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FedelePlease, review your draft and modify it. This draft still has incomplete provisions.
Children and teens the most need sugar to grow up such as the ants need it too, but that sugar in moderate consumption. Forbidding sugar consumption entirely is a very bad idea.
This should regulate the normal limit of the sugar or the maximum amount in accordance with the health benefits.You need to add the terms of health and the possible effects of a higher amount of sugar.For example,
the text "
Observing the widespread recreational consumption of manufactured products containing added sugar, especially among minors"
should become:
"
Observing the widespread recreational consumption of manufactured products containing added sugar over the normal limits in terms of health, especially among minors";
Also, the text "
Mandates that all manufactured products containing added sugar sold in World Assembly member nations be prominently labeled with a disclosure stating "This product contains added sugar" in the primary language of the intended consumer demographic, the text of which must cover at least 10% of the packaging;"
may be understood mostly in the way that every product containing sugar should say that it contain sugar but this do not clarify the amount of sugar. This rule do not modify too much and not clarifying the statement as "
higher amount of sugar" which is missing.
Every manufactured product already show what it contains and the amounts in them, at least in Europe and America. However, there should be written the possible effects on the health of the people. You forgot this detail. All laws have specific details.
It's not enough saying "added sugar". Lawyers can overcome that sentence as saying simply "sugar".