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[DRAFT 2] Ban on requiring SRS for legal gender transition

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[DRAFT 2] Ban on requiring SRS for legal gender transition

Postby J-O-E » Fri Jul 09, 2021 12:29 pm

Category: Civil Rights
Strength: Significant

The World Assembly,

SUPPORTING previous efforts by this body to support the rights of transgender individuals, henceforth referred to as TIs, and to affirm their gender identity.

APPLAUDING previous resolutions which have helped to allow TIs to legally change their gender to conform to their gender identity.

BELIEVING, however, that under current law, member governments may still exploit several loopholes in order to make it unnecessarily difficult for TIs to legally change their gender, by imposing undue restrictions for such a change. These restrictions include the requirement of having undergone sex reassignment surgery, henceforth referred to as SRS.

ASSERTING that further legislation on this topic is necessary to prevent this behavior.

NOTING that this resolution is a logical extension of requirements in previous resolutions, such as GAR #467, which: “Forbids any member-state from forcing an individual to undergo hormone therapy.” As this body has already agreed that TIs should not be forced to undergo hormone therapy, it makes sense that individuals should not be forced to undergo SRS either.

Hereby:

1. Defines sex reassignment surgery (SRS), as a process in which a person undergoes surgery to medically align physical characteristics with one’s identified gender.
2. Defines a transgender individual (TI) as any individual who identifies as a gender which differs from the gender they were assigned at birth.
3. Requires member nations to allow TIs to legally change their gender, without requiring them to undergo SRS, as such a requirement would:
A. Violate individual rights, as not all TIs wish to undergo such a surgery.
B. Be harmful to the mental health of TIs who do not wish to receive the surgery, as they would be unable to legally identify as their gender.
C. Be disproportionately harmful to the poor, as not all people have the ability to afford such a procedure.
D. Make it impossible for transgender minors to legally change their gender, due to GAR #91 requiring that: “No intersex, transgender or intergender persons of any age shall have GAPs [sex reassignment surgeries] until they are mature enough to make an informed decision regarding their own future.”

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This is based off a resolution by Yong that I reworked with their permission. This is my first time writing a proposal so there are probably issues.

I’ve been told that 3d may be a house of cards violation, but I’m not sure if it is, because the rule specifically says “Proposals cannot rely on the existing resolutions to support it; it must be independent.” While I could certainly see how this specific point would not stand alone if GAR #91 were repealed, the rule says that PROPOSALS cannot rely on existing resolutions. The whole point of the house of cards rule (I think) is that if your resolution is completely based on another one and that one gets repealed, your resolution would be useless and probably have to be repealed too. However, if GAR #91 were repealed, that specific point wouldn’t stand, but the resolution as a whole still would, as it’s only one of four reasons. It could be said that it doesn’t violate the rule because the proposal itself is still independent. I’m not trying to rules lawyer here, I’m genuinely not sure if this is breaking the rules or not. If someone in GenSec can tell me it would be a huge help.

The main changes I made from draft one is trying to abbreviate the terms sex reassignment surgery and transgender individuals because they’re quite long and I say them several times. Is this a good change, or should I change it back? I didn’t really want to abbreviate sex reassignment surgery as I don’t say it THAT much, but to fit the title in I had to abbreviate it. I tried to explain what SRS stands for relatively soon into the proposal but it’s tricky to fit naturally in the preamble part. I also made it so the verbs are more SHOUTY like a clickbait YouTube title.

I’d like to hear any comments people may have, wether positive or negative. The first draft didn’t get that much engagement and I really wanna hear what you have to say because I’m a first time author and it’ll be really helpful.
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Postby Tinhampton » Fri Jul 09, 2021 2:32 pm

Do you really have to create a new thread for every redraft of a proposal (instead of bumping your old thread and posting your new draft there)?

There is no difference between this and your first draft, other than your use of "TIs" as a substitute term for "transgender individuals" and a slight expansion of your BELIEVING clause.
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Postby J-O-E » Fri Jul 09, 2021 3:45 pm

Tinhampton wrote:Do you really have to create a new thread for every redraft of a proposal (instead of bumping your old thread and posting your new draft there)?

There is no difference between this and your first draft, other than your use of "TIs" as a substitute term for "transgender individuals" and a slight expansion of your BELIEVING clause.

sorry, I’m pretty new to the forums and don’t really know the protocol. I won’t do it in the future.
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Postby J-O-E » Tue Jul 13, 2021 8:50 am

I know it’s probably getting annoying at this point given that I’ve already said it several times, but can I please get any opinion on this? It’s been a week since I posted the first draft and tinhampton is still the only one who’s responded. The whole point of posting in the forums was to get people to give their opinions so I can improve it and get it ready for submission. Even if all you say is ‘I like it’ or ‘I don’t like it’ I’d still appreciate any response at all.
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Postby Morover » Tue Jul 13, 2021 11:16 am

The title should really be shortened, and you're dangerously close to the line of duplication with GA91 - I can't help but advise you to either expand the scope of this proposal to avoid that altogether, or otherwise take that proposal into greater account.
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Postby Bananaistan » Wed Jul 14, 2021 1:44 pm

Morover wrote:The title should really be shortened, and you're dangerously close to the line of duplication with GA91 - I can't help but advise you to either expand the scope of this proposal to avoid that altogether, or otherwise take that proposal into greater account.


OOC: This. Is there anything here that's not already covered by GAR#91 and GAR#29?
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