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Postby Alleniana » Sat Feb 22, 2014 8:59 pm

Ammar wrote:
Nightkill the Emperor wrote:It's how I became a Mentor.

How did you become a Mentor, by the way?

Magical rituals and unspeakable deeds, to which few were witness, and even fewer truly know of. We do not speak of these things.

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Postby Ammar » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:00 pm

Alleniana wrote:
Ammar wrote:How did you become a Mentor, by the way?

Magical rituals and unspeakable deeds, to which few were witness, and even fewer truly know of. We do not speak of these things.

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Postby Hornesia » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:02 pm

Alleniana wrote:
Ammar wrote:How did you become a Mentor, by the way?

Magical rituals and unspeakable deeds, to which few were witness, and even fewer truly know of. We do not speak of these things.

They involve firstborn children and the blood of virgins, correct?
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Postby Constaniana » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:02 pm

Ammar wrote:
Nightkill the Emperor wrote:It's how I became a Mentor.

How did you become a Mentor, by the way?

Dick jokes.
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Postby Alleniana » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:03 pm

Hornesia wrote:
Alleniana wrote:Magical rituals and unspeakable deeds, to which few were witness, and even fewer truly know of. We do not speak of these things.

They involve firstborn children and the blood of virgins, correct?

Something like that. Also a lot of
Constaniana wrote:Dick jokes

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Postby Terintania » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:10 pm

So.....I've got a general idea for an RP, and I want some opinion on whether or not it would be a good idea, or just sort of meh.

The idea is that it would be a sort of open-world, sandbox, do-whatever-you-want (As long as it fits with the world and is reasonable) type of RP. Both character and faction/nation RP.

The world it's based in is a mixture of fantasy and modern technology, if not a little bit more advanced then us in travel technology. Magic is fairly common in this world, though there are people looking to weed it out. And this is due to the Corruption, the main enemy of any nation in this land. The Corruption is basically a sentient virus, parasite, whatever you want to call it. It has it's own thoughts, emotions, though negative emotions like hate, anger or vengeance is all it seems able to feel. It spreads over the land, changing it. Everywhere it touches, the plants blacken die and blackened Corruption vines grow up in their place, covering the ground, the trees, ruins, everything with a layer of blackened plants that strangle the life out of anything it can grasp. The sky always remains a dark, purple-blue, leaving the land in a sort of late dusk light. The water turns a sort or eerie blue-green, a sort of acidic color, which fits because the water also turns minorly acidic, and is undrinkable. There's always at least one dark, ominous cloud in view in the purple-blue sky. The rain is also acidic, like the water, and the lightening is basically black with a light blue-green center, and instead of a flash, the sky around the strike darkens for a second. Snow in the Corruption is a sight to behold the rare occasions that it happens. It blankets the ground in a sort of glowing acid-blue-green color.

But this isn't the worst of what the Corruption can do. It can possess animals, changing them as much as it changes the land. It can choose to either control them, or let them roam with their will free. Free, but filled with a new, twisted, taste for violence and aggression.

But what people live in fear of the most with the Corruption, is when it possesses people. It can only posses people with Magic, but that kind of makes it all the more terrifying. It worms itself inside their hearts in minds, corrupting them with hate and anger, as well as changing their appearance. The Mage has to be weakened in some way mentally for it to do this, however.

Basically, the Corruption is what people have to fear. Mages have to learn to control their emotions so that it can't possess them. A certain Order, however, has a different solution. They believe that if you kill all Mages, the Corruption will no longer have anyone to possess, and will weaken, and when that happens, they believe they can kill it.
Some people believe there's another solution to the Corruption, though. Light. The Corruption spreads fastest by night, and will shrivel and spread much more slowly if faced with too might light. So a group of Light Mages, who call themselves the Priests of Light (So creative), stand against the Corruption. They specialize in Light spells, and are often a Kingdom's only real defense against the Corruption. They can hold it at bay, or, if they band together, they can fight it back.

So, yeah, that's my 'basic' idea :/
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Postby Ammar » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:14 pm

Alright, so I have a concept for my commuunist revolution.

It takes place in a cold region called Zandeth, which is ruled by Emperor Cusico. Cusicoo keeps his power by dividing the land into five regions all ruled by aristocrats. The land has very little farmland, so starvation is a problem. Each lord has servants and serfs that work for them, even fight in wars between lords. The people in these regions begin to rise against the aristrocrats in order to form a new government, led by a communist revolutionary.
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Postby Alleniana » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:16 pm

Terintania wrote:So.....I've got a general idea for an RP, and I want some opinion on whether or not it would be a good idea, or just sort of meh.

The idea is that it would be a sort of open-world, sandbox, do-whatever-you-want (As long as it fits with the world and is reasonable) type of RP. Both character and faction/nation RP.

The world it's based in is a mixture of fantasy and modern technology, if not a little bit more advanced then us in travel technology. Magic is fairly common in this world, though there are people looking to weed it out. And this is due to the Corruption, the main enemy of any nation in this land. The Corruption is basically a sentient virus, parasite, whatever you want to call it. It has it's own thoughts, emotions, though negative emotions like hate, anger or vengeance is all it seems able to feel. It spreads over the land, changing it. Everywhere it touches, the plants blacken die and blackened Corruption vines grow up in their place, covering the ground, the trees, ruins, everything with a layer of blackened plants that strangle the life out of anything it can grasp. The sky always remains a dark, purple-blue, leaving the land in a sort of late dusk light. The water turns a sort or eerie blue-green, a sort of acidic color, which fits because the water also turns minorly acidic, and is undrinkable. There's always at least one dark, ominous cloud in view in the purple-blue sky. The rain is also acidic, like the water, and the lightening is basically black with a light blue-green center, and instead of a flash, the sky around the strike darkens for a second. Snow in the Corruption is a sight to behold the rare occasions that it happens. It blankets the ground in a sort of glowing acid-blue-green color.

But this isn't the worst of what the Corruption can do. It can possess animals, changing them as much as it changes the land. It can choose to either control them, or let them roam with their will free. Free, but filled with a new, twisted, taste for violence and aggression.

But what people live in fear of the most with the Corruption, is when it possesses people. It can only posses people with Magic, but that kind of makes it all the more terrifying. It worms itself inside their hearts in minds, corrupting them with hate and anger, as well as changing their appearance. The Mage has to be weakened in some way mentally for it to do this, however.

Basically, the Corruption is what people have to fear. Mages have to learn to control their emotions so that it can't possess them. A certain Order, however, has a different solution. They believe that if you kill all Mages, the Corruption will no longer have anyone to possess, and will weaken, and when that happens, they believe they can kill it.
Some people believe there's another solution to the Corruption, though. Light. The Corruption spreads fastest by night, and will shrivel and spread much more slowly if faced with too might light. So a group of Light Mages, who call themselves the Priests of Light (So creative), stand against the Corruption. They specialize in Light spells, and are often a Kingdom's only real defense against the Corruption. They can hold it at bay, or, if they band together, they can fight it back.

So, yeah, that's my 'basic' idea :/
You play as a character or kingdom in this world.

Interesting...
Though a more physical approach to combating Corruption could be interesting. Using swords to slash at the vines, for example, maybe?

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Postby Terintania » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:18 pm

Alleniana wrote:
Terintania wrote:So.....I've got a general idea for an RP, and I want some opinion on whether or not it would be a good idea, or just sort of meh.

The idea is that it would be a sort of open-world, sandbox, do-whatever-you-want (As long as it fits with the world and is reasonable) type of RP. Both character and faction/nation RP.

The world it's based in is a mixture of fantasy and modern technology, if not a little bit more advanced then us in travel technology. Magic is fairly common in this world, though there are people looking to weed it out. And this is due to the Corruption, the main enemy of any nation in this land. The Corruption is basically a sentient virus, parasite, whatever you want to call it. It has it's own thoughts, emotions, though negative emotions like hate, anger or vengeance is all it seems able to feel. It spreads over the land, changing it. Everywhere it touches, the plants blacken die and blackened Corruption vines grow up in their place, covering the ground, the trees, ruins, everything with a layer of blackened plants that strangle the life out of anything it can grasp. The sky always remains a dark, purple-blue, leaving the land in a sort of late dusk light. The water turns a sort or eerie blue-green, a sort of acidic color, which fits because the water also turns minorly acidic, and is undrinkable. There's always at least one dark, ominous cloud in view in the purple-blue sky. The rain is also acidic, like the water, and the lightening is basically black with a light blue-green center, and instead of a flash, the sky around the strike darkens for a second. Snow in the Corruption is a sight to behold the rare occasions that it happens. It blankets the ground in a sort of glowing acid-blue-green color.

But this isn't the worst of what the Corruption can do. It can possess animals, changing them as much as it changes the land. It can choose to either control them, or let them roam with their will free. Free, but filled with a new, twisted, taste for violence and aggression.

But what people live in fear of the most with the Corruption, is when it possesses people. It can only posses people with Magic, but that kind of makes it all the more terrifying. It worms itself inside their hearts in minds, corrupting them with hate and anger, as well as changing their appearance. The Mage has to be weakened in some way mentally for it to do this, however.

Basically, the Corruption is what people have to fear. Mages have to learn to control their emotions so that it can't possess them. A certain Order, however, has a different solution. They believe that if you kill all Mages, the Corruption will no longer have anyone to possess, and will weaken, and when that happens, they believe they can kill it.
Some people believe there's another solution to the Corruption, though. Light. The Corruption spreads fastest by night, and will shrivel and spread much more slowly if faced with too might light. So a group of Light Mages, who call themselves the Priests of Light (So creative), stand against the Corruption. They specialize in Light spells, and are often a Kingdom's only real defense against the Corruption. They can hold it at bay, or, if they band together, they can fight it back.

So, yeah, that's my 'basic' idea :/
You play as a character or kingdom in this world.

Interesting...
Though a more physical approach to combating Corruption could be interesting. Using swords to slash at the vines, for example, maybe?

It's not just the vines, it's in the ground and everywhere in the corruption area. You cut a vine, another will grow back in it's place, and possibly strangle you in the process.

Now...Perhaps if you had an enchanted light sword or something like that, it would work, thought.
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Postby Constaniana » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:22 pm

Terintania wrote:
Alleniana wrote:Interesting...
Though a more physical approach to combating Corruption could be interesting. Using swords to slash at the vines, for example, maybe?

It's not just the vines, it's in the ground and everywhere in the corruption area. You cut a vine, another will grow back in it's place, and possibly strangle you in the process.

Now...Perhaps if you had an enchanted light sword or something like that, it would work, thought.

But then what can ordinary humans do to fight the corruption?
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Postby Alleniana » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:24 pm

Constaniana wrote:
Terintania wrote:It's not just the vines, it's in the ground and everywhere in the corruption area. You cut a vine, another will grow back in it's place, and possibly strangle you in the process.

Now...Perhaps if you had an enchanted light sword or something like that, it would work, thought.

But then what can ordinary humans do to fight the corruption?

^
It's an interesting concept, but an enemy that you can only shine light at, and yet is terribly tangible seems a bit lopsided.

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Postby Terintania » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:29 pm

Constaniana wrote:
Terintania wrote:It's not just the vines, it's in the ground and everywhere in the corruption area. You cut a vine, another will grow back in it's place, and possibly strangle you in the process.

Now...Perhaps if you had an enchanted light sword or something like that, it would work, thought.

But then what can ordinary humans do to fight the corruption?

Get your sword enchanted by a Priest of Light? :P

Magic and non-magic typically exists side-by side, so it wouldn't be that hard or that weird of a thing for a normal person to have a light-enchanted sword or something.

Also, another thing I'm debating is whether to actually have modern technology. I keep imagining it as a strictly fantasy world......And Technology doesn't completely fit in the world as I picture it, even though having modern technology was sort of the original plan when coming up with the idea...
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Postby Ayreonia » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:30 pm

Terintania wrote:
Constaniana wrote:But then what can ordinary humans do to fight the corruption?

Get your sword enchanted by a Priest of Light? :P

Magic and non-magic typically exists side-by side, so it wouldn't be that hard or that weird of a thing for a normal person to have a light-enchanted sword or something.

Also, another thing I'm debating is whether to actually have modern technology. I keep imagining it as a strictly fantasy world......And Technology doesn't completely fit in the world as I picture it, even though having modern technology was sort of the original plan when coming up with the idea...

A gun with a magazine of light-enchanted 7.62. You know it's the right thing to do.
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Postby Ammar » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:30 pm

Here's what I got so far. What could I do to make it better?

It is the high middle ages in the land of Zandeth, a cold land where food is not prevalent, and starvation is a major problem. The land is ruled by Emperor Cusico, who rules with the force of the aristocracy. Five regions are ruled over by lords, and each lord has servants and serfs who farm little land, manage the animals, and even fight in wars between the lords.

The latest war between the lords led to the rise of Vladius Darius, who believes that the problem is with the aristocracy. Vladius preaches to the workers that the lords have been living the life of luxury at the expense of the commmon man. He says that if it were not for the corruption of the aristocracy, they would all have food oon their tables every night, and not the bare minimum to prevent them from starving to death.

At first, the message of Vladius was interesting, but insane. A system in which everyone shared the production of their work, and no one had an unjust advantage was crazy at the start, but that quickly changed. When a new war broke out, the soldiers threw down their swords in diffiance. They had enough with the lords exploitiing them and takiing what little they had. A thousand warriors followed Vladius into battle against the corrupted aristocracy, but the Emperor would have no part of that. With a new threat to his power, Cusico abandoned his crown and his family abandoned Zandeth to go to an isolated island, waiting for the revolution to be put down.
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Postby G-Tech Corporation » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:32 pm

Ammar wrote:Here's what I got so far. What could I do to make it better?

It is the high middle ages in the land of Zandeth, a cold land where food is not prevalent, and starvation is a major problem. The land is ruled by Emperor Cusico, who rules with the force of the aristocracy. Five regions are ruled over by lords, and each lord has servants and serfs who farm little land, manage the animals, and even fight in wars between the lords.

The latest war between the lords led to the rise of Vladius Darius, who believes that the problem is with the aristocracy. Vladius preaches to the workers that the lords have been living the life of luxury at the expense of the commmon man. He says that if it were not for the corruption of the aristocracy, they would all have food oon their tables every night, and not the bare minimum to prevent them from starving to death.

At first, the message of Vladius was interesting, but insane. A system in which everyone shared the production of their work, and no one had an unjust advantage was crazy at the start, but that quickly changed. When a new war broke out, the soldiers threw down their swords in diffiance. They had enough with the lords exploitiing them and takiing what little they had. A thousand warriors followed Vladius into battle against the corrupted aristocracy, but the Emperor would have no part of that. With a new threat to his power, Cusico abandoned his crown and his family abandoned Zandeth to go to an isolated island, waiting for the revolution to be put down.


An entrenched oligarchy running away from threats to their power?

Seems contrary to human nature, offhand.
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Postby Terintania » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:32 pm

Alleniana wrote:
Constaniana wrote:But then what can ordinary humans do to fight the corruption?

^
It's an interesting concept, but an enemy that you can only shine light at, and yet is terribly tangible seems a bit lopsided.


I don't understand what you mean, exactly.

Ayreonia wrote:
Terintania wrote:Get your sword enchanted by a Priest of Light? :P

Magic and non-magic typically exists side-by side, so it wouldn't be that hard or that weird of a thing for a normal person to have a light-enchanted sword or something.

Also, another thing I'm debating is whether to actually have modern technology. I keep imagining it as a strictly fantasy world......And Technology doesn't completely fit in the world as I picture it, even though having modern technology was sort of the original plan when coming up with the idea...

A gun with a magazine of light-enchanted 7.62. You know it's the right thing to do.

Shooting it with one bullet wouldn't really do much :P One thing about spells is that they can affect a wide area :P

Maybe there could be Light Bombs or Light Grenades or something like that.
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Postby Ammar » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:33 pm

G-Tech Corporation wrote:
Ammar wrote:Here's what I got so far. What could I do to make it better?



An entrenched oligarchy running away from threats to their power?

Seems contrary to human nature, offhand.


I changed it to where Cusico declared a crusade, promising any loyalists untold riches for fighting in the war.
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Postby Alleniana » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:35 pm

Terintania wrote:
Alleniana wrote:^
It's an interesting concept, but an enemy that you can only shine light at, and yet is terribly tangible seems a bit lopsided.


I don't understand what you mean, exactly.


Well, when you fight something that is dark and evil and strangles everything in the most tangible form ever, you'd expect to fight similarly, tooth for tooth, eye for eye, armed down to the fingernails, bitterly. Instead... you have to shine light at it? I would suggest using more accessible forms, like perhaps fire, or even steel cutting vines being superficially useful.

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Postby Ayreonia » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:36 pm

Terintania wrote:
Alleniana wrote:^
It's an interesting concept, but an enemy that you can only shine light at, and yet is terribly tangible seems a bit lopsided.


I don't understand what you mean, exactly.

Ayreonia wrote:A gun with a magazine of light-enchanted 7.62. You know it's the right thing to do.

Shooting it with one bullet wouldn't really do much :P One thing about spells is that they can affect a wide area :P

Maybe there could be Light Bombs or Light Grenades or something like that.

Well, duh. That's why you need a lot of bullets. If it can be stabbed to death, it can be shot to death.
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Postby G-Tech Corporation » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:36 pm

Ammar wrote:
G-Tech Corporation wrote:
An entrenched oligarchy running away from threats to their power?

Seems contrary to human nature, offhand.

Maybe he's a coward and never really had power?


Still, if he enjoys his privileges and whatnot, running away to a secluded island makes him a nobody with no perks. Presumably he at least enjoys the fruits of being, yknow, Emperor.
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Postby Ammar » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:37 pm

G-Tech Corporation wrote:
Ammar wrote:Maybe he's a coward and never really had power?


Still, if he enjoys his privileges and whatnot, running away to a secluded island makes him a nobody with no perks. Presumably he at least enjoys the fruits of being, yknow, Emperor.

I changed it to where Cusico declared a crusade, promising any loyalists untold riches for fighting in the war.
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Postby Hornesia » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:40 pm

This decent as an OP so far?
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Postby G-Tech Corporation » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:41 pm

Ammar wrote:
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Still, if he enjoys his privileges and whatnot, running away to a secluded island makes him a nobody with no perks. Presumably he at least enjoys the fruits of being, yknow, Emperor.

I changed it to where Cusico declared a crusade, promising any loyalists untold riches for fighting in the war.


Ah, that makes more sense.

For bonus historical relevancy points, make those riches spiritual and to be received after death.
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Postby Ammar » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:42 pm

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Ammar wrote:I changed it to where Cusico declared a crusade, promising any loyalists untold riches for fighting in the war.


Ah, that makes more sense.

For bonus historical relevancy points, make those riches spiritual and to be received after death.

Ok, and for the hell of it, I'll make them Muslim.
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Postby Terintania » Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:43 pm

Alleniana wrote:
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I don't understand what you mean, exactly.


Well, when you fight something that is dark and evil and strangles everything in the most tangible form ever, you'd expect to fight similarly, tooth for tooth, eye for eye, armed down to the fingernails, bitterly. Instead... you have to shine light at it? I would suggest using more accessible forms, like perhaps fire, or even steel cutting vines being superficially useful.


Fire would work. Cutting it might work, but it would be like fighting off an endless hoard of zombies, basically. Where you kill one, another pops up. Perhaps a special kind of metal that can harm the corruption?

One thing to note is the sheer expanse of corruption. It covers a fairly larger portion of the world. It's part of the world now, and mostly what people care about it keeping themselves and their kingdoms safe from it. Beyond that, in the remote areas, they simply let it spread wild.

You also have to remember that the Corruption is Sentient. It's not just some plants growing out of hand. It's smart, and it can change it's tactics if it has to.

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I don't understand what you mean, exactly.


Shooting it with one bullet wouldn't really do much :P One thing about spells is that they can affect a wide area :P

Maybe there could be Light Bombs or Light Grenades or something like that.

Well, duh. That's why you need a lot of bullets. If it can be stabbed to death, it can be shot to death.


I guess the bullets could be used against the creatures of the Corruption (They can be killed by means other then Light, I just imagine Light would kill them faster.)
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