NATION

PASSWORD

[DRAFT]Banning the Use of Mercury as a Propellant Additive

Where WA members debate how to improve the world, one resolution at a time.
User avatar
Rho Ophiuchi
Attaché
 
Posts: 89
Founded: Apr 26, 2021
Capitalizt

[DRAFT]Banning the Use of Mercury as a Propellant Additive

Postby Rho Ophiuchi » Wed Jun 22, 2022 5:11 am

Hello All,

I would like to submit the following draft for consideration.

Banning the Use of Mercury as a Propellant Additive

Category: Regulation
Area of Effect: Safety

The World Assembly,

Noting that the extremely high densities of elemental mercury and mercury-containing compounds makes them a useful additive for storable rocket propellants in rocketry, including short-range missile and jet-assisted take-off applications;

Realizing that the use of mercury in rocket combustion can lead to the dispersal of both mercury vapour and mercury oxide salts into the atmosphere;

Alarmed that these exhaust components have been shown to cause severe damage to the nervous system and kidneys of those exposed;

Hereby bans the use of mercury-containing compounds in rocket systems operating in the atmosphere, to prevent the release of mercury vapour and mercury oxides into the atmosphere and environment, and the damage to human health that would cause,

Bans the manufacture or storage of mercury-containing propellants for atmospheric rocket systems, to prevent incentives for their use,

And bans the export or import of such systems to or from member states, in an effort to prevent the international dissemination of their use.


My rationale for this draft is perhaps best explained by the below post.

Rho Ophiuchi wrote:Hello All,

I hope that this is the right forum to post this idea in.

I have an idea for a potential resolution, and I did as quick a check as I could to see if it had been done before, but I do not think it has. In any case, I recently found out that back in the 1950s and 1960s mercury metal, of all things, was considered for usage as a rocket propellant additive for things like surface-to-air missiles and JATO (jet-assisted take-off), as it had an extremely high density (I got this information from reading Ignition! An Informal History of Liquid Rocket Propellants by John Drury Clark).

While this does not sound like a good qualification for rocket fuels, surface-to-air missiles and JATO typically have very low required delta-V, which means that the mass of the fuel is usually small compared to the mass of the payload, so volume and thrust was the primary concern for militaries instead of mass.

Mercury, despite being relatively unreactive, was extremely high density (so adding it took up little additional space), and was useful as reaction mass for increasing vehicle thrust. As the total thrust of the rocket is approximately the exhaust velocity of the exhaust times the mass of the propellant, and the fuel generated a fixed amount of kinetic energy from its chemical reactions, increasing the mass of the propellant by a factor of X^2 would only decrease the exhaust velocity by approximately a factor of X, and thus increase the total thrust by a factor of X^2/X = X as well.

As such, I am wondering if it would be reasonable, given the highly toxic nature of both vapourized mercury and potential mercury oxides and hydroxides that might form in the exhaust of such rockets, to propose a WA resolution recommending the avoidance of their use.

This resolution would of course be mild (since it would just be a recommendation), and would probably best fit into the regulation (safety AoE) category, though I may be wrong on this.


Finally, I would just like to note that I am aware of being a complete novice at the creation of potential WA resolutions, and apologize for any major errors in this draft. Thank you all for your time and consideration.
Last edited by Rho Ophiuchi on Mon Jun 27, 2022 5:56 am, edited 6 times in total.
Sincerely,
Rho Ophiuchi
WA puppet: Toaster Head Nation
NS stats are canon, but population and GDP are 10x lower for realism

User avatar
Bananaistan
Senator
 
Posts: 3518
Founded: Apr 20, 2012
Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby Bananaistan » Wed Jun 22, 2022 5:52 am

OOC: No idea how much of a problem this is IRL. Would a complete ban be feasible? Merely discouraging seems to be a bit of a waste of text but your proposal is perfectly cromulent otherwise.

IC: "Support."
Delegation of the People's Republic of Bananaistan to the World Assembly
Head of delegation and the Permanent Representative: Comrade Ambassador Theodorus "Ted" Hornwood
General Assistant and Head of Security: Comrade Watchman Brian of Tarth
There was the Pope and John F. Kennedy and Jack Charlton and the three of them were staring me in the face.
Ideological Bulwark #281
THIS

User avatar
Rho Ophiuchi
Attaché
 
Posts: 89
Founded: Apr 26, 2021
Capitalizt

Postby Rho Ophiuchi » Wed Jun 22, 2022 6:09 am

Bananaistan wrote:OOC: No idea how much of a problem this is IRL. Would a complete ban be feasible? Merely discouraging seems to be a bit of a waste of text but your proposal is perfectly cromulent otherwise.

IC: "Support."

Hello Bananaistan,

OOC: I am not aware of this being much or a problem irl, with my only knowledge of it being in relation to some american rocket tests in the 1950s and 1960s, but the results were so detrimental that I wanted to breifly get a proposal out. I am also hesitant to do anything more than discouragement, both because I would not want to submit something as extreme as a total ban as my very first proposal, and because a ban might create a conflict with the next version of the Toxic Heavy Metals Act.
Last edited by Rho Ophiuchi on Wed Jun 22, 2022 6:18 am, edited 1 time in total.
Sincerely,
Rho Ophiuchi
WA puppet: Toaster Head Nation
NS stats are canon, but population and GDP are 10x lower for realism

User avatar
Simone Republic
Ambassador
 
Posts: 1830
Founded: Jul 09, 2019
Capitalist Paradise

Postby Simone Republic » Wed Jun 22, 2022 7:36 am

I am not a chemist and this is not my field of expertise but I think it's a worthwhile cause.
All posts OOC. (He/him). I don't speak for TNP. IC the "white bear" (it) is for jokes only.

User avatar
Untecna
Negotiator
 
Posts: 5514
Founded: Jun 02, 2020
Psychotic Dictatorship

Postby Untecna » Wed Jun 22, 2022 7:40 am

OOC: I can support this, mostly because it feels very nerdy and I love it. Rockets are cool and regulating them a bit would be good as well.

IC: "Our delegation can support this proposal. While it may not apply to us as heavily as others, it is better that those others have it applied to them."
Dragon with internet access. I am coming for your data. More for the hoard.
NFL Team: 49rs
California is the best is the worst is kinda okay
I may not be an expert on them, but I feel like I know about way too many obscure video/audio formats.
Issues Author (#1520) | Failed GA Resolution Author

User avatar
Tinhampton
Postmaster-General
 
Posts: 13700
Founded: Oct 05, 2016
Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby Tinhampton » Wed Jun 22, 2022 8:48 am

Safety is an area of effect of the Regulation category (and Regulation resolutions should - from memory - be at least Significant in strength). It is not a category with strengths in itself.
The Self-Administrative City of TINHAMPTON (pop. 329,537): Saffron Howard, Mayor (UCP); Alexander Smith, WA Delegate-Ambassador

Authorships & co-authorships: SC#250, SC#251, Issue #1115, SC#267, GA#484, GA#491, GA#533, GA#540, GA#549, SC#356, GA#559, GA#562, GA#567, GA#578, SC#374, GA#582, SC#375, GA#589, GA#590, SC#382, SC#385*, GA#597, GA#607, SC#415, GA#647, GA#656, GA#664, GA#671, GA#674, GA#675, GA#677, GA#680, Issue #1580, GA#682, GA#683, GA#684, GA#692, GA#693, GA#715
The rest of my CV: Cup of Harmony 73 champions; Philosopher-Queen of Sophia; *author of the most popular SC Res. ever; anti-NPO cabalist in good standing; 48yo Tory woman w/Asperger's; Cambridge graduate ~ currently reading The World by Simon Sebag Montefiore

User avatar
Rho Ophiuchi
Attaché
 
Posts: 89
Founded: Apr 26, 2021
Capitalizt

Postby Rho Ophiuchi » Wed Jun 22, 2022 9:21 am

Tinhampton wrote:Safety is an area of effect of the Regulation category (and Regulation resolutions should - from memory - be at least Significant in strength). It is not a category with strengths in itself.

Hello Tinhampton,

Thank you for the information - what do you mean by "category with strengths in itself," by the way? I did not understand that wording.
Sincerely,
Rho Ophiuchi
WA puppet: Toaster Head Nation
NS stats are canon, but population and GDP are 10x lower for realism

User avatar
Tinhampton
Postmaster-General
 
Posts: 13700
Founded: Oct 05, 2016
Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby Tinhampton » Wed Jun 22, 2022 9:26 am

Rho Ophiuchi wrote:
Tinhampton wrote:Safety is an area of effect of the Regulation category (and Regulation resolutions should - from memory - be at least Significant in strength). It is not a category with strengths in itself.

Hello Tinhampton,

Thank you for the information - what do you mean by "category with strengths in itself," by the way? I did not understand that wording.

It is literally impossible to submit a resolution as a Safety resolution with Mild strength.
The Self-Administrative City of TINHAMPTON (pop. 329,537): Saffron Howard, Mayor (UCP); Alexander Smith, WA Delegate-Ambassador

Authorships & co-authorships: SC#250, SC#251, Issue #1115, SC#267, GA#484, GA#491, GA#533, GA#540, GA#549, SC#356, GA#559, GA#562, GA#567, GA#578, SC#374, GA#582, SC#375, GA#589, GA#590, SC#382, SC#385*, GA#597, GA#607, SC#415, GA#647, GA#656, GA#664, GA#671, GA#674, GA#675, GA#677, GA#680, Issue #1580, GA#682, GA#683, GA#684, GA#692, GA#693, GA#715
The rest of my CV: Cup of Harmony 73 champions; Philosopher-Queen of Sophia; *author of the most popular SC Res. ever; anti-NPO cabalist in good standing; 48yo Tory woman w/Asperger's; Cambridge graduate ~ currently reading The World by Simon Sebag Montefiore

User avatar
Fachumonn
Ambassador
 
Posts: 1525
Founded: Apr 11, 2021
Scandinavian Liberal Paradise

Postby Fachumonn » Wed Jun 22, 2022 9:55 am

OOC: I'd like to note how this proposal literally does nothing at the moment. A ban would probably be a better idea.
GA Authorship Leaderboard | Guide to Campaigning | Other Resources

-11th Delegate of LSC. (May 31 2021-October 16 2022, June 9 2023-August 21 2023, November 1 2023-)

WA Ambassador: The People | Pronouns: He/Him/His| RL Ideology: Libertarian Socialism/Anarcho-Communism | GP Alignment: Independent |

User avatar
Rho Ophiuchi
Attaché
 
Posts: 89
Founded: Apr 26, 2021
Capitalizt

Postby Rho Ophiuchi » Wed Jun 22, 2022 10:02 am


Fachumonn wrote:OOC: I'd like to note how this proposal literally does nothing at the moment. A ban would probably be a better idea.

Hello,

Would a ban be enough to move the resolution to intermediate strength, or is it too specific to be anything other than mild?
Sincerely,
Rho Ophiuchi
WA puppet: Toaster Head Nation
NS stats are canon, but population and GDP are 10x lower for realism

User avatar
Separatist Peoples
GA Secretariat
 
Posts: 16989
Founded: Feb 17, 2011
Left-Leaning College State

Postby Separatist Peoples » Wed Jun 22, 2022 10:16 am

"We would support a stronger ban on such additives."

His Worshipfulness, the Most Unscrupulous, Plainly Deceitful, Dissembling, Strategicly Calculating Lord GA Secretariat, Authority on All Existence, Arbiter of Right, Toxic Globalist Dog, Dark Psychic Vampire, and Chief Populist Elitist!
Separatist Peoples should RESIGN!

User avatar
Makko Oko
Ambassador
 
Posts: 1045
Founded: Jan 20, 2018
Corrupt Dictatorship

Postby Makko Oko » Wed Jun 22, 2022 10:24 am

"We will support the strictest resolution on these additives, including outright bans. 100% support." - Alora Hakjova, Makko Oko Minister Of Diplomatic Affairs
OBC Current News: First-Ever Anti-Terrorism Act Enacted | Emperor launches plans to expand trade | Danika Hicks Case: NOT GUILTY VERDICT! Court rules 3-2
Information:
IIWiki Factbooks
NS Factbooks

NOTE: This nation does not reflect my real beliefs in any way, shape or form

User avatar
Rho Ophiuchi
Attaché
 
Posts: 89
Founded: Apr 26, 2021
Capitalizt

Postby Rho Ophiuchi » Wed Jun 22, 2022 10:34 am

Hello All,

My next draft for this resolution is shown below.

Banning the Use of Mercury as a Propellant Additive

Category: Regulation
Area of Effect: Safety

The World Assembly,

Noting that the extremely high density of elemental mercury makes it a useful additive for storable rocket propellants in both short-range missile and jet-assisted take-off applications,

Realizing that the use of mercury in rocket combustion can lead to the dispersal of both mercury vapour and mercury oxide salts into the atmosphere,

Alarmed that these exhaust components have been shown to cause severe damage to the nervous system and kidneys of those exposed,

Hereby bans the use of elemental mercury as a propellant additive in short-range missile and jet-assisted take-off applications to discourage the harmful release of mercury vapour and mercury oxides into the atmosphere.


I would like to again thank everyone here again for their time and useful feedback.
Last edited by Rho Ophiuchi on Wed Jun 22, 2022 12:46 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Sincerely,
Rho Ophiuchi
WA puppet: Toaster Head Nation
NS stats are canon, but population and GDP are 10x lower for realism

User avatar
Fachumonn
Ambassador
 
Posts: 1525
Founded: Apr 11, 2021
Scandinavian Liberal Paradise

Postby Fachumonn » Wed Jun 22, 2022 11:24 am

If this is going to be a ban, you forgot the title.
GA Authorship Leaderboard | Guide to Campaigning | Other Resources

-11th Delegate of LSC. (May 31 2021-October 16 2022, June 9 2023-August 21 2023, November 1 2023-)

WA Ambassador: The People | Pronouns: He/Him/His| RL Ideology: Libertarian Socialism/Anarcho-Communism | GP Alignment: Independent |

User avatar
Rho Ophiuchi
Attaché
 
Posts: 89
Founded: Apr 26, 2021
Capitalizt

Postby Rho Ophiuchi » Wed Jun 22, 2022 11:25 am

Fachumonn wrote:If this is going to be a ban, you forgot the title.

Hello Fachumonn,

Thank you for the observation - indeed I did. I have edited my previous post to remedy this.
Sincerely,
Rho Ophiuchi
WA puppet: Toaster Head Nation
NS stats are canon, but population and GDP are 10x lower for realism

User avatar
Fachumonn
Ambassador
 
Posts: 1525
Founded: Apr 11, 2021
Scandinavian Liberal Paradise

Postby Fachumonn » Wed Jun 22, 2022 11:28 am

Rho Ophiuchi wrote:
Fachumonn wrote:If this is going to be a ban, you forgot the title.

Hello Fachumonn,

Thank you for the observation - indeed I did. I have edited my previous post to remedy this.

You forgot to change your title, or your proposal in your original post.

Quick Question - Do you know how to edit your post? If not, there is a button in the top that should say "edit" - click that.
GA Authorship Leaderboard | Guide to Campaigning | Other Resources

-11th Delegate of LSC. (May 31 2021-October 16 2022, June 9 2023-August 21 2023, November 1 2023-)

WA Ambassador: The People | Pronouns: He/Him/His| RL Ideology: Libertarian Socialism/Anarcho-Communism | GP Alignment: Independent |

User avatar
Rho Ophiuchi
Attaché
 
Posts: 89
Founded: Apr 26, 2021
Capitalizt

Postby Rho Ophiuchi » Wed Jun 22, 2022 11:34 am

Fachumonn wrote:You forgot to change your title, or your proposal in your original post.

Quick Question - Do you know how to edit your post? If not, there is a button in the top that should say "edit" - click that.

Hello Fachumonn,

Thank you for notifying me that I needed to edit the original post and title. I have now done so.

I am aware of the method of post editing - I was merely not aware that specifically editing the original post was required, and I edited a later post instead.
Sincerely,
Rho Ophiuchi
WA puppet: Toaster Head Nation
NS stats are canon, but population and GDP are 10x lower for realism

User avatar
The North Polish Union
Senator
 
Posts: 4776
Founded: Nov 13, 2012
Moralistic Democracy

Postby The North Polish Union » Wed Jun 22, 2022 11:41 am

OOC: When I looked into the US rocket tests you mentioned I only found information about mercury being used in ion thrusters, not conventional rockets. Ion thrusters only work in the vacuum of space, they aren't viable within an atmosphere, so rockets using ion thrusters are typically launched using conventional rocket fuels. This nature inherently minimizes the risk to on-planet populations as the thruster is being used.

One can still make the case that the presence of mercury poses a potential safety hazard if something goes wrong pre-launch, but this hazard already exists for any of the current common industrial or scientific uses for mercury, and the GA hasn't exactly called those out specifically yet.
Hakinda Herseyi Duymak istiyorum wrote:keep your wet opinions to yourself. Byzantium and Ottoman will not come again. Whoever thinks of this wet dream will feel the power of the Republic's secular army.
Minskiev wrote:You are GP's dross.
Petrovsegratsk wrote:NPU, I know your clearly a Polish nationalist, but wtf is up with your obssession with resurrecting the Polish-Lithuanian Commonwealth?
The yoshin empire wrote:Grouping russians with slavs is like grouping germans with french , the two are so culturally different.

.
Balansujcie dopóki się da, a gdy się już nie da, podpalcie świat!
Author of S.C. Res. № 137
POLAND
STRONG!

User avatar
Rho Ophiuchi
Attaché
 
Posts: 89
Founded: Apr 26, 2021
Capitalizt

Postby Rho Ophiuchi » Wed Jun 22, 2022 12:01 pm

The North Polish Union wrote:OOC: When I looked into the US rocket tests you mentioned I only found information about mercury being used in ion thrusters, not conventional rockets. Ion thrusters only work in the vacuum of space, they aren't viable within an atmosphere, so rockets using ion thrusters are typically launched using conventional rocket fuels. This nature inherently minimizes the risk to on-planet populations as the thruster is being used.

One can still make the case that the presence of mercury poses a potential safety hazard if something goes wrong pre-launch, but this hazard already exists for any of the current common industrial or scientific uses for mercury, and the GA hasn't exactly called those out specifically yet.

Hello The North Polish Union,

The use of mercury in ion thrusters is something entirely different than the affected systems from this proposal. This proposal looks to ban the practice of directly injecting liquid mercury into the engine chambers of chemical rocket engines, as was done in the 1950s and 1960s, as this leads to large quantities of mercury being vapourized or oxidized, and shot into the atmosphere, even if things go right. I learned of these tests from the book Ignition! An Informal History of Liquid Rocket Propellants by John Drury Clark, and I would expect them to be fairly obscure, at least in comparison to more exciting technologies such as electric propulsion.
Sincerely,
Rho Ophiuchi
WA puppet: Toaster Head Nation
NS stats are canon, but population and GDP are 10x lower for realism

User avatar
Rho Ophiuchi
Attaché
 
Posts: 89
Founded: Apr 26, 2021
Capitalizt

Postby Rho Ophiuchi » Wed Jun 22, 2022 12:08 pm

Hello All,

For anyone curious about my source, you can access it through [REDACTED], and the part I am concerned about specifically is mentioned in pages 178-179. While a scrubber is noted to have been built to remove the mercury from the exhaust in these tests, it was not actually used in the tests.
Last edited by Goobergunchia on Wed Jun 22, 2022 1:21 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Sincerely,
Rho Ophiuchi
WA puppet: Toaster Head Nation
NS stats are canon, but population and GDP are 10x lower for realism

User avatar
Bananaistan
Senator
 
Posts: 3518
Founded: Apr 20, 2012
Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby Bananaistan » Wed Jun 22, 2022 12:37 pm

Rho Ophiuchi wrote:

Fachumonn wrote:OOC: I'd like to note how this proposal literally does nothing at the moment. A ban would probably be a better idea.

Hello,

Would a ban be enough to move the resolution to intermediate strength, or is it too specific to be anything other than mild?


OOC: What the above posters refer to is that categories have either a Strength or Area of Effect, but not both. In this case, your proposal would fit the Regulation category and Safety AoE as you've stated, but because it's in the Regulation category, there's no strength.

Rho Ophiuchi wrote:
Bananaistan wrote:OOC: No idea how much of a problem this is IRL. Would a complete ban be feasible? Merely discouraging seems to be a bit of a waste of text but your proposal is perfectly cromulent otherwise.

IC: "Support."

Hello Bananaistan,

OOC: I am not aware of this being much or a problem irl, with my only knowledge of it being in relation to some american rocket tests in the 1950s and 1960s, but the results were so detrimental that I wanted to breifly get a proposal out. I am also hesitant to do anything more than discouragement, both because I would not want to submit something as extreme as a total ban as my very first proposal, and because a ban might create a conflict with the next version of the Toxic Heavy Metals Act.


I wouldn't worry about conflicting with undrafted, potential future proposals. You're here with this idea first. Let the author of any potential future proposal worry about contradiction with this if it passes.

IC: "We support the recent changes to strengthen the proposal."
Delegation of the People's Republic of Bananaistan to the World Assembly
Head of delegation and the Permanent Representative: Comrade Ambassador Theodorus "Ted" Hornwood
General Assistant and Head of Security: Comrade Watchman Brian of Tarth
There was the Pope and John F. Kennedy and Jack Charlton and the three of them were staring me in the face.
Ideological Bulwark #281
THIS

User avatar
Rho Ophiuchi
Attaché
 
Posts: 89
Founded: Apr 26, 2021
Capitalizt

Postby Rho Ophiuchi » Wed Jun 22, 2022 12:47 pm

Bananaistan wrote:
OOC: What the above posters refer to is that categories have either a Strength or Area of Effect, but not both. In this case, your proposal would fit the Regulation category and Safety AoE as you've stated, but because it's in the Regulation category, there's no strength.

I wouldn't worry about conflicting with undrafted, potential future proposals. You're here with this idea first. Let the author of any potential future proposal worry about contradiction with this if it passes.

IC: "We support the recent changes to strengthen the proposal."

Hello Bananaistan,

Ah, I see now. I will modify the proposal immediately.

I am also under the impression that the new draft of the toxic heavy metals act was started, and drafted, but has been inactive for about a year.
Sincerely,
Rho Ophiuchi
WA puppet: Toaster Head Nation
NS stats are canon, but population and GDP are 10x lower for realism

User avatar
Goobergunchia
Game Moderator
 
Posts: 2376
Founded: Antiquity
Scandinavian Liberal Paradise

Postby Goobergunchia » Wed Jun 22, 2022 1:26 pm

Do not post links to pirated material on this site.

Ignition! was brought back into print in 2018 and is readily available.
(+5175 posts from mostly pre-Jolt)
Making NationStates a different place since 17 May 2003.
ADN Advisor (Ret.)
Nasicournian Officer
Citizen of the Rejected Realms
Discord: Goobergunch#2417
Ideological Bulwark #16
Sponsor, HR#22, SC#4
Rules: GA SC
NS Game Moderator
For your forum moderation needs: The Moderation Forum
For your in-game moderation needs: The Getting Help Page
What are the rules? See the OSRS.
Who are the mods, anyway?

User avatar
Rho Ophiuchi
Attaché
 
Posts: 89
Founded: Apr 26, 2021
Capitalizt

Postby Rho Ophiuchi » Wed Jun 22, 2022 1:54 pm

Goobergunchia wrote:Do not post links to pirated material on this site.

Ignition! was brought back into print in 2018 and is readily available.

Hello,

Apologies - I acted without thought. I will refrain from doing so in the future.
Sincerely,
Rho Ophiuchi
WA puppet: Toaster Head Nation
NS stats are canon, but population and GDP are 10x lower for realism

User avatar
Sierra Lyricalia
Senator
 
Posts: 4343
Founded: Nov 29, 2008
Left-wing Utopia

Postby Sierra Lyricalia » Wed Jun 22, 2022 7:26 pm

Rho Ophiuchi wrote:The World Assembly,

Noting that the extremely high density of elemental mercury makes it a useful additive for storable rocket propellants in both short-range missile and jet-assisted take-off applications,

Realizing that the use of mercury in rocket combustion can lead to the dispersal of both mercury vapour and mercury oxide salts into the atmosphere,

Alarmed that these exhaust components have been shown to cause severe damage to the nervous system and kidneys of those exposed,

Hereby bans the use of elemental presence of mercury as a propellant additive in short-range missile and jet-assisted take-off applications in vehicle exhaust, to discourage minimize the harmful release of mercury vapour and mercury oxides into the atmosphere.


"I've forwarded a suggested rewrite of the operative clause to your desk," Leo says as one of the interns quietly drops a piece of paper on the Ophiuchian desk before shuffling quietly back to Leo's side. "This would eliminate the use of certain silly loopholes based on mercury compounds, as well as nipping in the bud the nitpickers saying 'nuh-uh, this here's a long range missile system!' or whatever they decide to call their vehicle. These changes might eventually result in a bottom-up rewrite of the whole sentence just to be less awkward, but there's nothing sad in that."
Last edited by Sierra Lyricalia on Wed Jun 22, 2022 7:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Principal-Agent, Anarchy; Squadron Admiral [fmr], The Red Fleet
The Semi-Honorable Leonid Berkman Pavonis
Author: 354 GA / Issues 436, 451, 724
Ambassador Pro Tem
Tech Level: Complicated (or not: 7/0/6 i.e. 12) / RP Details
.
Jerk, Ideological Deviant, Roach, MT Army stooge, & "red [who] do[es]n't read" (various)
.
Illustrious Bum #279


Next

Advertisement

Remove ads

Return to General Assembly

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: Tigrisia

Advertisement

Remove ads