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Hello, I’m looking to introduce some legislation to increase international funding for the (musical) arts. I have a general idea of what I want it to be, but I’d appreciate if someone could help me with the phrasing and help make sure it is legal. If you are interested in helping please message me.

I'd say your best bet is to post a public draft on this forum and then request opinions and suggestions from the community in general. As to the matter of musical arts funding, this resolution sets in place policies to protect and archive existing musical works, but does not promote future musicianship.

As a musician myself I have toyed with the idea of a proposal such as the one you describe, and would love to assist in a public drafting environment.

I'm down. Lets add some wording that those who refuse to learn an instrument be placed in concentration camps!!!! Pm your draft

OOC: Also as a musician (albeit a mostly-self-taught unusual one), looking to get my feet wet, I too would love to help assist.

I’ve created my first draft on google docs. Once it is fit for public consumption it will be published on here

The idea is to put it here for critique. Not to tell us “I have a draft”.

Grays Harbor wrote:The idea is to put it here for critique. Not to tell us “I have a draft”.

I think that was more of a conclusion or wrap up than a continuation, but I have been known to be wrong.

I was just needed help to create a semi polished work before I publicly publish the draft

Columbia-Dixie wrote:I was just needed help to create a semi polished work before I publicly publish the draft

That's all well and good, but part of the process is to show us what you have for a draft so far and other members of the Assembly can offer you critique on how it either could be better or what does and does not work. Some feedback may come across as harsh, but it will help you to fine tune what you have so far. Most successful proposals take quite a bit of time, and usually have a lot of feedback from members of the Assembly.

OOC: I genuinely think it's good enough to post onto the forums, CD;
but even if it wasn't in very good condition, feedback's the point behind posting on-forum.