[ Draft ] Carbon nutral feul

[Alogranie]

Carbon nutral feul eliminates the emmisions that reguar petrol makes. Vehicles that run on carbon nutral feul emit only water vapor and unburned oxygen. This is great for the automotive industry

[The New California Republic]

OOC: Is this a draft?

[Oresland]

"What is this? Where's the draft? Also, it's fuel, not feul."

[The Derpy Democratic Republic Of Herp]

OOC: Please, use some spell check when drafting a proposal.

Carbon-neutral fuel instead of "Carbon nutral feul"

[The New California Republic]

Carbon nutral feul eliminates the emmisions that reguar petrol makes. Vehicles that run on carbon nutral feul emit only water vapor and unburned oxygen. This is great for the automotive industry

OOC: More mistakes underlined. You also need a category and strength.

[Grays Harbor]

I'm seeing a whole lot of nothing here. Is this a proposal for a bumpersticker campaign?

[Xmara]

Carbon nutral feul eliminates the emmisions that reguar petrol makes. Vehicles that run on carbon nutral feul emit only water vapor and unburned oxygen. This is great for the automotive industry

*neutral
*fuel
*regular
*emissions

Also, you have no proposal. You need to draft a proposal.

[Araraukar]

OOC: Aside from something silly like nuclear reactors (fission/fusion), I don't think there's such a thing as carbon neutral fuel (the typos even just in the threat title make me cringe), even hydrogen (what I assume the thing means) has to come from somewhere, and making it is rarely carbon neutral in itself. Even if you used solar panels for the production, the solar panels themselves are not carbon neutral...

[Alogranie]

I am sorry for spelling mistakes i have made, but know that English is not my first language.

[Araraukar]

I am sorry for spelling mistakes i have made, but know that English is not my first language.

OOC: Which isn't an excuse to get the spelling wrong so often.
(My first language isn't even remotely related to English.)

There are browser add-ons that you can use to add a spell-checker, and if you're on a mobile device, there usually is a choice in the settings to make it spellcheck your writing in English.

[Xmara]

You labeled it a draft, but this is still not a draft.

EDIT: Decided to help out by writing an example draft. Note that this draft is way too short, and I am trying to type all of this on an iPad, so it might be flawed. This is just a really, really rough example of how a draft on this might look.

Carbon Neutral Fuel Act
Category: Environmental
Industry Affected: Automotive
Proposed by: Xmara

NOTING that petrol releases high carbon emissions,

CONCERNED that said emissions can cause irreversible damage to the environment,

ALSO NOTING that carbon neutral fuel only emits water vapor and oxygen, therefore decreasing air pollution,

HEREBY PROPOSES that all member nations that currently use petrol-based fuel switch to carbon-neutral fuel.

[Oresland]

You labeled it a draft, but this is still not a draft.

EDIT: Decided to help out by writing an example draft. Note that this draft is way too short, and I am trying to type all of this on an iPad, so it might be flawed. This is just a really, really rough example of how a draft on this might look.

Carbon Neutral Fuel Act
Category: Environmental
Industry Affected: Automotive
Proposed by: Xmara

NOTING that petrol releases high carbon emissions,

CONCERNED that said emissions can cause irreversible damage to the environment,

ALSO NOTING that carbon neutral fuel only emits water vapor and oxygen, therefore decreasing air pollution,

HEREBY PROPOSES that all member nations that currently use petrol-based fuel switch to carbon-neutral fuel.

And, don't outright use this proposal. It's actually illegal since the operative clause isn't really one. "Hereby proposes" does nothing. But it's a start.

[Xmara]

You labeled it a draft, but this is still not a draft.

EDIT: Decided to help out by writing an example draft. Note that this draft is way too short, and I am trying to type all of this on an iPad, so it might be flawed. This is just a really, really rough example of how a draft on this might look.

Carbon Neutral Fuel Act
Category: Environmental
Industry Affected: Automotive
Proposed by: Xmara

NOTING that petrol releases high carbon emissions,

CONCERNED that said emissions can cause irreversible damage to the environment,

ALSO NOTING that carbon neutral fuel only emits water vapor and oxygen, therefore decreasing air pollution,

HEREBY PROPOSES that all member nations that currently use petrol-based fuel switch to carbon-neutral fuel.

And, don't outright use this proposal. It's actually illegal since the operative clause isn't really one. "Hereby proposes" does nothing. But it's a start.

Yeah I've never actually written a WA proposal, so...

[New Doltania]

Let's hope you do ok! I didn't the first time I wrote one, as I had no operative clause.

[Oresland]

And, don't outright use this proposal. It's actually illegal since the operative clause isn't really one. "Hereby proposes" does nothing. But it's a start.

Yeah I've never actually written a WA proposal, so...

OOC: Well, it's a good attempt then.