[DRAFT] International Day of Music

[Israel and the Sinai]

Intent
My intentions with this proposal is to recognize the important and profound role(s) music has had for our advancement as a species.

World Assembly
General Assembly

Acknowledging the universal significance of music as a cultural, social, and emotional phenomenon throughout history. I come to you this day to ensure that the value of music gets its deserved full recognition.

With this proposal, you as the member nation must recognize;

Evolution: Music has evolved alongside human civilizations, not just as enjoyment, but used for expression, communication, and formation and unity of cultures and ethnic groups.
Diversity: Music reflects the rich and unique tapestry and organization of human cultures, traditions, and languages, it offers a platform for preservation and celebration of cultural heritage.
Social Cohesion: Music transcends the barriers of race, nationality, ethnicity, and religion, bringing groups together through shared experiences of joy, sorrow, and solidarity.
Emotion: Music has profound effects on emotional and mental health, providing solace, catharsis, and inspiration in times of adversity and celebration.
Educational value: Music education promotes cognitive development, creativity, and cross-cultural understanding, nurturing talent of future generations as well as fostering empathy and respect for other perspectives.

Its provisions are as stated:
1. To ensure, to promote, preserve, and celebrate the diverse music traditions within your respective society, this includes safeguarding its intangible heritage.
2. To research, document, and disseminate knowledge of the role(s) music has in human societies, this includes interdisciplinary studies on its cognitive, emotional, and social dimensions, to inform evidence-based policies and practices.
3. Encourage music the use of music as a tool for social inclusion, dialogue, and peacebuilding, supporting initiatives that harness its transformative power to address pressing global challenges and promote positive changes.
4. To support policies and programs that foster growth for your nations music industry, including initiatives to promote equitable access to resources, fair compensation for artist, and protection of intellectual property.
5. To integrate the aforementioned provision be implemented to your respective nations systems of education.

With this you recognize the profound impact that music has on human development. We call on you, with urgent need, the member states, to promote, recognize and celebrate the diverse expressions of musical creativity as a fundamental aspect of human culture and well-being.

[Tigrisia]

World Assembly
General Council

"Is this for General Assembly or Security Council?" asks a confused intern of the Delegation of the Federal Republic of Tigrisia, who just completed basic training at the Department of Exterior of Tigrisia.

[Israel and the Sinai]

World Assembly
General Council

"Is this for General Assembly or Security Council?" asks a confused intern of the Delegation of the Federal Republic of Tigrisia, who just completed basic training at the Department of Exterior of Tigrisia.

This is for the General Assembly, apologies for the confusion.

[Tigrisia]

This is for the General Assembly, apologies for the confusion.

Ambassador Thomas Salazar joins his puzzled intern, reads the draft and proclaims: "That looks more like a pre-draft. GenSec is quite picky when it comes to how things are formulated. No references to yourself, such as "I" or "Israel and the Sinai" I recommend to read some resolutions that have been passed. By the way: Who are you? I have never seen you at these hallowed halls. Maybe we should have drink sometime at the World Assembly Strangers Bar."

OOC: Please formulate your resolutions like laws. Also, resolutions are fully in character, so no references to the real world.

[Israel and the Sinai]

New Draft

World Assembly
General Assembly

Proposal for Recognizing the Role of Music in Human Societies

Acknowledging the universal significance of music as a cultural, social, and emotional phenomenon throughout history, the United Nations General Assembly proposes to affirm the intrinsic value of music in enriching human experiences and fostering unity among diverse communities worldwide.

Recognizing:

1. Historical Evolution: Music has evolved alongside human civilization, serving as a medium of expression, communication, and identity formation across cultures and epochs.
2. Cultural Diversity: Music reflects the rich tapestry of human cultures, traditions, and languages, offering a platform for the preservation and celebration of cultural heritage.
3. Social Cohesion: Music transcends barriers of race, ethnicity, religion, and nationality, bringing people together through shared experiences of joy, sorrow, and solidarity.
4. Emotional Well-being: Music has profound effects on mental and emotional health, providing solace, inspiration, and catharsis in times of adversity and celebration.
5. Educational Value: Music education promotes cognitive development, creativity, and cross-cultural understanding, nurturing the talents of future generations and fostering a sense of empathy and respect for diverse perspectives.

Proposals that each member nation must enact:

1. Promotion of Musical Diversity: Encourage member states to support initiatives that preserve, promote, and celebrate the diversity of musical traditions within their respective societies, including the safeguarding of intangible cultural heritage related to music.
2. Integration of Music in Education: Advocate for the integration of music education in formal and informal educational settings, emphasizing its role in fostering holistic development and nurturing cultural literacy among learners of all ages.
3. Support for Music Industry: Call upon member states to support policies and programs that foster the growth and sustainability of the music industry, including initiatives to promote equitable access to resources, fair compensation for artists, and protection of intellectual property rights.
4. Harnessing Music for Social Change: Encourage the use of music as a tool for promoting social inclusion, dialogue, and peacebuilding, supporting initiatives that harness its transformative power to address pressing global challenges and promote positive social change.
5. Research and Documentation: Encourage research, documentation, and dissemination of knowledge on the role of music in human societies, including interdisciplinary studies on its cognitive, emotional, and social dimensions, to inform evidence-based policies and practices.

Conclusion:
Recognizing the profound impact of music on human societies throughout history, the United Nations General Assembly calls upon member states to recognize, celebrate, and promote the diverse expressions of musical creativity as a fundamental aspect of human culture and well-being.

[Fachumonn]

You should update your new draft and put it in the OP.

[The Overmind]

More broadly, I advise you to spend some time reading past proposals, taking a look at other drafting threads, and reading up on the rules.

[Israel and the Sinai]

Draft 3

The World Assembly (WA)

Recognizing the universal significance of music as a cultural, social, and emotional phenomenon transcending geographical and temporal boundaries,

Acknowledging the profound impact of music on human societies throughout history, fostering connections, facilitating communication, and enhancing well-being,

Emphasizing the diverse forms and expressions of music across cultures and civilizations, reflecting the richness of human creativity and ingenuity,

Noting the pivotal role of music in promoting unity, fostering understanding, and celebrating diversity within and among communities worldwide,

Reaffirming the fundamental right of all individuals to access and participate in musical expression, regardless of socio-economic status, geographic location, or cultural background,

Recalling the intrinsic value of music in education, cognitive development, and emotional expression, contributing to holistic human development and lifelong learning,

Mindful of the challenges facing the preservation and promotion of traditional and indigenous musical heritage in the face of globalization and technological advancements,

Stressing the importance of safeguarding the rights of musicians, composers, and performers, ensuring fair compensation, protection of intellectual property, and access to artistic opportunities,

Recognizing the significant economic contributions of the music industry to global economies, including employment, tourism, and cultural exports,

Affirming the transformative potential of music in promoting social justice, fostering dialogue, and addressing pressing global issues such as conflict resolution, climate change, and public health,

Reiterating the commitment of the international community to harnessing the power of music as a tool for peacebuilding, reconciliation, and sustainable development,

Hereby Enacts the following measures to support the development and enjoyment of music within human populations:

Promotion of Musical Education: Encourage member states to prioritize the inclusion of comprehensive music education in school curricula at all levels, ensuring equitable access for all students.

Preservation of Cultural Heritage: Support initiatives aimed at safeguarding and revitalizing traditional and indigenous musical practices, including documentation, conservation, and transmission to future generations.

Fostering Artistic Exchange: Facilitate cross-cultural collaborations, exchanges, and residencies for musicians, composers, and performers to promote mutual understanding and appreciation of diverse musical traditions.

Investment in Music Infrastructure: Allocate resources for the development and maintenance of music infrastructure, including concert halls, recording studios, rehearsal spaces, and music libraries, to enhance access and participation.

Support for Music Industry: Implement policies to support the sustainability and growth of the music industry, including fair remuneration for artists, copyright protection, and access to funding and professional development opportunities.

Integration of Music in Development Agenda: Integrate music and cultural expression into broader development strategies, including poverty alleviation, social inclusion, and community empowerment, recognizing its potential to inspire positive change.

Promotion of Music for Well-being: Advocate for the inclusion of music therapy and recreational music-making programs in healthcare settings, rehabilitation centers, and community outreach initiatives to promote mental and emotional well-being.

Harnessing Technology for Music Accessibility: Leverage digital technologies and online platforms to enhance access to musical resources, educational materials, and cultural heritage, particularly in underserved and remote communities.

Calls Upon member states to collaborate with relevant stakeholders, including civil society organizations, educational institutions, and the private sector, to implement these measures effectively and inclusively.

Urges member states to exchange best practices, research findings, and innovative approaches in the field of music development and promotion through regional and international cooperation mechanisms.

Requests the WA Secretariat to compile and disseminate information on successful music-related initiatives, resources, and funding opportunities to member states and relevant stakeholders on a regular basis.

Further Requests the WA Secretariat to convene periodic meetings, workshops, and conferences on topics related to music development and enjoyment, inviting experts, practitioners, and policymakers to share experiences and lessons learned.

Calls For the establishment of a dedicated fund within the WA budget to support music-related projects and initiatives, prioritizing efforts that promote cultural diversity, social inclusion, and sustainable development goals.

Urges member states to actively engage with their respective music communities and civil society organizations to ensure the effective implementation of this resolution and to report on progress and challenges encountered in their annual submissions to the WA Secretariat.

Encourages member states to celebrate International Music Day annually, showcasing the diversity and vibrancy of their musical heritage through concerts, festivals, workshops, and other cultural events, fostering dialogue and mutual respect among nations.

Invites member states to consider ratifying and implementing relevant international conventions and agreements pertaining to cultural diversity, artistic freedom, and the protection of cultural heritage, recognizing the integral role of music in advancing these principles.

Expresses its Hope that the provisions of this resolution will contribute to the promotion of music as a universal language of peace, solidarity, and human expression, fostering a more harmonious and interconnected world for present and future generations.

Should I work on this more?

[Tigrisia]

"Looks good. Two things: We are afraid, even though we stand in favour of long, coherent resolutions that grasp the topic in detail, resolutions unfortunately are limited to 5000 characters. Also, we recommend to format your resolution well, so it is easier to read."

[Israel and the Sinai]

The World Assembly (WA)

Noting the universal significance of music as a form of human expression and cultural identity throughout history,

Recognizing its profound impact on social cohesion, emotional well-being, and intercultural dialogue worldwide,

Acknowledging the diverse array of musical traditions, genres, and styles, enriching the cultural heritage of humanity,

Emphasizing the fundamental right of all individuals to access and participate in musical activities, regardless of background or socio-economic status,

Reaffirming its potential as a powerful tool for promoting peace, understanding, and reconciliation among communities and nations,

Stressing the importance of addressing challenges such as commercialization, inequality, and the erosion of traditional musical practices,

Hereby Enacts the following measures to advance the development and enjoyment of music within human populations:

1. Promotion of Music Education: Prioritize the inclusion of comprehensive music education in school curricula at all levels, ensuring equitable access for all students.

2. Preservation of Musical Heritage: Support initiatives aimed at documenting, preserving, and transmitting traditional and indigenous musical practices, fostering cultural continuity and diversity.

3. Promotion of Cultural Diversity: Foster cross-cultural exchange and appreciation of diverse musical traditions, promoting mutual understanding and respect among cultures.

4. Support for Musicians and Artists: Ensure fair remuneration, copyright protection, and access to resources for musicians, composers, and performers, sustaining artistic creativity and innovation.

5. Music for Social Impact: Harness the potential of music as a tool for social justice, community empowerment, and sustainable development, addressing societal challenges and promoting positive change.

6. Integration of Music in Healthcare: Promote the use of music therapy and recreational music-making programs in healthcare settings, enhancing well-being and quality of life.

7. Digital Access and Inclusion: Leverage digital technologies to broaden access to music education, resources, and platforms, bridging digital divides and promoting inclusivity.

Calls Upon member states to adopt and implement policies and programs in line with the provisions of this resolution, tailored to their respective cultural contexts and needs.

Urges member states to strengthen international cooperation and exchange in the field of music, facilitating partnerships, exchanges, and collaboration among nations and stakeholders.

Requests the WA Secretariat to provide technical assistance, capacity-building support, and knowledge-sharing platforms to member states and relevant stakeholders.

Calls For the establishment of a dedicated fund within the WA budget to support music-related projects and initiatives, prioritizing efforts that promote cultural diversity, social inclusion, and sustainable development goals.

Expresses its Hope that the provisions of this resolution will contribute to the promotion of music as a universal language of peace, unity, and human expression, fostering mutual respect, understanding, and solidarity among peoples and nations worldwide.

[Kenmoria]

(OOC: First, I recommend putting the most recent draft in the first post. Otherwise, people will need to scroll in order to see it. My second piece of feedback, which is more general, is that each clause here has quite a nebulous area of effect. What does it mean to “support initiatives”, “harness the potential of music as a tool for social justice”, or “leverage digital technologies to broaden the access”? These are all great ideas, but there’s no concrete action associated with them. All of the clauses at the end, the ones with bold text, should be how the entire proposal is structured. That will mean that everything will naturally tend towards having a real impact.)