[Draft] A Simple Resolution Against Animal Cruelty

[The Yellow Monkey]

OOC: Cute pic. I'd advise against including it in the submitted version, as that would be Branding.

I’m inclined to agree. Cute enough for the drafting stage but it looks like someone took a (loosely) dog-shaped branding iron to the proposal.

[Aclion]

"If you could reasonably prove that such parasites and pests were even capable of suffering"

''... prove to me that you are capable of suffering'

[Rex the Very Good Boy]

Cute pic. I'd advise against including it in the submitted version, as that would be Branding.

Arf Arf!

Underlining looks awful especially when done with bolding; all of the lines that are currently underlined could be formatted normally without losing anything... Also, ‘scientific probability’ seems rather meaningless in the definition, which I think could generally be tighter.

Arf!

Traditionally, definitions are placed after preambulatory clauses, so yours should go below the ‘noting’ clause.

(Lies down on rug)

Yaaaawn.

(Puts head down)