[DRAFT] Ban On Cannibalism

[Libana]

Cannibalism was a real common practice ages ago.
My Kingdom agree that such practice must be banned!

But we also believe that those who have practiced before cannot be targeted by this new Law.

Thanks for the response! I made sure to add that!

[Libana]

"We demand an exception clause for people stranded in the wilderness who are otherwise unable to feed themselves and who risk starvation if they fail to draw lots to determine who lives and who gets eaten. Bad enough the survivors have to undergo such an ordeal, you're now gonna prosecute them for it even when the victim willingly cuts his own throat? Talk about adding insult to injury..."

That seems very unlikely to happen, so I'm not sure if I should do that!

[The First German Order]

"Still no support."

[Libana]

There isn't that much left for me to add! Should I go ahead and submit it like this? It seems very straightforward to be honest, so it is not like it should be an entire essay, right? If not, what do you guys think I should add?

[Aureumterra]

There isn't that much left for me to add! Should I go ahead and submit it like this? It seems very straightforward to be honest, so it is not like it should be an entire essay, right? If not, what do you guys think I should add?

“No! Once again this only targets humans, please change it.”

[Allied Sapients]

((OOC: Why did you ignore me?))

[The WA Headquarters]

There isn't that much left for me to add! Should I go ahead and submit it like this? It seems very straightforward to be honest, so it is not like it should be an entire essay, right? If not, what do you guys think I should add?

Remember, you've only had this draft open for two days. It can takes weeks to months until a draft is good enough to be submitted. Let's start small. Make sure you have ending punctuation for all your clauses. And when you start listing off your intentions, just say "hereby," instead of The World Assembly hereby...

[Imperial Polk County]

Drane approaches the podium, his red eyes welling up, and a cigarette trembling in his left hand. “Support. You know what I hate about myself? I know what people taste like. I know that babies taste best.” He covers his face for a brief moment of pure anguish... then winks at the author and grins devilishly as he steps away.

[Kenmoria]

""Resolution" should not be capitalised in the defining clause."

[Libana]

There isn't that much left for me to add! Should I go ahead and submit it like this? It seems very straightforward to be honest, so it is not like it should be an entire essay, right? If not, what do you guys think I should add?

“No! Once again this only targets humans, please change it.”

Your right, but I don't know any terms or words that would cover everyone! What would be a term that I could use?

[Fauxia]

“Not all nations are human.”

[Libana]

“Not all nations are human.”

I know, and I want to change this! However, I don't know the proper term that covers all life! If someone can tell me one, I will add it right away!

[San Hieronymi]

“Not all nations are human.”

I know, and I want to change this! However, I don't know the proper term that covers all life! If someone can tell me one, I will add it right away!

((OOC: The term normally used is sapient life.))

[Aureumterra]

“Not all nations are human.”

I know, and I want to change this! However, I don't know the proper term that covers all life! If someone can tell me one, I will add it right away!

“Maybe remove clause four altogether. “Moral Decency” is a subjective term, and some cultures really have cannibalism in their roots.”

[Libana]

I know, and I want to change this! However, I don't know the proper term that covers all life! If someone can tell me one, I will add it right away!

((OOC: The term normally used is sapient life.))

Wait a minute, doesn't that still mean human?

[Allied Sapients]

Wait a minute, doesn't that still mean human?

((OOC: No. My ambassador isn’t human, and there are plenty of other nations in the WA comprised of nonhuman sapients.

Now can you please answer my ambassador’s question?))

[Arotania]

There isn't that much left for me to add! Should I go ahead and submit it like this? It seems very straightforward to be honest, so it is not like it should be an entire essay, right? If not, what do you guys think I should add?

We noted your impolite refusal to address our remarks concerning lab-grown meat and autocannibalism. Do you wish to rectify this?