Outer Sparta wrote:You haven't made any meaningful changes other than correcting for the resolution number. Maybe read the guides in the GA since you are new here and get advice from the regulars on how to write a strong repeal draft. This one's not it.
OOC: Agreed, when reading over it again, it does not seem as empowering and strong as other repeals. Hopefully the replacement resolution that comes will be stronger and extended.