I believe its done. I'm very passionate about this.

[Deugaw]

In order to see about the preservation of historical and cultural significance, this proposal will:

PROVIDE
-Lower taxes for religious institutions and tribal sacred ground (P:1)
-Weatherproof building materials for exhibits and displays in high storm areas (P:2)

INDUCE:
-A sense of pride through communities with educational programs that teach about sentimental value and historical places in their community. (I:1)

ENFORCE:
-Harsher punishments for vandals that destroy culturally significant places or items (E:1)
-A deforestation tax for logging industries----(read P:1) (E:2)
-Government regulations on the demolishing of historical buildings (E:3)

Finished: May 21, 2019 at 3:14 PM

[Kenmoria]

(OOC: Welcome to the General Assembly. It is good that you have put the proposal on the GA forum, but that is a step that should occur before, ideally by months or weeks, the submission. I encourage you to withdraw your legislation so that it can be worked on by the players who dwell here.

For instance, your proposal is currently in violation of the real world reference rule, as you reference real life dates. Although you can mention units such as years, remember that GA nations are in many different timeframes, so you can’t just refer to the actual date. Secondly, you should write ‘this resolution’ rather than ‘this proposal’, and write in the present tense. Proposals are supposed to be written such that they are laws occurring now, in the future.

In the future, you can check the rules here. It also could be good to check through some passed proposals here. Finally, please don’t write in such large text, normal size will do.)

[Sierra Lyricalia]

OOC: Welcome to the World Assembly! In addition to the advice in the above post, please note that your proposal is currently illegal: you don't have a clause that actually instructs member states to carry any of these things out. That may seem like a very nitpicky technical quibble, but it's important for a proposal to set out exactly who must do what in order to carry it out. Right now you have the aspirational "this proposal will..." instead of a commanding "Member states must..."

I'll reiterate that done well, this process takes weeks to months for most people. It's a marathon, not a sprint. Good luck!

[Bears Armed]

Also, this bit

Lower taxes for religious institutions and tribal sacred ground (P:1)

would be illegal for Contradiction of an existing resolution: The WA currently isn't allowed to interfere with member nations' domestic taxation.