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[DRAFT] Terra Nullius Protection Act

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Terra Nullius Protection Act
Category: Global Disarmament | Effect: Mild |



The General Assembly,

IDENTIFYING the existence of non-administrated zones, termed terra nullius, as being outside of any sovereign entity.

DEFINES terra nullius, where applicable, as either:

    1) Territory free of any sovereign national control, laws, jurisdictions or free of sovereign claim(s), as the result of territorial dispute.

    2) Territory that is uninhabited by people, or by people expressing sovereign claim, over which no pre-existing sovereign nation currently holds jurisdiction.

NOTING prior resolutions' failure to define territory with respect to supranational law, beyond the territorial extent of ‘WA’ & ‘non-WA’ states.

CONCERNED that prior WA legislation, which is occupied with the exploitation of sovereign territory, but not territory as defined in 1) & 2), creates potential loopholes.

SEEKING to define territory that is not sovereign & limit, & make reprehensible, those actions which exploit these territories, in contravention of the principles of existing legislation, & in the absence of this resolution.

HOPING that the measures taken by this resolution provide both a peaceful response to international tensions surrounding terra nullius & assistance in judicial & police proceedings by having common regulations concerning illicit activities within terra nullius.

HEREBY the World Assembly declares:

    1) That any WA states' actions within terra nullius be consistent with prior & later supranational law, where applicable, as outlined by the WA, & this resolution.

    2) That WA states protect those biomes & species, sapient & non-sapient, who utilise, & are located within terra nullius, who are given their respective dignities & rights as defined by the WA.

    3) That WA states operating within terra nullius, where terra nullius is de facto outside any national legal system or jurisdiction, still remain bound to international law; through this resolution, furthermore, WA states shall not:

      a) Use terra nullius as a reason for exemption from the extent of law; both national & international &,

      b) Use terra nullius as an exemption for the need of multinational treaty, between sovereign states, as demanded, or expected, by international law.

    4) Concerning the responsibility of WA states, their citizens & corporations, when acting, or acted upon, within terra nullius, in contravention to the law of their national state, or this resolution:

      a) A WA state is not liable for the actions of their citizens, or corporations unless said actions are coerced, or commanded, by that state, in which case;

      b) Those individuals, or parties, are to be prosecuted, by, or through that respective state, to the full extent of that state's law, assuming such actions cannot be brought before international courts of law; as per clauses 1 & 2.

    5) That WA states are not constrained by this resolution for terra nullius artificially created by WA, or non-WA, states, through treaties, while WA states recognising terra nullius, by said treaties, are under compulsion to this resolution, concerning that territory.

    6) That this resolution does not legislate for extranational airspace or seas.

    7) The formation of the Terra Nullius Protection Commission (TNPC), to work in an advisory role with disputing parties to uphold the rights for that within terra nullius & seek resolution to dispute.

ADDITIONALLY understands expansionist members of the WA & their ‘effective occupation’, as the control of terra nullius by their power & jurisdictions in the absence of a proper sovereign, while recognising the freedom of non-WA states in their independent disputes.

GUARANTEES, according to territory under definition 2, the rights of expansionist WA-nations, as well as the rights of peoples either unaffiliated or wishing to disassociate with existing governments, to claim & establish jurisdiction over terra nullius under the following conditions:

    1) The claimant has not violated, within the claimed area, any WA resolutions prior to its claim.

    2) The claim is not contested legally by any power, people, or species, who maintain an effective, but not necessarily sovereign, occupation in the same terra nullius; providing them all rights as presented by the WA.

FURTHERMORE that dispute(s) resulting in terra nullius are both unsustainable & undesirable, encouraging WA states to act accordingly by need:

    1) To respect the territorial integrity of rival claimants;

    2) To seek peaceful resolution to rival claims over terra(e) nullius on their own;

    3) To work with TNPC, & WANC, to assure the proper treatment & maintenance of supranational law for those, & that, located in terra nullius.

Co-authored by Lislandia.


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On Terra Nullius
Category: Political Stability | Effect: Mild |



The General Assembly,

IDENTIFYING the existence of non-administrated zones, termed terra nullius, as being outside of any sovereign entity.

DEFINES terra nullius as:

1) A territorial dispute, or treatise, resulting in land free of any sovereign national control, laws, jurisdictions or free of sovereign claim(s).

2) A territory that is uninhabited or unoccupied by people, over which no pre-existing sovereign nation currently holds jurisdiction.

ESTABLISHED terra nullius exists for international, political, cultural, religious, ecological or economic reasons, whether directly or indirectly; or territory which has no current or previous sovereign claim.

IDENTIFYING the existence of disputes, or international treatise, which produce territory without any jurisdictions; under definition 1.

AWARE of the existence of territories around the world that are not presently under the jurisdiction of any power; under definition 2.

NOTING prior resolutions' failure to define territory with respect to adherence to supranational law; beyond the territorial extent of ‘members’ and ‘non-members’.

CONCERNED that the extent of non-member and member territory does not cover areas belonging to neither party, allowing potential loopholes as per GA Resolution #116: Nuclear Waste Safety Act, which is concerned with the exploitation of sovereign territory, but not territory as defined in 1) and 2).

SEEKS to define territory which is not sovereign and therefore limit exploitation of that territory, by member states, in contravention of existing legislation.

FORMULATES and requires that any member states' actions within terra nullius is both consistent and acts as an extension of prior and later supranational law, outlined by the World Assembly and this resolution.

NECESSITATES member states' actions be in accord with what has been defined regarding terra nullius, both with respect to this resolution and other WA resolutions. Protecting those species; sapient, non-sapient, and biomes, who utilise and are located within terra nullius, as being accorded their respective dignities and rights defined by the World Assembly.

QUALIFIES the established parameters and law within seas and oceans, in accordance with GA Resolution #168: Law of the Seas; which this resolution does not overrule and falls in submission to the parameters surrounding territorial dispute in sea and ocean.

UNDERSTANDS the expansionist members of the World Assembly and their “effective occupation” as the control of terra nullius exercised by a power in the absence of a proper sovereign, while also recognising the freedom of non-WA states in their independent disputes.

GUARANTEES, according to territory under definition 2, the rights of the aforementioned nations, as well as the right of peoples either unaffiliated or wishing to disassociate with existing governments, to claim and establish jurisdiction over terra nullius under the following conditions:

a) The claim is made by a sovereign member state.

b) The claimant has not violated, within the claimed area, any World Assembly resolutions in the process of its claim.

c) The claim is not contested by any power, people, or species who maintains an effective, but not necessarily sovereign, occupation in the same terra nullius; providing them all rights as presented by World Assembly Legislation.

ADDITIONALLY, understands the existence of direct/indirect disputes which result in terra nullius, as defined here, as being both undesirable and unsustainable;

ENCOURAGES parties engaged in dispute over terra(e) nullius to seek peaceful resolution to their rival claims;

RECOMMENDS parties consult the World Assembly in the event they are unable to reach peaceful resolution on their own;

HEREBY establishes the formation of the Terra Nullius Protection Commission (TNPC) to work closely with disputing parties, as well as WANC, to assure the proper treatment and maintenance of supranational law for those, and that, which is located in terra nullius.

Joint effort for this proposal draft by Lislandia and Lower Nubia


On Terra Nullius
Category: Political Stability | Effect: Mild |



The General Assembly,

IDENTIFYING the existence of non-administrated zones, termed terra nullius, being outside of any sovereign entity.

DEFINES terra nullius as:

    1) A territorial dispute, or treatise, resulting in land free of any sovereign national control, laws, jurisdictions or free of sovereign claim(s).

    2) A territory that is uninhabited or unoccupied by people, over which no pre-existing sovereign nation currently holds jurisdiction.

ESTABLISHED terra nullius exists for international, political, cultural, religious, ecological or economic reasons, whether directly or indirectly; or territory which has no current or previous sovereign claim.

RECOGNISES the existence of disputes, or international treatise, which produce territory without any jurisdictions; under definition 1.

AWARE of the existence of territories around the world that are not presently under the jurisdiction of any power; under definition 2.

NOTING prior resolutions' failure to define territory with respect to adherence to supranational law; beyond the territorial extent of ‘members’ and ‘non-members’.

CONCERNED that the extent of non-member and member territory does not cover areas belonging to neither party, allowing potential loopholes, as per GA Resolution #116: Nuclear Waste Safety Act, which is concerned with the exploitation of sovereign territory, but not territory as defined in 1) and 2).

SEEKS to define territory which is not sovereign and therefore limit exploitation of that territory, by member states, in contravention of existing legislation.

HEREBY the World Assembly declares:

    1) That any member states' actions within terra nullius is both consistent and acts as an extension of prior and later supranational law, outlined by the World Assembly and this resolution.

    2) That member states protect those species: sapient, non-sapient, and biomes, who utilise, and are located within terra nullius, as being accorded their respective dignities and rights as defined by the World Assembly.

    3) That the established law within seas and oceans, is not usurped by this resolution which falls in submission to resolutions concerning territorial disputes in sea and ocean.

    4) The formation of the Terra Nullius Protection Commission (TNPC), to work closely with disputing parties to uphold the rights within terra nullius and seek resolution to dispute.

ADDITIONALLY understands the expansionist members of the World Assembly and their “effective occupation”, as the control of terra nullius exercised by their power in the absence of a proper sovereign, while also recognising the freedom of non-WA states in their independent disputes.

GUARANTEES, according to territory under definition 2, the rights of the aforementioned nations, as well as the rights of peoples either unaffiliated or wishing to disassociate with existing governments, to claim and establish jurisdiction over terra nullius under the following conditions:

    a) The claim is made by a sovereign member state.

    b) The claimant has not violated, within the claimed area, any World Assembly resolutions in the process of its claim.

    c) The claim is not contested by any power, people, or species, who maintains an effective, but not necessarily sovereign, occupation in the same terra nullius; providing them all rights as presented by World Assembly Legislation.

FURTHERMORE the existence of direct/indirect disputes which result in terra nullius, as defined here, are both undesirable and unsustainable;

ENCOURAGES member states to act accordingly by need:

    1) To respect the territorial integrity of rival claimants;

    2) To seek peaceful resolution to rival claims over terra(e) nullius on their own;

    3) To work closely with TNPC, as well as WANC, to assure the proper treatment and maintenance of supranational law for those, and that, located in terra nullius.

Joint effort for this proposal draft by Lislandia and Lower Nubia


Terra Nullius Protection Act
Category: Global Disarmament | Effect: Mild |



The General Assembly,

IDENTIFYING the existence of non-administrated zones, termed terra nullius, as being outside of any sovereign entity.

DEFINES terra nullius, where applicable, as either:

    1) Territory free of any sovereign national control, laws, jurisdictions or free of sovereign claim(s), from the result of territorial dispute.

    2) Territory that is uninhabited by people, or by people expressing sovereign claim, over which no pre-existing sovereign nation currently holds jurisdiction.

NOTING prior resolutions' failure to define territory with respect to adherence to supranational law; beyond the territorial extent of ‘members’ and ‘non-members’.

CONCERNED with potential loopholes from prior WA legislation, which are concerned with the exploitation of sovereign territory, but not territory as defined in 1) and 2).

SEEKING to define territory which is not sovereign and limit, and make reprehensible, those actions which exploit these territories, in contravention of the principles of existing legislation, and in the absence of this resolution.

HOPING that the measures taken by this resolution, allow both a peaceful response to be sought for international tensions surrounding terra nullius and provide assistance for judicial and police proceedings by having common regulations concerning illicit activities within terra nullius.

HEREBY the World Assembly declares:

    1) That any member states' actions within terra nullius be consistent with prior and later supranational law, where applicable, as outlined by the World Assembly, and this resolution.

    2) That member states protect those biomes and species, sapient and non-sapient, who utilise, and are located within terra nullius, as being accorded their respective dignities and rights as defined by the World Assembly.

    3) Concerning the responsibility of member states' citizens or corporations acting, or acted upon, within terra nullius, in contravention to the law of their national member state;

      a) A member state is not culpable for the actions of their citizen's or corporation's actions, unless evidence of coercion, command, or irresponsibility, on the part of that state, is identified.

      b) May have charged, by, or through that respective state, those individuals, or parties, to the full extent of that state's law, assuming such actions cannot be charged under international law; as per clauses 1 and 2.

    4) That member states shall not have compulsion to this resolution for terra nullius which is artificially created by member, or non member, states, through independent treatise, except for those signatory member states, of said treatise, who recognises that territory as terra nullius, who must comply with the statutes of this resolution.

    5) That terra nullius being de facto outside any national legal system or jurisdiction, shall be cause for the following to be struck as null and void for use in subverting, contravening or abusing judicial proceedings;

      a) Terra nullius is used as a reason for exemption from the extent of law; both national and international.

      b) Terra nullius is used as an exemption for the need of multinational treaty, between sovereign states, as demanded, or expected, by international law.

    6) That this resolution does not legislate for extranational airspace or seas.

    7) The formation of the Terra Nullius Protection Commission (TNPC), to work closely with disputing parties to uphold the rights within terra nullius and seek resolution to dispute.

ADDITIONALLY understands expansionist members of the World Assembly and their ‘effective occupation’, as the control of terra nullius by their power and jurisdictions in the absence of a proper sovereign. While also recognising the freedom of non-WA states in their independent disputes.

GUARANTEES, according to territory under definition 2, the rights of the aforementioned nations, as well as the rights of peoples either unaffiliated or wishing to disassociate with existing governments, to claim and establish jurisdiction over terra nullius under the following conditions:

    1) The claim is made by a sovereign member state.

    2) The claimant has not violated, within the claimed area, any World Assembly resolutions in the process of its claim.

    3) The claim is not contested legally by any power, people, or species, who maintains an effective, but not necessarily sovereign, occupation in the same terra nullius; providing them all rights as presented by World Assembly Legislation.

FURTHERMORE the existence of direct/indirect dispute(s) which result in terra nullius, are both undesirable and unsustainable; leading to international instability.

ENCOURAGES member states to act accordingly by need:

    1) To respect the territorial integrity of rival claimants;

    2) To seek peaceful resolution to rival claims over terra(e) nullius on their own;

    3) To work closely with TNPC, as well as WANC, to assure the proper treatment and maintenance of supranational law for those, and that, located in terra nullius.

Co-authored by Lislandia.


Terra Nullius Protection Act
Category: Global Disarmament | Effect: Mild |



The General Assembly,

IDENTIFYING the existence of non-administrated zones, termed terra nullius, as being outside of any sovereign entity.

DEFINES terra nullius, where applicable, as either:

    1) Territory free of any sovereign national control, laws, jurisdictions or free of sovereign claim(s), as the result of territorial dispute.

    2) Territory that is uninhabited by people, or by people expressing sovereign claim, over which no pre-existing sovereign nation currently holds jurisdiction.

NOTING prior resolutions' failure to define territory with respect to supranational law; beyond the territorial extent of ‘WA’ & ‘non-WA’ states.

CONCERNED with potential loopholes from prior WA legislation, which are occupied with the exploitation of sovereign territory, but not territory as defined in 1) & 2).

SEEKING to define territory that is not sovereign & limit, & make reprehensible, those actions which exploit these territories, in contravention of the principles of existing legislation, & in the absence of this resolution.

HOPING that the measures taken by this resolution allow both a peaceful response to international tensions surrounding terra nullius & provide assistance for judicial & police proceedings by having common regulations concerning illicit activities within terra nullius.

HEREBY the World Assembly declares:

    1) That any WA states' actions within terra nullius be consistent with prior & later supranational law, where applicable, as outlined by the WA, & this resolution.

    2) That WA states protect those biomes & species, sapient & non-sapient, who utilise, & are located within terra nullius, as being accorded their respective dignities & rights as defined by the WA.

    3) Concerning the responsibility of WA states' citizens, or corporations, acting, or acted upon, within terra nullius, in contravention to the law of their national state;

      a) A WA state is not culpable for the actions of their citizens, or corporations, unless evidence of coercion, command, or irresponsibility, of that state, is identified.

      b) May have charged, by, or through that respective state, those individuals, or parties, to the full extent of that state's law, assuming such actions cannot be charged under international law; as per clauses 1 & 2.

    4) That WA states do not have compulsion to this resolution for terra nullius artificially created by WA, or non-WA, states, through independent treatise. While WA states recognising terra nullius, by said treatise, are to remain under compulsion to this resolution, concerning that territory.

    5) That terra nullius, being de facto outside any national legal system or jurisdiction, shall be cause for the following to be struck as null & void for use in subverting, contravening or abusing judicial proceedings;

      a) Terra nullius is used as a reason for exemption from the extent of law; both national & international.

      b) Terra nullius is used as an exemption for the need of multinational treaty, between sovereign states, as demanded, or expected, by international law.

    6) That this resolution does not legislate for extranational airspace or seas.

    7) The formation of the Terra Nullius Protection Commission (TNPC), to work with disputing parties to uphold the rights within terra nullius & seek resolution to dispute.

ADDITIONALLY understands expansionist members of the WA & their ‘effective occupation’, as the control of terra nullius by their power & jurisdictions in the absence of a proper sovereign. While recognising the freedom of non-WA states in their independent disputes.

GUARANTEES, according to territory under definition 2, the rights of the aforementioned nations, as well as the rights of peoples either unaffiliated or wishing to disassociate with existing governments, to claim & establish jurisdiction over terra nullius under the following conditions:

    1) The claim is made by a sovereign WA state.

    2) The claimant has not violated, within the claimed area, any WA resolutions in the process of its claim.

    3) The claim is not contested legally by any power, people, or species, who maintain an effective, but not necessarily sovereign, occupation in the same terra nullius; providing them all rights as presented by the WA.

FURTHERMORE that dispute(s) resulting in terra nullius are both unsustainable & undesirable, encouraging WA states to act accordingly by need:

    1) To respect the territorial integrity of rival claimants;

    2) To seek peaceful resolution to rival claims over terra(e) nullius on their own;

    3) To work with TNPC, & WANC, to assure the proper treatment & maintenance of supranational law for those, & that, located in terra nullius.

Co-authored by Lislandia.
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Postby Dunmoyle » Fri Mar 01, 2019 2:09 pm

I would say that I support this. It does seem like common sense that we have to deal with unclaimed/disputed territory, and I encourage this resolution's purpose to resolve that.

Overall, the writing is pretty clear and straightforward, and while I'm pretty new here, it doesn't seem like it will have any problems with GenSec. I will say however, it might have trouble getting a quorum of endorsements from delegates, as it's a resolution that isn't all that interesting to a lot of players, and it could seem like the issue it addresses doesn't really need a resolution to address it.

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Postby Arasi Luvasa » Fri Mar 01, 2019 4:33 pm

So what of nations without a single human citizen? I may read through this more thoroughly later but that should be addressed.
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Postby Elyreia » Fri Mar 01, 2019 5:01 pm

Arasi Luvasa wrote:So what of nations without a single human citizen? I may read through this more thoroughly later but that should be addressed.

The previous ambassador brings up a glaring point. You'll need to remove humanocentrism from the document and account for those civilizations that also live in the air or in the water of certain landmasses.
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Postby Lower Nubia » Fri Mar 01, 2019 6:48 pm

Elyreia wrote:
Arasi Luvasa wrote:So what of nations without a single human citizen? I may read through this more thoroughly later but that should be addressed.

The previous ambassador brings up a glaring point. You'll need to remove humanocentrism from the document and account for those civilizations that also live in the air or in the water of certain landmasses.


I’ve removed the “human” reference and replaced it with people, to fulfill the ambassadors desire for inclusivity. I believe the water species here are strictly under the authority of other resolutions especially #168. While air space is such a divulgent matter it may require other relations. Assuming they don’t already exist as proposals or law.
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Postby Karteria » Fri Mar 01, 2019 7:22 pm

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These seems like a good idea, but it could use an overhaul on the wording. The entire proposal reads like a preamble; I would suggest numbering the clauses that you wish to be the body of the proposal, so that nations can distinguish. Right now, it feels redundant and tedious. When you section off the body from the preamble, I would put the TNPC clause above the rest, since it seems to be the most important part.

Also, is this a double negative, or am I reading it wrong?
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Postby Arasi Luvasa » Fri Mar 01, 2019 8:21 pm

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More the wording is just incredibly clunky. I suggest rewording the sentence to be more clear. Don't try to stuff as much information as possible into a sentence.

CONCERNED that territory not occupied by either member nation or non-member nation could potentially produce loopholes within GA Resolution #116: Nuclear Waste Safety Act, which is concerned with the exploitation of sovereign territory, but not territory as defined in 1) and 2).


I think that is what you were trying to say. The problem may stem from that the clause in the original actually just restates the obvious (something obviously doesn't cover what it excludes), instead just focus on the fact that there are territories which may not be occupied by either.
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Postby East Gondwana » Fri Mar 01, 2019 10:22 pm

This is a good idea, I'm in support of it.

Wording could be made a bit clearer in parts, especially this:
"ESTABLISHED either through international treaty on the part of member states whereby land is acknowledged as terra nullius...or territory which has no previous sovereign claim."

It's difficult to keep track of what it's saying, I had to reread it a few times. Maybe try dividing into multiple points, the latter building on the notion established in the former? Or maybe try incorporating it into the active clauses instead.

Also as mentioned above, it's generally a good idea to separate active clauses from the preamble (the justification for the resolution).
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Postby Lower Nubia » Sat Mar 02, 2019 7:15 am

Karteria wrote:OOC
These seems like a good idea, but it could use an overhaul on the wording. The entire proposal reads like a preamble; I would suggest numbering the clauses that you wish to be the body of the proposal, so that nations can distinguish. Right now, it feels redundant and tedious. When you section off the body from the preamble, I would put the TNPC clause above the rest, since it seems to be the most important part.

Also, is this a double negative, or am I reading it wrong?
CONCERNED that the extent of non-member and member territory does not cover areas belonging to neither, producing potential loopholes as with GA Resolution #116: Nuclear Waste Safety Act, which is concerned with the exploitation of sovereign territory, but not territory as defined in 1) and 2).


I've produced a small draft here limiting the amount of preamble and then separating that preamble from active clauses in this rought draft:


On Terra Nullius
Category: Political Stability | Effect: Mild |



The General Assembly,

IDENTIFYING the existence of non-administrated zones, termed terra nullius, being outside of any sovereign entity.

DEFINES terra nullius as:

1) A territorial dispute, or treatise, resulting in land free of any sovereign national control, laws, jurisdictions or free of sovereign claim(s),

2) A territory that is uninhabited or unoccupied by people, over which no pre-existing sovereign nation currently holds jurisdiction.

ESTABLISHED terra nullius exists for international, political, cultural, religious, ecological or economic reasons, whether directly or indirectly; or territory which has no current or previous sovereign claim.

IDENTIFYING the existence of disputes, or international treatise, which produce territory without any jurisdictions; under definition 1.

AWARE of the existence of territories around the world that are not presently under the jurisdiction of any power; under definition 2.

NOTING prior resolutions' failure to define territory with respect to adherence to supranational law; beyond the territorial extent of ‘members’ and ‘non-members’.

CONCERNED that the extent of non-member and member territory does not cover areas belonging to neither party, allowing potential loopholes as per GA Resolution #116: Nuclear Waste Safety Act, which is concerned with the exploitation of sovereign territory, but not territory as defined in 1) and 2).

SEEKS to define territory which is not sovereign and therefore limit exploitation of that territory, by member states, in contravention of existing legislation.

HEREBY the World Assembly declares:

1) That any member states' actions within terra nullius is both consistent and acts as an extension of prior and later supranational law, outlined by the World Assembly and this resolution.

2) Member states protect those species; sapient, non-sapient, and biomes, who utilise and are located within terra nullius, as being accorded their respective dignities and rights defined by the World Assembly.

3) That the established law within seas and oceans, in accordance with GA Resolution #168: Law of the Seas; which this resolution does not overrule and falls in submission too, surrounding territorial dispute in sea and ocean.

4) Establishes the formation of the Terra Nullius Protection Commission (TNPC) to work closely with disputing parties to uphold the rights within terra nullius and seek resolution to dispute.

ADDITIONALLY understands the expansionist members of the World Assembly and their “effective occupation”, as the control of terra nullius exercised by their power in the absence of a proper sovereign, while also recognising the freedom of non-WA states in their independent disputes.

GUARANTEES, according to territory under definition 2, the rights of the aforementioned nations, as well as the rights of peoples either unaffiliated or wishing to disassociate with existing governments, to claim and establish jurisdiction over terra nullius under the following conditions:

a) The claim is made by a sovereign member state.

b) The claimant has not violated, within the claimed area, any World Assembly resolutions in the process of its claim.

c) The claim is not contested by any power, people, or species who maintains an effective, but not necessarily sovereign, occupation in the same terra nullius; providing them all rights as presented by World Assembly Legislation.

FURTHERMORE, understands the existence of direct/indirect disputes which result in terra nullius, as defined here, as being both undesirable and unsustainable;

ENCOURAGES member states are to act accordingly by need:

1) To respect the territorial integrity of all rival claimants;

2) Parties engaged in dispute over terra(e) nullius are to seek peaceful resolution on their own to rival claims;

3) That the Terra Nullius Protection Commission (TNPC) are to work closely with disputing parties, as well as WANC, to assure the proper treatment and maintenance of supranational law for those, and that, which is located in terra nullius.


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I've also looked at the double negative and added "neither party" to alleviate confusion. (An updated version of the above draft is presented on the OP)

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More the wording is just incredibly clunky. I suggest rewording the sentence to be more clear. Don't try to stuff as much information as possible into a sentence.

CONCERNED that territory not occupied by either member nation or non-member nation could potentially produce loopholes within GA Resolution #116: Nuclear Waste Safety Act, which is concerned with the exploitation of sovereign territory, but not territory as defined in 1) and 2).


I think that is what you were trying to say. The problem may stem from that the clause in the original actually just restates the obvious (something obviously doesn't cover what it excludes), instead just focus on the fact that there are territories which may not be occupied by either.


I've reworded the "CONCERNED" section to:

"CONSERNED that the extent of non-member and member territory does not cover areas belonging to neither party, allowing potential loopholes as per GA Resolution #116: Nuclear Waste Safety Act, which is concerned with the exploitation of sovereign territory, but not territory as defined in 1) and 2)."

However, I do believe the argument from precedent, especially concerning nuclear waste, adds power to the concerned section.

But if you were looking for a more streamlined statement I believe the section could be:

"CONCERNED that the extent of non-member and member territory does not cover areas belonging to neither party, allowing the exploitation, by member states, of territory which is defined in 1) and 2)."

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Wording could be made a bit clearer in parts, especially this:
"ESTABLISHED either through international treaty on the part of member states whereby land is acknowledged as terra nullius...or territory which has no previous sovereign claim."

It's difficult to keep track of what it's saying, I had to reread it a few times. Maybe try dividing into multiple points, the latter building on the notion established in the former? Or maybe try incorporating it into the active clauses instead.

Also as mentioned above, it's generally a good idea to separate active clauses from the preamble (the justification for the resolution).
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I believe this clears up the wording of the prior "ESTABLISHED" section:

"ESTABLISHED terra nullius exists for international, political, cultural, religious, ecological or economic reasons, whether directly or indirectly; or territory which has no current or previous sovereign claim
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I believe all of the concerns of the ambassadors are resolved in this particular draft of the above proposal:


On Terra Nullius
Category: Political Stability | Effect: Mild |



The General Assembly,

IDENTIFYING the existence of non-administrated zones, termed terra nullius, being outside of any sovereign entity.

DEFINES terra nullius as:

1) A territorial dispute, or treatise, resulting in land free of any sovereign national control, laws, jurisdictions or free of sovereign claim(s),

2) A territory that is uninhabited or unoccupied by people, over which no pre-existing sovereign nation currently holds jurisdiction.

ESTABLISHED terra nullius exists for international, political, cultural, religious, ecological or economic reasons, whether directly or indirectly; or territory which has no current or previous sovereign claim.

IDENTIFYING the existence of disputes, or international treatise, which produce territory without any jurisdictions; under definition 1.

AWARE of the existence of territories around the world that are not presently under the jurisdiction of any power; under definition 2.

NOTING prior resolutions' failure to define territory with respect to adherence to supranational law; beyond the territorial extent of ‘members’ and ‘non-members’.

CONCERNED that the extent of non-member and member territory does not cover areas belonging to neither party, allowing potential loopholes as per GA Resolution #116: Nuclear Waste Safety Act, which is concerned with the exploitation of sovereign territory, but not territory as defined in 1) and 2).

SEEKS to define territory which is not sovereign and therefore limit exploitation of that territory, by member states, in contravention of existing legislation.

HEREBY the World Assembly declares:

1) That any member states' actions within terra nullius is both consistent and acts as an extension of prior and later supranational law, outlined by the World Assembly and this resolution.

2) Member states protect those species; sapient, non-sapient, and biomes, who utilise and are located within terra nullius, as being accorded their respective dignities and rights defined by the World Assembly.

3) That the established law within seas and oceans, in accordance with GA Resolution #168: Law of the Seas; is not usurped by this resolution and falls in submission to it concerning territorial dispute in sea and ocean.

4) The formation of the Terra Nullius Protection Commission (TNPC) to work closely with disputing parties to uphold the rights within terra nullius and seek resolution to dispute.

ADDITIONALLY understands the expansionist members of the World Assembly and their “effective occupation”, as the control of terra nullius exercised by their power in the absence of a proper sovereign, while also recognising the freedom of non-WA states in their independent disputes.

GUARANTEES, according to territory under definition 2, the rights of the aforementioned nations, as well as the rights of peoples either unaffiliated or wishing to disassociate with existing governments, to claim and establish jurisdiction over terra nullius under the following conditions:

a) The claim is made by a sovereign member state.

b) The claimant has not violated, within the claimed area, any World Assembly resolutions in the process of its claim.

c) The claim is not contested by any power, people, or species who maintains an effective, but not necessarily sovereign, occupation in the same terra nullius; providing them all rights as presented by World Assembly Legislation.

FURTHERMORE, understands the existence of direct/indirect disputes which result in terra nullius, as defined here, as being both undesirable and unsustainable;

ENCOURAGES member states to act accordingly by need:

1) To respect the territorial integrity of rival claimants;

2) To seek peaceful resolution to rival claims over terra(e) nullius on their own;

3) To work closely with TNPC, as well as WANC, to assure the proper treatment and maintenance of supranational law for those, and that, located (with)in terra nullius.


Joint effort for this proposal draft by Lislandia and Lower Nubia


If I believe this does work around the issues of wording I will make it the official draft.

Edit: Several grammatical changes as noted by co-author Lislandia have been ammended: section 3) and 4) of HEREBY aswell as sections 1) 2) and 3) of section Encourages.
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Lower Nubia wrote:I believe all of the concerns of the ambassadors are resolved in this particular draft of the above proposal:


On Terra Nullius
Category: Political Stability | Effect: Mild |



The General Assembly,

IDENTIFYING the existence of non-administrated zones, termed terra nullius, being outside of any sovereign entity.

DEFINES terra nullius as:

1) A territorial dispute, or treatise, resulting in land free of any sovereign national control, laws, jurisdictions or free of sovereign claim(s),

2) A territory that is uninhabited or unoccupied by people, over which no pre-existing sovereign nation currently holds jurisdiction.

ESTABLISHED terra nullius exists for international, political, cultural, religious, ecological or economic reasons, whether directly or indirectly; or territory which has no current or previous sovereign claim.

IDENTIFYING the existence of disputes, or international treatise, which produce territory without any jurisdictions; under definition 1.

AWARE of the existence of territories around the world that are not presently under the jurisdiction of any power; under definition 2.

NOTING prior resolutions' failure to define territory with respect to adherence to supranational law; beyond the territorial extent of ‘members’ and ‘non-members’.

CONCERNED that the extent of non-member and member territory does not cover areas belonging to neither party, allowing potential loopholes as per GA Resolution #116: Nuclear Waste Safety Act, which is concerned with the exploitation of sovereign territory, but not territory as defined in 1) and 2).

SEEKS to define territory which is not sovereign and therefore limit exploitation of that territory, by member states, in contravention of existing legislation.

HEREBY the World Assembly declares:

1) That any member states' actions within terra nullius is both consistent and acts as an extension of prior and later supranational law, outlined by the World Assembly and this resolution.

2) Member states protect those species; sapient, non-sapient, and biomes, who utilise and are located within terra nullius, as being accorded their respective dignities and rights defined by the World Assembly.

3) That the established law within seas and oceans, in accordance with GA Resolution #168: Law of the Seas; is not usurped by this resolution and falls in submission to it concerning territorial dispute in sea and ocean.

4) The formation of the Terra Nullius Protection Commission (TNPC) to work closely with disputing parties to uphold the rights within terra nullius and seek resolution to dispute.

ADDITIONALLY understands the expansionist members of the World Assembly and their “effective occupation”, as the control of terra nullius exercised by their power in the absence of a proper sovereign, while also recognising the freedom of non-WA states in their independent disputes.

GUARANTEES, according to territory under definition 2, the rights of the aforementioned nations, as well as the rights of peoples either unaffiliated or wishing to disassociate with existing governments, to claim and establish jurisdiction over terra nullius under the following conditions:

a) The claim is made by a sovereign member state.

b) The claimant has not violated, within the claimed area, any World Assembly resolutions in the process of its claim.

c) The claim is not contested by any power, people, or species who maintains an effective, but not necessarily sovereign, occupation in the same terra nullius; providing them all rights as presented by World Assembly Legislation.

FURTHERMORE, understands the existence of direct/indirect disputes which result in terra nullius, as defined here, as being both undesirable and unsustainable;

ENCOURAGES member states to act accordingly by need:

1) To respect the territorial integrity of rival claimants;

2) To seek peaceful resolution to rival claims over terra(e) nullius on their own;

3) To work closely with TNPC, as well as WANC, to assure the proper treatment and maintenance of supranational law for those, and that, located (with)in terra nullius.


Joint effort for this proposal draft by Lislandia and Lower Nubia

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I would like to voice my support for this draft resolution as the issue of terra nullius has never been defined and no provisions have been made for the resolving of this issue. I hope to see it in the GA chamber soon.
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Denieria wrote:I would like to voice my support for this draft resolution as the issue of terra nullius has never been defined and no provisions have been made for the resolving of this issue. I hope to see it in the GA chamber soon.


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“This looks good, if slightly over-complicated, and the idea has my support. I do however encourage you to indent your active clauses and check through the whole draft for grammatical mistakes, of which there are a few.”
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Kenmoria wrote:“This looks good, if slightly over-complicated, and the idea has my support. I do however encourage you to indent your active clauses and check through the whole draft for grammatical mistakes, of which there are a few.”


I believe I’ve repaired the grammar in this proposal, ambassador, I’m not entirely sure, but is your concern over the apostrophe in resolutions’ in NOTING and member states’ in HEREBY section 1)?
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"After trawling through grammar, myself and Lislandia have submitted the draft proposal."
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That was quick. Too quick in this case. At least one illegality at first glance. Your hereby clause 3 is a straightforward House of Cards.

I suggest more drafting regarding the layout as well. It's bloody hard to read!
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Bananaistan wrote:OOC:

That was quick. Too quick in this case. At least one illegality at first glance. Your hereby clause 3 is a straightforward House of Cards.

I suggest more drafting regarding the layout as well. It's bloody hard to read!


Clause 3) of HEREBY or ESTABLISHED?
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Lower Nubia wrote:
Bananaistan wrote:OOC:

That was quick. Too quick in this case. At least one illegality at first glance. Your hereby clause 3 is a straightforward House of Cards.

I suggest more drafting regarding the layout as well. It's bloody hard to read!


Clause 3) of HEREBY or ESTABLISHED?


Of hereby. You can't rely on currently extant resolutions in your proposals; what if they get repealed?
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Postby Lower Nubia » Sun Mar 03, 2019 3:26 pm

Maowi wrote:
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Clause 3) of HEREBY or ESTABLISHED?


Of hereby. You can't rely on currently extant resolutions in your proposals; what if they get repealed?


Oh. Of course, so if " in accordance with GA Resolution #168: Law of the Seas," was removed, and the sentence read:

"That the established law within seas and oceans, is not usurped by this resolution and falls in submission to resolutions concerning territorial dispute in sea and ocean."

OOC: I've removed the quorum proposal, we were greatly mistaken to produce such a rushed draft apparently, and have reverted the discussion to draft format. At least it got everyone's attention. :)
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WA delegate George Reagan glances at the page on March 1st. "Wow! This is very long! I'll read it later."
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In all seriousness, this was way to short of a drafting time, especially for a plan as long as this(last I read, it was struck down as illegal.) You should wait and take more input from the community. Reading through it, should it be upheld as legal, we would probably support it, though Mr. Reagan will probably have to read though it one more time. He's never read so many words before.
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Hatzisland wrote:WA delegate George Reagan glances at the page on March 1st. "Wow! This is very long! I'll read it later."
March 2nd: "Maybe tomorrow. This plan, especially considering its length, will take months to make it to the floor."
March 3rd: "What! It's been proposed already?"

In all seriousness, this was way to short of a drafting time, especially for a plan as long as this(last I read, it was struck down as illegal.) You should wait and take more input from the community. Reading through it, should it be upheld as legal, we would probably support it, though Mr. Reagan will probably have to read though it one more time. He's never read so many words before.


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Lower Nubia wrote:
Hatzisland wrote:WA delegate George Reagan glances at the page on March 1st. "Wow! This is very long! I'll read it later."
March 2nd: "Maybe tomorrow. This plan, especially considering its length, will take months to make it to the floor."
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In all seriousness, this was way to short of a drafting time, especially for a plan as long as this(last I read, it was struck down as illegal.) You should wait and take more input from the community. Reading through it, should it be upheld as legal, we would probably support it, though Mr. Reagan will probably have to read though it one more time. He's never read so many words before.


"I believe the best way to learn is through abject failure. At least it got everyone's attention."


True. We hope to see this plan back on the floor soon.
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