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On Base:
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- Cerr
- R&G
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- Haye
- Mon
- Servinta
- GSU
- Legatia
- PoC
- Arkana

Reinforcements:
- Revolutionary Expedition Directorate(Free Tulsa's team, URA controls)
- Birt
- Temp
- Impy
- URA
- Don
- Dutchie
- OS
- Cong
- Vacif
- KSK (VolksImperium)
- CSN

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Postby Greater Soviet Ukraine » Sun Jul 05, 2015 2:53 pm

I feel a slight irritation that all our forces are just waiting at the front gate to be flanked and massacred.

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Postby VolksImperium » Sun Jul 05, 2015 2:55 pm

Greater Soviet Ukraine wrote:I feel a slight irritation that all our forces are just waiting at the front gate to be flanked and massacred.


Im going to post our boarding in a little while.

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Postby Krjder » Sun Jul 05, 2015 3:39 pm

- Project Warfighter Application -

Name of Nation: The Krïdan Empire

Name of Group: 3rd Imperial Special Operations Corps Commando

Name of Outfit: The Shadows (De Schaadüweren, 1st Battalion, 3rd Imperial SOCC Regiment

Detailed Outfit Loadout:
All: KLOSCH PRS-007 Personnel Armor Set, KLOSCH KS-12 Combat Knife, KLOSCH Hw-34 Handgun, KLOSCH FMG-11 Fragmentation Grenades, KLOSCH FBG-002 Flashbang Grenades, KLOSCH MG-008 Sensor Grenades, KLOSCH EMP-013 EMP Grenade, KLOSCH FSG-006 Phosphorus Smoke Grenade, X-Com Tactical Communications System, E-Tool, Flares, Grappling Hook/Rope, Augmented Reality System HUD, magnetic adhesive gloves, 1 week rations, 3 days survival water, IR contacts, backpack, blanket

Excubarium: KLOSCH ES-78 Electronic Suite, KLOSCH AZB-034 Assault Rifle
Simulacraque: KLOSCH TULV-34 Fold Up Reconnaissance Drone, KLOSCH AZB-034 Assault Rifle
Phantasma: KLOSCH STO-66 Thermal Binoculars, KLOSCH SSB-032 Sniper Rifle
Exspiravit:KLOSCH VSB-37 Designated Marksmen Rifle
Umbro: KLOSCH SLMW-22 Squad Light Machine gun

Didactylus: KLOSCH FML-51 Guided Missile Launcher, KLOSCH AZB-033 with grenade launcher attachment
Larvali: KLOSCH AGL-09 Grenade Launcher, KLOSCH VTM-18 Portable Mortar
Fiens: KLOSCH UMW-48 Submachine Gun
Apparitio: KLOSCH UMW-48 Submachine Gun, KLOSCH KED-55 Compact Explosive Device
Repertum: KLOSCH IK-58 Carbine, KLOSCH SJB-66 Shotgun

Appearance/Descrption of Operator:
([url=The Shadows]Image[/url])

Biography of Outfit:
The Shadows were born out of the SOCCs, created as an experiment by SOCC command, a unit that was to be top secret and specialise in urban and forest warfare. It first served in Yjaqyr in the 1980s, being utilised as an avant garde; ahead of the advance of the Krïdan army. At this time it was company strength, but this was soon changed by force in 1993 when they were deployed in Catábo to kidnap its dictator. The operation was an initial success but as they were waiting to be air-evacuated a few miles from the capital, they were ambushed by an armoured battalion, tipped off by a local coffee farmer. Most of the company died, not before destroying much of the enemy forces. A platoon survived and was evacuated at a later date. SOCC Command wanted to disband the Shadows, calling it a failed experiment. But the then Chancellor wanted to keep them for small role uses of low profile. The Shadows were cut down to squad size and operate as they do today.


Operators of the Outfit:
Excubarium: A weaselly man, cruel and cunning. He shows little remorse for anything that moves or ceases to. He leads the shadows and believes that he is the only man who can.

Simulacraque: this valuable squad member specialises in reconnaissance and intel gathering. Little is known about his personality other than that he is shy, thoughtful and diligent.

Phantasma: with eyes like an eagle, no moving or stationary object is safe on e in his sights. With a reputation for causing single handed carnage and confusion, he is a deadly addition to the shadows.

Exspiravit: perhaps the squad's tactician, he is blessed with a calculating and cool mind. His DMR in his hands is a tool of death itself and has a knack for squad manoeuvres.

Umbro: this man likes nothing better than reducing walls, people and vehicles to particles with his machine gun. He has a bizarre list for bloodshed and carnage, bug knows when to cap it.

Didactylus: he likes anything that goes bang. Almost a pyromaniac, he loves causing explosions. He forms much of the squad's explosive brawn and firepower. Not renowned for intelligence, he makes it up in initiative and expertise in the art of making things crumble like Stilton cheese.

Larvali: sharing the above's love of explosions, he is slightly more controlled, concentrating more on tactical firepower as opposed to all out wasting of enemy positions.

Fiens: daredevil by name, daredevil by nature, few to none perturb him. Known to charge head on at enemy positions, his bravery and balls are scenic to none. He functions as the squads stalemate breaker in tense firefights.

Apparitio: specialises in house-storming. He thinks quickly, though often rashly. Apparitio likes a clean and complete job, he leaves nothing alive and nothing incomplete. A trusty squad member and ever loyal.

Repertum: a towering man, broad and muscular. He too specialises in house storming, though rather than ploughing hundreds of mini bullets into someone, Repertum need only fire a shot from his gun and the inhabitants of the room would be left rather worse for wear afterwords, if they are lucky...


RP Experience: viewtopic.php?p=24200939#p24200939

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Postby The GAmeTopians » Sun Jul 05, 2015 3:40 pm

The Templar High Council wrote:Banished Throne Roster
On Base:
- Teishin Shudan(Toishima's team, URA controls)
- Asymmetric Warfare Detachment(Astro's team, URA controls)
- Cerr
- R&G
- Vang
- Haye
- Mon
- Servinta
- GSU
- Legatia
- PoC
- Arkana

Reinforcements:
- Revolutionary Expedition Directorate(Free Tulsa's team, URA controls)
- Birt
- Temp
- Impy
- URA
- Don
- Dutchie
- OS
- Cong
- Vacif
- KSK (VolksImperium)
- CSN

Now current.

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Postby The GAmeTopians » Sun Jul 05, 2015 3:41 pm

Oh. You started without me. How sad.
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It's like your a prostitute and the RP is a truck. The truck don't stop.

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Postby Monfrox » Sun Jul 05, 2015 3:50 pm

So how exactly is this mission going to work?
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Postby The Templar High Council » Sun Jul 05, 2015 4:53 pm

Banished Throne Roster
On Base:
- Teishin Shudan(Toishima's team, URA controls)
- Asymmetric Warfare Detachment(Astro's team, URA controls)
- Cerr
- R&G
- Vang
- Haye
- Mon
- Servinta
- GSU
- Legatia
- PoC
- Arkana
- GAme

Reinforcements:
- Revolutionary Expedition Directorate(Free Tulsa's team, URA controls)
- Birt
- Temp
- Impy
- URA
- Don
- Dutchie
- OS
- Cong
- Vacif
- KSK (VolksImperium)
- CSN

Now current.
They call me Temp. If I take too long to respond, just TG me. Or TG me whenever, I'm online 90% of the time.
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Postby Vancon » Sun Jul 05, 2015 5:08 pm

Krjder wrote:- Project Warfighter Application -

*snip*

So I looked over your app and it generally looks good. A few things of note though, is that your writing is good but it is also kinda clunky, if that makes sense. It doesn't flow all that well, at least in your example.

The weapons may need a bit of tweaking, seeing as shotguns aren't really used as a primary in active combat. They are brought, but not used like one would use a M4. It's reserved for only really opening doors, and sometimes used to clear rooms.
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Postby The United Remnants of America » Sun Jul 05, 2015 6:04 pm

Monfrox wrote:So how exactly is this mission going to work?

Expand on the question.

Vancon wrote:
Krjder wrote:- Project Warfighter Application -

*snip*

So I looked over your app and it generally looks good. A few things of note though, is that your writing is good but it is also kinda clunky, if that makes sense. It doesn't flow all that well, at least in your example.

The weapons may need a bit of tweaking, seeing as shotguns aren't really used as a primary in active combat. They are brought, but not used like one would use a M4. It's reserved for only really opening doors, and sometimes used to clear rooms.

Letting Van handle the acceptance of this.

Greater Soviet Ukraine wrote:I feel a slight irritation that all our forces are just waiting at the front gate to be flanked and massacred.

Not all of them. Just the ones on base.
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Postby Servinta » Sun Jul 05, 2015 6:36 pm

Where is the barracks in reference to the gate, because my guys are heading there.

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Postby Empire of Donner land » Sun Jul 05, 2015 6:40 pm

Can I begin the drop or does anyone want to come on the MC-130 with Squad 2?
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Postby Rodstov and Grenoda » Sun Jul 05, 2015 6:41 pm

Greater Soviet Ukraine wrote:I feel a slight irritation that all our forces are just waiting at the front gate to be flanked and massacred.



no communication = getting flanked XD
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Postby The Templar High Council » Sun Jul 05, 2015 7:04 pm

Empire of Donner land wrote:Can I begin the drop or does anyone want to come on the MC-130 with Squad 2?

I want to be there.

Just give me a few minutes to catch up across the site.
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Postby Patrick OConner » Sun Jul 05, 2015 9:26 pm

Greater Soviet Ukraine wrote:I feel a slight irritation that all our forces are just waiting at the front gate to be flanked and massacred.


My guys are not. they are buging out to the south
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Postby Cerrania » Sun Jul 05, 2015 9:28 pm

Hey guys, I'm going to be asked to move to reinforcements. Recently, something came up in RL - and I started OPing my own roleplay(which is proving to be significantly more work than I thought it would be.)
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Postby The Templar High Council » Sun Jul 05, 2015 9:31 pm

Cerrania wrote:Hey guys, I'm going to be asked to move to reinforcements. Recently, something came up in RL - and I started OPing my own roleplay(which is proving to be significantly more work than I thought it would be.)

That's everyone's reaction to their first trip at the helm. Don't sweat it. :D

On that note, I was forced to cook brownies tonight. And practically watch them bake. Sorry, post will be coming tomorrow afternoon. I'm getting some pretty ladies some tasty brownies tomorrow, and getting paid for it. ;)

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On Base:
- Teishin Shudan(Toishima's team, URA controls)
- Asymmetric Warfare Detachment(Astro's team, URA controls)
- R&G
- Vang
- Haye
- Mon
- Servinta
- GSU
- Legatia
- PoC
- Arkana
- GAme

Reinforcements:
- Revolutionary Expedition Directorate(Free Tulsa's team, URA controls)
- Birt
- Temp
- Impy
- URA
- Don
- Dutchie
- OS
- Cong
- Vacif
- KSK (VolksImperium)
- CSN
- Cerr

Now current.
They call me Temp. If I take too long to respond, just TG me. Or TG me whenever, I'm online 90% of the time.
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Postby Mirakai » Sun Jul 05, 2015 10:29 pm

Cerrania wrote:Hey guys, I'm going to be asked to move to reinforcements. Recently, something came up in RL - and I started OPing my own roleplay(which is proving to be significantly more work than I thought it would be.)

OPing is hard. Many people here, including me, can testify to how difficult it is. Also, I can do some of that work too, you know
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Postby Cerrania » Sun Jul 05, 2015 10:31 pm

Mirakai wrote:
Cerrania wrote:Hey guys, I'm going to be asked to move to reinforcements. Recently, something came up in RL - and I started OPing my own roleplay(which is proving to be significantly more work than I thought it would be.)

OPing is hard. Many people here, including me, can testify to how difficult it is. Also, I can do some of that work too, you know

You're helping more than you realize! I've just been non-busy lately, so I can devote time to the thread.
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Postby Vancon » Sun Jul 05, 2015 10:34 pm

Mirakai wrote:
Cerrania wrote:Hey guys, I'm going to be asked to move to reinforcements. Recently, something came up in RL - and I started OPing my own roleplay(which is proving to be significantly more work than I thought it would be.)

OPing is hard. Many people here, including me, can testify to how difficult it is. Also, I can do some of that work too, you know

OPing is a game of getting good CO-Ops to keep you alive.
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Well what the fuck do you use for lube?

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Rupudska wrote:I avoid NSG like one would avoid ISIS-occupied Syria.
Alimeria- wrote:I'll go to sleep when I want to, not when some cheese-eating surrender monkey tells me to.

Which just so happens to be within the next half-hour

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Postby Mirakai » Sun Jul 05, 2015 10:35 pm

Vancon wrote:
Mirakai wrote:OPing is hard. Many people here, including me, can testify to how difficult it is. Also, I can do some of that work too, you know

OPing is a game of getting good CO-Ops to keep you alive.

:rofl:

So true...

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Postby Vangaziland » Sun Jul 05, 2015 11:03 pm

Rodstov and Grenoda wrote:
Greater Soviet Ukraine wrote:I feel a slight irritation that all our forces are just waiting at the front gate to be flanked and massacred.



no communication = getting flanked XD


We are not getting flanked. In my post I mentioned that there are towers. The towers wouldn't just be at the front gate and the towers would be manned. Just because we are POSTING about the front gate does not mean that EVERYONE is at the gate.

I also posted that the radio was alive with chatter. No. Every single radio transmission doesn't have to be written for the RP. Obviously stuff is going down and there is a plan in place.

If one doesn't like an RP, one can post the way they would like it to follow.

More importantly, people keep getting confused. No tanks or enemy soldiers running around the corner would happen within the Atlas compound. Not yet at least. If so, someone should probably post how the enemies breach since it would be a major tactical thing, not something common. But for now, we need to double check ourselves. So I will say it once more:

The enemies have breached the Base. We are on a walled, towered, barb-wired compound that is within the base. The enemy is outside of our compound.
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Postby Krjder » Sun Jul 05, 2015 11:04 pm

Vancon wrote:
Krjder wrote:- Project Warfighter Application -

*snip*

So I looked over your app and it generally looks good. A few things of note though, is that your writing is good but it is also kinda clunky, if that makes sense. It doesn't flow all that well, at least in your example.

The weapons may need a bit of tweaking, seeing as shotguns aren't really used as a primary in active combat. They are brought, but not used like one would use a M4. It's reserved for only really opening doors, and sometimes used to clear rooms.


Yeah, it wasn't perhaps my best piece of Roleplay, but it's one of the more diverse war RPs. If you want better flowing I can show you my character RP content, but that lacks military background.

The shadows specialise in urban and forest warfare, hence need weapons with good short range power, in order to clear rooms, fens and or foxholes. Therefore the shotgun has it's uses in the squad.
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Military:
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-4,750,000 Reserves
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Postby Vancon » Sun Jul 05, 2015 11:11 pm

Krjder wrote:
Vancon wrote:So I looked over your app and it generally looks good. A few things of note though, is that your writing is good but it is also kinda clunky, if that makes sense. It doesn't flow all that well, at least in your example.

The weapons may need a bit of tweaking, seeing as shotguns aren't really used as a primary in active combat. They are brought, but not used like one would use a M4. It's reserved for only really opening doors, and sometimes used to clear rooms.


Yeah, it wasn't perhaps my best piece of Roleplay, but it's one of the more diverse war RPs. If you want better flowing I can show you my character RP content, but that lacks military background.

The shadows specialise in urban and forest warfare, hence need weapons with good short range power, in order to clear rooms, fens and or foxholes. Therefore the shotgun has it's uses in the squad.

Shotguns are not usedenough as you think they are, or even enough for them to be used as a primary. They are used these days purely for opening doors or for fun. Room clearing is much more precise and safe with regular firearms like an M4. In reality though, when there's a requirement to clear a room without there being civilians, they just use nades.

Its a waste of time, effort, training and carry weight for a shotgun to be used as a primary. Most squads will have one as an under barrel or on thier back.
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Imperializt Russia wrote:
The balkens wrote:Please tell me that condoms and Hazelnut spread are NOT on the same table.

Well what the fuck do you use for lube?

Krazakistan wrote:How have you not died after being exposed to that much shit on a monthly basis?
Rupudska wrote:I avoid NSG like one would avoid ISIS-occupied Syria.
Alimeria- wrote:I'll go to sleep when I want to, not when some cheese-eating surrender monkey tells me to.

Which just so happens to be within the next half-hour

Shyluz wrote:Van, Sci-fi Generallisimo


U18 2nd Cutest NS'er 2015
Best Role Play - Science Fiction 2015: Athena Program

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