Repeal "Voting Equality For Freed Inmates"

[The First Ever Galactic Empire]

The General Assembly:
An inmate is someone that commits a crime.
People who commit crimes are enemies.
Enemies are bad people.
And bad people should not vote.

That is why Freed Inmates should not have the right to vote

[Stoskavanya]

Damn, this repeal is way better than mine.

[Kenmoria]

The General Assembly:
An inmate is someone that commits a crime.

"No opening verb, which is the norm for proposals these days, and just stating an obvious fact."

People who commit crimes are enemies.

"Once again there is no opening verb and this fails to take into account civil disobedience, unjust laws, and a whole range of other factors."

Enemies are bad people.

"Still no opening verb and this relies on the exceptionally filmy prior clause. It also is false; an enemy of a tyrannical government may not be a bad personal, they could be a civil rights leader."

And bad people should not vote.

"Once again the opening verb is still lacking, and this needs the prior two clauses to work, and they don't."

That is why Freed Inmates should not have the right to vote

"This proposal contains no justifications this delegation considers to be reasonable and does not in any way follow formatting guidelines. It requires some very heavy changes to be even considered."

[Wallenburg]

"People who disagree with my politics are enemies. Enemies are bad people. And bad people should not vote. That is why those who disagree with my politics should not have the right to vote."

[Separatist Peoples]

"People who disagree with my politics are enemies. Enemies are bad people. And bad people should not vote. That is why those who disagree with my politics should not have the right to vote."

OOC: Theres something horribly Trump-ish in that wording...

OP, you should really consider not submitting this. It simply isn't up to the proper quality and intellectual rigor expected of WA resolutions.

[Wallenburg]

"People who disagree with my politics are enemies. Enemies are bad people. And bad people should not vote. That is why those who disagree with my politics should not have the right to vote."

OOC: Theres something horribly Trump-ish in that wording...

OP, you should really consider not submitting this. It simply isn't up to the proper quality and intellectual rigor expected of WA resolutions.

"You see, there are a lot of people, and, of course, I don't mean all the other people, the people that like me, because way more people like me, but there are people who don't like me, and they're sad. Their votes are bad, bad for all of us, and we have to stop it. We just can't let it happen, people, it's illegal. I'll make it stop, we won't have any more bad votes here, believe me."

[Imperium Anglorum]

Reminds me of this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cmdFne7 ... be&t=5m23s

[The New California Republic]

The General Assembly:
An inmate is someone that commits a crime.
People who commit crimes are enemies.
Enemies are bad people.
And bad people should not vote.

That is why Freed Inmates should not have the right to vote

OOC: No. Just no. Please provide some genuine arguments, otherwise this repeal attempt is pointless.

[Sierra Lyricalia]

"People who disagree with my politics are enemies. Enemies are bad people. And bad people should not vote. That is why those who disagree with my politics should not have the right to vote."

"A cigar for Mr. Ogenbond, for correctly identifying the core argument behind every possible repeal of this resolution! Whether the evil scumbag convicts are fraudsters and disaster capitalists in my country, or people who steal to feed their families in some other hellhole country, that's what this all boils down to."

[Colorado-Kansas]

> Be me
> Get banned from WA
> Don't have to follow WA resolutions.

[The New California Republic]

> Be me
> Get banned from WA
> Don't have to follow WA resolutions.

OOC: How is this relevant to the current repeal that is being discussed?

[Jebslund]

Jebslund's Head Imperial Ambassador, Sofia Kerman, stands and clears her throat.

"Flawless proposal, friend. I can definitely see this as a proposal which shall guide the writing of all others for years to come. It is a very witty, eloquent law which in no way smacks of a two-year-old being asked to dictate a repeal.", she remarks, the sarcasm in her tone thick enough to obscure any view of her face.

[The First Ever Galactic Empire]

The General Assembly:
An inmate is someone that commits a crime.
People who commit crimes are enemies.
Enemies are bad people.
And bad people should not vote.

That is why Freed Inmates should not have the right to vote

If you are a WA Delegate, please approve do it can be voted on by the entire assembly.

[Oresland]

The General Assembly:
An inmate is someone that commits a crime.
People who commit crimes are enemies.
Enemies are bad people.
And bad people should not vote.

That is why Freed Inmates should not have the right to vote

If you are a WA Delegate, please approve do it can be voted on by the entire assembly.

"Are you asking my fellow delegates to approve your sorry excuse of a proposal without even taking into consideration what the other ambassadors have brought up? You don't just do that. I've seen all I need to see to make a decision on this."

[The New California Republic]

The General Assembly:
An inmate is someone that commits a crime.
People who commit crimes are enemies.
Enemies are bad people.
And bad people should not vote.

That is why Freed Inmates should not have the right to vote

If you are a WA Delegate, please approve do it can be voted on by the entire assembly.

OOC: Are you even going to address the concerns that people have raised? No?

[The Sheika]

The General Assembly:
An inmate is someone that commits a crime.
People who commit crimes are enemies.
Enemies are bad people.
And bad people should not vote.

That is why Freed Inmates should not have the right to vote

If you are a WA Delegate, please approve do it can be voted on by the entire assembly.

*looks at proposal and takes a moment to process what is written before offering a critique*
Okay...so if you want delegates to approve your proposal that means you have already submitted. Some advice for you that will help you go a long way; withdraw your proposal and take the time to edit it with the feedback that has been given or will be given here. As it stands, no support for this proposed repeal seeing as freed inmates in the eyes of the Federation are seen as rehabilitated citizens who have paid their debt to society.

[Alpha Cassiopeiae]

"What is this, Ambassador? I'm busy enough as it is." Albinus walks out of the proceedings while shaking his head.