Ardiveds wrote:"Ambassador, we recommend working further on your definition of volcano. Might we ask why you haven't simply left the term undefined so nations may use the dictionary definition with, in our opinion, would be the best solution to this tricky problem. It's not like you're going anymore specific than the dictionary definition anyway.
Other than that, we recommend using just 'recent' instead of 'recent past' in clause 2.a.iii."
Fixed the definition, hopefully.
Also edited per your second suggestion.
Wallenburg wrote:Among other things, burst water mains are now volcanoes.
Fixed.
Araraukar wrote:-snip-
Welcome back! Love the changes, and great touch with the MAGMA