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by East Meranopirus » Wed Jul 17, 2019 12:38 am
by United Civil Republic » Wed Jul 17, 2019 12:49 am
East Meranopirus wrote:I see no reason why you need to create a separate type of schools for this. If you want students to benefit, why not implement this on all schools in the WA?
by East Meranopirus » Wed Jul 17, 2019 1:06 am
United Civil Republic wrote:East Meranopirus wrote:I see no reason why you need to create a separate type of schools for this. If you want students to benefit, why not implement this on all schools in the WA?
I beleive that it would infringe on the rights of all countries to operate educational facilities in their countries, the difference in my resolutiuon and this argument is just what you are suggesting that I remove. The ability for the country to operate educational facilities as they see fit.
by United Civil Republic » Wed Jul 17, 2019 1:13 am
East Meranopirus wrote:United Civil Republic wrote:
I beleive that it would infringe on the rights of all countries to operate educational facilities in their countries, the difference in my resolutiuon and this argument is just what you are suggesting that I remove. The ability for the country to operate educational facilities as they see fit.
Under your line of reasoning, forcing countries to operate a certain type of school, even if it's not for all schools, would also be infringing their rights. Especially since it literally lets the committee force governments to spend a certain amount of money on this thing.
by Bananaistan » Wed Jul 17, 2019 2:56 am
by Araraukar » Wed Jul 17, 2019 3:09 am
United Civil Republic wrote:theoretically the committee would be culturualy diverse. That is as much as I can say without trying to meta-game my resolution.
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by East Meranopirus » Wed Jul 17, 2019 3:26 am
United Civil Republic wrote:I believe that the partial sacrifice of a nation's rights is necessary for the betterment of society.
by Araraukar » Wed Jul 17, 2019 3:32 am
East Meranopirus wrote:For your information, the fastest that a passed resolution has gone from scratch to submission is about a month.
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by East Meranopirus » Wed Jul 17, 2019 3:34 am
by United Civil Republic » Wed Jul 17, 2019 1:06 pm
Bananaistan wrote:OOC: This was submitted. I can't for the life of me see any operative clause in it and have marked it illegal as such.
by Kenmoria » Wed Jul 17, 2019 1:28 pm
by Youssath » Wed Jul 17, 2019 1:53 pm
by United Civil Republic » Wed Jul 17, 2019 1:59 pm
Youssath wrote:IC: "What?", the Youssathian Ambassador exclaims, spitting his coffee as he slowly recomposes himself. "You want to implement a second educational system on top of the old one for non-traditional learning? Jolly, it would surely blow our national budget out of proportion!". The Ambassador laughs, before taking another sip of his coffee. "May I suggest an articulation on how these schools actually work, and what the students are supposed to achieve upon graduation? For me, I certainly fear the social stigma coming from the 'World School education system' since it feels more grandeur, especially those smart nerdy computer geeks!"
OOC: I wouldn't foresee this draft moving forward if it maintains at this pace of progress. As much as this idea seems well-articulated and such, you will need to remember that these are international laws you are writing, not your own national laws. Having to write international laws and insisting on your course of interpretation only sets to isolate your own thinking as nations around you do not wish to ratify a law if they have no say in it and that it impedes its precedent. As such, I think this will need to head back to the drawing board for further review.
by United Civil Republic » Wed Jul 17, 2019 2:08 pm
United Civil Republic wrote:Youssath wrote:IC: "What?", the Youssathian Ambassador exclaims, spitting his coffee as he slowly recomposes himself. "You want to implement a second educational system on top of the old one for non-traditional learning? Jolly, it would surely blow our national budget out of proportion!". The Ambassador laughs, before taking another sip of his coffee. "May I suggest an articulation on how these schools actually work, and what the students are supposed to achieve upon graduation? For me, I certainly fear the social stigma coming from the 'World School education system' since it feels more grandeur, especially those smart nerdy computer geeks!"
OOC: I wouldn't foresee this draft moving forward if it maintains at this pace of progress. As much as this idea seems well-articulated and such, you will need to remember that these are international laws you are writing, not your own national laws. Having to write international laws and insisting on your course of interpretation only sets to isolate your own thinking as nations around you do not wish to ratify a law if they have no say in it and that it impedes its precedent. As such, I think this will need to head back to the drawing board for further review.
In reply to the Ambassador's concerns, the young, blonde assistant to the Representative replies, "While your concerns have been noted, please realize that we did not want to impede on the right of the committee to form the schools in a way that it would see fit."
OOC: I understand where you are coming from, but it is my idea that the committee would design the system in the way that you are looking at it. I am going to correct a bit of wording to identify that now. Please check article 2 at your next convenience for the change.
by United Civil Republic » Wed Jul 17, 2019 2:09 pm
by United Civil Republic » Wed Jul 17, 2019 2:11 pm
Araraukar wrote:United Civil Republic wrote:theoretically the committee would be culturualy diverse. That is as much as I can say without trying to meta-game my resolution.
OOC: Actually, that would violate the commmittee rule.
In places the proposal sentences are not constructed in the way English sentences are, or simply don't make sense. Is English your first language?
by The New Nordic Union » Wed Jul 17, 2019 2:16 pm
United Civil Republic wrote:Araraukar wrote:OOC: Actually, that would violate the commmittee rule.
In places the proposal sentences are not constructed in the way English sentences are, or simply don't make sense. Is English your first language?
OOC: That's why I don't include it.
Also, if you would include examples of your claim, and yes English is my first language.
by United Civil Republic » Wed Jul 17, 2019 2:24 pm
The New Nordic Union wrote:United Civil Republic wrote:
OOC: That's why I don't include it.
Also, if you would include examples of your claim, and yes English is my first language.
OOC: Presumably sentences like 'An example of non-traditional learning techniques as used in this document, is a physics course that focuses on how to algebraic skills to create formulas to demonstrate theories.' or 'Finance is not used to describe how much should be allotted, but where it is allotted from.'
by The New Nordic Union » Wed Jul 17, 2019 2:31 pm
United Civil Republic wrote:The New Nordic Union wrote:
OOC: Presumably sentences like 'An example of non-traditional learning techniques as used in this document, is a physics course that focuses on how to algebraic skills to create formulas to demonstrate theories.' or 'Finance is not used to describe how much should be allotted, but where it is allotted from.'
OOC: Please clarify how those examples break the constraints of the English language?
by Araraukar » Wed Jul 17, 2019 6:50 pm
United Civil Republic wrote:"Focuses" is a verb.
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by United Civil Republic » Wed Jul 17, 2019 6:57 pm
by Araraukar » Wed Jul 17, 2019 10:26 pm
Finance is not used to describe how much should be allotted, but where it is allotted from.
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by United Civil Republic » Wed Jul 17, 2019 10:56 pm
Araraukar wrote:United Civil Republic wrote:I did miss the word use. Thank you for commenting. I will make sure to get that corrected.
OOC: This still makes no sense:Finance is not used to describe how much should be allotted, but where it is allotted from.
"Finance" is not used to describe anything, as it's a noun, not an adjective. The umbrella clause uses the verb form but if you were referring to that, the base form would be "to finance", and still wouldn't be an adjective. Also, even if the grammar was corrected, it would still make no sense, as you seem to be referring to funding, not financing. And even then there's no "allotted from" anywhere else that I can see, so the subclause is referring to something that isn't mentioned.
by Araraukar » Wed Jul 17, 2019 11:40 pm
United Civil Republic wrote:All of your concerns have been addressed.
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
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