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Urran
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Postby Urran » Mon Sep 23, 2013 9:01 pm

centipede. Cer, you made my mouth water.


In the South, you eat what is served. But if you don't like it, you can say so in a polite manner, because if you eat it anyway, we'll slap you in the back of the head because you'll make us feel like we forced you to eat something that you don't like.
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A lie doesn't become truth, wrong doesn't become right, and evil doesn't become good just because it's accepted by a majority.
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The Blood Ravens wrote: How wonderful. Its like Japan, and 1950''s America had a baby. All the racism of the 50s, and everything else Japanese.

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Postby The BranRiech » Mon Sep 23, 2013 9:05 pm

G'night, guys.

In the north, or at least my family. You're expected to eat what's made for you, unless you state that you'll prepare your own meal if you don't like it, then you;re on your own as to whatever dinner is.

For me, usually a Turkey sandwich.

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Postby Torsiedelle » Mon Sep 23, 2013 9:06 pm

I hope I can get Tora unfrozen by the 27th for her birthday, which also coincides with mine..
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Urran
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Postby Urran » Mon Sep 23, 2013 9:07 pm

Torsiedelle wrote:I hope I can get Tora unfrozen by the 27th for her birthday, which also coincides with mine..


*throws confetti*
A lie doesn't become truth, wrong doesn't become right, and evil doesn't become good just because it's accepted by a majority.
Proud Coastie
The Blood Ravens wrote: How wonderful. Its like Japan, and 1950''s America had a baby. All the racism of the 50s, and everything else Japanese.

I <3 James May

I wear teal, blue & pink for Swith
❤BITTEN BY THE VAMPIRE QUEEN OF COOKIES❤

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New York Times Democracy

Postby Cerillium » Mon Sep 23, 2013 9:10 pm

Torsiedelle wrote:I hope I can get Tora unfrozen by the 27th for her birthday, which also coincides with mine..

Send a TG to Tsu to let him know you want to use her elsewhere.
I wear teal, blue & pink for Swith
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Swith Witherward
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Democratic Socialists

Postby Swith Witherward » Mon Sep 23, 2013 9:29 pm

*plucks Aeten from the people here bar, lifts him up and sets him in front of his monitor, gently places his hands on his keyboard, and grins expectantly at him*
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Postby AETEN II » Mon Sep 23, 2013 9:29 pm

Swith Witherward wrote:
The New Velociraptor Empire wrote: :D Mmmmm.....Chicken....

I wish we had a pony. Mmmmmm pony.

Volt would find it delicious. Maybe Tipper could try to fry it despite how terribly wrong the attempt would go thanks to her lack of sight.


Also, now that I'm sufficiently pissed off at the Eldar, I'll finally post.
"Quod Vult, Valde Valt"

Excuse me, sir. Seeing as how the V.P. is such a V.I.P., shouldn't we keep the P.C. on the Q.T.? 'Cause if it leaks to the V.C. he could end up M.I.A., and then we'd all be put out in K.P.


Nationstatelandsville wrote:"Why'd the chicken cross the street?"

"Because your dad's a whore."

"...He died a week ago."

"Of syphilis, I bet."

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Urran
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Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby Urran » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:01 pm

I love your vid NVE!
A lie doesn't become truth, wrong doesn't become right, and evil doesn't become good just because it's accepted by a majority.
Proud Coastie
The Blood Ravens wrote: How wonderful. Its like Japan, and 1950''s America had a baby. All the racism of the 50s, and everything else Japanese.

I <3 James May

I wear teal, blue & pink for Swith
❤BITTEN BY THE VAMPIRE QUEEN OF COOKIES❤

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Swith Witherward
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Democratic Socialists

Postby Swith Witherward » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:02 pm

Urran wrote:I love your vid NVE!

He rocks on so many levels.
★ Senior P2TM RP Mentor ★
How may I help you today?
TG Swith Witherward
Why is everyone a social justice warrior?
Why didn't any of you choose a different class,
like social justice mage or social justice thief?
P2TM Mentor & Personal Bio: Gentlemen, Behold!
Raider Account Bio: The Eternal Bugblatter Fennec of Traal!
Madhouse
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Anti-intellectual elitism: the dismissal of science, the arts,
and humanities and their replacement by entertainment,
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The New Velociraptor Empire
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Postby The New Velociraptor Empire » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:03 pm

Urran wrote:I love your vid NVE!

Thanks!
Swith Witherward wrote:
Urran wrote:I love your vid NVE!

He rocks on so many levels.

Really? Tanks a lot!

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Torsiedelle
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Postby Torsiedelle » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:03 pm

Cliff, wanna pause? It's über late over here.
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Postby Tiltjuice » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:04 pm

Torsiedelle wrote:Cliff, wanna pause? It's über late over here.


Please don't ignore posts.
Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart. -Khalil Gibran
Cut red tape with the Red Book / Bureaucracy is a system - #ApplyTNI / Think globally, act locally
At fifteen, I set my heart on learning. At thirty, I was firmly established. At forty, I had no more doubts. At fifty, I knew the will of heaven. At sixty, I was ready to listen to it. At seventy, I could follow my heart's desire without transgressing what was right. ~Analects, 2:4
I wear teal, blue, pink, and red for Swith.
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Urran
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Postby Urran » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:06 pm

Torsiedelle wrote:Cliff, wanna pause? It's über late over here.


Da. I'm going out as well.
A lie doesn't become truth, wrong doesn't become right, and evil doesn't become good just because it's accepted by a majority.
Proud Coastie
The Blood Ravens wrote: How wonderful. Its like Japan, and 1950''s America had a baby. All the racism of the 50s, and everything else Japanese.

I <3 James May

I wear teal, blue & pink for Swith
❤BITTEN BY THE VAMPIRE QUEEN OF COOKIES❤

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Left-wing Utopia

Postby Giovenith » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:08 pm

Going to bed too. Tomorrow is my mom's birthday, big 35, "time for me to finally start being a real adult" as she says. Night all.
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Erucia
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Postby Erucia » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:09 pm

Giovenith wrote:Going to bed too. Tomorrow is my mom's birthday, big 35, "time for me to finally start being a real adult" as she says. Night all.

Goodnight Gio, Cliffy and Torii!
"Peace, like war, must be waged."
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Postby Tiltjuice » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:09 pm

Yoshi and Katya apparently think it's normal to ignore unusual noises and Luce talking to what seems from their POV to be thin air.

I'm going to have SO much fun with them in the disaster event. For the less comedic ones, fair and only warning - I will kill chars if they don't pay attention.

Good night, Gio, Cliff, Torsi.
Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart. -Khalil Gibran
Cut red tape with the Red Book / Bureaucracy is a system - #ApplyTNI / Think globally, act locally
At fifteen, I set my heart on learning. At thirty, I was firmly established. At forty, I had no more doubts. At fifty, I knew the will of heaven. At sixty, I was ready to listen to it. At seventy, I could follow my heart's desire without transgressing what was right. ~Analects, 2:4
I wear teal, blue, pink, and red for Swith.
mumblemumblemumble

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Urran
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Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby Urran » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:12 pm

Tiltjuice wrote:Yoshi and Katya apparently think it's normal to ignore unusual noises and Luce talking to what seems from their POV to be thin air.

I'm going to have SO much fun with them in the disaster event. For the less comedic ones, fair and only warning - I will kill chars if they don't pay attention.

Good night, Gio, Cliff, Torsi.


I acknowledged Luce.
A lie doesn't become truth, wrong doesn't become right, and evil doesn't become good just because it's accepted by a majority.
Proud Coastie
The Blood Ravens wrote: How wonderful. Its like Japan, and 1950''s America had a baby. All the racism of the 50s, and everything else Japanese.

I <3 James May

I wear teal, blue & pink for Swith
❤BITTEN BY THE VAMPIRE QUEEN OF COOKIES❤

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Postby Torsiedelle » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:13 pm

Tiltjuice wrote:Yoshi and Katya apparently think it's normal to ignore unusual noises and Luce talking to what seems from their POV to be thin air.

I'm going to have SO much fun with them in the disaster event. For the less comedic ones, fair and only warning - I will kill chars if they don't pay attention.

Good night, Gio, Cliff, Torsi.


Yo, I just had to check something, so I didn't catch that last post. Sorry, lemme check.
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Postby Tiltjuice » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:13 pm

Urran wrote:I acknowledged Luce.


Yes, but not his talking to "thin air", i.e. Denise the statue who is outside the couple's field of vision. Yoshi is a journalist. Journalists love to ask questions, even above the average. And the average person would, upon seeing someone apparently talking to thin air, at least wonder what the heck is wrong with him.

My main point is, there's this whole world outside of Yoshi and Katya, but they're not venturing outside of it. Everything is Yoshi and Katya and tangentially Dora and even more tangentially Ogoti and Jacob and Ozzall and even more tangentially still Mrs Dimitrov. Those two are trapped in this little heart-shaped bubble where everything is pink and happy and unicorns vomit rainbows and shit butterflies. Yoshi has been killed many times. He's been murdered and they still don't know who did it. For all they know it could be Luce himself. And if they don't know where the danger is coming from, a guy standing there talking to "thin air" would look mighty suspicious. And that's just one of the directions they could go in.

There are plenty of other characters to interact with.
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Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart. -Khalil Gibran
Cut red tape with the Red Book / Bureaucracy is a system - #ApplyTNI / Think globally, act locally
At fifteen, I set my heart on learning. At thirty, I was firmly established. At forty, I had no more doubts. At fifty, I knew the will of heaven. At sixty, I was ready to listen to it. At seventy, I could follow my heart's desire without transgressing what was right. ~Analects, 2:4
I wear teal, blue, pink, and red for Swith.
mumblemumblemumble

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Urran
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Postby Urran » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:15 pm

I must have missed it. It's hard for me to think straight this late at night.
A lie doesn't become truth, wrong doesn't become right, and evil doesn't become good just because it's accepted by a majority.
Proud Coastie
The Blood Ravens wrote: How wonderful. Its like Japan, and 1950''s America had a baby. All the racism of the 50s, and everything else Japanese.

I <3 James May

I wear teal, blue & pink for Swith
❤BITTEN BY THE VAMPIRE QUEEN OF COOKIES❤

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Postby Tiltjuice » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:23 pm

Urran wrote:I must have missed it. It's hard for me to think straight this late at night.


Fair enough. It's a general concrit though.

(The unusual noises thing was in the afternoon here.)
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Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart. -Khalil Gibran
Cut red tape with the Red Book / Bureaucracy is a system - #ApplyTNI / Think globally, act locally
At fifteen, I set my heart on learning. At thirty, I was firmly established. At forty, I had no more doubts. At fifty, I knew the will of heaven. At sixty, I was ready to listen to it. At seventy, I could follow my heart's desire without transgressing what was right. ~Analects, 2:4
I wear teal, blue, pink, and red for Swith.
mumblemumblemumble

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Postby Torsiedelle » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:29 pm

Okay, well.....

Screw it. It's too damn late, and I gotta do something tomorrow. Goodnight.
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Postby Erucia » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:33 pm

Alright, I'm heading to bed. Night everyone!
"Peace, like war, must be waged."
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Postby Tiltjuice » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:33 pm

That was harsher than I usually am, but was it any less sensical for that?

Night wolfster.
Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart. -Khalil Gibran
Cut red tape with the Red Book / Bureaucracy is a system - #ApplyTNI / Think globally, act locally
At fifteen, I set my heart on learning. At thirty, I was firmly established. At forty, I had no more doubts. At fifty, I knew the will of heaven. At sixty, I was ready to listen to it. At seventy, I could follow my heart's desire without transgressing what was right. ~Analects, 2:4
I wear teal, blue, pink, and red for Swith.
mumblemumblemumble

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Swith Witherward
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Democratic Socialists

Postby Swith Witherward » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:50 pm

Okay... here's my attempt to explain. I'm not picking on Torsi or Urran. It's just a means for people to become aware of a new skill.

In RP, everything in a post counts. Everything. Never write something that doesn't have significance unless it's being done as a joke to shatter the fourth wall. Players put things in to their post that are necessary for advancement of a plot, moment, story etc.
    Fourth Wall Humor example: Cer's zinger about the mailboxes and his stuffing the coffee cup inside as a personal jab between us regarding where I put the eggs one morning.
    Example of Necessary Information: Cer describing the setting for the girls and mentioning the whack-a-mole game and the clown. That's a tip-off that shit ain't right and for the player to be wary of those things.

Yoshi and Katya are floating in their environment. They're not grounded to it. They're reacting to each other but not to the world. In some cases, they're even reacting to character motivation description.
    Odd Reaction Example: Katya thinking about her mother and Yoshi thinking about the woman in the very next post with no tie/trigger/common moment that would cause that mutual shared thought.

What we have is a failure to communicate!
Tilt posted that odd sounds were coming from another room. He also posted that Luce was talking to a statue. This isn't comic fluff. He's attempting to drop clues or introduce something that players should be aware of. When going to a new place, always pay attention to description. When interacting with other players (and when writing your own posts), look at the environment as well as emotional/verbal responses.

You could say, "Well, we're in the middle of a scene!" Yeah... it's emotional masturbation between two players and it could be paused and picked up again later (just like in real life). When sitting in another player's "scene" (in this case another character's apartment), it's rude to not acknowledge stuff. There's a reason Tilt brought them to that apartment, and the reason wasn't just so Yoshi and Katya could coo on the couch as they worked out personal issues.

Drama Overload!
It's good that Katya and Yoshi are talking things out. It's bad to do it at the expense of everything else. Guys, the only ones enjoying the drama conversation are the ones writing it. This stuff should be a collab. Why? Because it's very short dialog posts no bearing on anything else and it "floats" without being grounded in scene. Collabs are ideal for this sort of thing, plus you can tweak it before publication.

We're going into a series of serious events soon. The smallest detail matters. Failure to post that you acknowledge it in some fashion means that your character overlooked that detail. Literally. The down-turned hand you didn't notice was then brought up to fire a spring-released revolver in your face. The walls closing in do more than just make you feel cramped - they snatch you in the very next post and you see the words (OOC: make a new character). Remember Crucible? Prim's team almost died because they forgot to post that anyone was keeping watch.

Players try to incorporate other players in their plots but you guys (there's a bunch of you doing it) are just ignoring all the stuff around you. It's very frustrating.
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Why is everyone a social justice warrior?
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and humanities and their replacement by entertainment,
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