaroshima was born a son of a wealthy Farm-Owner, which means he learned a lot about agriculture. He has gone to school to learn Alchemy and Mining (Mostly because he liked the subject, and he already had his father's farm to take over as a job,so..)And he has a hobbie of being a Gunsmith (He likes Old weapons that use gunpowder and Common swords)
Weaknesses:Rather Physically Weak.
Where in the world are you landing?:Western Kyushu,Japan
RP Sample:Will add Soon

[G-Tech Corporation]

It is- if that adze is sharp. Do you know how to sharpen a stone tool? How to identify flint rocks for a proper cutting edge?

NVM then, it seems I'm stuck up shitcreek without a paddle.

It's perfectly possible that your character learns to knap over time. But you should probably start near civilization if you don't want your Author starving.

Full Name:Yaroshima Morikazu
Age:30
Appearance:-Will Add Later-
Height and Weight:1.90 Meters,70 KG
Religion:Christian
Field of Expertise:History
Skills and Strengths:Yaroshima was born a son of a wealthy Farm-Owner, which means he learned a lot about agriculture. He has gone to school to learn Alchemy and Mining (Mostly because he liked the subject, and he already had his father's farm to take over as a job,so..)And he has a hobbie of being a Gunsmith (He likes Old weapons that use gunpowder and Common swords)
Weaknesses:Rather Physically Weak.
Where in the world are you landing?:Western Kyushu,Japan
RP Sample:Will add Soon

Let's see here. Two things off the bat: "History" is ah extremely broad area to be an expert in. Also, Mining and Alchemy aren't actually subjects someone can go to university for. All in all, this seems, no offense, like an unrealistic application designed as wish fulfillment. That's not really the premise of this RP.

[Kingdom of Tunisia]

Deep isn't it?

[Skarten]

NVM then, it seems I'm stuck up shitcreek without a paddle.

It's perfectly possible that your character learns to knap over time. But you should probably start near civilization if you don't want your Author starving.

Full Name:Yaroshima Morikazu
Age:30
Appearance:-Will Add Later-
Height and Weight:1.90 Meters,70 KG
Religion:Christian
Field of Expertise:History
Skills and Strengths:Yaroshima was born a son of a wealthy Farm-Owner, which means he learned a lot about agriculture. He has gone to school to learn Alchemy and Mining (Mostly because he liked the subject, and he already had his father's farm to take over as a job,so..)And he has a hobbie of being a Gunsmith (He likes Old weapons that use gunpowder and Common swords)
Weaknesses:Rather Physically Weak.
Where in the world are you landing?:Western Kyushu,Japan
RP Sample:Will add Soon

Let's see here. Two things off the bat: "History" is ah extremely broad area to be an expert in. Also, Mining and Alchemy aren't actually subjects someone can go to university for. All in all, this seems, no offense, like an unrealistic application designed as wish fulfillment. That's not really the premise of this RP.

Well he's a son of a wealthy farm owner, so he can do any type of course really.
Not really A "College" But one of those little courses.
Why?
For the glory of Capitalism of course
Plus i'm pretty Expert at history. Best in all my classes/School since 5th Grade (In my country it's not really history until 5th Grade)

[Revlona]

It's perfectly possible that your character learns to knap over time. But you should probably start near civilization if you don't want your Author starving.



Let's see here. Two things off the bat: "History" is ah extremely broad area to be an expert in. Also, Mining and Alchemy aren't actually subjects someone can go to university for. All in all, this seems, no offense, like an unrealistic application designed as wish fulfillment. That's not really the premise of this RP.

Well he's a son of a wealthy farm owner, so he can do any type of course really.
Not really A "College" But one of those little courses.
Why?
For the glory of Capitalism of course
Plus i'm pretty Expert at history. Best in all my classes/School since 5th Grade (In my country it's not really history until 5th Grade)

You pretty much have to have a degree in something for us to call you an expert in it.

And like G-tech said, history is a broad term, is it military history? Japanese history? American history?

[G-Tech Corporation]

Deep isn't it?

Also deep

It's perfectly possible that your character learns to knap over time. But you should probably start near civilization if you don't want your Author starving.



Let's see here. Two things off the bat: "History" is ah extremely broad area to be an expert in. Also, Mining and Alchemy aren't actually subjects someone can go to university for. All in all, this seems, no offense, like an unrealistic application designed as wish fulfillment. That's not really the premise of this RP.

Well he's a son of a wealthy farm owner, so he can do any type of course really.
Not really A "College" But one of those little courses.
Why?
For the glory of Capitalism of course
Plus i'm pretty Expert at history. Best in all my classes/School since 5th Grade (In my country it's not really history until 5th Grade)

I'm not really interested in what he 'could' have taken as much as in what you, as a writer, can portray in a believable manner. Real people study for years to become experts in a very specific subset of history, say, the military history of Greece. One person will not be an expert in general history, period, anymore than one person will be an expert in "engineering", or "fighting".

Again, alchemy isn't an actual thing that can be learned in university. Neither is mining. Perhaps you aren't in college yet- that's perfectly fine. I would simply ask you to rework your application to include what you personally are capable of. If you want to be a gunsmith and have done a bit of reading in the topic that is great, but don't include something like "can make guns" unless it is a process you could actually replicate from your own mind without a cheeky Google.

[Kingdom of Tunisia]

Deep isn't it?

Also deep

Well he's a son of a wealthy farm owner, so he can do any type of course really.
Not really A "College" But one of those little courses.
Why?
For the glory of Capitalism of course
Plus i'm pretty Expert at history. Best in all my classes/School since 5th Grade (In my country it's not really history until 5th Grade)

I'm not really interested in what he 'could' have taken as much as in what you, as a writer, can portray in a believable manner. Real people study for years to become experts in a very specific subset of history, say, the military history of Greece. One person will not be an expert in general history, period, anymore than one person will be an expert in "engineering", or "fighting".

Again, alchemy isn't an actual thing that can be learned in university. Neither is mining. Perhaps you aren't in college yet- that's perfectly fine. I would simply ask you to rework your application to include what you personally are capable of. If you want to be a gunsmith and have done a bit of reading in the topic that is great, but don't include something like "can make guns" unless it is a process you could actually replicate from your own mind without a cheeky Google.

I meant the IC post.

[Skarten]

Deep isn't it?

Also deep

Well he's a son of a wealthy farm owner, so he can do any type of course really.
Not really A "College" But one of those little courses.
Why?
For the glory of Capitalism of course
Plus i'm pretty Expert at history. Best in all my classes/School since 5th Grade (In my country it's not really history until 5th Grade)

I'm not really interested in what he 'could' have taken as much as in what you, as a writer, can portray in a believable manner. Real people study for years to become experts in a very specific subset of history, say, the military history of Greece. One person will not be an expert in general history, period, anymore than one person will be an expert in "engineering", or "fighting".

Again, alchemy isn't an actual thing that can be learned in university. Neither is mining. Perhaps you aren't in college yet- that's perfectly fine. I would simply ask you to rework your application to include what you personally are capable of. If you want to be a gunsmith and have done a bit of reading in the topic that is great, but don't include something like "can make guns" unless it is a process you could actually replicate from your own mind without a cheeky Google.

Just a online example.
http://www.alchemystudy.com/
Well, it's that College is different where i live. I'm in college, but college in brazil here is weird.
Thanks good it's free tho

[G-Tech Corporation]

Also deep



I'm not really interested in what he 'could' have taken as much as in what you, as a writer, can portray in a believable manner. Real people study for years to become experts in a very specific subset of history, say, the military history of Greece. One person will not be an expert in general history, period, anymore than one person will be an expert in "engineering", or "fighting".

Again, alchemy isn't an actual thing that can be learned in university. Neither is mining. Perhaps you aren't in college yet- that's perfectly fine. I would simply ask you to rework your application to include what you personally are capable of. If you want to be a gunsmith and have done a bit of reading in the topic that is great, but don't include something like "can make guns" unless it is a process you could actually replicate from your own mind without a cheeky Google.

Just a online example.
http://www.alchemystudy.com/
Well, it's that College is different where i live. I'm in college, but college in brazil here is weird.
Thanks good it's free tho

Erm, excuse my incredulity, but as a man of science that website looks like... bunk.

[Kingdom of Tunisia]

So, GT was my post good or does it need some work?

[G-Tech Corporation]

So, GT was my post good or does it need some work?

It looked good, though you'll probably need a better reason for not being executed than "it was a joke bro!". Perhaps they intended to execute the Author, but were interrupted by the attack? It also begs the question of why the Author is the new chief instead of the chief's son/brother/trusted friend.

[Ulls]

So, GT was my post good or does it need some work?

It looked good, though you'll probably need a better reason for not being executed than "it was a joke bro!". Perhaps they intended to execute the Author, but were interrupted by the attack? It also begs the question of why the Author is the new chief instead of the chief's son/brother/trusted friend.

Because he did what Jeb did and took it by force? Though the Author doesn't look like a warlike character.

[G-Tech Corporation]

It looked good, though you'll probably need a better reason for not being executed than "it was a joke bro!". Perhaps they intended to execute the Author, but were interrupted by the attack? It also begs the question of why the Author is the new chief instead of the chief's son/brother/trusted friend.

Because he did what Jeb did and took it by force? Though the Author doesn't look like a warlike character.

Nah, he didn't take it by force- the chief he lied to got shot and for some reason made his character chief as he lay dying. No real reason for that except something about trying to fight the attackers.

[Ulls]

Because he did what Jeb did and took it by force? Though the Author doesn't look like a warlike character.

Nah, he didn't take it by force- the chief he lied to got shot and for some reason made his character chief as he lay dying. No real reason for that except something about trying to fight the attackers.

Huh, well I'm sending an expedition to Olog, and I do think he is in New Jersey or close to it so he can intercept me and get see if I can get an alliance and help him with crafting iron tools.

[Leninist South Africa]

Can I post my next day?