Marxist Germany wrote:OOC: GP does not belong here.
Ignore him, MG. He can go ahead and bash all he wants, but I am not going to add even a single comma for him.
Araraukar wrote:-snip-
I read your reasoning. Seems quite reasonable since my original draft was almost somewhat that I was trying to strive for (and failed miserably as I got called out for micromanaging ). There are a few stuff that I will be addressing with your reasoning soon, but until then I will need to put out some flames in the WA before attending to this shortly. Most notably, its clause 2. (since sapients can be injured badly given the circumstances here, think of it as an elderly woman on a bicycle and a fit strong man on a bicycle as well. If both of them fall, how does this clause interpret this? The man will be fine, but the elderly woman could be seriously injured as a result of the collision)
Other than that, not much issues raised. I will leave this up for further discussion while I reply to your reasoning appropriately. Thanks a lot Araraukar!