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Support the increased defence act

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Silverwood Isle
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Support the increased defence act

Postby Silverwood Isle » Wed Nov 15, 2017 9:22 pm

Silverwood isle has proposed its first proposal to increase defence and safety give them support and give the troops support

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Willania Imperium
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Postby Willania Imperium » Wed Nov 15, 2017 9:32 pm

OOC: I hate to sound like a douche, but a proposal with no drafts, doesn't even look like a proposal and has multiple misspellings isn't worth the submission.

Here is the proposal submitted:

Increased Defence


Category: International Security | Strength: Significant | Proposed by: Silverwood Isle

The world is in distress. We have been fighting war and problems after another. The problem is low defence forces.

Studies have reported that at least 50% of nations have none to minimal defence spending which is ruining there country. We demand increased spending on defence which will make the world so much more safe.

Whats the point of having a country if tou cant defend it. All you have to do is have a slight increase in low defence countrys and your people will be safe and keep there rights.


IC: "No draft + Multiple misspellings + Lack of experience = No Support."

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Essu Beti
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Postby Essu Beti » Wed Nov 15, 2017 10:04 pm

Iksana snorts. "Is this a proposal or a blog post? Five hells, it probably won't even go to vote because it's only a "proposal" in an extremely loose sense. No support."
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Araraukar
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Postby Araraukar » Wed Nov 15, 2017 10:16 pm

OOC: Blogposal, branding (we), no active clause and thus strength violation. Pooosssssibly also an attempt at metagaming, with the 50% claim, but the other illegalities sink it anyway.

Other than that, welcome to the GA forum and please post your next draft here waaaaaay before even planning on submitting it!
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Principality of the Raix
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Postby Principality of the Raix » Wed Nov 15, 2017 10:20 pm

"How is this an international issue? Is not each country in control of whether or not to build an army to defend itself or not? I mean, it is true that the WA does seem to act in defense of others at time. But that's between Regions and not individuals and even then over certain things. Besides, how would you suggest they implement this?"
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Postby Kenmoria » Thu Nov 16, 2017 12:31 am

Silverwood Isle wrote:Silverwood isle has proposed its first proposal to increase defence and safety give them support and give the troops support

"I would suggest looking through past proposals to get an idea of what a proposal should be - and drafting is around 99% of the battle."
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Postby Davelands » Thu Nov 16, 2017 6:21 am

As I said to you before I banjected you for calling me a nasty word on the RMB:

Read the links I gave you about proper resolution writing BEFORE trying to submit a proposal.
As you can see, this one will crash and burn.

Maybe you will properly research the next one and it will be great!
Best of luck to you.
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Postby Kenmoria » Sat Nov 18, 2017 2:27 am

Shazbotdom wrote:"We would prefer to set our own budget when it comes to Military spending, thank you very fuck ton."

"You are free to do so, there is no WA resolution that mandates your spending on defence. I did not have to search this because any such proposal would be illegal. Also, calm down the bad language."
Hello! I’m a GAer and NS Roleplayer from the United Kingdom.
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Any posts that I make as GenSec will be clearly marked as such and OOC. Conversely, my IC ambassador in the General Assembly is Ambassador Fortier. I’m always happy to discuss ideas about proposals, particularly if grammar or wording are in issue. I am also Executive Deputy Minister for the WA Ministry of TNP.
Kenmoria is an illiberal yet democratic nation pursuing the goals of communism in a semi-effective fashion. It has a very broad diplomatic presence despite being economically developing, mainly to seek help in recovering from the effect of a recent civil war. Read the factbook here for more information; perhaps, I will eventually finish it.

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Postby Principality of the Raix » Sat Nov 18, 2017 2:30 am

Kenmoria wrote:"You are free to do so, there is no WA resolution that mandates your spending on defence. I did not have to search this because any such proposal would be illegal. Also, calm down the bad language."


"The Problem with this proposal, is that it has the WA spending on Defense forces for certain regions over peace. Which honestly should not require it. While without proper context or explanation, no individual could legalize this. Without some twinge of guilt, due to the outlines of it favoring only a select few."
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