Sorry if it's found wanting, I've been round for a while, but never tried my hand at this, so please be patient with me.
For the sake of constructive criticism (if my argument wasn't clear) I added a small [tldr] to provide additional context that will be removed if I finalize a draft that may get quorum.
Please no bully, I get its a hot topic, but it's something I can actually work with. The reason it's such a hot topic is because there is no "settled science" around the topic, and that is why it will probably continue to be debated in these "halls".
Cheers and God Bless.
EDITED:
General Assembly Resolution
REPEAL Affordable Transgender Hormone Therapy (GA#467)
WE, the collected Nations of this Assembly; [Meant to be read as individual Acknowledgements]
ACKNOWLEDGE the existence of CONFIRMATION BIAS and RHETORIC in (GA#467)
ACKNOWLEDGE that THE RESULTING EFFECT of (GA#467) is NECESSARILY the sterilization children and adolescents, whether voluntary or not
ACKNOWLEDGE that sterilization of a person undergoing Hormone Replacement Therapy (or any known colloquialism) is both irreversible and inevitable
ACKNOWLEDGES that clauses 2, 3, 5 and 6 of (GA#467) all allow and AFFIRM that an INDIVIDUAL is medically CAPABLE to self-Diagnose or self-Treat a condition
ACKNOWLEDGE that the REQUIREMENTS of (GA#467) would FORCE a Government to, in EFFECT, sterilize a segment-however large or small-of their population
HEREBY CLARIFIES the following Operable Medical Terms:
1. Disease: "an abnormal or adverse condition sometimes resulting in the in debilitation of normal function, in part or in whole"
2. Mental-Illness: "A mental-or- psychiatric disorder, is a behavioral or mental pattern that can cause significant impairment of personal function"
3. Confusion: "The quality or state of being unclear. "Acute Mental Confusion" (or AMC) is often used interchangeably with delirium
in publications to describe such pathology"
4. Dysphoria: "A state of generalized unhappiness, dissatisfaction, disconnect or frustration, of which can often be symptom of several mental health conditions."
5. Delusion: "Idiosyncratic belief that is firmly adhered to despite being contradicted by what is accepted as empirical reality;
typically a symptom of mental disorder"
HEREBY SUBMITS and AFFIRMS the following as FACT:
1. Transgender and Gender non-binary people do not possess the medically diagnosable conditions that affirm their purported condition or perception of their biological state-i.e. your body IS as it is biologically constructed,
whether or not you perceive it as such [tldr your body is binary]
1a. Recognizing that "Intersex" people possess a medically diagnosable condition wholly separate and distinct from "Transgender" and "Non-binary" [tldr unless intersex at birth]
2. That ALL experiences resulting from the human condition are reduced back to ones mental perception-i.e. your "Mind" or "Nous"-and that if a persons perception does not correspond with an objective and empirical reality,
that may medically constitute a significant "Alienation" from observable reality, and that such disconnects are often the indication of "Mental-Illness" as CLARIFIED [tldr it is all of the things prior legislation said its not]
2a. That "Alienation" from reality, "Mental Illness", "Depression" all resulting from such a perception does in FACT constitute "Dis-ease" of Mind and/or Body
[tldr Prior legislation contests its not a mental illness and then proclaims it a matter of mental perception and objective disconnect between perception and reality, describing what is in EFFECT a mental illness; TLDR TO THE TLDR Its a delineation between perception (subjective) and objective, i.e. mental disorder]
3. Medically UNQUALIFIED individuals are not "in best position to understand and discern their own medical conditions" as stated in (GA#467) and are therefore UNFIT to discern, diagnose or treat their own Disease, Illness, Confusion, Dysphoria or Delusion.
[tldr back pain can be a collapsed lung. No unqualified person is in the best position to discern their own medical conditions. That is how people misdiagnose and mistreat problems, which leads to quite unnecessary death]
3a. Individuals whose perception is significantly altered or are otherwise influenced by untreated Disease, Illness, Confusion, Dysphoria or Delusion may not be adequately able to discern the lasting repercussions of their
decisions or self-imposed "treatments"
[tldr stress is a significant impairment, it will probably impair your decision making capabilities such that you do not make rational decisions in the long run, especially if diagnosing and treating yourself]
4. Dysphoria of any kind is a Medically treatable mental-illness/psychiatric disorder as CLARIFIED [tldr it literally is by every definition]
4a. Treatment of any kind, if any is appropriate, should be left to qualified, licensed medical practitioners
[tldr not the individual, not "transitioning clinics", regular practitioners]
5. IT IS NOT the Duty of the GA or WA to impose or issue Taxes, Debts, or REQUIRE subsidization of services (outside of punitive measures or without providing funding) under (GA#467) [tldr no funding allocated by GA for subsidization in small or underdeveloped nations]
5a. IT IS NOT the Duty of the GA oversee Compliant Medical Facilities (CMF) in Member Nations under (GA #467) [tldr no requirement]
REPEALS GA #467
