Kenmoria wrote:Maowi wrote:'Ambassador, do you have any thoughts on the following phrasing:
"...based on their inherent belonging to a reductive category"?
'Maybe inherent is not precisely the right word, but do you think phrasing it like that would solve the problem?
'Anyway, we're working on a revised draft which we'll present shortly. Thanks for your feedback, ambassadors.'
“How would you feel about ‘based on their innate belonging to a reductive category’? I believe that would be the correct word to use in this scenario.”
'Thank you for the suggestion; we've incorporated it into the new draft.'
OOC: I've put up the new draft. I'd be grateful if anybody could provide an answer to the following:
Maowi wrote:Question: would a theocracy fall under the current definition of a religious organisation? (I think it does, and want it to, but I’m not 100% sure)
OOC: Edit
United Massachusetts wrote:As written, United Massachusetts believes this resolution to be illegal as presently written. If ruled legal without further changes, United Massachusetts will oppose this resolution and draft up another resolution defending the rights of religious institutions. If ruled legal with further changes to our satisfaction, United Massachusetts will gladly support this draft.
I'd be grateful eventually for a majority GenSec opinion one way or the other, as I see your point but I would argue, as Kenmoria said and as reflected in the preamble, that this does fall under the GAR 430 exception. If you extended your argument, wouldn't it be force legalised by GAR 430 for a priest to refuse the ritual of confession and communion to a black person because of the priest's own xenophobia, rather than anything to do with Catholicism? For nowhere in GAR 430 does it say anything about religious motives behind refusing to take part in a religious practice.
But anyway, I'd greatly appreciate it if you could tell me what sort of change you want me to make that wouldn't defeat the point of the proposal? I'd be happy to give them due consideration.