by Eco-Paris Reformation » Wed Mar 30, 2022 4:44 pm
by Eco-Paris Reformation » Wed Mar 30, 2022 4:47 pm
by Eco-Paris Reformation » Thu Mar 31, 2022 3:55 pm
by New Eestiball » Thu Mar 31, 2022 4:37 pm
by Eco-Paris Reformation » Thu Mar 31, 2022 4:43 pm
New Eestiball wrote:I like it a lot, but the definition of "Public Transport" just seems ambiguous.
by The New Nordic Union » Thu Mar 31, 2022 11:55 pm
Eco-Paris Reformation wrote:All member states must provide funding from their governments, which can come from their 'Public Transportation' or 'Industry' budgets;
by Eco-Paris Reformation » Fri Apr 01, 2022 3:07 am
The New Nordic Union wrote:Eco-Paris Reformation wrote:All member states must provide funding from their governments, which can come from their 'Public Transportation' or 'Industry' budgets;
This sounds like it refers to the gameside stats in a nation's 'Government Expenditure'. This would be illegal.
by Fachumonn » Fri Apr 01, 2022 5:10 pm
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by Eco-Paris Reformation » Fri Apr 01, 2022 6:12 pm
Fachumonn wrote:Can you put this in aso I can read it better?
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by Eco-Paris Reformation » Sat Apr 02, 2022 5:00 pm
by Makko Oko » Sun Apr 03, 2022 11:29 am
2. Passive Allocation Commissions are to be administered and given to all member states in order to ensure that the GTSA and objectives are met and recognized.
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by Eco-Paris Reformation » Sun Apr 03, 2022 12:26 pm
Makko Oko wrote:2. Passive Allocation Commissions are to be administered and given to all member states in order to ensure that the GTSA and objectives are met and recognized.
"We feel that this could use a definition with the other terms stated, as our government does not know what a 'passive allocation commission' is and we wish to know before deciding on a stance towards this resolution."
"Furthermore, we are concerned with the lack of financial assistance that's seen in this resolution and feel that not all WA member nations may be able to afford the mandated changes, especially with changes to transportation infrastructure and therefore feel the need to request articles stating the authorization for financial assistance and the eligibility to obtain such assistance."
by Tinhampton » Sun Apr 03, 2022 12:32 pm
by Eco-Paris Reformation » Sun Apr 03, 2022 12:36 pm
Tinhampton wrote:This has not been "Proposed." Nor do I have any idea why you want to go from drafting to submission in four days, when this will take two-and-a-half weeks to get to vote even if it reached quorum immediately.
This is a bit too wordy; perhaps the use of indicative examples in Articles 3-6 might be playing a part in that. What you really have is "promote low-carbon transport and discourage high-carbon transport"
by Makko Oko » Sun Apr 03, 2022 12:37 pm
Eco-Paris Reformation wrote:Tinhampton wrote:This has not been "Proposed." Nor do I have any idea why you want to go from drafting to submission in four days, when this will take two-and-a-half weeks to get to vote even if it reached quorum immediately.
This is a bit too wordy; perhaps the use of indicative examples in Articles 3-6 might be playing a part in that. What you really have is "promote low-carbon transport and discourage high-carbon transport"
I'm not going to disagree with any of that. This is the first time that I have put out a draft attempt for a WA proposal and very few people have feedback. I take that to be a good thing. Also, I don't see any way to cut back on it being wordy. There are plenty of other wordy WA proposals out there.
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by Eco-Paris Reformation » Sun Apr 03, 2022 12:38 pm
Makko Oko wrote:Eco-Paris Reformation wrote:
I'm not going to disagree with any of that. This is the first time that I have put out a draft attempt for a WA proposal and very few people have feedback. I take that to be a good thing. Also, I don't see any way to cut back on it being wordy. There are plenty of other wordy WA proposals out there.
OOC: I would agree, but there is apparently a word limit, so you have to be cautious about your writing to make sure you don't exceed it, because then it can't even be proposed
by Berlin and Hanover » Sun Apr 03, 2022 12:40 pm
by Eco-Paris Reformation » Sun Apr 03, 2022 12:41 pm
Berlin and Hanover wrote:I put the current draft through a word counter, and it has 488 words and 3346 characters, take it as you will as I am not certain of the limit.
by Equai » Sun Apr 03, 2022 4:01 pm
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by Makko Oko » Sun Apr 03, 2022 4:34 pm
b. Eligibility to obtain such assistance.
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by Eco-Paris Reformation » Sun Apr 03, 2022 4:51 pm
Makko Oko wrote:b. Eligibility to obtain such assistance.
"We like the new changes that have been made and we feel universally this resolution is almost ready to be proposed, excluding any other changes and feedback provided by other ambassadors, however, we do find one concern with what is quoted here. When we stated including eligibility, we specifically meant specify the eligibility of such specifics, blandly stating 'eligibility to obtain such assistance' will not assist procedures in procuring these funds in any manner and would like to see specifics on eligibility encoded into this resolution before we will consider approving it."
by Fachumonn » Sun Apr 03, 2022 5:13 pm
Eco-Paris Reformation wrote:Makko Oko wrote:b. Eligibility to obtain such assistance.
"We like the new changes that have been made and we feel universally this resolution is almost ready to be proposed, excluding any other changes and feedback provided by other ambassadors, however, we do find one concern with what is quoted here. When we stated including eligibility, we specifically meant specify the eligibility of such specifics, blandly stating 'eligibility to obtain such assistance' will not assist procedures in procuring these funds in any manner and would like to see specifics on eligibility encoded into this resolution before we will consider approving it."
It's getting too long for me to continue adding things onto it. The Agency created by this sorts of the specific details. The process of eligibility would take up way too much space.
by Eco-Paris Reformation » Sun Apr 03, 2022 5:19 pm
by Xanthorrhoea » Mon Apr 04, 2022 3:04 am
by Eco-Paris Reformation » Mon Apr 04, 2022 3:24 am
Xanthorrhoea wrote:As a general piece of advice, proposal drafts should be up on the forum for at least ~1 month before being submitted. Any less time and people won’t have had enough time to give proper feedback. Some people log in infrequently, so you need to wait for them. This has been up less than a week, and is very undercooked. If you submit it now, it is very unlikely to even pass the delegate approval stage, let alone pass. Relax, and give it time to mature.
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