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by Australian rePublic » Mon Mar 06, 2017 2:27 am
by Candlewhisper Archive » Mon Mar 06, 2017 3:46 am
Lamebrainia wrote:Option #1:scrappage of inefficient older vehicles
That's overkill, as far as I'm concerned. "Scrappage" already implies "inefficient" and "older".
by Trotterdam » Mon Mar 06, 2017 12:25 pm
by Trotterdam » Mon Mar 06, 2017 10:23 pm
by Ransium » Tue Mar 07, 2017 1:41 am
Trotterdam wrote:In #683 option 1, "@@ANIMALPLURAL@@ Vs Skeletons" neglects to capitalize the macro like it should. (Also, I'd be inclined to put "vs" in all-lowercase, but that's more a matter of style.)
by Candlewhisper Archive » Tue Mar 07, 2017 8:05 am
Trotterdam wrote:In #683 option 1, "@@ANIMALPLURAL@@ Vs Skeletons" neglects to capitalize the macro like it should. (Also, I'd be inclined to put "vs" in all-lowercase, but that's more a matter of style.)
by Gandoor » Tue Mar 07, 2017 10:59 am
by Ransium » Tue Mar 07, 2017 1:24 pm
Gandoor wrote:I might be wrong about this, but in Issue 683, option 3, 'If students in @@CAPITAL@@ school district want to learn about programming, great.', shouldn't there be a 'the' before @@CAPITAL@@? Because it reads odd for me. (Unless this was done deliberately in-case someone's capital already starts with 'The'?)
by Tinhampton » Tue Mar 07, 2017 3:45 pm
by Lamebrainia » Wed Mar 08, 2017 2:19 am
As far as I know, things can be implemented either "in" or "within" something, not "into". It's not a transferring action.implemented into
I know names are randomised, but this one here is going to be very confusing to a Slavic reader: female surnames have genders in most Slavic languages, and running the male surname with an obviously female name is a bad idea. Real-life women from Slavic countries don't enjoy this usually.rants Ivanka Dimitrov
There should be a comma after "properly".If done properly
An article is missing here. "the old arcade game", perhaps?of old arcade game
Not quite sure, but shouldn't "district" be here instead of "distinct"?rural school distinct
No hyphen needed: it's a verb.butt-out
by Candlewhisper Archive » Wed Mar 08, 2017 4:13 am
Tinhampton wrote:Option #633.4 (the one that lets your nation's citizens vote for the new national anthem) effect line: "Citizens have voted the song "Leader Smells Like A horse" as their new national anthem."
Shouldn't that be "Leader Smells Like A Horse" with a capital H? (My national animal is the "horse", all in lower-case.)
by Candlewhisper Archive » Wed Mar 08, 2017 4:32 am
As far as I know, things can be implemented either "in" or "within" something, not "into". It's not a transferring action.
I know names are randomised, but this one here is going to be very confusing to a Slavic reader: female surnames have genders in most Slavic languages, and running the male surname with an obviously female name is a bad idea. Real-life women from Slavic countries don't enjoy this usually.
If done properly
There should be a comma after "properly".
An article is missing here. "the old arcade game", perhaps?
rural school distinct
Not quite sure, but shouldn't "district" be here instead of "distinct"?
butt-out
No hyphen needed: it's a verb.
by 4stan » Fri Mar 10, 2017 9:14 am
“Allowing these fraudsters to kill children with their pseudo-medical claptrap should be criminal!” shouts Dr. Stefanie Shadilay, a famed debunker of alternative medicine, as she slaps a hot mug of soothing echinacea tea out of your hands. “The same standards of evidence-based practice and criminal responsibility that doctors face should be forced on these conmen. Also, any parents who deny their children proper medical treatment should be held accountable for criminal neglect.”
“What happened to that child was a tragedy,” concedes animistic healer Barbie Foster as she hangs amethyst pendants around the room to absorb the negative energies being generated, “but my prescribed treatments would have saved her life, if only they hadn’t been disrupted by the scepticism and disbelief from her biomedical doctors. I can show you the logical arguments that underpin my science, but ultimately, shouldn’t everyone have the freedom to choose their own health care provider?”
“Look, I love freedom as much as the next passer-by who needs to crash at your place,” comments Filipe, a random hobo rousing from a nap on your couch to voice an opinion, “but to me it sounds like this is about the state’s responsibility for the safety of children. Why not just force parents to take their kids to an actual doctor, but let the adults do whatever they want with their own bodies? Also, are you going to finish that sandwich?”
by Katie Boundary » Fri Mar 10, 2017 11:29 am
by Candlewhisper Archive » Fri Mar 10, 2017 11:30 am
by Lamebrainia » Sat Mar 11, 2017 12:50 am
"who has now wandered away"...whom has now wandered away
by Candlewhisper Archive » Sat Mar 11, 2017 5:12 pm
by Helaw » Sat Mar 11, 2017 6:10 pm
by The One True Benxboro Empire » Sun Mar 12, 2017 3:38 pm
Democratic East-Asia wrote:"Probably the worst place ever."
Skyhooked wrote:They are Owrellian already. Only thing, instead of screens there are preachers.
Karamiko wrote:They don't actually believe the things they say or do, they're just doing it to show how terrible theocracies are.
by Candlewhisper Archive » Sun Mar 12, 2017 4:10 pm
The One True Benxboro Empire wrote:Anyone see this?
Issue 634, result line for option two: "Farmers complaining that the buzzing and the sparks from the nearby MagRail are blighting their crops."
by Australian rePublic » Sun Mar 12, 2017 4:49 pm
by Australian rePublic » Sun Mar 12, 2017 4:50 pm
by Trotterdam » Sun Mar 12, 2017 7:58 pm
by Candlewhisper Archive » Mon Mar 13, 2017 3:41 am
Australian Republic wrote:The effect for 682.1
Ha? Just ha?
School kids say the air doesn't taste like wee-wee anymore? What?
by Candlewhisper Archive » Mon Mar 13, 2017 3:43 am
Trotterdam wrote:"@@LEADER@@'s New Clothes" in #622 is missing the apostrophe.
Was it always like this?
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