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To increase efficiency and save expenses, reduce the chance of child and elder abuse, reduce the chance of corrupted on Education, Childcare and Elderly Services, the following reforms are advocated.

Part One
Decentralized Autonomous Management System:
All Parents, students, teachers and volunteers are invited to participate in voting to jointly decide school rules and various major decisions and then organize students to implement school management under the guidance of teachers and volunteers.

System management: anyone can provide proposal, discuss and vote through the open source blockchain mobile application, all proposal will randomly invite 99 current online users to participate in the evaluation through voting (prevent a decision-making committee composed of a small group of people from monopolizing decision-making power) , anyone can provide suggestion to improve it.

Benefits:
1. Save the cost of salary of management team,
2. Reduce opportunities for officials to shield each other from common corruption and child abuse.
3. Enhance students' independent thinking, awareness of the rule of law, teamwork and management skills.

Part Two
1. Setup the Mutual Aid Base for the Elderly and Children that integrates nurseries, boarding schools, nursing homes, shelters for the disabled, apprenticeship hospitals and modern agricultural bases, facilitate the integration of resources to save the land and expenses.

2. Setup the Social Contribution Points System to encourage all recipients (include their family member and Volunteer) to look after each other, caring for young children, farming (adopting AI in Organic Farming to Improve Food Security and efficiency) and maintain the public area, all recipients will be allocated different levels of housing, food and medical services according to their social contribution points, senior class students are responsible for guiding junior class students.

3. Compulsory military training since kindergarten, cultivate students' ability to survive in the wild, self-care ability, medical work and strong perseverance.
Let students get used to high-intensity exercise and a balanced diet since childhood, and strengthen the labor ability, mental strength, body resistance and healthy vitality. Reduce medical expenses and various social crises.

4. Co-organize apprenticeship courses with corporations and charity hospitals to cultivate students' diverse skills from primary school, including 3D graphic and programming for the construction of metaverse.

5. Attract children to self-study through gamified intelligent metaverse apps to complete college courses; introduce training courses on memory improvement, psychology, financial ability, interpersonal communication and sexual skills to enhance everyone's affinity, expression ability, learning ability and influence, more adaptable to future social needs.

Benefits:
1. All parents will no longer need to place time and money (supported by Mutual Fund) in caring for children and the elderly, which will help improve the overall productivity, sense of security and happiness index for all.
2. Let group of elderly live with children of different ages, let them feel younger, no longer lonely, have more people to take care of each other and reduce the chance of them being bullied by the staff and domestic violence.
3. Encourage Child and Elderly take care each others, can save >80% salary expenses, cultivate the good habit of students of helping others from an early age, let all recipient have a sustenance in their lives.

Part Three
All People's Mutual Fund
Setup the Education, Venture Capital and Pension Mutual Fund that owned and managed by all people.

Details:
1. All shareholders make decision together, apply seed capital for projects and provide idea via the Decentralized Autonomous Management System.

2. Central bank will buy the 100 years zero rate bonds that issued by the fund, and will serve as the basis for money printing, all people share the loss caused by inflation as their investment.
The Fund will invest on the Research and Entrepreneurship Projects, support currency value and reduce inflation by supporting the real economy and artificial intelligence automated production lines to increase production capacity and push GDP.

3. The fund will invest on "Mutual Aid Base for the Elderly and Children" (and other projects proposed by shareholders and government), all sponsored students (and projects) are responsible for repaying the principal in installments within 30 years, and share 5% of their lifetime income and assets to the fund (sponsored projects share >50% of their net profit to the fund).

Benefits:
1. Everyone is also more focused on help to nurturing talent, sponsoring children, supporting research and entrepreneurs because they have a share of dividends via the fund.
2. The educational curriculum is decided by all the people to prevent the dictator's brainwashing education.
3. Increased passive income for all nationals.

There's no spelling errors I see in this proposal, but there are a number of grammar errors.

2. Setup the Social Contribution Points System to encourage all recipients (include their family member and Volunteer) to look after each other, caring for young children, farming (adopting AI in Organic Farming to Improve Food Security and efficiency) and maintain the public area, all recipients will be allocated different levels of housing, food and medical services according to their social contribution points, senior class students are responsible for guiding junior class students.

3. Compulsory military training since kindergarten, cultivate students' ability to survive in the wild, self-care ability, medical work and strong perseverance.
Let students get used to high-intensity exercise and a balanced diet since childhood, and strengthen the labor ability, mental strength, body resistance and healthy vitality. Reduce medical expenses and various social crises.

I mean the 3. is good, but this seems like its under the wrong name.

Opposed to any proposal that attempts to establish a Social Credit scheme in all member states.

-snip-

Opposed, for similiar reasons as Tin

OOC: If you don't mind me asking, why are you submitting it and not the actual author of this proposal?

Makko Oko wrote:OOC: If you don't mind me asking, why are you submitting it and not the actual author of this proposal?

As the words "not mine" might imply, the OP has nothing to do with the submitter of the proposal. It is normal practice that a thread be made for a proposal that might actually reach quorum if no thread yet exists. Eg viewtopic.php?f=10&t=347549&p=25240054&hilit=world+space#p25240054 (World Space Administration), viewtopic.php?f=9&t=505969&p=38720200&hilit=by#p38720200 (Repeal "Nuclear Arms Possession Act"), viewtopic.php?f=9&t=500737&p=38460493&hilit=by#p38460493 (Repeal "Death Penalty Ban"), etc.

Though, for Anaeas, the standard way of titling is usually "[$status] $title (by $author)".

One thing: Is it just me, or is this draft written more like a article or essay than a WA proposal? Nothing against its content.

Imperium Anglorum wrote:Though, for Anaeas, the standard way of titling is usually "[$status] $title (by $author)".

Doesn't fit in the title

Edit: For the record, there was a countercampaign to most Delegates approving.

The Orwell Society wrote:One thing: Is it just me, or is this draft written more like a article or essay than a WA proposal? Nothing against its content.

The author wrote a dozen illegal versions equally bad before this one was just able to clear the bar of being technically legal, by deleting the most obviously illegal parts sequentially for each time a new draft was declared illegal. Drafting by submission results in terrible, meritless resolutions, as we can plainly see.

Attempted Socialism wrote:

The Orwell Society wrote:One thing: Is it just me, or is this draft written more like a article or essay than a WA proposal? Nothing against its content.

The author wrote a dozen illegal versions equally bad before this one was just able to clear the bar of being technically legal, by deleting the most obviously illegal parts sequentially for each time a new draft was declared illegal. Drafting by submission results in terrible, meritless resolutions, as we can plainly see.

How has this rendered enough support to be put in a thread, then?

The Orwell Society wrote:

Attempted Socialism wrote:The author wrote a dozen illegal versions equally bad before this one was just able to clear the bar of being technically legal, by deleting the most obviously illegal parts sequentially for each time a new draft was declared illegal. Drafting by submission results in terrible, meritless resolutions, as we can plainly see.

How has this rendered enough support to be put in a thread, then?

OOC: It's only 11 approvals away from quorum and still has 28 hours to get those 11 approvals.

The Forest of Aeneas wrote:

The Orwell Society wrote:How has this rendered enough support to be put in a thread, then?

OOC: It's only 11 approvals away from quorum and still has 28 hours to get those 11 approvals.

OOC: It is likely not going to reach quorum, as there has been a [successful] counter-campaign by Aeneas. Down to 49 approvals with just 26 hours left.

Fachumonn wrote:

The Forest of Aeneas wrote:OOC: It's only 11 approvals away from quorum and still has 28 hours to get those 11 approvals.

OOC: It is likely not going to reach quorum, as there has been a [successful] counter-campaign by Aeneas.

We can hope

Meadowfields wrote:There's no spelling errors I see in this proposal, but there are a number of grammar errors.

English is not the author's first language.

The Forest of Aeneas wrote:

Reforms of Education and Pension Plan

A resolution to promote funding and the development of education and the arts.

Category: Education and Creativity | Area of Effect: Educational | Proposed by: HarveyKingdoms

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To increase efficiency and save expenses, reduce the chance of child and elder abuse, reduce the chance of corrupted on Education, Childcare and Elderly Services, the following reforms are advocated.

Part One
Decentralized Autonomous Management System:
All Parents, students, teachers and volunteers are invited to participate in voting to jointly decide school rules and various major decisions and then organize students to implement school management under the guidance of teachers and volunteers.

System management: anyone can provide proposal, discuss and vote through the open source blockchain mobile application, all proposal will randomly invite 99 current online users to participate in the evaluation through voting (prevent a decision-making committee composed of a small group of people from monopolizing decision-making power) , anyone can provide suggestion to improve it.

Benefits:
1. Save the cost of salary of management team,
2. Reduce opportunities for officials to shield each other from common corruption and child abuse.
3. Enhance students' independent thinking, awareness of the rule of law, teamwork and management skills.

Part Two
1. Setup the Mutual Aid Base for the Elderly and Children that integrates nurseries, boarding schools, nursing homes, shelters for the disabled, apprenticeship hospitals and modern agricultural bases, facilitate the integration of resources to save the land and expenses.

2. Setup the Social Contribution Points System to encourage all recipients (include their family member and Volunteer) to look after each other, caring for young children, farming (adopting AI in Organic Farming to Improve Food Security and efficiency) and maintain the public area, all recipients will be allocated different levels of housing, food and medical services according to their social contribution points, senior class students are responsible for guiding junior class students.

3. Compulsory military training since kindergarten, cultivate students' ability to survive in the wild, self-care ability, medical work and strong perseverance.
Let students get used to high-intensity exercise and a balanced diet since childhood, and strengthen the labor ability, mental strength, body resistance and healthy vitality. Reduce medical expenses and various social crises.

4. Co-organize apprenticeship courses with corporations and charity hospitals to cultivate students' diverse skills from primary school, including 3D graphic and programming for the construction of metaverse.

5. Attract children to self-study through gamified intelligent metaverse apps to complete college courses; introduce training courses on memory improvement, psychology, financial ability, interpersonal communication and sexual skills to enhance everyone's affinity, expression ability, learning ability and influence, more adaptable to future social needs.

Benefits:
1. All parents will no longer need to place time and money (supported by Mutual Fund) in caring for children and the elderly, which will help improve the overall productivity, sense of security and happiness index for all.
2. Let group of elderly live with children of different ages, let them feel younger, no longer lonely, have more people to take care of each other and reduce the chance of them being bullied by the staff and domestic violence.
3. Encourage Child and Elderly take care each others, can save >80% salary expenses, cultivate the good habit of students of helping others from an early age, let all recipient have a sustenance in their lives.

Part Three
All People's Mutual Fund
Setup the Education, Venture Capital and Pension Mutual Fund that owned and managed by all people.

Details:
1. All shareholders make decision together, apply seed capital for projects and provide idea via the Decentralized Autonomous Management System.

2. Central bank will buy the 100 years zero rate bonds that issued by the fund, and will serve as the basis for money printing, all people share the loss caused by inflation as their investment.
The Fund will invest on the Research and Entrepreneurship Projects, support currency value and reduce inflation by supporting the real economy and artificial intelligence automated production lines to increase production capacity and push GDP.

3. The fund will invest on "Mutual Aid Base for the Elderly and Children" (and other projects proposed by shareholders and government), all sponsored students (and projects) are responsible for repaying the principal in installments within 30 years, and share 5% of their lifetime income and assets to the fund (sponsored projects share >50% of their net profit to the fund).

Benefits:
1. Everyone is also more focused on help to nurturing talent, sponsoring children, supporting research and entrepreneurs because they have a share of dividends via the fund.
2. The educational curriculum is decided by all the people to prevent the dictator's brainwashing education.
3. Increased passive income for all nationals.

“Ambassador, I have two complaints for the author. In Part 3, Detail 2, it says: “…and will serve as the basis for money printing”. Could you contact the author in order to clarify that section? We all know that money printing just kills the multiverse’s economy. Second, under the benefits section of Part 3, it says: “The educational curriculum is decided by all the people to prevent the dictator's brainwashing education”. Given that the Clevesian Empire is in fact a dictatorship-monarchy, I cannot condone this statement.”
-Ms. Charlotte Schafer, WA Ambassador for the Clevesian Empire

Bears Armed wrote:

Meadowfields wrote:There's no spelling errors I see in this proposal, but there are a number of grammar errors.

English is not the author's first language.

I know, however they should at least run it through a grammar/spell check.

Fachumonn wrote:

The Forest of Aeneas wrote:OOC: It's only 11 approvals away from quorum and still has 28 hours to get those 11 approvals.

OOC: It is likely not going to reach quorum, as there has been a [successful] counter-campaign by Aeneas. Down to 49 approvals with just 26 hours left.

If I recall, this is the second time i have seen it in proposals (in the legal section, anyway). The author is probably going to resubmit it again.

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